A Broken Heart

by ICrackVideoGames

Rating: everyone
Tags: Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Original Character, Comedy
Length: 7673

If the one you love hates you, what would you do?

This story takes place at the same time as A Tale of a Blazing Heart by ArkosTheGuardian

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/34553/The-Tale-of-A-Blazing-Heart

CloudRunner has been living in Manehattan for as long as he can remember... So obviously he's gotten a crush on somepony, for 4 years to be exact,HoneyVoice, a perfect pony which he had thought that she'd be the one, but unfortunately one day CloudRunner found out that she likes somepony else and that he disgusts her. That experience led him flee from Manehattan for good, but what happens when his broken heart leads him to Ponyville?

Published 2012-07-20 12:54:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-03-04 05:34:04 UTC

A place to Stay!

Chapter 1

HoneyVoice, the pony with short bangs and a ponytail ( Wow, a pony with a pony tail) the pony that CloudRunner loved for 4 years had rejected him, his broken heart led him to try and run away from his sadness. So he packed his stuff and left his house, leaving was a challenge itself, Could he really leave the city where he grew up? Could he leave his friends? His hooves wouldn't budge, his mind says no but his heart said yes. So he finally left the city. So his Journey Begins...

CloudRunner hasn't even thought of where to go, but he can't stop now. He walked for miles, while also trying to conserve his energy. Then he spotted a village, it looked really peaceful, so he decided to find someplace to rest, but first he needs to know the name of this village. The first pony he asked was a pony with a pink coat and pink frilly hair, "Um excuse me but I-" CloudRunner said, but all the pink mare did was gasp loudly and run away."Um... What?" he thought to himself, still confused, he went to look for another pony to ask.

He then found himself at the library, He knocked on the door, then, this lavender colored pony opened the door,"Um... Can I help you?", she asked him."Am I troubling you? May I come in, he said."Uh... sure" so the pony let him in. "So what can i do for you?" she asked. "I'm new here, and I need a place to stay, do you know where I can find such a place?", he asked. " Oh... Unfortunately, I don't think there are any houses for sale" she said. " Oh... That's too bad..." he said. " But I think I know somepony that can help you." she said to him.

She led him to a place called Sweet Apple Acres to meet somepony named AppleJack. " Hey You know what's wierd? I don't even know your name." he said as he let out a soft chuckle,"Oh! I'm sorry, my name is Twilight Sparkle" she said ." Twilight Sparkle? It's like I've heard that name before." He Said. " Uh, that's unlikely, anyway what's yours?" she said. "CloudRunner, nice to meet you." he said to Twilight. So they headed into Sweet Apple Acres. " AppleJack? Where are you?" Twilight Shouted. Then this small red haired philly walked up to Twilight. " Twilight? What're y'all doing here?" the philly said. " AppleBloom! Where's your sister?" Twilight said. "Oh, she went to see Rainbow Dash, why?" Applebloom said. " I'll explain later, Thanks!" Twilight said.

So they ran towards this place under a cloud, where they saw AppleJack and a cyan colored pony with rainbow colored hair. "Applejack!" Twilight shouted. Then Applejack noticed Twilight shouting, " Twilight What're you doin' here?" Who's yer friend?" AppleJack said. "You must be Applejack, I'm Cloud Runner, Twilight said that you might know someplace i could stay." Cloud Runner said. "Someplace you could stay? Why?"Applejack asked. Then Twilight stepped in to the conversation. " Cloud Runner is new to Ponyville, so maybe he could stay at your farm, and work off his rent?" Twilight suggested. "Um... Okay I guess it's alright." It took a few seconds for Cloud Runner to realize what Twilight just suggested." Wait, What!?"

Rainbow, Why don't you introduce yerself?" AppleJack said to the multi-colored pony. " My name is Rainbow Dash, Did you know when you look for the word awesome in the dictionary, you'll find a picture of me?" Rainbow Dash said. "Ha! I doubt that! It Should be a picture of me!" Cloud Runner said. "Oh yeah?" The argument started. "They've only just met and they're getting along so well." Twilight said. "Yeah..."

This shows that Cloud Runner can hide his sadness, he's still hurting, but he sees a happy life in Ponyville

Applejack led Cloud Runner a place which looks like a town hall. " Why are we here? Are we gonna meet the mayor?" Cloud Runner asked. "The May'r? This is my friend Rarity's place." Applejack said. "What?! This is a house!? It's so big!"
Cloud Runner shouted. " I know it's big, but it's just a house, c'mon let's go in" she said.

"Rarity? Ya in here?" Applejack called as she opened the door. Then suddenly a voice answered back, "Applejack?" Then a mare came in to the room," Applejack what are you doing here?" she asked. "I came to introduce this here fella to everypony."Applejack answered. " If I must." She said in a respectful tone." My name is Rarity, if you need anything feel free to come here anytime, I could even make you some clothes." She continued. " I'll think about that offer." Cloud Runner said." My name is Cloud Runner, a pleasure to meet you. I'll be staying in Applejack's farm if you ever need me" Cloud Runner said. " Alright, If you Excuse me, I need to get back to work." she said while walking back to her room.

"Well, that was.... fancy" Applejack said to Cloud Runner. " I'm just really kind to everypony" Cloud Runner said.
"Everypony 'xcept Rainbow Dash." she said as she chuckled. " Hey, It's getting late, let's meet my other friends in the mornin'." she said. "Alright." Cloud Runner said.

As they walked into the farm, Cloud Runner was wondering about his friends back at home. Have they noticed he is gone? Are they looking for him? These deep thought were interrupted by Applejack." We're here.", Applejack opened the door to a pitch black room. Then suddenly the lights opened, and ponies jumped from the couches and tables and shouted "SURPRISE!". " What!? What's happening!?" The Pink mare from earlier then jumped in front of him, "SURPRISE!! Are you excited!? Huh? huh? huh?" The Pink mare started bouncing around him. " Pinkiepie! Why'd you throw a surprise party and didn't tell me about it?" Applejack asked. " CAUSE YOU WERE WITH HIM THE WHOLE DAY! I couldn't just walk in front of you guys and tell you about a surprise party! I mean duh!" Pinkiepie said.

" Uh, Applejack who is this pony?" Cloud Runner asked. " I'm Pinkiepie and i'm gonna be your best friend forever! Just like I am now with Twilight, and Applejack, and Rainbow Dash, and Rarity, and Fluttershy!. Pinkie said. "Wait, who's Fluttershy?" Cloud Runner asked the mare bouncing around him. " You mean you didn't meet her!? Wait here!." then she ran off in a blink of an eye, then came back at the same speed, but with a Pegasus in her arms.

"Fluttershy, meet Cloud Runner! Cloud Runner meet Fluttershy!" Pinkie said." Uh Pinkie, how do you know my name?" Cloud Runner asked. " Well. Duh! Twilight told me!" Pinkie said." Oh..." Cloud Runner said. "Um... Excuse me can I leave now?" Fluttershy said. " Only If you do not be shy around Cloud Runner." Pinkie said. " Um but-"Fluttershy said. "Okay?!" Pinkie shouted. " ok.." Fluttershy said really softly.

The Party continued until everypony decided to leave. The Apple Family and Cloud Runner were exhausted. So the all went to they're rooms. Cloud Runner is going to sleep on the extra bed in Big Macintosh's room. As he got on the bed, He fell right asleep.

But Cloud Runner had a dream, A dream with somepony familiar...

Honeyvoice...

Hangin' out!

Chapter 2

Honey Voice,The mare that broke Cloud Runner's heart, stands in front of him in a dream." Honey Voice...What're you-?" Cloud Runner said with pain in his voice. " Cloud Runner..." The Mare said. " You... Please... Go Away" Cloud Runner said while holding back his tears. Then she saw Honey Voice hold some thing up... it was... a heart, Cloud Runner's heart. He watched as she ripped it in half, and stepped on it. He Felt a sharp pain in his chest, His Pain woke him up. Applejack was in front of him, looking at the tears running down his face.

" Bad dream?" she asked. "Yeah, I..." Cloud Runner went silent. " What was it about?" She asked. " I... I can't tell you that..." He said as tears rolled down his cheek. " Um... Forget I asked. Anyway, it's time for your first day of work." she said. So he took a bath and ate breakfast, then he went out into the field where he saw Applejack and Big Macintosh." Ah, there you are! It's Time for some Apple Buckin'! Applejack shouted. " Look how it's done, will ya?" she added. Then he watched as Applejack and Big Macintosh kicked trees with they're hind legs to make apples fall down. "Ya think you could handle that?" She said. " Heh, that almost sounds like a challenge... I'll see what I could do." He said confidently. He walked up to the tree and kicked as hard as he can and all the apples fell down.

" Wow, good fer' a first time." she said. " Thanks, but I bet that you could do better." Cloud runner said. " C'mon! Let's do some more!" she shouted. The Apple Bucking lasted until noon, by that time, everypony smelled like they haven't had a shower in days. "You were good for your first day." she said as she panted heavily. " Thanks... Hey, i'm really tired, can we get a drink?" Cloud Runner said.

Few Minutes after some drinks....

"Finally! I'm refreshed!" Cloud Runner said. " Say, Cloud Runner how come I've never seen you fly yet? You ARE a Pegasus, stretch yer' wings." Applejack said. " Um, okay if you say so." Cloud Runner said. He got into a ready stance, he spread his wings, an took off faster than he ever did before. Cloud Runner could see Applejack's and Big Macintosh's faces, their mouths half open and their eyes widened. He flew circles around the Barn and into the apple trees, he then flew up, turned around landed on the table and jokingly posed.

"Well I'll be... A Pegasus that can fly almost as fast as Rainbow Dash, Right BigMac?"Applejack said."Eeyup" Big Macintosh agreed. " But you didn't have to pose at the end." she said. " Yeah, I know, but I couldn't resist." Cloud Runner said. " So uh, Could you get off our table now please?" she asked. "Nah let me pose a few more times." Cloud Runner said." NO!",Applejack Shouted. " HA! Just Kiddin'!" Cloud Runner said. " Thank goodness, I thought we would have to suffer some more." Applejack said, purposely insulting Cloud Runner. " Heh, wait, Hey!

Applejack and Cloud Runner left the farm and headed for the tree house to hang out with Twilight. " Twilight? You here?" Cloud Runner called as he went in. Then they saw Fluttershy looking into the book case and muttering something about finding a book about how to deal with stubborn bunnies. " Fluttershy? What're you doin'?" Applejack asked. " Huh? Oh, Applejack and, um... Cloud Runner what are you doing here?", she said. " We'd ask you the same thing, Fluttershy." Cloud Runner said. " Um.. well... Twilight said that she had books about animals, so I asked her If I could look for one." Fluttershy said. " So um where IS Twilight?" Applejack said. "She's upstairs,talking to Spike.", Fluttershy said. "Okay, Thanks Fluttershy!" Cloud Runner said.

Then they Ran up the staircase. They found Twilight talking to Spike about how it's so important to not sleep too much." Twi? We Botherin' ya?" Applejack Asked. " Applejack! Cloud Runner! No not at all! I'm just talking to Spike about something." Applejack said. " Hm? Who's Spike? Is it that baby dragon over there?" Cloud Runner asked. " Oh Yeah! I just realized that you haven't met Spike yet. Spike introduce yourself." Twilight said. " Um I don't think baby dragons can ta-"Cloud Runner said. " My name is Spike, so your the one that Twilight told me about." Spike said. " Wha- WOAH! A baby dragon that can talk! now that's awesome!"Cloud Runner said."Hey! Don't treat me like a baby!" Spike Shouted. "Oh, sorry, it's just that, I never seen a talking baby dragon before." Cloud Runner said. " That's almost the same thing Fluttershy told me the first time we met." Spike said.

"So Twi, You wanna hang out?" Applejack asked. " Sorry, I thought this was only going to be a short visit." Twilight said. " Oh... Okay then, Hey Cloud Runner wanna race back home? The Rule is no wings!"Applejack said. "Alright, let's do it! See ya Twilight!" Cloud Runner shouted. So Applejack raced down the staircase, but Cloud Runner jumped down from the top of the staircase, giving him the advantage. Then they bolted through the door, running as fast as they could.But there was one problem. Cloud Runner felt a sharp pain in his chest, more painful than the one in the dream.He stopped, and fell on the ground while Applejack ran past him, unaware of what just happened.

He couldn't take it much longer...he lied there, passed out. He had the same dream again, only it was more painful,like before, the pain woke him up. He awoke to a yellow and pink mare standing in front of him." Huh? Who? Fluttershy?" he said while trying to regain his eyesight. "Cloud Runner... What are you doing on the floor?", Fluttershy asked. " *cough* I don't think I should tell you that, Fluttershy.*cough* ",Cloud Runner said. " Hm... You need to rest... Let's go to my cottage." Fluttershy said.

He didn't resist, because he knew Fluttershy was right, he needed to rest. So Fluttershy brought him to her cottage. He rested, and left. But at Fluttershy's doorstep, stands a familiar stallion, A stallion who's one of Cloud Runner's closest friends. " Cloud Runner, I've found you...at last" the stallion said.

"Strong Boulder?"

Strong Boulder!?

Chapter 3

"Cloud Runner... I've found you.", The Stallion said. " Strong Boulder? Wha... What are you... Doing here?" Cloud Runner said. "Looking for my missing friend... How about you?", Strong Boulder said. " I'm... Afraid I can't tell you..." Cloud Runner said. " Hmm... It's about, HER, isn't it?" Strong boulder said.. Cloud Runner nodded in response."Oh... I see." He said. " How... How did you find me?" Cloud Runner asked. "Well, I went to visit the friend who did not come to Music class. Then When I got to your house, It was empty. None of your stuff was there, all I found were some pictures of your friends. So I went to look for you. Then my search led me here." He explained. " Did anyone come with you?"Cloud Runner said. Strong Boulder shook his head. "Oh... Nopony noticed I am gone" He said.

"Come on... Let's go home" Strong Boulder said. Then he walked out of the yard and noticed Cloud Runner wasn't following him. " Come on, Cloud Runner let's go!" He shouted. Then he heard Cloud Runner murmur something. " What was that?", He asked. Then Cloud Runner said it louder, " No, I'm not going." he said. " What, why?" Strong Boulder said. "Why should I come back when none of my other friends even noticed I'm gone!? Why should I come back when Honey Voice Hates me!? Why Huh!? Why?!" He Shouted. Silence Filled the air... "Cloud Runner... Must kill... If Refuses...to leave!" Strong Boulder said.

Shocked by what Strong Boulder said, He looked up to see Strong Boulder bolting at him with lighting speed. Cloud Runner Spread his wings an took off just before Strong could ram him. Then Storm clouds rolled in and started raining heavily. " A fitting setting for a fight, isn't it?!" Strong Boulder said as he threw a sharp piece of glass at Cloud Runner. Cloud Runner fell to the ground with a shard of glass in his right wing. " Why? Why Are you doing this?" He said with pain in his voice." I'm sorry, I need you home." Strong said. "Why!?" Cloud Runner shouted." I wonder what should be broken first, Your Spirit, Or your body!" Strong Boulder said, but just before Strong could stomp on his other wing, he shook his head rapidly, as if he was dizzy. "Wha- What happened? Cloud Runner... Help me I've been-" He said. Then he shook his head again."Enough! This Ends now!" He shouted. He kicked Cloud Runner and he got tossed right into Fluttershy's cottage wall.

Meanwhile, with Twilight, AJ, Rarity, Pinkie, and Rainbow Dash...

"What's with the storm,Rainbow Dash?" Twilight said. " It's because the pegasi need to drive out all the excess water from Clouds Dale.", Rainbow Dash said. "Wait a second here... Isn't that Cloud Runner in the sky? He looks panicked." Applejack said."What's he doing outside in this weather? Shouldn't he be in-"They then watched him get stabbed in the wing with a glass shard. "Cloud Runner!" They all shouted." He's in trouble guys! We need to help him! It looks like he's near Fluttershy's house! Come on everypony!" Pinkie shouted. Every pony ran (Except Pinkie... she trotted) to Fluttershy's Cottage.

"Cloud Runner What's happening?! Who is this Pony?!" Rarity said."Wait! Don't hurt him!" Cloud Runner shouted. " And why in the heck shouldn't we?!" Applejack shouted. " He's Hypnotized ! He Doesn't know what he's doing!" Cloud Runner said." Enough! You shall not interfere!" I'll just hit him with a pass out spell!" Twilight said."Oh, No you don't!" Strong said as he bolted towards Twilight. Twilight's horn started glowing to use the spell, but it took to long... Strong hit her, hard. "Twilight!" Every pony except Cloud Runner,for he was injured, said as they ran towards Twilight.

"What's going on?!" a yellow and pink mare shouted as she came out the door, then she saw what happened. She looked at Strong Boulder. " You did this!? Let me make one thing clear buster! You Do Not! Hurt! My! Friends!" Fluttershy said. "Oh yeah?! What are you going to do about it!?" he said. But all Fluttershy did was open her eyes really widely and stared at him. " Uh... Twilight? What's she doing?" Cloud Runner said. " 'The Death Stare'..." Twilight answered. " What?" Cloud Runner said as he watched Strong Boulder fall to The Death Stare... " Well um... This is interesting..." Cloud Runner said. " Fluttershy! Keep staring at him! I'm going to use the spell!" Twilight shouted. Twilight's horn started glowing then she walked towards Strong Boulder, and cast the pass out spell.

"He's needs to rest... when he wakes up, he won't be hypnotized anymore." Twilight said . "How did he get hypnotized, Twilight?" Cloud Runner asked. " I only know one spell that does this... And it's not like my Want it Need it spell.This spell is dark magic, making the pony being hypnotized kill the assigned target. It's called 'Hypnotism of death', And Only one pony was ever able to do it...but nopony ever learned the name of that pony... That spell was lost 50 years ago... but it was said that the unicorn who used it, taught it to his grandson..." Twilight said. "Heh... How do you know that?"Cloud Runner said. "I live in a LIBRARY!" Twilight said. "Oh.. Oh yeah..."Cloud Runner said.

" Hey Fluttershy! Whaddya think of that Strong Boulder guy?The nerve right?"Rainbow Dash said to Fluttershy. "Um... Actually... He WAS hypnotized... And he is kinda attractive..." Fluttershy answered. "What!? Are you saying you ENJOYED staring at him!?" Rainbow said. " Well... yeah... maybe just a little..."Fluttershy said.

" 'Hypnotism of death'?... Where have I heard of that before?"he thought.. then a memory flashed in his head, the day when he was still a little colt... " Hey Cloud Runner! My grandfather taught me a spell!" A little colt near Cloud Runner said. "Really?" colt Cloud Runner asked. " Yeah here I'll show you! I'll use it on that duck!" he said. Then he pointed his horn at the duck and they watched as the duck murdered it's mate."Wow! What's it called?" Cloud Runner asked. " My Grand father called it 'Hypnotism of Death'!" " Wow! that's so cool!"

Cloud Runner came back to his senses... "Who was that pony? Dammit I forgot!" He thought really hard... Then he got It.

"Charming Masquerade!"

Charming Masquerade and other stuff!

Chapter 4

" I got it! Twilight! I know who hypnotized Strong Boulder!" Cloud Runner shouted. " Really? Who?" Twilight asked. " It's my old friend! Charming Masquerade!" He answered. " Charming Masquerade? Hmm... I've think i've heard of him" Twilight said. "Really? ...Anyway, why would he even make Strong Boulder kill me?" Cloud Runner said. "You didn't know?" A voice said. " I'm sorry... I should've told you" the voice added. Then Strong Boulder entered the room. " Hey!You should be in bed!" Twilight said. "No... It's alright, i didn't really take any REAL damage during the fight." Strong Boulder said. "Anyway, Cloud Runner. I think he may have hypnotized me cause of one reason." He continued. " Because... He loves Honey Voice as well."

" What?! He- He loves her?! " Cloud Runner said. " But why would do so much as to kill me!?" Cloud Runner said. " I don't know... Sorry." Strong answered. "I- I need to be think" Cloud Runner said. "Ok We'll leave you alone" Twilight said. " Wait, we will?" Strong Boulder said as Twilight dragged him out."Woah... I... never knew..." he thought. "But... just because he loves her? That doesn't make any sense! a confused cloud runner thought. Then Cloud Runner heard somepony enter the room. "I said I need to be Alone!" Cloud Runner shouted. "Well that's a wish... You won't get." " Wait... That Voice!"He thought.

"Hello... Old friend..." the dark figure said as he walked closer. " Charming..." "It looks Strong Boulder failed to kill you..." Charming said. "Why would you have him kill me? It doesn't make sense! It can't be jealousy because Honey Voice is dusgusted by me!" he questioned the white unicorn in front of him. " She doesn't hate you..." " What?" Cloud Runner asked in confusion of what Charming just said. "Who told you she does?" Charming asked. " Her best friend... why?" " She lied to you... Honey Voice told me herself..." He said with pain in his voice. " Why would she lie to me?" he asked. "Because she supports ME!" He shouted.

" Any more questions before I try to kill you?" Charming Asked. " Two." Cloud Runner replied. "And what are they?" Charming asked. " Why did you hypnotize Strong to kill me WHEN I refused?" he asked. "Because I knew You would refuse. And the Other question?" he asked with a grin on his face." " Did you really think I would let you kill me!?" He said as he bolted at Charming.

Cloud Runner broke into a gallop. His body was still in pain since his fight with Strong Boulder. " Brave, but Foolish." Charming Masquerade said." DIE!!!" Cloud yelled at the top of his lungs. When he was just a few meters away from his new found rival, he was knocked back by a dark blue beam of energy.

"No, YOU die."

Charming Masquerade loomed over the broken pegasus. " Did you think that honey voice would be yours?!" he hissed."You won't have that chance when I'm finished with you!" the unicorn blasted a mirror and levitated a shard of glass. It's Tip was at Cloud Runner's throat. " Let's do this slowly. Painfully." suddenly he was thrown away.

" Come back with help next time." a voice growled. Strong Boulder stood over the Charming Masquerade, holding the same shard of glass. The earth pony had underestimated his opponent. As quick as lightning, Charming Masquerade leaped up and kicked his opponent.

"I will deal with both of you next time."

With the unicorn out of the way, Strong Boulder approached his Friend. Something was wrong.The Pegasus wasn't moving.The earth pony looked for a pulse. Then Jumped back, on Cloud Runner's chest, was a glowing symbol of sorts. Yet the symbol held a power It had stopped Cloud Runner's heart.

" Cloud Runner..." Strong Boulder said to himself. Then heard ponies rush into the room. " Cloud Runner! Strong Boulder! Are y'all okay!?" Applejack shouted. " Wha- What happened?!" Twilight shouted. "What did you do?!" Rainbow Dash said. "It Wasn't me!" Strong shouted. " Then who!?" Rainbow hissed. " Charming..." Strong said. " He- He's here?" Twilight said in disbelief.

They were interrupted by a blinding light, coming from Cloud Runner's chest. " Oh my, what's going on?" Fluttershy asked. "This power... it's pure love." Twilight said, stunned by what lies in front of them. " What?" Pinkie asked. " Legends say that there were seven elements of harmony... But only six were enough... And the 7th element was lost a thousand years ago... And It was called, The Element of Love." Twilight explained as she widened her eyes in awe.

The room filled up with silence, the idea of a 7th element of harmony had stunned them. " I- I need to write to Princess Celestia about this!" Twilight said as she ran out the door, only to find Princess Celestia standing outside. "Princess! I- I was just about to write a letter to you!" Twilight said. "Oh? And What about?" She asked. " We have found the 7th element of harmony!" Twilight answered. Celestia stood there ,stunned.

"The- The 7th element?!" Celestia screamed as she ran into the cottage. She approached the dark blue pegasus that was lying motionless on the floor. " How?! That element was lost!" Celestia asked. " Princess... We don't know...his chest started glowing." Strong Boulder said. " Hmm... And who might you be?" Celestia asked. " My name is Strong Boulder, Princess." He Replied.

" What do you know about this pony?" the Princess said. " He is my close friend, and I only found out he is the element of love just now." Strong Answered. " Twilight, Even though I am surprised and interested, I need to leave." Celestia said. " Okay I'll take care of everything." Twilight said as Princess Celestia left the cottage.

When The Princess left, everypony fell silent, then they heard a somepony say something, but it was too soft to hear. They looked at Cloud Runner. They moved closer to listen. He said:

"She's Here"

Author's note: A big Shout out to ArkosTheGuardian, He helped me with the fight scene ( Well, he wrote it) So please see his stories!

She's Here!

Chapter 5

"She's Here"

Cloud Runner said as he woke up from his slumber, "Cloud Runner? Who? Who's Here? I love Mysteries!" Pinkie asked as she bounced around happily." H- Honey Voice, she's here." Cloud Answered. " Oh Crap." Strong said." Who?"Twilight asked as Cloud Runner stood up. "Honey Voice, the one that Cloud Runner loves." Strong replied. " How come everypony you say sound familiar? Honey Voice, and Charming Masquerade." Twilight said "We don't have time for that! Anyway, where is she?" Strong asked.

"In- In the... Library." Cloud Runner struggled to say. "Wait How do you know that, stalker?" Rainbow Dash said. " Rainbow, seriously." Twilight said. "We need to go..." Cloud Runner said as he struggled to walk.

They walked to Twilight's house, Cloud Runner fell many times while Strong Boulder helped him up. "Come on, don't try so hard, you need to relax." Fluttershy said. "I never really got your name, miss?" Strong asked. " F- Fluttershy."She said in a moderately soft tone. "I'm sorry, what?" Strong Boulder said putting his hoof behind his ear. " Fluttershy" She said louder. " A beautiful name, perfect for somepony like you." Strong said. Flutter shy looked away, trying to hide her blush. " You were always the charmer in our class, weren't you?" Cloud said. "What? She Really is attractive you know." Strong Boulder whispered.

"Wow, really? I didn't know shy ponies were your thing!" Cloud Runner replied. " Shut up! Anyway were here." He said. They went in and looked around, nopony seemed to be there. "Nopony is home, I guess she left. Anyway what would she be doing in my -?" Twilight said, only to be interrupted by Spike. "Twilight? You here? You have a visitor!" Spike said. Then Spike walked down the stairs, followed by familiar light green unicorn.

"Honey Voice?"

Cloud thought.

"Twilight! Long time no-" She cut herself off when she looked at the pegasus beside Twilight. " C-Cloud Runner!? Wha- What are you doing here!?" She asked with her face turning bright red. " Uh... D-Do you mind if I don't tell you? It's Really Embarrassing....and kinda over reacting." He Replied, completely oblivious to the color change." Kinda!?" Strong Boulder said aloud."Umm... Okay then. Twilight! How long's it been? 7 years?" She said to the confused unicorn. "Wha- Who are you?" She Replied. " You Don't Recognize me?" she said. " Aww What a shame, Let me jog your memory. Magic kindergarten Remember?" She Explained. " Hmm... The only pony I had as a friend was my brother and.... Oh my God..."

"It's- It's you..." Twilight said as memories of her and Honey Voice flooded her mind.

"Now you remember?"

"H-Honey Voice..."

"What? What's Happening? I Love Guessing games!" Pinkie happily asked. "Sugar cube, This is not the time" Applejack said. " Awww." Pinkie said lowering her head.

"Wait... Now I know why Cloud Runner and his friends seem familiar to me! You had a crush on Clou-" Honey Voice covered Twilight's mouth with her hoof. "Ahaha, shut up Twilight." She said, trying to fake a smile as much as possible.

" Umm Honey Voice? What was she about to say?" Cloud Runner said

" NOTHING! RIGHT, TWILIGHT?" She said as she glared at Twilight. Twilight just frantically nodded.

"Oh... Okay."

" Damn it, Cloud Runner you are an IDIOT!"Strong Boulder thought.

"Honey Voice, lemme tell you what happened BEFORE Cloud came here" Strong said "HEY! STRONG BOULDER!" Cloud Said. " Shut up Cloud, I'm telling a story here." Strong said as Cloud Runner rapidly punched Strong Boulder. Strong Boulder of course, didn't feel a thing.

" Your best friend told Cloud Runner that you are disgusted by him, making him leave Manehattan." Strong Boulder said.

" But, Why would she say that?" Honey Voice interrupted.

" Let me finish. He left, so I went looking for him, on the way I found Charming Masquerade. He hypnotized me to kill Cloud Runner apparently."

Honey Voice had a strong urge to ask questions. But seeing as how buff Strong Boulder was, she thought it was best to not make him mad...

"I injured his wing with a shard of glass, and I was about to kill him when these guys showed up, they told me Twilight knocked me unconscious with a spell.After I woke up I told Cloud Runner why he hypnotized me. It Was Because he loves you."

Honey Voice had her eyes widened and her mouth agape after hearing that.

" After I said that, he said he wanted to be alone to think, so we left, After a few minutes I Overheard fighting so I rushed in. Basically Charming was there, he was fighting Cloud Runner, Cloud Runner was losing, Blah, Blah, Blah, I fought him, Yadda yadda, That kind of thing. I saw That Cloud Runner's Chest was glowing. After a while, Twilight explained that the glowing meant there was another element of harmony, called love. And he was that element, then he sensed you were here and we went here to find you, Long Story short, Cloud Loves you too" Strong said as Cloud Runner was still Punching him.

"Can you stop poking me now?"

"P-POKING?!"

"Dude, just look at Honey Voice for a second?" He said with bit of anger.

He turned his head to see Honey voice's face practically in his face, her face was crimson red, her eyes filled with deep longing.

" Umm... Honey Voice?"

" D-Do You Really? L-Love me?" she said

"Uh... Y- Yeah I gues-" He was cut off by Honey Voice's lips meeting his own, with own his face turning red,and his eyes widening. Then his eyes closed slowly.

Strong Boulder felt something weird, like somepony was watching him, he turned his head to see Fluttershy staring at him.

"Like what you see Fluttershy?" He jokingly said, Fluttershy immediately looked away with her face turning red.

The kiss lasted about 5 minutes...

" Umm... Ya'll done now?" Applejack said.

They noticed how long the kiss took and they quickly pulled away.

"Awww! I liked Watching them kiss! It was cute!" Pinkie said.

Everypony chuckled at what pinkie said.

" I know what else is cute." Strong said, looking at Fluttershy,he said it loud enough for her to hear. Fluttershy noticed what he had just said, and her face turned even more red.

" Cloud Runner, you have to learn how to fight... You heard what Charming said. He'll be back."

"Who do you think should train me?"

" I know exactly the stallion..."

Enter! Moon Caster!

Chapter 6

"Really? Who?" Cloud Runner said

"My old friend, he lives here in ponyville, But I don't know where he lives, He's a unicorn named is Moon Caster. ."Strong Boulder replied.

"M-Moon Caster?!" Applejack said, with her cheeks turning bright red.

"Yeah, why?"Strong said.

"H- He's-" Applejack said before falling onto the ground unconscious.

"Wow...That's the first I ever seen Applejack faint...and we've been friends for a LONG time." Pinkie Said

"HA! She's almost as over reacting as Rarity." Rainbow Dash scoffed

"Yeah... Wait Hey!" Rarity screamed in anger.

Strong Boulder let out a big sigh, " Let's go... And bring Applejack."

They left the library to look for Moon Caster, they searched for hours and asked countless ponies if they have seen him, but nopony seemed to know where he lived, so they decided to just wait for Applejack to wake up.

" HEY! I know what we can do while waiting for Applejack to wake up!" Pinkie shouted

"What do you have in mind, Pinkie?" Rainbow Dash asked

"Let's go to Sugar Cube Corner!"

Nopony seemed to object, after all that's happened, they deserved some sweets

So they Trotted off to Sugar Cube Corner, with Strong Boulder dragging Applejack across the ground. They entered the store and sat down, ordered cupcakes and waited.

Applejack woke up to find herself sitting down with a cupcake in front of her.

" What in tarnation?"Applejack asked

"Hey Applejack's awake!" Pinkie said as she pulled Applejack into a hug.

"Wha- What happened?"

" We were looking for Moon Caster so we-"

"Moon Caster?!" Applejack said as she stood up and pushed Pinkie away from the hug.

"Wh- Where?!"

"Calm down Applejack! We just wanted to know Where Moon Caster lives! We've been looking for hours!" Honey voice said as she pulled Applejack back into her seat.

"Oh... Well uh, his house is just raht beside the library." Applejack said.

" Oh... Well okay..." Strong Said

Silence filled the room for a few seconds. Then they realized something.

"Wait WHAT?!" Everypony said as they crowded Applejack

"Are you telling us that we've been looking everywhere, FOR NOTHING?!"

"Well, uh yeah.... I guess"

Everypony ( especially Rarity) let out a groan of frustration.

"Ugh, Let's go... Again" Strong said.

They left Sugar Cube Corner and walked towards the Library. Right Beside the library, stood a simple house, It looked like any other house in Ponyville actually.

They Spotted somepony leaving the house. A unicorn with blue fur, his mane and tail were of a darker shade of blue, his eyes were deep black, and his cutie mark was that of an exploding star.

Suddenly Applejack's face went red. Cloud Runner, Honey Voice and Strong Boulder noticed her sudden color change.

"Hey Applejack, You alright?" Cloud Runner asked, putting a hoof on her shoulder.

"Yeah Applejack, What's going on?" Honey Voice said.

"Either I'm Smarter than them, or they're just idiots. Heh, the perfect couple." Strong Boulder thought

"...Huh? Oh.. yeah... I'm fine... I'm as fine as a barbecue in a fancy grill."

"Oooookay...." Cloud said.

They Approached the blue unicorn who seemed to be carrying some supplies.

" H-Hey there M-Moon Caster!" Applejack said with a hint of nervousness in her voice.

"Oh, Hey there, Applejack! Who's your friends?" Moon Caster returned the greeting.

"Huh? Oh yeah them.."

"Hey! Applejack did you forget about us?" Cloud Runner said.

"Anyway, this here is Cloud Runner, Honey Voice, and Strong Boulder." Applejack said as she pointed at each of them.

"Hey! Strong Boulder! How Long's it been?"

" 3 years, I guess."

"Yeah! Remember that time when you wrote on that one guy's face in college?"

"Wait... THAT WAS YOU?!" Cloud Runner shouted

"Dude, that was 3 years ago. Let it go." Strong replied

"Anyway, I'm Moon Caster, any friend of Applejack is a Friend of mine."

"So What're y'all doin' with those supplies?" Applejack.

" Huh? Oh I was going to Sweet Apple Acres to give these to Thunder Blaze."

"Thunder Blaze?" Cloud Runner cut in.

"Oh yeah! I didn't tell y'all about that. Thunder Blaze is a Pegasus who move in a few days before y'all came here." Applejack said.

"What? Then how come I haven't seen him on the field? Or in the house?"

"Because he's been hangin' out with his marefriend, Twilight." She replied as she looked at Twilight

Rarity then nudged Twilight's shoulder and teased her.

"H-hey... stop it." Twilight said with her face turning to a dark shade of red.

"Well then let's go, we wouldn't wanna keep him waiting. We'll explain everything on the way." Strong said.

Moon Caster nodded. While walking Strong Boulder explained everything, from the heart break to the suggestion to get Moon Caster, hearing the kissing part of the story again made them blush with a dark shade of red.

"You...Wanna try it again?" Honey Voice said.

"Um... O-Oka-" Cloud Runner said as Honey Voice pulled him into a kiss.

"Ughh...Not again." Strong Boulder said as he pulled them away from each other.

"Save yer love fest for later." Applejack said.

"Anyway... I guess I can be your trainer. I just need to get some stuff give these"

"Yes! Now can kick some MORE pony flank!"

"Yeah, like you kicked Charming Masquerade's flank."

"Yeah!... Wait hey!"

Then Cloud Runner realized that fighting Strong Boulder would be useless, considering the fact that Strong Boulder is really buff, so he just continued walking...

"Hey." Strong Boulder whispered to Cloud Runner.

"What?"

"Heh... Was there tongue?"

"W-What?!"

"Just kidding..."

"We're here." Applejack said.

They haven't even noticed that they entered Sweet Apple Acres until they reached the house.

"Hey Applejack. Where does Thunder Blaze even stay?" Moon Caster asked

"Oh. He lives in the guest room." Applejack replied

"Okay." He said as they went up the stairs.

They walked until the reached they reached the guest room door.

"Hey Blaze, I got the supplies you wanted." Moon Caster said

"Thanks." A voice said as a hoof stretched out the door to take the supplies.

"...Can you come out?" Moon Caster asked.

"No"

"Why not?"

"I'm sleeping."

"Ugh... There's only one way to get him out...Twilight, Could you get him out?"

"Fine." Twilight said.

"Blaze? It's me Twilight." Twilight said.

"I'm awake!" Thunder Blaze said as he bolted out of his room.

"Well that was easy." Twilight said.

Training!

Chapter 7

Everpony sat down in the living room as Strong Boulder told their story...

Strong Boulder had just finished talking when Cloud Runner broke the silence.

"You were always good at stories Strong." he said.

"Yeah I know...Anyway, that's why we asked Moon Caster for help."

"Yeah, so i'm going to train him for a while."

"So why am I here?" Thunder Blaze cut in.

"Actually, we just went here because Moon Caster needed to give you supplies." Cloud Runner said.

"So can I go back to sleep now?" Thunder Blaze stood up before Twilight pulled him back to his chair.

"Ow... Okay fine I'll stay."

"Cloud Runner do you have any special talents?" Moon Caster said.

"Other than my element of harmony, no...why?"

"No, we can't use your element." Twilight said.

"Why not?" Cloud Runner said

"it's too unstable, It could destroy all of Ponyville, not to mention the innocent lives that would be taken!"

"Geez, is it really that powerful?"

"Yes, so please don't use it unless it is absolutely important, okay?"

"Um okay."

" Promise us." Pinkie said

"Yeah okay Okay! I promise!"

"Pinkie promise!"

"Uh.. What's a pinkie promise?"

Cloud and the others watched as Pinkie pie demostrated the pinkie promise. She drew a cross over her heart with her hoof, mimicked flying with her hooves, and put her hoof over her eye.

"Um... okay." he said as he did a pinkie promise the way Pinkie demonstrated.

"Okie dokie lokie!"

"Pinkie..." Applejack said

"Hey, it's getting dark,we should go, let's go guys." Strong said.

" Yeah... B-Bye Cloud Runner."

They all left, except Applejack, Cloud Runner and Thunder Blaze. They lived there after all.

" So, we didn't get to formally meet, Blaze. I'm Cloud Runner" He said.

"Thunder Blaze, nice to meet you."

"Likewise."

"Would y'all stop talking fancy?!" Applejack cut in.

They laughed until Cloud Runner yawned.

"This was some day... Anyway, let's get to bed."

They nodded. They all walked up the stairs and went to each of their rooms. Cloud Runner is in for one hell of ride.

5 days later...

Cloud Runner's training starts today. But he still had to do his chores before he can leave. He took washed the dishes, he bucked trees, he planted more trees, but nothing can keep his mind off of his training today. Questions swarmed his mind. How is he gonna train me? What is kind of things is he going to make me do? he thought to himself.

He finished his chores and walked out of Sweet Apple Acres, but to his surprise, Honey Voice was waiting for him.

"Hi, Cloud Runner!" she said, waving her hoof.

"Honey Voice, What are you doing here?"

"What? I just came to see my coltfriend train."

"Why? I'm just gonna be beaten up by the end of the day."

"What happened to 'I'm gonna kick some more pony flank.'?"

"Well, that confidence is gone."

"Hey, why are you so mean today?

"I'm sorry... It's just, I'm just so stressed right now, having to train to kill my old and all." he said as he lowered his head.

"Look, all i'm asking is, be careful." she said as she pulled him into a hug.

"Well, Lookie here." A voice cut in.

Cloud Runner and Honey Voice pulled away and looked to the source of the voice.

"Look who's already been actin' like a married couple." Applejack said, standing on a hill.

Cloud Runner and Honey Voice's faces turned red.

"Yeah, Nice one Cloud." Thunder Blaze stood beside Applejack

"Ahahahahahahaha, shut up." Cloud Runner said.

"Anyway... You need to go now Cloud."

"Yeah, Okay..." he said as he left.

At the moment Cloud Runner was out of sight, Honey Voice glared at the two ponies that teased them.

"What?"

He walked towards the small house near the library and knocked. Then Moon Caster answered the door.

"Oh, There you are."

"Yeah, Why wouldn't I be?"

"Anyway, we need to start the training, Come in."

Moon Caster lead him through his house and into his backyard.

"Okay Cloud Runner, let's start by seeing how good you are."

"So how are we supposed to do tha-" Cloud Runner said before a hoof connected to his face. The punch had him stumbling
backwards.

"H-Hey What the hell was that for?!"

He opened his eyes to see Moon Caster running towards him.

"Hey wait a minut-" he said before getting punched again.

"Oh! You wanna play it that way huh? Then bring i-" he said before getting punched again.

He realized talking won't be of any use right now. He waited for Moon Caster's next move. They circled around each other for a bit. And at last Moon Caster lunged.

Cloud Runner strafed to his left as Moon Caster tried to punch him, and he landed a punch to Moon Caster's body.

Moon Caster was ran towards him again and punched. Cloud Runner tried to dodge again but Moon Caster is not gonna fall for that again. He punched Cloud Runner on the right eye.

Moon Caster was getting ready to charge when Cloud Runner tackled him. Cloud Runner pinned him to the ground.

"He punched and punched while Moon Caster struggled.

Cloud Runner was about to punch again when Moon Caster pushed him off.

Cloud Runner noticed there was blood running down Moon Caster's lip, then he noticed his lip was bleeding too. He was to occupied with the blood that he didn't even notice Moon Caster charging towards him.

Cloud Runner felt Moon Caster's hoof connect to his face. Moon Caster levitated a garden shovel near him and whacked Cloud Runner with it.

Moon Caster noticed his pain and stopped whacking him.

Cloud Runner noticed this and looked up to see Moon Caster in front of him.Cloud Runner tried to punch Moon Caster in the face but was stopped by his hoof. Moon Caster pushed his hoof away and waked into his house. Cloud Runner ran after him and asked him.

"H-Hey, What's wrong? Why'd we stop?"

"Class dismissed."

Rewrite, anyone?

Allo, everyone! As you may not know, this is actually my first story! And it's the most disgusting piece of crap i've ever written! And I will actually rewrite this in a better way, if you want, or I will continue it anyway. Please tell me!