Loyalty in Brass: Captain's Ashes

by Mr BHunt
William has been found, but will the Captain return willingly with his sanity intact? But one thing is clear, the Fog will not let go.

A year has passed, the Captain was found by Luna in his foggy dreams. He resides in the ruins of Griffinstone, which from reports is surrounded in a cloud of madness. Somehow he's alive, but still in a beastly state, now the mission for the Mane 6 is clear: bring back the Captain.

But once they enter the fog, they see things. Griffins, old soldiers of the Brass Inquisitiors and the Captain, all watching them as they move. But will they ever leave? Will the Captain return with his sanity? Will the Fog Fumigators, a splinter cell of the old Legate's legion, leave them unscathed? You won't know until you read what is within, so what are you waiting for? The Fog needs more prey...

I do not own MLP
Teen tag is also for swearing
Dark tag is for later, for within the fog images of hell reside.

Teen
Incomplete
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Human
 
MPOOR

14238 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

10 Chapters:

  1. The Captain: William Doesn't fear the Dark... 2017-06-17 03:57:53 UTC
    1203
  2. The Captain: He fears the Past 2017-06-17 03:58:02 UTC
    1153
  3. Chapter One: Three Musketeers 2017-06-20 08:57:37 UTC
    1264
  4. Chapter Two: The Mane Gang! 2017-07-03 09:51:23 UTC
    1600
  5. Chapter Three: The Flying Dutchman 2017-07-15 22:37:29 UTC
    2495
  6. Chapter Four: Return to Griffinstone 2017-07-17 07:41:34 UTC
    1361
  7. Chapter Five: The Madness 2017-08-07 09:24:35 UTC
    1544
  8. The Captain: Small Freedom 2017-08-17 20:52:44 UTC
    1211
  9. The Captain: A Murder of Crows 2017-09-13 07:57:57 UTC
    1204
  10. Chapter Six: Losing Focus 2017-09-20 09:22:23 UTC
    1203