Don't Mess With His Loyal Subjects...

by THEGRAYJEDIWHOWASAGEEK

1 - Wait!! there is more...

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Author's Note

Sup...

Right, first of, I notice there are few stories made concerning Discord's species, the Draconequus or Draconequis -whatever floats your boat- so I plan to remedy that with my story (this one) hope you lot would love/like it, on the get go if possible, any criticism is much appreciated. I'd be glad if any of you would/should point out any errors or mishaps that I might make so that I could rectify that.

Secondly, I am searching for someone who would hopefully make art for me, free of charge(s), meaning, I will not pay that person... but, he or she would willingly make an art for me for free.
Does that make sense? I'll also need someone willing to be my editor, proofreader, someone to point out things you know.
And... That's pretty much it.
so.... just leave a like, a fave, and comment down below.


1 - Wait!! there is more...

All is well in the planet Equis, as Luna's moon bathed the land of Equestria in its soothing glow. A chilly night air passed by, the events of what has transpired earlier in the eve, have took its toll upon a small town below Mount Canter.

A Night Guard, strolled the Royal Gardens of Canterlot Palace, just taking in the beauty of the starry night sky, that Princess Luna crafted magnificently to please some of her adoring subjects, who are without a doubt, still up and about. Passing a statue that portrayed a pegasi stallion preparing for flight.

Noting the presence of the guard, an athletic humanoid being, shifted its form to that of a serpent, its body rippling like water, then it slithered its way stealthily towards its intended target.

The being was almost caught!!!

But it was for naught, another guard passed its way, the serpent stopped its movements, as the guard went on by not noticing the creature. Either it was dumb luck or something else that saved it from being spotted. It would never know. But it is indeed grateful for whatever just happened.

Soon after, the being finally came upon its goal, the location where the spirit -more like, Lord rather- of Chaos and Disharmony lies, once again imprisoned in stone. The being from earlier, shifted its form back to the humanoid one, stood up tall behind the statue, as it unsheathes its clawed hands with a shark-toothed nasty grin plastered on its off-white equine face, and there are two horns way back atop the being's head. The one on the right is an Anteka's, only shortened while on the left is a Kelbi's.

As the moon's soft glow drop on the being, it is clear now that it truly does not, but is still a Draconequi, resembles the petrified one.

Its right arm is covered in red feathers all the way to its shoulder, but the lower half tells a different story, for it looks as though a bird's or an eagle's.

For its left arm, it was simply scaly, like that of a lizard and in a nice navy blue. its whip-like lizard tail is covered in many piercing spikes. A fuzzy fox torso for its main body. A wing of an angel is on its left connecting to its shoulder, as on the right is a Night Fury's.

A crown snuggles the being's tri-horns, Fitted amazingly atop its head. Its right leg is that of an Anthro hare while its left is an Anthro alligator's.

Then the area began to glow red, faintly, but not enough to warrant attention as its long mane began to softly glow like a soft fire. Yet is on fire, but there is no discomfort or pain from its person.

Opening its hazel green eyes, revealed mists bellowing around them. Coloured the same as its long literal fiery mane. It stood at the height of 7'10" and weights at 224.05 lbs.

Merely within attoseconds, the being conjured three copies of itself, the first one summoned a huge power generator, which seemingly run well without any help, as it was then connected to what looks like some sort of defibrillator which was summoned by the second. Who switched it on as a bulb on top the strange defibrillator lighted green, indicating that it is now operational. As for the third copy, it jumped into the Astral Plane and found Discord standing there, not wasting any precious moment, the third copy leapt and made combat with Discord.

As back in the physical realm. The original's right arm became invisible and phased through Discord's back, searching until it found its intended target, all the sudden, the being's red feathered chicken claw hand firmly gripped on his spine.

While in the astral realm, Dodging a mean hook from Discord, the third copy replied with a strike, which made contact upon the left side of Discord's neck, making him cry out in pain. "Still can't dodge that, so... you've finally found me..." Discord said with hate in his tone to the other draconequi.

"Indeed..." Spoke the other Draconequi a scowl on the draconequi's face with a voice that surprisingly, terrifying even, sounds just as same as Benedict Cumberbatch's "you.. traitorous scum..." Anger was evident on his tone as he leaped onto Discord pressing his thumbs on Discord's eyes as the Lord of Chaos tried his best wiggle himself free. "You!! shall not best me!!brother!!!" spat Discord as he found an opening.

In the plane of the living, with a grunt and a mighty yank. Discord's spinal cord along with his skull came off with a resounding snap that was muffled thanks to a spell that was placed by the second copy beforehoof the original got to that point. Discord's yellow blood streamed down freely on his statue then to his pedestal all the way to the floor like a waterfall. All this done within a blur of a time.

The unknown attacker harshly, then slammed what it was holding, down to the cobblestone, cracking the skull open as Discord's brain grew legs made a run for it. sadly it wasn't fast enough, as a speeding blue fire that immediately intercepted its prey like a mountain lion to a raccoon. "Hurry!!! get that defibrillator on this prick!" ordered the draconequus to its copy who hastily saluted at him and slapped the apparatus on the intact part of the statue.

They were fighting claw-to-claw for awhile, one would dodge a sweeping kick and the other would sidestep, but it seems Discord is already losing, as there he tripped on himself landing on his back and his assailant not far as the other draconequus land on its downed opponent with its knee, crushing the ribs as if the Juggernaut fell from the sky. oh but they were not done. to finish it all off. The third copy jammed its thumb on Discord's eyes.

A faint cry of immense pain was briefly heard. Then.. silence reigned in the physical realm... so as in the astral realm as the third copy of the unknown draconequus stood triumphant, as Discord, screaming for blood due to the pain as the golden light kills him until finally he was enveloped in the bright light and vanished from existence. All entirety.

Back in the physical realm, the third copy returned smirking all the way as it reunite to its original body, as so the other two copies, content smiles on their faces knowing they've done their part.

Just as the statue of Discord fell apart and turn to dust, The unknown draconequus left a letter on the pedestal, then inspected the entirety of it as to why it all seemed to easy, Discord is not a god, he is a Demi-God. The true GOD OF CHAOS AND DISHARMONY, is Paradox, THE ELDEST, Oldest of the old and a father to the embodiments of Death and Life and did i mentioned it was spelled with a capital O. The unknown Draconequus made his grand exit by poofing himself into thin air.

Then came a guardspony, a female grey-coated batpony with a lavender mane and tail, who came upon to check the statue of Discord... but there wasn't any statue at all!!! The mare yelped in panic, but stop mid-screaming when she saw something glint from the pedestal, something shimmering in the dark.... a scroll with a silver seal of some sort.