The Equestrian Maelstrom

by Danny Eclipse

The Zebra and the Transformation

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It has been sometime since the whole storm happened. Was it a week? Two weeks? Time was hard for Naruto to follow sometimes. Anyway, Naruto was relaxing on his roof when he felt Twilight’s magical signature teleporting next to me.

Naruto looked at Twilight’s happy and delightful face.

“What’s up, Twilight?” Naruto asked to her.

“Naruto, I got some good news!” Twilight said with excitement and joy “I’m pregnant!”

Naruto looked shocked before smiled and began to hug Twilight “That’s great to hear Twilight.” Naruto said before pulling away from her “Well, let’s go get a treat since we will be celebrating.”

Twilight nodded and the two began to leave the compound grounds.


Naruto and Twilight were walking with Spike, who had tagged along when learning of Twilight’s pregnancy. However, Naruto noticed immediately that the town seem deserted. Naruto had an eyebrow raised before he jumped away from Twilight and Spike to look at a higher point. That is when Naruto noticed a cloaked figure coming out of the woods.

Naruto kneeled down and began to look for Twilight and Spike, only to see them off the street and began to sense out before detecting them in Sugarcube Corner with the other girls.

Naruto watched as the figure took off their hood, revealing the figure to be a female Zebra. Naruto noticed this before he smirked. He went to the edge of a roof.

You look lost, friend.” Naruto said in Zebrian, the Zebra’s native language.

The female zebra immediately looked where she heard it and looked at Naruto with surprise.

You know Zabrian?” The female zebra asked, making Naruto nod.

“Indeed I do, ma’am.” Naruto said to her “What is your name?”

“My name is Zecora.” The Zebra told Naruto.

(Ok, before you say anything; I CAN’T DO RHYME SPEECH! So Zecora will be speaking normally. My apologies but I have tried time and time again to learn how to rhyme with speech but only in small sayings, no sentences like Zecora can do.)

“Well, what is it that you are here for, Zecora?” Naruto asked and before Zecora could ask, he sees Applebloom walking out of Sugarcube Corner. “Applebloom? What are you doing out here?”

“My sister and her friends are talking inside and they don’t want to even learn of this zebra girl.” Applebloom said to Naruto.

“Well, how about we take this to Zecora’s place?” Naruto suggested, getting a nod from Applebloom and Zecora. Naruto hopped down and the three began to walk.

Naruto and Applebloom were a bit behind from Zecora when they entered the Everfree Forest. Naruto immediately took notice of blue flowers.

“What are these?” Naruto asked to Zecora.

“Those flowers are known as Poison Joke.” Zecora said “Do not touch them, no matter what. Otherwise, you will suffer from their practical jokes.”

“What kind of effects?” Naruto asked.

“The Poison Joke magically match the victim's personality and traits, which manifest as physical afflictions.” Zecora told Naruto.

“Really?” Naruto asked before thinking before saying “I wonder what effects it could do on me. My personality is pranking and the traits I have is naturally attuned to my pranking nature.” Naruto looked at Zecora “Is there a cure?” Zecora nodded “Is it possible if I try it out? It could tell me about what it does.”

Zecora nodded “I can prepare a cure for you tomorrow.”

Naruto nods and thanks Zecora when they heard AJ’s voice calling out for Applebloom. The trio stopped and see the Mane 6 approaching and standing a group of the Poison Joke.

“Well, get a big one tomorrow.” Naruto told Zecora before Naruto and Applebloom reunited with the Mane 6. Naruto purposely trek through a patch of Poison Joke.

‘I wonder what could happen.’ Naruto thought to himself.


The Next Day…

Inside the residence of Naruto, a figure on the bed was yawning and getting up from the bed to stretch.

“Good morning to myself.” A female voice said before the figure stopped “Is that my voice?” The figure rushed to a mirror and we all see a female version of Naruto. Naruto found herself to be well quite curviest and most endowed. She has long, creamy and delicious legs, shining cerulean blue eyes, silk-like fur, and has a G-cup size bust that feel fuller and bigger and a thick yet firm and soft ass. Luckily, her fur was covering all of her private parts.

“Oh yeah.” Naruto said with a moan as she stretch and began to feel her entire body “Looks like the Poison Joke acknowledged my nature of being a prankster. Eee hee~! This brings so many memories when I used that spell back in Elementia to turn into a girl for pranking purposes.” Naruto sighed “Well, that was before that bastard of a father reinforce the seal on my magic.”

Naruto got dress and began to walk out the door with a grin “Let’s see how Ponyville handles Naruko.”


Spike was grinning as he looked at all the Mane 6 who were turned into different things. Twilight’s horn was now flopple, Applejack was now tiny, Pinkie can’t speak because her tongue is now spitty, Fluttershy spoke in a guy’s voice, Rarity has frizzell mane, tail, and coat, and Rainbow Dash had her inverted wings. So he began to nickname them. There was Twilight Flopple, Apple Teeny, Spitty Pie, Flutterguy, Hairity, and Rainbow Crash!

Spike couldn’t wait to see Naruto was like. That is when they heard the door knock and opened, seeing a sexy female nine tailed fox.

“Well, hello everyone.” The female fox spoke in an angelic tone that was ringing bells. This voice made Spike stop dead in the nickname list “How do I look? How does my Naruko look?”

Everyone was shocked and surprise to see Naruto was now the female nine tailed fox named Naruko. Naruko even began to do a few poses. Everyone could smell vanilla in the room as Naruko began to strike some risky poses.

“Damn… you look absolutely hot… And I’m as straight as an arrow.” Rainbow commented.

“NO FAIR!” Rarity shouted in denial “I get turned into a furball but Naruto gets turned into that!? I smell favoritism!”

“I know a lot of mares who would kill to have legs and a flank like that.” AJ commented with a low whistle.

“Like what you see, Spike?” Twilight asked to Spike with a smile.

“Homina, homina, homina…” Spike muttered unblinkingly as he studied Naruko’s form. He felt his blood going south and began to feel his pants were too tight as he stared at Naruto. Then, Spike fainted on the spot.

Naruko gave a victorious grin “Yes, still got it.” Naruto muttered before turning around “Whelp, I don’t know about you but I’m going to go pay a visit to a friend to help me.”

Naruko left behind confused Mane 6.


Naruko had arrived the same time Applebloom arrived at Zecora’s hut. When Applebloom, and later Zecora, saw Naruko, they were blushing up a storm.

“I wouldn’t mind going lesbian to be with Naruko.” She heard Applebloom muttered to herself, making Naruko grin.

So after sending Applebloom to go fetch supplies for the cure for Naruko and, eventually, the Mane 6, Naruko was talking with Zecora about life in Ponyville and Zecora telling her life in the Everfree.

After an hour or two, Naruko was waiting before noticing the Mane 6 waiting outside. So she decided to go out there and talk to them before they do anything rash.


Later…

After the explanation to the Mane 6 and Applebloom getting the supplies for it, they paid a visit to the Spa in Ponyville. With Zecora’s help, they made a healing pool for the members.

In another pool for the males, Naruko was relaxing as the effects of Poison Joke wore off. However, Naruko found herself turned back into Naruto but something was off. When he looked at himself, he saw that his fur was now gone but he has orange coat. Naruto went to the nearest mirror and saw that he changed.

Naruto was now a full flesh kitsune instead of being just an anthro fox. Naruto had an orange coat, short spiky blond hair, whisker-like markings on his cheeks. However, he still has orange with white tips fox ears and nine tails. He now has a body of an athletic but with more defined muscles from all the training he has been doing. Whatever training he took, his body was like looking at a human-replica of one of the statues. His every muscle trained to have top performances in Stamina, Power, and Speed at the same time. He has broad shoulders, chiseled abs and hips.

Naruto whistled at his new appearance before going to the locker room to change. Once he put his clothes back on, Naruto went to meet his friends and saw them waiting for him.

“Naruto, is that you?” Twilight asked in shock.

Naruto nods “Yeah, I’ll have to look at the library to see what my new powers and abilities are as a full flesh kitsune.”

Twilight nodded dumbly before blushing at Naruto’s appearance, alongside everyone one else. Naruto grinned before they left the spa.


Author's Note

Finally, after so long, an update to the Equestrian Maelstrom. I will admit, I always thought of Kitsunes as actual foxes. So when I found out, I had to make my corrections. Well, are you happy to see this story isn’t dead?

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