The Fall of Cloud

by Cloud_Piercer

Hatred

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I felt pain as my body was thrown through the steal doors of the harvest compound. "The only reason I kept you alive so far was because I was stuck in your body." Pierce said "and you thought I was weak" I said groaning. "Everypony behold the supposed god you've created!" He boomed through the halls, they were filled with ponies within seconds. I noticed NightShade "what the hell?" I murmured "he has been defeated by his lesser counterpart, irony is a cruel bitch isn't it?" He said, I could barely move a muscle, he kicked me toward the crowed of ponies. NightShade and Snow Piercer both approached me. NightShade pounded my skull into the ground with her hoof and everything went black. "Cloudy, you're such a simpleton" I saw NightShade standing before me beside Pierce. "I never loved you, I never even loved Ashen, the one I really had feelings for was Pierce... we've been tricking you this whole time" she said. I snarled and lashed out at Pierce, there was something around my neck. I was chained to the wall like a stray dog "you're pitiful, I can't even look at you" she said. She turned and grabbed Pierce and kissed him, she made sure I was going to regret being alive. "Stop it" I screamed "fucking stop, I swear to Celestia!" I screamed "you mean our goddess that you killed?" I turned to see Chrysalis chained up to the wall next to me I noticed her horn was cracked off and her wings were clipped. "What the hell?" I said "Cloud  I need you I do one thing if we make it out of this" she said "kill that fucker" she added. "Awe it's cute how you think he can kill the two of us" NightShade said turning to Chrysalis. "But you're really just a dumb bitch" she said hitting Chrysalis. "Cloud please help me" I turned again and saw my mother, she was beaten and coated in red. "Cloud" I turned back and saw Snow Piercer dwelling in the shadows. "Are you okay?" I asked, I heard weeping "what do you care" she said, I moved closer into the corner I saw the silhouette in. She leached out at me and held me "I'm scared" she said, I held her closer "it'll be fine." I said, she looked at me, she didn't have any eyes "I don't think it will be." I could feel my blood boiling, I turned and ran at Pierce. My chain broke and I tackled him, I took the chain that hung around my neck and started to strangle him with it. He coughed and spat, I watched the life drain from his eyes. "NightShade, you're broken... and I'm here to fix you" I said. "The fuck does that mean... stay away from me!" She yelled, I cracked my neck "come here" I said approaching her. I chased her into the corner that Snow Piercer was in, Snow Piercer grabbed her and NightShade started screaming. "Feel our pain" Snow Piercer said shoving her hoofs into Nightshades eyes. I heard chains breaking, my mother, Chrysalis, Shoeshine, and BlueMint all appeared and started eating NightShade alive. Her flesh was tearing off her in strips, her screams made me want to die. I was suddenly tied into a chair "why did you make them do that?" NightShades torn remains were standing before me "I didn't make them do anything" I said "but you watched as they tore me apart, and you did nothing" she said. "How you're feeling right now is how I felt when I first realized you... my Cloudy had been taken over by something far worse than anything Pierce could've done to you" she said. "You are not my Cloud anymore" she added "I'm done with you and all of the things you've been doing, goodbye." She said as she burst into chunks of flesh and blood and bone. I started crying "fuck..." I said "NightShade!" I screamed "I'm sorry!" I yelled "what's wrong with me" I was crying. The chair fell over into the heap of purple, red, blue, and black. I was face to face with one emerald eye "such a shame to waste" Pierce appeared in front of me. He stepped on the eye and it bursted onto my muzzle "I thought I killed you" I said "you'll kill yourself before you kill me" he said. He slammed his hoof down on my skull "goodbye Cloud" he said.

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