To say that Twilight Sparkle was nervous would be the understatement of the century, she had been nervous many times in the past but nothing like this. Sure she’d had sex before but that had been with another mare not with a stallion, more importantly it had been with a friend, casually, no strings attached. This was different. Shooting Star was a stallion that she had genuine feelings for. She loved him, or at least this was what she assumed love felt like. There was more there than simple lust, she wasn’t quite sure how to describe it to herself. The desire to ponder those things slowly ebbed away from her mind as his coat brushed up against hers and they shared another chaste little kiss, the twentieth since their first kiss if she was counting correctly, while passing the threshold into his home, together.

The door closed gently behind them. The light thump coincided with Twilight’s heart racing for a long few seconds.But everything calmed the moment she locked eyes with Star. He had been a real sweet heart for the entire evening. “Are you sure about this, Twilight?” he asked, his voice soft and gentle, the hoof resting on her shoulder stroking ever so softly.

“Very. More sure than I have been of most things, actually.” She said with a small nervous smile. She could see it in his eyes, he was equally nervous, if not more so. Slowly she leaned up, nuzzling his cheek gently, wrapping her hooves around his neck with a tender smile. If he was nervous than she would have to be brave, for him… for them both. “Are you sure about this, sugar?” She slowly allowed her voice to slip into a controlled slur, it was one of the many things she had learned by example from Lyra. She finished off her words by lightly biting his ear while letting out a sweet gentle purr.

His squeak was cute, watching his slate grey coat flush was quite adorable. “Y-yes,” he said nervously, but with an air of confidence that left no room for interpreting it any other way, he wanted this as much as as she did. Slowly his hooves wrapped around the small of her back to pull her closer.

“Then kiss me already,” she said, embarrassed at the realisation that she sounded both commanding and needy in the moment. But she got her wish either way, before she could even apologise his lips were on hers. Slowly Twilight allowed herself to melt into the kiss, all her cares washed away by her love for him. She hardly even noticed how her back was up against the wall and his body pressing firmly against her, their coats rubbing together in a much more intimate way than before.

“L-like that?” he asked with a small smirk. For a moment she wondered where his confidence came from but then she remembered how infectious her previous… sex partner’s courage was to her during her first time. She smiled at him, nodded slowly. Yielding to his touch, slowly pressing herself tighter against him, taking it a step further by caressing more… intimate places with her magic.

“Y-yeah…” she panted breathlessly. “Bedroom. Now. Before we do it on the couch.”

It took him a moment to pull away from her and as he did she stole a tender loving kiss from him with a grin that, she hoped, was s sweet and sensual smile. She was the first to slip out from the entrance hall, flicking her tail aside to give him a good view of her puffy, needy pussy. She smirked at his squeak, casting a glance over her shoulder to look at his blushing face. She put her some sway into her step. “I assume you’d like to follow, bedroom is up the stairs?” she asked with an innocent little smile.

He shook his head firmly, pulling himself away from gawking at her flank for a long moment. “Yes. Up the stairs…. To the right,” he said, shell shocked by Twilight’s audacious attitude. Slowly he followed her up the stairs not really even paying attention to where he was going simply following that smirking lilac flank. That was until she stopped and he found himself muzzle deep in her dripping snatch.

“Oh my, aren’t we eager?” she asked with a playful coo, her tail whipping around his throat pulling him closer with the makeshift collar. “Hmmm… go on~ have a taste,” she said softly, moaning gently as he lightly rubbed his muzzle against her burning nethers. She gasped softly as his tongue slowly pressed against her sensitive folds, pressing down tentatively at first then a little bit firmer coaxing a loud squeak from her lips. “Oooh yes! T-that is… good,” Twilight purred, slowly leaning forwards presenting herself.

“W-we should move off the stairs,” he commented with a sly little smirk, “I-it’s dangerous.”

“Y-yeah,” she agreed making a sprint up the stairs with an excited giggle. A part of her wondered if it was the wine, or simply her feelings for him that made her this eager but the moment the door to his bedroom was open she leapt onto the bed taking the most sexy pose she could imagine. On her back with her hind legs spread to show off just how flexible she was… a little fact that she thought would surely give Rainbow Dash pause. Looking over at herself in the full length mirror she smiled a little, there weren’t a lot of moments where she considered herself sexy but this was most definitely one of them.

As Twilight filed away a mental note to maybe ask Rarity about getting socks, and maybe panties. The thoughts of sexy clothing were pushed away as Shooting Star finally poked his head into the bedroom with a sweet smile on his muzzle. She felt a little sorry for him, he tried to look brave but his eyes showed that he was very nervous. She couldn’t help herself, slowly lowering herself down Twilight raised her flank to show off for him. “Come on Starry~ Don’t keep a mare waiting, let’s continue where we left off,” Twilight half moaned. There was something about acting desperate that made her feel naughty and excited. She blamed Lyra for this, it was her fault.

Shooting Star took her by surprise. She had assumed he would be tentative about the entire thing. Instead he leapt onto the bed to pick up where he had left off with an eagerness that pleased Twilight greatly. Her forehooves pawed at the bed, her hinds spread wider and she dug deeper into the soft silken sheets. Nuzzling into the pillow she tried to control her low squeals of pleasure as his tongue lapped passionately at her entrance. It had been a long time since someone had touched her like that and she made a mental note to help him hit all of her pleasure points… when she wasn’t busy enjoying the sensation of Shooting Star’s broad tongue grinding down on her clit.

Casting a glance over her withers she smiled there, catching a few glimpses of his pride while he worked. It was hard to see but if she strained her neck enough she could get an alright look. She was genuinely a little intimidated by it. She hadn’t really seen any other stallions… so she didn’t have any grounds for a comparison but she thought it looked massive. The thought of it never fitting crossed her mind. “O-ooh….stars above yes. That is good, p-press down a little harder with your tongue, please?” She begged him, her voice low, laced with pure need and desire for him to push her further towards the edge of her climax.

“Like… this?” he asked, his voice soft and playful as he pressed his tongue down more firmly on her little pleasure button, slowly rubbing. She could hear him chuckle softly at the way she squealed as a response. “I’ll take that as a yes, Twi~” he teased. The teasing made her feel oddly at ease. No, not the teasing. The fact he was taking confidence from her and enjoying himself rather than being nervous about the entire thing.

“YES!” she screamed, shamelessly. Pressing back against his muzzle she couldn’t stop herself from grinding back against that divine tongue. She felt his hooves on her flank lightly rubbing and squeezing her cutie mark. Her eyes fluttered closed as she simply allowed herself to focus on nothing but the pleasure that he was giving her. She could feel herself getting closer, and closer to her climax. Biting her bottom lip she prepared herself for the sensation.

Then Star did something she had not been expecting. He bit. He bit down on that little bundle of nerves. It wasn’t something she had been expecting from someone who was doing this for his first time, but she crashed over forwards all the same screaming in orgasmic pleasure. For a long moment her vision went white as all her senses were assaulted, and endorphins rushed through her system making her feel more alive than she had ever felt. The last time she had felt like this was in the arms of Lyra… but even that paled in comparison to how her heart leapt when it was with a pony that she really loved.

Opening her eyes she realised that she was on her back all of a sudden. She couldn’t remember turning around, though the sight that greeted her between her legs was admittedly adorable. Star sat there looking at her with a sheepish smile, his muzzle drenched in her juices. “I wasn’t sure what to expect of the taste.” he stated with a small smile. “But I have decided that…” he paused, smirked, and leaned in close to her, “You taste wonderful.” He then kissed her lovingly on the lips, slowly laying herself over her his shaft lightly pressing against her entrance.

Twilight closed her eyes letting out a long drawn out moan of pleasure, she didn’t say anything she simply started pushing back against his shaft letting out cute frustrated moans every time she failed to guide him into her needy, aching pussy. With considerable effort she lit up her horn and guided his breeding spear into the correct position letting out a cute little wail of pleasure as he instantly trusted forwards.

Star wasted no time after that and Twilight was very much alright with that. She could feel his shaft slowly sinking into her. It was the most blissful experience she’d had. It was so different from what she had imagined it would be like to be mounted by a stallion. It didn’t hurt, though she contributed that to the fact that she could feel just how wet she was. Her hooves wrapped around his neck and she pulled him close to herself. “Oh, Star! Please take me!” Please take me harder!” she pleaded desperately, roughly thrusting herself back onto the handsome stallion’s breeding spear.

“Hmm… oooh….. Twi... “ he moaned loudly. She met his smiled and then kissed him on the lips much more passionately then she had done on their date. Their tongues wrestling as passionately as their bodies were pressing and grinding together. His hooves around her pulling her harshly into every thrust.

Quickly his thrusting became irregular and Twilight could feel his shaft throbbing harder inside of her. Holding on to him tighter she could do nothing but moan encouragingly into his ear, pleased to find out that it made him slightly rougher in the moment. There was something to be said about a stallion’s instinct to breed she thought to herself.

As Star hilted deeply inside of her he let out a long drawn out moan of pleasure, nuzzling firmly into her neck. Holding her close and keeping her locked in place. “I-I love you, Twilight,” he whispered, panting heavily.

She could feel his shaft throbbing inside of her. Letting out a cute little mewls of pleasure she simply let it happen, feeling the blissful sensation of his seed pouring into her pussy. Filling her womb. She could feel a small trickle of it rolling down her thigh and across her rump.

As he flumped over Twilight smiled happily slowly turning and crawling closer to him so she lay there snuggled up against his side, nuzzling into his chest with a very happy smile on her muzzle. She still felt the afterglow of her climax, the love she had been overwhelmed with in their passionate embrace. In that moment she finally understood the difference between sex and making love to somepony. The latter was so much more intense because of the emotions involved. “I love you, my Starlight.”

Author's Note

This story was commissioned by Shooting Star1234.

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