Debauchery is Lawless, Even In Space
Chapter 24: End of A Long Haul (End of Season 1)
Previous ChapterNext ChapterAnna peeks out of her room and looks around blushing heavily. Now that her mind remembers that she just fucked herself with a pony vibrator to the live feed of Scroll that was broken by her own people, it brought down the reality that she is starting to fall into their life of debauchery and she simply can’t help but hating herself a bit for that fact. Not that it stopped her to repeat her heated masturbation sessions over and over again to the very same pictures, or sometimes also to the porn-worthy pictures she could see live happening on the ship as well. She said so herself that she is no slut, but that is what is bothering her greatly. The fact that others might notice her expressions and air about her is going to be a telltale sign of what she has done and thought about. And that can lead to offers that she herself can’t deny for long. Anna now wishes that she wouldn’t have been chosen for this exchange program. She certainly overestimated herself and her ability to deal with such a kind of culture. She would rather be back in her office, but then her mind drifts to what might have happened had she stayed on board. The thought that all the guys would be going to a pony anyway and fucking the life out of her. Then her mind drifts to how she might end up seeing them all naked with magically enhanced dicks and may end up coming to her and breaking her on the spot. Well, at least her crush probably would break her up to them, seeing as she would have obliviously crushed on him further.
Anna quickly shakes her head at the idea but can’t escape it that she could practically smell their musky and heavy scent. The thought of it all driving her arousal to skyrocket and end up wetting her panties and even her pants now. The musky air certainly was driving her libido to new heights. Anna jumps a bit in her clothing and tries to shake those thoughts out now. She quickly steps out and marches down the hall in her wet sticky pants to find the cafeteria and ask for some non-perishables. Then her mind thinks up of her old crew and how they could be walking around naked at the moment. Anna shrieks to herself and slaps both of her cheeks to snap out of it. “Keep it together, girl!” she reprimands herself as she rushes to the cafeteria now, not bothering to give the passing guards and personal any mind. All of them looking quite surprised that their exchange girl is running somewhere and not really paying any attention to them. Which is weird considering they had a quiet orgy last night in this very hall.
Pinkie was surprised when she saw Anna run into the cafeteria and slams her palms onto the serving table. “Give me a week of non-perishables, now!” Anna yells frantically while she held a powerful blush and trying her best to ignore her sticky pants.
Pinkie blinks and reaches under the table before taking out a bag full of cans of basically military food. “You know, you CAN control yourself by actually taking a cold shower,” Pinkie says as a matter of fact, before giggle-snorting, “CAN!” she then quickly composes herself again as she saw the clear stain in her pants. “Or you could simply do it like me!” she says with a wink before whistling, making a griffon walk up to her. His barbed cock standing hard and tall at attention as Pinkie wiggled her rump towards him. The griffon himself accepted the invitation without hesitation before mounting the pink mare and spearing her on his barbed dick, making her moan out quite loudly. “Yup! Ahhhh~ B-Better than holding it in!”
Anna whimpered needily in shock, her mind wandering to her own griffon brand vibrator and its deliciously raking barbs. She then watches a bit as the griffon grabs Pinkie’s neck and slams her down over the counter and starts to hump hard against her rump. Not even stopping or slowing down one bit as he continuously kept increasing his speed the whole time and making her bubbly butt jiggle. Pinkie herself choking on her screaming of pure unadulterated pleasure as she looks up to Anna with her baby blue eyes. “G-Go on. Go on,” Pinkie says almost distantly.
Anna then rushes off with her bag and whimpers almost loudly enough for others to hear as others realized that she is about to break and just needs somepony to break her. The juices slowly working down her pants were also a good indicator for that. Running down the hall, she ends up at the end of it and pants heavily as she catches her breath for a bit and looks around to see that she was running down the wrong corridor, making her sigh. She took a few deep breaths before walking a bit more calmly along, but then suddenly hears some grunting a bit away. Anna stops and gulps as she looks to a partially open door to hear that the noise is coming from there. Her mind raced and was yelling at her to run the other way. But the arousal running through her waist is enough to force her legs to move toward the door, clearly anticipating what lies behind it. She couldn’t admit to herself that she is curious as to what is going on and peeks through the crack in the door.
What she saw made her heart stop for a moment as she sees something almost like what happens to Scroll with her people. She sees that the princess named Twilight Sparkle and another cyan blue mare she recalled being named Rainbow Dash both on a large desk with a dragon plunging his sharp dragon dick into Rainbow and a zebra taking his large cock and entering the moaning purple mare as both mares kiss and hold each other. While Rainbow wore what must have been the sluttiest cheerleader outfit in existence with dark blue lipstick and net stockings on top, while princess Twilight wore a blond tutu, clearly also fetish fuel for the male zebra taking her hard from behind. Anna whimpers with her hand over her mouth to try to cover the noise she is making as she didn’t want to get dragged into this sexy mess. Or at least that’s what she was telling herself. Her legs are shaking as she felt a warm liquid running down them and messing up her pants even more, with the trail reaching her knees now as she kept watching.
Clearly, the two males fucking the mares haven’t even noticed their voyeur and just focusing on their own pleasures as they run their hoof and claw across the mares’ clothing and curvy bodies, even pulling and scratching their coats, making scratch marks in their clothing and marking them as used cumrags early on. Anna couldn’t help but watch as her eyes gazed at the large animalistic dongs plunging into the females which she learned that this culture treats as nothing more than pleasure tools and couldn’t help but almost fall into it. She was so much into watching the sluttiest mares go at the biggest crew members, or rather them going at the mares, that she didn’t notice somepony stepping up behind her.
“I’m sorry. If you wanted to watch, I could have given you access to our camera system for you to enjoy to your heart’s content,” Sunny’s whispers into her ear and stops her from moving by wrapping his hooves around her waist and slowly drifting one of his hooves down her stomach. “Do you want to stay or watch others as well?”
Anna whimpers and tries to stay quiet as she couldn’t take her eyes off the event still, the quiet clattering of her canned food hitting each other in her bag being the only thing that is remotely loud enough for the engaging couple. “I…I…” Anna breathes out shocked. “It definitely isn’t what it looks like!” Anna tries to defend herself but instantly winced knowing she just used the most cliched and unconvincing line that one could muster in such an obvious situation.
“Right…” Sunny says knowingly and smiles as his hoof reaches between her legs and feels the sticky wetness between them. “And this is nothing but a simple drink you spilled I assume?” Sunny asks teasingly as Comet and Zealous heard her and look over to her smirking, not even stopping once in their fucking of the mares who were too focused on each other and kept kissing messily while moaning out their pleasure in muffled cries. Only the sound of their wet slapping seemed to break through the silence as Sunny rubbed his hoof along her clothed nethers, teasing the poor horny girl.
“P-Please…sir…please don’t break me…not like her…” Anna almost cried and pleads.
“Don’t worry. I have no intention of breaking you like that. Really, I am just giving you the chance to enjoy yourself and live out your deepest desires. Never again will you have to hide yourself. Not even hide secrets which could break an important relationship to you. No. You shall be happy and live without fear of being judged harshly. In our culture, everypony is the steward of their own dreams without fear of repercussions…unless you decide to kill then that’s another matter,” Sunny says almost jokingly at the end and ends it with his hoof pressing hard against her wet nethers.
“Ahhhh! T-That with t-the dreams only c-counts then…t-they are…sexual…d-doesn’t it?” the redhead said, her legs squirming the exploring appendage between her sticky legs as she was biting her lips.
“Actually, it can mean anything. See, we relaxed our laws quite a bit. Now they can say the things they want to say without a guard coming to them and jailing them for years on end. Rather, they enjoy themselves and these relaxed and happy people are what drives our kind. Relationships are the lifeblood of our kind as you can see here,” Sunny whispers into her ear and points her head toward the moaning mares that are lost to the pleasure. “Though, I will admit, mostly the dreams turn out to be quite wet for the mares. Just as wet as I feel you are at the moment~” the emperor teased as he pulls his hoof up and is smashing it against her sensitive clothed pussy, making Anna whimper yet again as her back was leaning against this strong stallion.
“But…but I…” Anna whimpers.
“Let me tell you one more thing. Let go. Enjoy the lap of luxury, just as well as mine and sit on me. Enjoy the life of being happy and lazy all you want. Let yourself go and let your dreams out. Do you want to indulge your deepest fetishes? Then do so and no one would laugh or even shame you here. Rather, they will help you make it come true, and that rather eagerly I might add. You can finally enjoy without those barriers and even do your work if that tickles your fancy. Or you could even do your work while living out your fetish-fueled dreams,” Sunny whispers as he leans back a bit and lets her lean and rest up against him. “I won’t mind. Our culture is filled with those who don’t take part publicly and enjoy their time alone. If that is your choice, so be it. We won’t penalize you.”
Anna whimpers more and almost tears up before feeling something lap up her tears. She opens her eyes and looks to Sunny licking at her tears and smiling at her. “You…really want to help me…?” she asks almost unsure now.
“Yes. You are important to me and I would rather you enjoy yourself for as long as you live with us. What do you say? Let yourself go and unhinge yourself. Let yourself enjoy the lap of luxury and let your worries go. Let your dreams come true, for real this time?” Sunny asks smiling and kissing her cheek.
Anna blinks a bit surprised that Sunny can actually be this caring and he didn’t even move his hoof at all at this point, almost as if he will let her go if she says no and will continue if she agrees. Anna gulps and turns her head to look at him now and Sunny can tell she will say the right answer. “Yes…” Anna says breathlessly.
Sunny smiles even greater and lets her go suddenly to her surprise. “Follow me,” he says walking off Anna didn’t notice that both Comet and Zealous had finished fucking their respective mares and they were all watching her as she starts to follow Sunny to where he wants her to go.
After a bit of walking, Anna sees that Sunny stopped before a heavy door and looks back at her smiling. “Step right in. And…start undressing. It’s going to be a long night of fucking,” Sunny says grinning at the end and makes Anna’s blush become redder. His horn then glowed and, with a pop, he summoned her harem outfit right in front of her. “Also, wear this. I think it will quite suit you. Especially for our first night and the ones to follow,” he says with a slight leer, making Anna’s complete head being enveloped by her blush and shyly nod as she took the outfit out of his magical aura.
“I’ll take that. You don’t need to worry about burying yourself in your room anymore,” Sunny says taking the bag of cans she has and lets her walk in as she starts to get out of her crew clothing and slips on the harem outfit. Sunny walks in and around her as he looks to the side a bit at the camera watching them as Anna notices the room only had a large flat bed on the ground. Her blush only increases while Sunny eyes her body and looks her up and down her smooth pale skin, noting all the curves and how they become so symmetrical.
“Now then, why not sit down on the bed and I’ll let you lead,” Sunny orders smiling as he walks up to her and watches as she follows his orders and sits down, her outfit’s skirt letting itself part between her legs but lets him see what lies behind it from how much thin it was. Sunny chuckles as he steps over her and Anna finally sees the emperor’s shaft growing so large like she saw it when he was stroking himself to Scroll’s mind breaking. Though seeing it all up close and personal was something completely different. Her eyes are drifting along his long and large shaft that throbs as she sees every vein on it pulsing. “Well? I’m sure you got an idea on what to do,” Sunny says lifting a leg to look under himself and then to look at her.
Anna gulps and reaches out with a hand and slowly encircles her fingers around his wide throbbing cock. She felt the large thing pulsate at her touch. The sheer hotness and musk radiating from it sending tingles down her spine as she slowly moves her hand along his twitching erection. The musk starting to hit her sense of smell and make her legs shake at the feeling of stroking this huge phallus. A glistening drop of pre was already forming on his tip, catching her attention and practically hypnotizing her. “A-Amazing,” she mutters, quite eager to take this hole-stretching horsecock into her in any way possible.
Sunny grins down at her before nodding up to the camera.
Anna was so entranced in her menstruations that she didn’t notice something come on in the room until something called out to her. “Look at that. She fell right into it. I can’t believe it took that long. I thought it would be her acting as a prude the entire time.” Anna’s gaze suddenly turns behind her and sees a screen turned on and sees that Edison is on the screen grinning almost evilly at her. But the thing that shocked her the most is that she saw a small crowd of her crew watching her behind him while they all were naked. She could even see one woman, the african engineer of their ship pleasuring the men respectfully now while Edison held a chain and follows it to see that it led to Scroll sucking his large cock while he sat in his chair and only jerks her chain once in a while.
“See…Edison learned what our culture really is…not that hard considering that their tool is a bit of a loudmouth and told them how we lived. Seeing how pent up some of them were it was quite easy for them to accept her offering holes. Now Edison here has copied it and with everyone holding their deepest desires inside them, it wasn’t hard to make it all come out since quite a lot of the males went to town on our former mare. One of your more raunchy women were easy to follow. I guess the darker tone really is equivalent with a stronger libido, which is quite fascinating to be sure. So now, since they allowed us to see our mare’s breaking and showing where she lies among their empire, I am going to do the same to you. Well, showing you off, and not breaking you down, so don’t worry. I won’t make you lie in a puddle of sperm unless you ask for it~” Sunny explains with a teasing grin down at her. “Though I think I am going to make you bathe in it,” he hisses in delight and pushes forward his phallus at her mouth and makes her take the tip with his drop of pre in her mouth. Anna was surprised at first, but as soon as she felt the drop of pre hit her tongue, she couldn’t help but moan before she started to suck away eagerly. “See,” he says grinning up to Edison as he now grips Scroll’s head and is just using her as a toy now. “Not bad with the ship by the way. Great work,” Sunny says chuckling.
“Not too hard when these guys need something to fuck. This mare here you chose certainly was quite the eager slut and helped us relieve our pent-up stress greatly,” Edison says licking his lips as Sunny looks to the still marked mare as they didn’t bother cleaning her now.
Anna’s moans under him caught his attention and look to see that she is gripping his cock with both hands now and bobbing her head slightly. The amount that is entering her mouth now more than the tip and starting to suck away to get more of his pre now. Sunny groans and bucks his hips into her, while Anna took it with an eager slurp.
Edison grinned, “You know, I wouldn’t mind deepening our relations even more. Next time you are in our vicinity we could swap females for a day or two. I wouldn’t mind having another go at one of your heroes again, like that rainbow slut! I mean damn! She was really a great fuck!”
Sunny laughs. “Glad you like her. I trained her to be a cocksucker since she couldn’t even breathe on mine.”
Edison laughs out loud at that. “You have got to tell me your training methods. It could help us to expand a bit with some of our more curious females.”
Sunny licks his lips eagerly as he kept giving bucks into Anna’s mouth and makes her lay back onto the bed and starts to hump her face, his dick starting to go deeper into her, even already having breached her throat and stretched her jaw beyond belief now as she places her hands on his flank to drive him deeper. “I will send you a list of the training methods we use the next time we meet up. For now, keep using that one till she is good and pregnant. It would be interesting to see our former crew member actually get pregnant based on human sperm. An interesting experiment so to say. Crossbreeds really are quite the interesting foals to be born,” Sunny says to himself now as he kept humping the poor girl’s face.
Anna gurgles around his cock and tries to speak but ends up choking and gripping his flanks to just drive it more down to her stomach. Wanting to have all that pre and cum poured into her. It was quite obvious that the poor girl was slowly getting addicting to the taste. Clearly, an advantage of his genes as it would help the woman to be bound to him.
Anna could only see the sight of Sunny’s crotch as it pounds onto her face, filling her nose with his heavy musk that grew only heavier with each slap of his strong balls into her chin. A chin that was practically wet with drool and his pre by that point. Her whole face was smeared in this animalistic fucking session that she was subjected too and each thrust would simply add more pre to the mess, making the sticky translucent goo roll down her throat, or get smeared all across her mouth and luscious cock-sucking lips with each pull and plunge.
Sunny groans deeply and kept grinning as he continued slapping his flank against the poor woman’s head and didn’t stop before his balls started to clench up against him and even Anna could tell as she felt more of his long dong travel deeper at this point while throbbing heavily as could be clearly seen by the massive bulge in her neck. “Fuck!” Sunny yells and Anna cries out around the cock and feels the bulges of cum travel down his cock and into her mouth that was stopped by her tight lip seal before it presses through and into her throat, starting to spray her stomach down. Anna’s ecstatic screams start to die down as Sunny kept filling her up before he starts to stand and slowly pulls his cock out of her mouth. The firehose of cum was filling up her stomach quite good, just as her esophagus and mouth after that. Anna was practically drowning in his hot sticky seed before he forcibly pulled out with a pop and makes Anna choke and gurgle the cum pooling in her mouth. “See? She loves the taste and loves to be drowned. Told you I will make you bathe in cum,” Sunny says grinning down at her as his cock drips cum every second onto her face and body, messing up her clothes greatly. “Though I guess bathing you only inside doesn’t count, but don’t worry my little human, I’m going to rectify that over the long hours we both will share this night!”
Sunny then huffs as he steps to the side of her and rolls her over with a ditzy expression on her face and lets the cum pool out of her. After she lands onto her stomach he uses his magic to pick up her hips and lay her mostly on the bed. His magic spreading and moving the silk cloth away from his prize as he steps over her. Anna moans heavily as cum kept spilling out of her mouth and onto the bed. Sunny hums as he looks to her holes that he will use and notices that it is somewhat different to a pony’s or rather his planet’s types. Though that didn’t stop him as he moves his cock to press against her with her own arousal leaking cunt and slowly slip in as more cum comes out in cupfuls.
Anna felt his large cock start to press down into her tunnel and expands it greatly, even a bit more so than her largest toys ever did. Though it slipped right into her wet dripping cavern in one push, her arousal making it slippery enough for such a feat, not to mention the countless masturbation sessions that made her tunnel also quite stretchy.
“Interesting. I thought there would be at least some resistance, but not that I am going to complain! Heh, really fits like a glove though,” Sunny says, the words almost too much to register in Anna’s brain over the incredible hotness and pulsing of this godlike phallus. She, in any case, couldn’t help but smile goofily at hearing that he likes her pussy that much. She all too happily spread her legs a little wider to give him more access to her naughty dripping pussy. She felt rather happy, even while Edison laughs as the other men behind him chuckle at her dumb expression of bliss. The picture was also enough to increase their lust and force themselves more on their woman by grabbing her limbs and lifting her up to get a distinct advantage at her holes or just paint her dark skin white. Even Scroll who has another man behind her step up and got her flank lifted and used while she still noisily sucked Edison off.
Sunny groans and grabs her hair with a hoof and lifts her up for the others to see her cum and drool stained face. “Why don’t you tell your former crew members what your place is in this universe my sweet little human,” Sunny orders whispering into her ear.
Anna swallows the leftover sperm and drool and hangs there limp from his hoof in her hair. “I…I…”
“Come on. Tell what you really are to them,” Sunny hisses into her ear.
Anna swallows another dose of sperm that was about to leak out of her mouth. “M-My…my name is Anna…and I…um…belong to emperor Sunny. I s-shall serve him as his…concubine for his personal use and w-whatever he wants from me. No longer…no longer shall I worry anymore about m-my fears as my emperor will take it away for me,” Anna drools out as jizz leaks out of the corners of her mouth before she sucks it up and swallows the salty treat down into her already full stomach.
Sunny chuckled deeply as Anna can see her file has been brought up by Edison and he changes her job status to ‘Slut Concubine’, possibly as a request from Sunny if he was able to make her do all this. “Congratulations my dear little human. You earned the right to have my seed in your precious little womb,” Sunny whispers into her ear and gives one last hard thrust into her that makes his flared tip enter her womb and causes her to scream out in pleasure as they both came and she felt his life giving seed start to fill her up past capacity. The hot sticky and excessive load were quickly pushed back to her quivering entrance only to spill out around the seal in her leaking cunt.
Anna weakly tries to say something but nothing came out except some of his jizz that spill out of her mouth which she doesn’t bother to suck back up at this point as she reaches for the screen slowly before falling flat on the bed. Sunny grins all the while and pulls out of her while holding his hooves to her hips and pushes her off of him and make it easy for his large phallus to come out of her. “There. Now she knows her place before me as my personal little cumslut,” Sunny says jovially walking away from the woman as his horn glows and Anna moans and sees a faint glow at her stomach area. “Wonder if this will work at all though?” Sunny asks mostly himself as he left Anna lying there with her hips in the air, her leaking hole on display for anyone to see it. “…and I also forgot to pull out to give her the promised cum bath. Oh, well. Will have to catch up on that later.”
“Heh. Thanks for the show,” Edison grunts as he grips Scroll’s mane and pulls her head roughly to him and buries her muzzle to his crotch, starting to hump against her and cum deeply into her throat as the man behind her grunts and presses himself against her flank while cumming as well, both of them pressing into Scroll and making it look like she is being squeezed. “Can’t wait until we meet again.”
Sunny grins and gives a small wave to them. “Make sure to abuse that mare and get started on that female of yours. Looks like she is going to enjoy her new life as your pleasure tool…also are you going to mark her?” Sunny asks giving a knowing grin.
“Why not? We already did with this one,” Edison says patting Scroll’s head as she shows her cum filled mouth and swallow it down.
“Can I also have that tech? I would love to use it on my females,” Sunny says thinking of what to write on their flanks and, in the case of Anna, hips.
“When we trade up our females, sure. Would be fun to see what you start marking them as,” Edison says chuckling.
“Alright then. See ya then and I hope you have more of the ship under the new customs by then too,” Sunny says pointing a hoof at him.
“No problem. Enjoy your new life cumdumpster,” Edison calls to Anna before cutting the call as Sunny looks to Anna who struggles to sit up at least and slips into the puddle of jizz on the bed and floor.
“Aw. Is my mate trying to stand? Don’t worry, because I will make sure you are at least resting…not! Comet!” Sunny calls to the door and Anna weakly looks to see the dragon that was fucking Rainbow from before again. “Take her away and enjoy her if you want. She’s free to use now,” Sunny orders chuckling evilly now.
Anna whimpers tiredly as Comet picks her up and carries her over his shoulder and walks off, Sunny waving and grinning at her as she weakly reaches out to him before the door shuts in her face. “The whole ship watched,” Comet says and he turns her around to see a large amount of the crew standing there with their erections standing at attention. The sight of the ruined human making their cocks twitch and flick off some pre that Anna gulps at and wanted to catch in her mouth.
“For now, you are going to be introduced to your new life. Once our emperor takes a mate for his own, he throws that mate into the pile and lets us take you, with some smaller exceptions. Because you are now marked under a public and free use laws. So enjoy a long night of fucking,” Comet growls with a grin as he spurts some fire at times to emphasize his point.
Anna shakes in his hold while her cunt starts to leak her arousal freely at the sound of a whole night and day of fucking from all of the crew members. The ones she has been trying to avoid the whole time. Now, she just wants to throw herself into the orgy pile and enjoy what they do to her.
And her first customer became a pack of zebras that grabs her legs and pulls her off of Comet and onto the ground where they move parts of her body and partially rip part of her outfit to get easier access to her body as everyone else starts to crowd around her, hoping to take their turn.
Sunny sighs in relief as he looks to Anna lying on the floor in his office. Having just been thrown into the room when the crew was done with her and leaving her in a puddle of her own mess. Her clothing ripped mostly all over and cum stains littered her entire body. Some scratch marks from the eager dragons and griffons marked her body while some took the time to write down various words and phrases onto her like ‘EQUESTRIAN PROPERTY’, ‘CUMSLUT’, ‘HUMAN BROODSLUT’, ‘EXCHANGE WHORE’ and ‘EVERYONES FAVOURITE ONAHOLE’. Even tally marks were written on her ass that kept track of the many times one of them cum in or on her. Sunny just let her lie there as he looks to the stream and sees Scroll back on her collar and her stomach now having tons of tally marks on it. Some of the marks even going outside of the box and near her holes to say how lazy the humans were at times. Though he couldn’t complain at the results now. Two broken females. Two different species and in different areas than they are supposed to be in. All for the sake of peace and cultural exchange.
This is almost too much for the emperor to take and he sighs down to his human mate. “I should show you my home planet. Wouldn’t that be nice my dear sweet slut?”
Anna moans weakly and could only clench her legs together slowly as cum leaks out of her two holes.
“Home it is. Let’s go home, boys. Been a long journey,” Sunny says smiling as he lays back in his seat. “Now what the heck am I going to do once I get there?”
Author's Note
Alright, so this season of chapters is just for getting the females Sunny wants. In the next season is chapters is when stuff really starts going, story wise. Like the game, the goal of it is to conquer the entire galaxy. In the game, you have three winning conditions.
Own 40% of the planets (expansion but also military because you need to kill people before inhabiting their planets).
Have your Federation own 60% of the planets (diplomacy).
Kill or enslave all other races.
See, we are following the game in a way and this shows once we get into season two of the story. Now, with how Sunny handled the humans here, guess which victory plan he is going with. Yeah...it's a long haul in a way, but we will advance some game things once we find a way to incorporate them into the story.
And another note to make is that it does not feel like it is going anywhere because it is just going about the clop more. I would say around twenty percent of the chapters is about plot wise and some people do skip it just to get to clop. I do that sometimes personally. But as we go on into the next season, we will maybe get more plot elements with each passing chapters. Some chapters will focus on the sex mostly, but it will contain plot elements that we all want. It does get tiring at times, but we do try to make a good job here.
Basically, what I am saying is, hold out here in season one. Once we get season two set up, it's going to be a plan forming and playing out in Sunny's mind and then putting to real life. And, you may like it or hate how it goes at times, but we are going to keep doing this until one of us runs dry of ideas. Which, at this point, we aren't short of.
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