Submissive

by Tomcat

Rating: mature
Tags: Spike, Rainbow Dash, Comedy, Romance, Thriller, Fluttershy, Sex, Alternate Universe, Human, Twilight Sparkle, Anthro, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 4018

Adorable Fluttershy is never one to disappoint her guests.

Spike's journey to write a letter back to Celestia continues, but not before an unexpected run-in with a familiar friend.

Published 2017-06-16 21:10:07 UTC
Last updated 2017-08-15 15:30:24 UTC

Fluttershy's Cottage

{This is chapter 1 of Submissive. Make sure you have read Obedient, Obedience, Compliant and Compliance first.}

Serenity....pure and beautiful serenity...nothing but the tops of trees framing the dark blue star sprinkled sky over the forest. All was well in the world of Equestria. Spike dangled on the edge of sleep as he lied in the grassy clearing somewhere in the middle of the Everfree Forest. Rainbow Dash lied quietly around his arm, as did Twilight around his other. Both were sound asleep. Spike collected enough energy to untangle himself from the girls and go for a walk in the woods. He loved the ladies company, but the forest looked so nice.

Spike made his way out of the clearing, carefully trying not to disturb the two sleeping girls as he did. They may be under a spell, but they still disserved their sleep. He tiptoed through the grass as he quietly approached the treeline. The woods were abundant with crickets and softly lit by the early evening’s glow. He could faintly make out the lights from Ponyville making their way through the branches. He was a probably a good 300 yards within the forest. Just close enough to the edge that there was no danger from timber wolves or other cryptids that lurked deep in the forest.

“Wow what a day”.

Spike quietly murmured to himself as he unzipped his fly and found a tree to water. Having an unrelenting mating season with Rainbow last night really worked up a piss. Spike finished spraying the roots of the tree, as he went to zip up the fly on his pants a not so distant rustle broke the silence of the woods.

“SNAP”

“What the fuck was that?”

The words seemed to leave his mouth on their own as a shock of alertness brought Spike back to reality. That sounded pretty big, and it sounded like it came from the direction of Ponyville. Was he followed? Was somebody looking for them? What if it was Celestia? Spike would rather see a pack of ravenous wolves than Princess Celestia, anything but Princess Celestia. Damn it’s a good thing he already took a piss.

The rustling noise got closer to Spike as he desperately shot his eyes though the darkness trying to make anything out. It was impossible to see anything. The leaves from the branches sheltered any moonlight from getting in. He only heard noises as he stood in motionless terror. The noises were suddenly mere feet away before they suddenly came rocketing towards him.

“JESUS CHR!-. POMF”

Spike lied tensley shaking on the ground as the tight embrace of a dark blur wrapped itself around him. He was speechless, and motionless. He didn’t know what was going on or who the hell decided to pounce on him in the darkness of the forest. His terror mildly subsided as the stranger started to cry gently into his chest.

Spike soon realized that this was not an attack, it was out of fear. This person was clinging to him for safety and wellbeing. Spike sat up as he tried to identify this shadowy figure. Seeing nothing but a black silhouette, he attempted to feel for some identification. He reached out his hand and felt a soft fleece hoodie...long strands of hair...a giant boob...two giant boobs…

“Fluttershy?”

“Sniff...hi Spike...I’m sorry for jumping on you..I was so scared sniff...I didn’t like being in the forest all alone and especially at night but I had to make sure you were okay.”

“You followed me here?”

“Oh yes, I saw you running through town and I thought something was wrong, so I finished buying my groceries and went home to feed Angel. Then I came back to the market where everyone said you went to the Everfree Forest. So I followed you here even though I really really REALLY REally really didn’t want to but I did anyway and I’m so glad I did.

“Uh huh…”

“So um...why did you run in here?”

“I uh...I was chasing after Rainbow Dash”.

“Rainbow Dash?...why were you chasing after her”?

Spike’s familiar nervousness returned to him as he tried to think up an answer to her question that made sense. Fluttershy was usually pretty easy to fool, but not when her friends were at risk.

“I uh…”

Spike was interrupted when Rainbow and Twilight had made their way out of the clearing and up to where Spike and Fluttershy were sitting. The earlier frackus caused by Fluttershy must have shook them.

“Oh there you are Rainbow and...is that Twilight?”

Fluttershy could only make out silhouettes in the midst of the forest. It was lucky for Spike. She might have suspected something had she seen them in full daylight.

“What are you doing out here Twilight?”

“Um we were just uh having a race to see who could make it to the forest faster haha...Rainbow won.

“Oh wow a race against Rainbow Dash? What were you thinking Twilight?”

Fluttershy giggled her suspicions away as she was helped to her feet by Spike.

“Well thanks for checking up on us Fluttershy but we really should be getting back to the library now.”

“Okay what for?”

“We need to write a letter to the princess, you know...about friendship.”

“Oh I love writing letters to the princess. Can I help? Oh please?”

The last thing Spike needed was another nosey person skulking around the library, especially since Pinkie and Rarity were still there doing Celestia knows what.

“Well…”

“We could even write it at my cottage. I could make tea and cupcakes for everyone!”

Spike had already gotten out of a close call tonight. It would be a stupid idea to welcome more mischief back into his situation. But who could say no Fluttershy?

“Alright I guess. That sounds kinda nice. What do you think Twilight?”

“That sounds like fun.”

(Thank goodness she didn’t just say okay.)

“Oh yes. Cmon let’s go. It’s getting dark.”

Fluttershy was eager to get out of the woods. The sun was completely down at this point and the crickets were chirping loudly. Luckily they were only a few paces away from the entrance. The four of them made their way across town and back to Fluttershy’s cottage.

“So what is the letter going to be about?”

“Never agree to a race against the fastest pegasus in equestria.”

“Oh Spike, you’re adorable.”

The four of them made their way up to the door of the cottage which Fluttershy opened carefully as to not wake any of her pet animals. The inside of her cottage was made up of little catwalks and birdhouses that lined the upper perimeter of her walls. All of her animals were nestled asleep and the bear usually slept outside. As for Angel, that little asshole was passed out on it’s bed cushion with a half eaten carrot lying across it.

“Come on in everyone.”

Fluttershy’s conversationally low tone set the bar for how loud they were permitted to talk amongst the slumbering beasts. Everyone made their way inside as Fluttershy went into the kitchen.

“I’ll be out in just a minute.”

Spike found a seat and gestured Twilight and Rainbow to do the same. They complied like sleepwalking mannequins as they sat onto one of Fluttershy’s sofas. Now was a perfect time for Spike to start brainstorming his letter back to Celestia. Fluttershy had a writing desk that sat next to the window reserved for this very purpose. Spike promptly and quietly made his way over to it and dipped the quill in the ink.

Dear Princess Celestia,

The spell testing was a success, I made some amazing discoveries with the help of my brilliant and handsome assistant Spike. Nothing has gone wrong, and please don’t come to Ponyville. Your faithful student,

-Princess Twilight Sparkle
“There, problem solved.”

Spike rolled up the parchment and tied a ribbon around it, and then mustered up the quietest ball of flame he could to send the letter on it’s way.

Floof

The letter was engulfed by a green flame, and then disintegrated into ash and cinders. The letter was sent, and no one was any the wiser. Finally Spike could relax. Fluttershy was still puttering around in the kitchen, blissfully unaware that the letter had already been sent. Out of all of Spike’s friends, Fluttershy had always been the cutest, and the nicest. His young male dragon urges were telling him to zap her with the spell, and give her the release she deserved, but Fluttershy was too nice for that. Spike could almost assume he didn’t need the spell at all.

Spike got up from the writing desk and entered the kitchen. Fluttershy was facing the stove as she poured the hot kettle into four teacups. She didn’t know Spike was staring at her. Spike was just observing her in her natural habitat. She was wearing a long, green, fleece hoodie that barely covered half of her rump.The hoodie was designed for pegasi as it had two openings in the back for her wings to come out. She didn’t bother with any pants. At night she prefered to be natural with just a pair of white panties with pink butterflies on them. And Spike couldn’t be sure but he could swear that she didn’t have a bra on underneath her hoodie. Spike knew he was going to fuck her that night one way or another. He would prefer it to be natural, as the obedience spell might cloud her adorable personality. But the spell was still there for good measure if he needed it.

Spike quietly approached Fluttershy from behind not saying anything. Fluttershy noticed his presence behind her as she gasped quietly. Not startled enough for a jump, just a little scare.

“Oh hi Spike. Sorry, you scared me a little.”

She played it off like it was nothing as she went back to preparing the food and tea. Spike took things a bit further as he started touching her wings with subtle interest. It was a good way to break the touch barrier as wings were not considered a very intimate part of the body. More like shoulders or forearms. Fluttershy did not detest Spike’s interest in her wings, in fact, she slowly expanded them to welcome his adoration. This was an odd thing for Spike to do but you could get away with a lot before Fluttershy would say anything. Spike put his hands on her waist and gently pulled her against him. She wasn’t put off by this either, it was like a hug from behind, she was just a bit perplexed as to why Spike was choosing to do this now. She stopped preparing the tea and slowly turned around to face Spike.

“You’re so compassionate. What’s gotten into you?”

Spike replied with no words as he leaned in and kissed her on the mouth. She didn’t know what to think, she didn’t lean in but she didn’t pull away. She just stood there in a daze waiting for an answer. Spike pulled away to see Fluttershy trembling in front of him. Spike had never made any advances towards her before. This was the first time he had ever communicated interest and she didn’t know whether she liked it or not.

“Um...okay..I uh…”

Spike made her decision easier for her. He worked his fingers up the back of her neck and through the strands of her pink hair. Her nervousness released as her desperate breaths turned to long inhales of lust and repressed urges. She even moaned lightly as she began kissing Spike back with the same lustful commitment as he did. She had no idea what she had been holding back after all this time. Soon all the uncertainties fell away as they kissed passionately for blissful moments until...

Kettle hissing

Fluttershy came snapping back to reality as she quickly removed the kettle from the heat. In an instant she remembered the tea, the others, and the letter.

“Oh my what on earth are we doing? I can’t believe we just did that Spike. I mean I like you I guess, and I’ve thought about kissing you but, you know. I thought you liked Rarity and…”

Fluttershy stood in a sea of guilt as she stressfully brushed her hair. Spike didn’t say anything, he thought it was pretty cute. Like she was on trial or something for kissing him.

“And we shouldn’t be doing this with Twilight and Rainbow here. And we still have to send that letter to Celestia and oh...this all feels so wrong.”

Spike’s demeanor didn’t change as Fluttershy began to reject his advances. He knew she was lusting for him. There was just a bit of friction standing between them now. But nothing a little spell couldn’t help.

“Fluttershy I want you so badly.”

She stood there looking back at him looking more conflicted than she’d ever felt before. She knew she wanted him and she knew he wanted her but there was too much at risk, too much could go wrong.

“I’m sorry Spike...I just can’t.”

Tears started forming on her eyes as she expected Spike to feel disappointed. But he was far from it. He was overjoyed with the fact that Fluttershy was actually interested in him, and the obedience spell acted as a safety net for him, in case his confession didn’t go well. This made things a bit more interesting.

“It’s okay Fluttershy.”

Spike said as he picked up the tray with the tea and cupcakes.

“How about we go write that letter now?”

Fluttershy nodded, and sheepishly followed him.

Fluttershy was embarrassed to walk back into the living room after what had just happened. She thought maybe Twilight and Rainbow had heard them and were trying to play it cool by sitting motionless, staring into middle distance. She sat down awkwardly on the chair next to them as Spike set down the tea tray. She sat embarrassed in her chair, eyes surveying the floorboards until...

“Twilight?...Can we move things along?”

“Yes master.”

Twilight charged up her horn with a ball of purple magic, and the last thing Fluttershy saw was a beam of obedience spell rocketing towards her. After that there was nothing, no guilt, no worry, no embarrassment, only Spike, and his sweet demands. Spike took a sip from his tea she prepared for him. Chamomile tea, Spike’s favorite before bed. But there would be no sleeping tonight.

Before she knew it, Fluttershy was standing in the center of the living room. Lips pressed against Spike’s. She had forgotten what had happened to lead up to this, she forgot why she wasn’t feeling like her usual self. For a moment she almost forgot her own name but nothing else mattered in this moment, it was only lust and an indescribable urge to obey anything her master ordered.

“Take off your clothes.”

“Yes master.”

She unzipped her hoodie and let the fabric glide off of her wings and down onto the floor. Spike was right. She wasn’t wearing anything to cover her breasts underneath. Not like anything could contain them. Spike slid both of her soft jugs into his hands. Fluttershy letting out a repressed moan as he did. It was at this point that the spell was holding her back more than forcing her forward. If she wasn’t entranced, she might have been coming on a bit stronger. But she was limited to what Spike had allowed for her. And he was about to allow more.

In the center of the room there was a long cushioned bench that Twilight and Rainbow were sitting in front of. Spike moved Fluttershy over to it and leaded her into lying down onto it. Twilight and Rainbow assisted her onto her back without need for a command. It was as though they all shared the same consciousness while under the spell. It was a great perk, and it made things far more efficient. No need to shout commands to and fro, they all had an autopilot that acted within the parameters of the master’s orders.

Once lied down on the bench, Fluttershy was met with a barrage of kisses and generous hands that fulfilled her every desire, and plunged her deeper into a sea of pleasure that she had no intentions of trying to escape. She was so distracted with Twilight and Rainbow’s onslaught that she only half noticed Spike removing her panties. It was almost instinctual for her to spread her legs for him. Twilight and Rainbow assisted in holding them while Spike worked his magic on her impatient clitoris. It was a good thing she was the quiet type or she might have woken up every critter in the cottage.

Once she was good and warmed up, Spike and the others turned her over to reveal her lovely ass which she perked up for Spike, welcoming him inside with her usual hospitality. Spike unzipped his fly and removed his shirt as Twilight made her way around to the front of her. She sank down to eye level with Fluttershy while still remaining on her toes and started to muffle her noises with a passionate smooch. Rainbow made use of her hands and held Fluttershy’s ass on display for Spike. Wasting no more time, Spike slid his cock into the full depth of her, feeling her inhale with pleasure as he did. Rainbow started tonguing her anus while Twilight started groping her breasts. It was a triple threat of sweet ecstasy and release. Years of pent up sexual urges were all being satisfied at once, like the eager arrival of a thousand Christmas mornings. Fluttershy was in heaven, and she deserved every powerful moment of it.

Fluttershy’s rhythm started to noticeable increase, and her body began reacting harder to the assault of pleasure it was receiving. Her actions were sending a clear message, and that message was: I’m gonna cum. Needless to say, the two girls caught wind of this, and began working her body more intensely as the pleasure meter started climbing. Faster and faster her climax was approaching. Her breasts were being fondled, her lips were being massaged, her asshole was being tickled and her pussy was getting rammed. It was a pleasure cocktail being poured into an ecstasy glass at an open bar at a Led Zeppelin concert. Nothing in the world would stop her from cumming now, and nothing did. At that precise moment, Spike blew his load, and Fluttershy released hers, like a storm of pleasure receptors all being stimulated at once. Everything on heaven and earth was right in her world, all thanks to Spike, and her loyal friends.

Midnight Snack

This is Chapter 2 of Submissive. Make sure you have read Fluttershy's Cottage first.

It was a quiet night at Fluttershy’s cottage. All of the animals were sound asleep, including the ones deep in an orgy induced coma caused by an evening of unrelenting pleasure fucking starring a certain yellow and pink pony girl. It was half past midnight, and Spike was beginning to drift in and out of the sleeping realm as images from last night were still flashing through his mind like a repeating, silent movie. He turned his head to see Fluttershy peacefully sleeping on the cushioned bench in the center of the room. The star of last night’s show, resting after her performance. His eyes ran down along the curves of her back and bottom, and then down her legs. She was very angelic. He was lucky to have fucked her earlier that night. Surprisingly enough, Spike felt himself wanting more of her. Like he was hit with a second wind. Or something he had dreamt about had aroused him into waking up. Spike’s thoughts halted as Fluttershy adjusted herself subtly. Spike laid still on the couch as he didn’t want to wake her beauty sleep. Not that she needed it. Suddenly Fluttershy moved again, but into a different position. She rolled off her side and onto her back, then slowly sat up as she fluidly leaned off the bench and onto her feet.

‘Is she sleepwalking?’ Spike thought to himself.

It didn’t look like it. She seemed quite deliberate with her actions, maybe she just had to use the little girl’s room. Though, to Spike’s surprise, she quietly glided across the floor and over to him; Standing right at the base of the couch where he was lying. Spike wasn’t sure what she wanted. She was just standing naked in front of him, with her eyes sullenly peering down into Spike’s. Thinking she needed something, Spike slowly sat up and moved his legs out into the seated position in front of Fluttershy. This must have been what she wanted, because almost instantly, she knelt down on her knees and started unbuckling Spike’s pants.

‘This is amazing.’ Spike thought.

He didn’t give her any commands. This was all under her own free will. The obedience spell, seemingly, only rids the mind of any resistance that may conflict with the master’s orders, including sexual tension. If Fluttershy wanted to do something, she did it, without a moment’s hesitation.

Spike was feeling excited to have Fluttershy advancing on him this late at night. It was like she could read his mind, like the universe itself just made it happen, as if a fan in the comments section had requested it. Either way, he wasn’t about to stop her any time soon.

Fluttershy quickly succeeded in freeing his dick from his pants. She took a moment to look over the instrument of pleasure that so generously fucked her just a few hours ago. She was back for more, like a midnight snack. However, instead of driving straight in to slop up her seconds, she moved her eyes towards Spike’s, seductively making eye contact as she lifted her plump breasts onto each side of his shaft. Each breast softly rested onto his lap, with two pink nipples perking out, the sensation felt great; Her breasts were enormous! Plenty big enough to perform a boob job with, and that’s exactly what she began to do. Fluttershy slowly started raising and lowering her chest with her back, both of her hands aided as she firmly pushed her breasts together, squeezing his dick in between them as she moved. She was obviously enjoying the sensation of Spike’s dick rubbing against her nice tits. As she continued with the boob job, she let out a few soft moans that further relaxed Spike into pleasure and bliss. Spike took his thumbs and carefully grazed fluttershy’s nipples with every passing motion of her tits. In reply, Fluttershy let out more quiet moans of pleasure every time Spike stimulated her, now fully erect, nipples. She was clearly and thoroughly enjoying herself, getting more stimulation right when she wanted it from her master! She especially loved it when he toyed with her breasts like this. And within seconds, she couldn’t take it any longer. Wanting more of him, Fluttershy wrapped her mouth around the head of his dick and promptly started sucking on it while still continuing to pleasure him with her tits. Spike felt even more amazing than before. Her breasts felt incredible. And every time he touched her nipples, she let out another sexy moan! Every stroke made her hornier, which made her want to suck him even harder which, made Spike want to cum all over her more and more. Fluttershy’s head started bobbing up and down, faster and faster until Spike could feel himself losing control of his climax. With one final stroke, Spike burst his load into Fluttershy’s mouth, which she opened to allow for the rest of his load to fall all over her tits. She was covered in love jelly, which she savored as she left her master alone to sleep. And then, as if nothing had happened, Fluttershy returned to her bed and went back to sleep as quickly as she’d left it.

‘What a strange spell.’ Spike thought.

Author's Note

Special thanks to Sterlit for collaborating!