The Rise of Lord Naturus, aka the Tree of Harmony

by Cipher800

Chapter 12: Underground Village

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"Well, it is long story..."


We went to shiny gem gem city when angry blue man showed up and ate shiny heart gem and shards. Pink alicorn and white pony mate fought angry blue man who turned them to smoking hole. Blue man bad.

We found blue man's spider-things coming for us and ditched.

That is all.


"I don't think that's a long story, but even the Diamond Dogs know about how powerful Naturus is." Celestia said.

"Blue man scary, he turned crystal ponies to red stuff. Blue man bad." Fido said.

"Anyways, what happened?" Twilight said.

"After we fled, we found other Diamond Dogs covered in red stuff and others more. We made refugee camp in cave with extra buff." Spot said. True to what they said, they saw a bunch of deer, zebras, yaks, ponies, buffalo and OTHER diamond dogs. "It's been long time since angry blue man took over shiny gem gem city." Ruff said and sighed. "Ever since then, we found mining much easier."

A deer walked over and said "Naturus is not just content with Equestria, while the forest invaded the country, his army invaded both the deer and zebra lands, killing off as much as he can." "That's TERRIBLE!" Twilight said. "Yes it is, too bad he ambushed us." the deer said.

"Zecora was also ambushed, too bad she wasn't able to flee this time." Twilight said.

Pinkie Pie, while her mane was not completely straight, still lost some of its poof, and she also became duller in color. Maud came into the cave, pulling in a cart full of gems. When Pinkie Pie saw her, she instantly ran up and hugged her, tears running down her cheeks. "I thought that he got you, Maud! What about the others!?" Pinkie cried. "I am not aware what happened..." she said, remaining unfazed.

"...but I hope they survived."


Limestone and Marble Pie had got separated from their parents when the Everfree invaded. "Come on, Marble! We've got to find our parents." Limestone said. "Yea, we should, but we didn't know anywhere besides the rock farm." Marble said. "Wait, what was that." she said as she heard a bush's leaves shake. Out of it came a giant, two-crested monster with a shaggy coat of hairlike feathers stare at them. What they didn't know was that it was the apex predator of the Triassic, the Dilophosaurus. "RUN!" Limestone said.

The two frightened mares galloped away from the Dilophosaurus, but it turned out to be faster, saliva dripping from its mouth, and judging by its speed, it will eventually catch and eat them. "He's gaining!" Marble said. "Hurry! Into that cave!"

They would have been lunch for the Dilophosaurus if it weren't for a spear running into its head. Limestone and Marble were too busy running into the cave to notice a Velociraptor pulling the spear out of the corpse. "This guy's crests and teeth will make great jewelry for my tribe." he said as he walked off.


Author's Note

Hey guys, it looks like the Velociraptor will be one of the new sentient races. There are already dozens of tribes speckled across the world.

If you have any complaints, tell me, if you don't like it, then THIS is NOT the story for you.

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