The Equestrian Maelstrom
The View of Other Maelstroms
Previous ChapterNext ChapterHello everyone. Danny Eclipse here and I wanted to give you this heads up. As you already know, I have created multiple other realms where Naruto is part of different Timelines of Equestria thanks to Starlight Glimmer (*Cough* Spoilers *Cough*). So this is a chapter that is going to give you an insight of what the other timeline/dimension Naruto's are and what they are possible like.
The following views are in this order: Great Crystal War, Land of the Changelings, Everlasting Night, Overlord (it was when Naruto was accidently flung back in time to a point in time when he wronged by Starswirl the Bearded and turned to a path of darkness by Starswirl), and Demented (it is the timeline when another Naruto was flung into another world and became a Pony Freak like the EOI and the Subjects).
Once again, this is NOT part of the story but I thought you would love to see something from the other timelines/dimension that you would like the glimpse to see what they may contain, I tried not to let out too many spoilers of them. And, about the Everlasting Night, it was an idea to combine something like Batman: Arkham Knight into MLP but change some things.
The Great Crystal War Timeline:
There was a big battle. White anthro stallions and mares wearing golden armor were charging against anthro ponies wearing black armor with black and purple mane and tail.
Out of them all, there was a cyan anthro pegasus. She had cyan fur and wore a blue battle flight outfit. She had a right cyan pegasus wing and a left metal wing. A part of her left ear was missing. She was battling against enemy Pegasi flyers and when she landed, she was attacked by a dark armored soldier. She threw them back but lost her mask ,revealing her face. She had rainbow hair and magenta eyes and had a scar across her left eye. She went to continue fighting, not noticing a boulder being thrown down a cliff. When she pushed back another dark armored pony, she noticed the boulder about to fall on her.
Before she could react, two anthro ponies came from nowhere and mowed right through the boulder like it was nothing, turning it into a bunch of small rocks. When Rainbow opened her eyes, she sees two Earth Ponies, both wearing black battle mining suits.
The first one had pink fur with a dark pink mane and tail, both cut short. She had some dust and cuts on her and she had blue eyes. The second one had grey fur with purple mane and tail. She had cuts and dust on her as well and she had blue eyes as well.
Rainbow looked at them "Glad you saved me there, Pinkamena and Maud."
Pinkamena nodded with seriousness "Oh course, Rainbow. Now we need to conti-"
They were interrupted when they see a large smoke cloud appear afar. They looked and see a wooden hand erupt from the smoke and when the smoke cleared, it revealed a giant statue that had black cuffs on it. It roared out, its' power being gigantic.
"So he's here too." Rainbow said with venom.
Suddenly, two giant anthro stallions appeared and began to charge against the statue.
Rainbow, Pinkamena, and Maud were about to head forward until they see someone land in front of them a few feet away.
This figure wears a pair of black pants and gloves, with a white form-fitting shirt underneath. Over this he wears a purple, high-collared, long sleeve mantle that splits down the lower half and has a Kitsune crest (a black swirl with a black circle on the center of the swirl) on the back. Around his waist he wears a simple, light-purple obi and a belt. On his back is a Chokuto Sword with a black handle and scabbard. The figure looked like a orange nine tails. His fur was orange and he had black stripes from around his eyes to his ears. The figure had bandages on his arms, where his hands were. His left eye was completely purple with black rings around it. It also had tomoes around the central pupil. His right eye was green with three tomoes around the central pupil.
The figure gave a smirk, revealing he had canines "And where do you think you're going, girls?"
Rainbow growled "Naruto Uzumaki."
Naruto kept his smirk "Come now, is that any way to treat a friend?"
"You became my enemy when you fell prey to Sombra's corruption." Rainbow growled.
Naruto frowned "It's too bad." He began to stand straight before he dug a hand into his cloak before pulling out a photo. On the photo, it showed a smiling Naruto with a smiling Rainbow, Applejack, and Fluttershy "Why do you deny the dark side, Rainbow?" He looks at the picture "This is so upsetting..." He looks at Rainbow and grinned "But that's ok!" He puts away the picture "I'm sure you'll have a change of heart!"
Naruto put a hand on his sword and all three girls got into a battle stance "Let's dance, foxy." Rainbow challenged, getting a chuckle from Naruto before they charged at each other.
Land of the Changelings Timeline:
In Canterlot...
Princess Celestia looked around, seeing all the battling happening around her capital. The Guard Corps were battling against insect ponies known as Changelings to defend their home.
"Princess, we need to evacuate you out of Canterlot." A stallion voice said behind her.
Celestia turned around, being greeted by the Captain of the Royal Guard; Shining Armor.
"How is the situation?" Celestia asked.
Shining sighed "I hate to admit it, but the Changelings are advancing fast. We have tried to counter their advancements but all attempts have failed. And without your sister..."
"We may lose." Celestia finished with a sigh "If my sister wasn't captured and if I fallen, Equestria may stand a better chance."
"We have to go before the Changelings advance too far." Shining Armor insisted.
Celestia nodded and turned to leave. When the guards were about to open the door, it was blown open by a blast of magic. Shining stood in front of Celestia with his shield and sword raised. Some close guards came to his side.
The smoke began to clear, revealing who attacked it. There was a female Changeling that wore green and blue-green outfit. She had dark green eyes with elongated oval pupils. She has a teal mane and tail, blue-green chitinous plating over her midsection, and she wears a small, black crown tipped with blue orbs. She had armored changelings with her.
"Well, well, well." The female changeling said with a distorted and echoing voice "I finally found you, Celestia." She looks around her and sees the guards readying their weapons, a few who had spears aimed them at them "Oh, what an absolutely pathetic and futile sight."
"Queen Chrysalis, I assumed?" Celestia asked to the female Changeling.
Chrysalis smirked "I see my reputation proceeds me."
"You'll never get the princess!" Shining Armor shouted and ready himself for a fight "You'll have to get through me if you want her."
Chrysalis looked at him "And who might you be?"
"I am Shining Armor; Captain of the Royal Guard!" Shining replied with pride "I will not fail to defend the Princess from evil beings such as you."
Then they all heard a feral growl from behind the group. The changelings moved, revealing an anthro Nine Tailed Fox.
The Nine Tailed Fox had orange fur with black tips. The Nine Tails wore dark green chitin armor and had a Chokuto Sword with a black handle in his right hand. His eyes were green with three tomoes around the central pupil. He was staring right at Shining Armor.
Chrysalis giggled "I like you to meet my Champion and Personal Bodyguard; Naruto Uzumaki."
Naruto walked in front of Chrysalis and aimed his sword at Shining "You dare insult my Queen, Captain Armor!?" Naruto growled with venom.
Shining Armor growled back "Yeah, I dare. What are you going to do about that, fox?"
Naruto growled in anger before looking at Chrysalis, who smirked and gestured 'go ahead' "Just don't kill him."
Naruto nods before charging at Shining Armor.
"Stay out of this!" Shining Armor ordered his men "The fox is mine!"
The two clashed blades.
Everlasting Night Timeline:
In the land of Equestria, all the shined was the moonlight. The Sun and Moon were merged, creating a permanent Solar Eclipse. A great city, in the center of the former Everfree Forest, was the center of the Solar Eclipse.
In the city, there was a anthro mare running. She had yellow fur and had red and yellow mane and tail. She wore purple clothes and had a teal robe belt. She also had a unicorn horn and had teal eyes. She was running through an alleyway and when she was about to come out of another alleyway, she sees light and vehicles at the end with their top spot lights on her. She stopped and tried to turn around, only to see it was blocked by vehicles and soldiers. She heard a gunshot being sounded. She turned around and see Rainbow Dash, but she was different.
She wore dark blue, almost black, armor and had bat-like wings. She also had a blue cape and had a pistol in her right hand. Her hair was cut to look like a mohawk and she had bat pony ears. Her eyes were still magenta but now had slits like a batpony.
"The chase is over, rebel scum!" Rainbow shouted in anger "Now you have nowhere to run." She aimed her pistol at the unicorn "No one is going to miss you, Sunset Shimmer."
Sunset closed her eyes, awaiting her fate. Then she heard a gunshot sound off but heard Rainbow cry out in pain. Sunset opened her eyes, seeing Rainbow's pistol on the ground and Rainbow holding her right hand in pain.
"Chasing defenseless unicorn mares, Dash?" A distorted and almost robotic male voice asked "That's low, even for you."
They all looked and see a shadow appear on the ground. Then, a figure landed in front of Sunset. The figure was wearing a military-like suit (his suit design was similar to the Arkham Knight but the Arkham symbol was replaced with a Kitsune Symbol and the bat ears on his mask was replaced with fox ears and he had nine tails that were armored up as well).
"Fox Knight." Rainbow growled before looking at her men "Kill him!"
They were about to attack but Knight beat them to it by pulling out two twin pistols and shooting the men down dead. The Knight looked at Rainbow, who growled and opened her wings and took off. When she did, the Knight put away his guns and looked at Sunset.
"Are you injured, Ms. Shimmer?" The Fox Knight asked her.
Sunset nodded "Shaken, but fine."
The Knight nodded before he touched his right fox ear on his mask before looking at her "Come along, Ms. Shimmer. We'll be having company soon."
Sunset followed Fox Knight out of the alleyway before seeing a tank and a car with three soldiers surrounding them. From on top of a building, Rainbow was smirking victoriously.
"It's best you get down, Ms. Shimmer." The Fox Knight said as looked at them.
"How are you going to beat them?" Sunset asked.
"By evening the odds." The Fox Knight answered.
Suddenly, they heard the roaring of an engine and everyone looks, seeing a black with orange outlines car coming around. Then, it stopped and the wheels began to spread apart and the car lifted up a bit before the center of the car opened and a giant turret came out with a two other attachments, one of them was a gatling gun while the other was a Riot Suppressor Gun.
"60mm Cannon: Operational." The computer in the car stated. It aimed the cannon at the unmanned tank and fired, destroying it in one blast. The soldiers aimed their guns at the car and fired, making the turret look at them "Riot Suppressor: Engage." The Riot Suppressor gun fired three shots, one to knock down the soldiers. The car then approached them and the back opened, revealing two seats.
"Get in, Ms. Shimmer." The Fox Knight told her "Unless you want to die to the Night Guard?"
The Fox Knight made it that there was no argument. Sunset sighed before getting into a seat and she was strapped in. The Fox Knight went to the cockpit and got inside and retracted the seats back into the back with the door close shut. Then the car took off.
Overlord Timeline:
There was an anthro alicorn flying through the sky. She had very dark blue, almost black, fur and had blood red mane and tail. Around her neck was a piece of line string that was attached to the Alicorn Amulet. She wears a black cloak around her and she lands on the ground. Then, a flash of orange next to her and an anthro nine tail fox appeared next to her.
The nine tailed wears a red shirt with a black cloak, black cargo pants, black sandals, and has nine tails. He had orange fur and electric blue eyes.
The two stared at the front door into the palace. Around them was nothing, no pony in sight. The alicorn was frowning in disappointment. That is when the front doors opened and out stepped an old, ancient looking, unicorn with a long white beard and white mane and tail and wore robes. He had blue fur.
"No adoring crowds or grand entrances to welcome your queen?" The alicorn asked to the bearded pony "You must have told many slanderous lies about me to have the ponies flee in my presence."
"Astelle, my pupil, what has become of you?" The bearded unicorn asked to the alicorn before looking at the fox "And who is that?"
"Oh, this?" Astelle opened her wings to look at herself before looking at the unicorn "Don't you find this a good look on me? Seems your elemental magic isn't all cracked up to be, now is it?" Astelle questioned the unicorn before folding her wings again "You withheld how powerful this new magic can be. Powerful enough to beat the great Starswirl." She narrowed her eyes at him dangerously.
"And my name is Naruto, Naruto Uzumaki. I am Astelle's friend and partner." The Nine Tailed Fox answered.
Starswirl began to step forward "Magic based in darkness can only corrupt. You can never truly be happy if you embrace it."
Starswirl noticed the magic attack from Astelle and blocked it.
"How DARE you speak to be about happiness!" Astelle shouted to him "You destroyed MY happiness a long time ago!"
"I am sorry for the pain I cause upon you, Astelle." Starswirl apologized "My miscalculations have come to a great cost to you. But seeking revenge will not appease your anger. It can only serve to fuel it."
Astelle growled at Starswirl "Oh, you're 'sorry' are you? You're 'sorry' that you destroyed my life!? And kept secrets from me, knowing what it would do it me!? I demand that you take back your curse from me or I will show you no mercy!"
"It is unwise to venture down this path." Starswirl warned Astelle "There is no need to destroy what little sanity resides within you with violence."
"You are the reason for everything I am!" Astelle shouted at Starswirl "You could have followed after me and try to see reason. You could have had it all, Starswirl, but your pride outweigh your good judgement!"
"Worry not, old fool." Naruto continued with a frown "The tears that Astelle once shed are long gone. And her better judgement showed just how blinded she truly was to you."
"In fact, you should rejoice." Astelle continued with a dark tone "For I have come to give you exactly what you wanted from me all along: permanent release. When you are out of my way, there will be nothing left to stop me from curing the plague you have placed on these ponies."
"I can't allow you to do that, Astelle." A female voice said from behind the door of where Starswirl stood.
Astelle and Naruto looked at the source of the voice and Astelle was shocked and surprise to see who it was.
"Celestia?" Astelle asked to her.
"You have to let this go." Celestia said to her in a begging-like tone "Starswirl's right. There is no good that can come from this."
Instead of understand, Astelle became very angry and looked at Starswirl with rage "How dare you inflict this pain and responsibility upon my sister! You have corrupted EVERYTHING I hold dear and I will take great pleasure in destroying you!"
Celestia began to speak in a begging tone "Astelle, please... Don't do this! I don't want to fight you!"
Astelle looked at her "Stay out of this Tia. You can't understand the damage he's done to me, to you, to ALL of ponykind! I am this world's last hope for redemption."
"I am sorry it has come to this, but I can't allow Equestria for your misguided vengeance." Starswirl said to him.
Naruto growled and he cloaked himself in an orange aura "What would YOU know, old fool? I was supposed to be my village's hero and look what THEY did to me! I am abused, tortured, and more! I follow Astelle because she is the only one who has EVER showed me kindness!"
"Missguided?" Astelle laughed at what Starswirl said "You know NOTHING, you old fool. Did you really think you could mold me into become your puppet!? Telling me all these lies about my destiny and my fate! Without once even considering what I want! Or even what is even good for Equestria! You put up a good disguise of wisdom and power but I know the truth! I know what you really are! A coward!"
{Play song: "A New Era Begins" from Magpiepony.}
Continue after the song ends.
Celestia was crying against the Tree of Harmony that Starswirl was turned into. Astelle was giggling darkly before laughing evilly at the fate of Starswirl. Naruto, who was leaning against the stone wall, was grinning at the misfortune of Starswirl.
"Such a perfect ending for the mighty 'Starswirl the Bearded'!" She looked at the Tree of Harmony "Forever trapped in the form of a tree, unable to find the sweet release from immortality that he so longed for." She looked above the tree and see five gems "And better yet, I found exactly what I have been looking for: The Elements of Harmony!"
Celestia turned to Astelle, tears still crying from her eyes "I-I won't let you do this, Astelle! Whatever evil plan you have stops now!"
"You don't know what you're talking about Celestia. I'm only going to make the world a better place." Astelle told her. "Ushering that new era of peace and prosperity. And banish the CURSE on our linage."
"Yeah Celestia." Naruto agreed "A world without magic is a perfect world. Magic is the cause of our pain, what better way to end it by destroying the source?"
"Ushered in by your hatred and destruction!" Celestia accused Astelle "The only curse I see on our linage is YOU!"
Celestia surrounded Astelle with her golden magic.
"Astelle!" Naruto called out and looked at Celestia. Naruto charged at Celestia but she pushed him back against the wall.
"For the future of Equestria. I, PRINCESS CELESTIA, banish you!" Celestia shouted in the Royal Canterlot voice. "Never again will your treachery harm anypony here or here after!"
"NO!" Naruto shouted and attempted to charge but Celestia pushed him back into the wall, more force into it this time.
"W-What?" Astelle asked to Celestia in shock "B-But I did this for you, for us. You have to let me explain, Tia! Tia, don't do this! Tia, you're my family, please!" Astelle began to be sealed into a painting "Tia!"
"NOOOOOO!" Naruto shouted as he got out of the rock.
Celestia fell to the ground. Naruto lean against the rock, crying before he looked at Celestia. Then, his eyes turned blood red.
"You... you..." Celestia turned to look at Naruto as his orange aura flared "I'm going to make you pay for hurting my older sister!"
Before Naruto could attack, he was surrounded by golden magic and Celestia stared right at him.
"You are the last pawn of Astelle. Time to rid Equestria of you!" Celestia shouted in anger.
"Do it, you sister traitor!" Naruto shouted at Celestia in cold and feral hate "Seal me within that painting as well with Astelle!"
"No, I have somewhere worse for a demon like you." Celestia said as her eyes began to glow white "I, Princess Celestia, banish you to the deepest and darkest place of Tartarus where you will be there forever!"
"I will avenge Astelle, Celestia!" Naruto shouted in anger before he began to fly away like a comet "I WILL AVENGE ASTELLE, CELESTIA! ONE DAY, I WILL RETURN AND WHEN I DO, YOU WILL REGRET NOT SEALING ME AWAY WITH ASTELLE! I WILL RETURN!"
The Demented Dimension:
Naruto opened his eyes and found himself on the ground. He got up and noticed he was in front of a random graveyard entrance. He walked right inside, looking around until he noticed a grave that looked like it flashed a minute. Curiosity getting the better of him, Naruto approached the grave. When he was right in front of him, he was reading the name on the tombstone.
Here lies Doppelganger
Naruto raised an eyebrow before he sees a white glow from in front of the tombstone. Naruto stepped back and see that he was glowing white. Before he could pull away, he was held into place as he felt something entering his body.
"Wh-what is happening to me?" Naruto asked before he cried out before a large flash happened.
When the flash ended, standing in front of the grave was a new Naruto. This Naruto was still an anthro nine tails. He had white fur with some orange streaks. His eyes were insanely small and were electric blue with slits. Naruto was looking at himself before something snapped in his mind before he grinned and the picture of Doppelganger flashed in his mind.
After looking at himself for a bit, he heard a noise and looked towards the source. He began to walk in that direction before he saw something.
There was a RED Engineer with a Clockwerk's Helm, a Gunslinger and a Pip-Boy. Naruto felt the surge to touch that human. So he jumped down and the Engineer looked at him.
"Hello good sir." The new Naruto greeted him "Who are you?"
"I'm Robot Engie, fox boy." The Engineer told him "Who are you?"
Naruto began to think of a name before he grinned "My name is Copyfox."
The newly named Copyfox walked up to him and held out his hand to him to shake. Robot Engie grabbed it and shook and Copyfox heard a sound that sounded like assimilation. Copyfox grinned and Robot Engie immediately let go and pulled away.
"Thanks for giving me your powers." Copyfox thanked with a grin before his eyes glowed and he fired lasers out of his eyes, hitting Robot Engie and killing him. Copyfox looked at his hands and grinned before he began to walk away, with the intention of traveling the world.
Sorry for the delay. Truth be told, I think I got this done about a month or so ago and thought I put it on the chapter. Just checked today and found it wasn't, so I'm sorry for not downloading it. Also, just to tell you now, here are the present votes for ALL the Maelstroms. And sorry for not hosting the Human World Naruto, but truth be told, I still haven't come up with an idea on how to do it.
The Equestrian Maelstrom:
Naruto: (Deadline at Chapter ?)
Princess Moon (14 Votes)
Princess Molestia (14 Votes)
Sunset Shimmer (9 Votes)
Queen Chrysalis (9 Votes)
Trixie Lulamoon (6 Votes)
Sonata Dusk (6 Votes)
Queen Astelle (5 Votes)
Snowdrop (4 Votes)
Adagio Dazzle (3 Votes)
Aria Blaze (3 Votes)
Nyx (2 Votes)
Eris (2 Votes)
Derpy (1 Vote)
Lady Teria (1 Vote)
Kurame (1 Vote)
Spike: (Top 5 at Chapter ?)
Rarity (2 Votes)
Cutie Mark Crusaders (2 Votes)
Princess Ember (1 Vote)
Starlight Glimmer (1 Vote)
CW [Crystal War] Naruto: (Top 5) [Accepting OCs, females only.]
Umbra [King Sombra's sister] (1 Vote)
Rainbow Dash (1 Vote)
Pinkamena Diana Pie (1 Vote)
Maud Pie (1 Vote)
LOTC [Land of the Changelings] Naruto: (Top 6) [Since Queen Chrysalis is already Naruto's mate, there is need for six others. Warning: Only ponies that can become Changelings will be able to vote, no none Changelings allowed. I may accept OC Changelings, only females.]
Rainbow Dash (1 Vote)
Applejack Apple (1 Vote)
Twilight Sparkle (1 Vote)
Pinkie Pie (1 Vote)
Rarity (1 Vote)
Fluttershy (1 Vote)
EN [Everlasting Night] Naruto: (Top 5) [Accepting ideas to relate Batman and MLP for the story]
Starlight Glimmer (1 Vote)
Trixie Lulamoon (1 Vote)
Gleaming Shield [Shining Armor's Twin Sister] (1 Vote)
Flare Warden [Flash Sentry's little sister] (1 Vote)
Overlord Naruto: (Top 7) [Only Villains or Corrupt Ponies can be selected on this. Also accepting OCs, females only.]
Nightmare Moon (1 Vote)
Bleeding Heart [She is Cadance's version of Nightmare Moon] (1 Vote)
Daybreak (1 Vote)
Twivine Sparkle (1 Vote)
Queen Astelle (1 Vote)
Lich Queen Snowdrop ['The Return of the Snowdrop - Act 1' Version] (1 Vote)
Eris (1 Vote)
'Pony' Freak Naruto: (Top ?): [Pony Freaks Only. Possibly accepting Pony Freak OCs.]
Brutalight Sparcake (2 Votes)
Painset Shimmercakes (2 Votes)
Rainbine (1 vote)
Magic Mare (1 Vote)
How many Freaks should Naruto have sealed in him?:
1 (1 Vote)
2 (0 Votes)
Freaks Sealed Inside Naruto: (The First 1) [I have selected Doppleganger to be inside Naruto, considering how powerful Doppleganger can be when he encounters other freaks. I made my choice, you make yours'.]:
EqG Naruto: (Top 5) [Accepting OC EqG humans, females only.]
Sunset Shimmer (1 Vote)
Sonata Dusk (1 Vote)
Adagio Dazzle (1 Vote)
Aria Blaze (1 Vote)
Gloriosa Daisy (1 Vote)
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