Red eye

by haziqqa

My name is clone

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Author's Note

Some People marry,
So ring the bell,
I presenting,
My first novel,

Hoped you enjoyed
No mean comment please


My name is clone

It's a beautiful day in ponyville and Everypony makes friends.

Night in everfree forest

One pony wearing a black coat walking alone in the forest but he didn't realize he's been Followed by something and that something is about to attack. It's like a wolf but made of wood. It's timberwolf.

It's attack.

The pony turn around suddenly his right eye grown red and the timberwolf completely destroyed in the blink of an eye. The timberwolf shattered and burned. The pony continued walking...

day in ponyville

Everypony have a nice day. Making friends,do their job. In one castle at ponyville live one princess. Princess of friendship, twilight sparkle. Twilight in her throne room with starlight glimmer they look very shock after seeing the cutie map shows twilight cutie mark in the everfree forest.

"why would the map want me to go to everfree forest?" twilight spoke.

"maybe there's friendship problem in the everfree forest ?"starlight said.

"Is there anypony live in everfree forest? "twilight said.

"maybe..?"starlight said curiously.

"well, what must I do.. I will go to everfree forest tommorow"said twilight.

night in everfree forest

The pony in the black coat panting after kill a lot of timber wolf theirs 30 timberwolf completely destroyed same way as yesterday. Suddenly there's mystery creature appear appear behind the pony. The mystery creature standing with two feet and have a hand like dragon but it's got five finger.

"you still running? " the mystery creature spoke but the pony don't want to talk with him so he just run leaving the creature chuckle to himself.

The pony run and keep running. After a few meter away he decided to take some rest. He found a cave and make the cave his shelter the pony is about to say something.

"I want to kill"

sunny day at ponyville

This is the day where Twilight must go to everfree forest. Twilight has pack everything she need to go in everfree forest right now she's infront of everfree forest all of her friends is There well.

"You sure you don't want us to come? "said the yellow pony with pink hair. Her name is fluttershy.

"don't worry fluttershy I got this"twilight said without no worries.

"You know everfree forest is danger right Darling?" asked by the with pony with purple hair.

" Like I say I got this" after saying that Twilight wave goodbye to her friends and go inside everfree forest.

After a few moment later

"Where must I find this friendship problem!?" twilight said "Is there anypony live in everfree Forest!?"

Suddenly she heard something it's like sound of stomping. The sound getting closer and closer until it stop. Twilight get a closer look but all of sudden there's a huge giant spider jump out and scared twilight but it's not a normal spider it's a........ Robot spider

"WHAT THE!?" twilight scream.

The giant mechanical spider look at her with its red 8 eye and started to say something.

INTRUDER! INTRUDER!

Twilight feel herself in danger so she run as fast as she can. She want to fly but suddenly.

OUCH!

Something shot twilight wing it's like a device. everytime she want to fly the device shock her with electricity she begins to run again. She run as fast as she can but the spider keep chasing her the spider started to do something. There something get out of its back. It's a cannon.

TARGET LOCK

BAAM

The blast almost hit twilight but strong enough to make her thrown away. Her vision started getting blurry,After a few second it's back to normal but spider is in front of her.

TARGET LOCK

Twilight close her eye and wait for whatever is coming but suddenly the spider has been shot right in the face.
Twilight open her eye to see what's going on she see the spider completely collapes and it's face destroyed. She felt someone pat from behind she quickly turn around and see a pony wearing a black coat. She cannot see his face because he wearing a hood. Twilight heard a sound of stomping.

"Oh no there's more! " twilight said with worried voice suddenly the pony grab twilight Hoof and take her with him. After a miles away from the spider they decided to take a rest but for twilight she want to say something but when she's about to say something the stranger say something first.

"wanna go to my shelter?" the pony ask " it's safer in there " twilight just nod. Then they go to the cave where the mysterious pony make as a shelter. In the cave there's campfire and bed made by leaf and wood. Twilight got many questions what is that giant spider? What it's doing here?
Clearly she never saw one of those creature before And why this strange pony in the everfree forest? .She feels herself so dizzy after what happened.

"You should stay until tomorrow or that thing chase you again" the mysterious pony said while trying to light up the campfire.

" But you don't understand! I was here for something important! " twilight said.

" Trust me you can do that tomorrow "
The pony said.

Maybe this guy is the one that I'm searching for.. twilight thought.

night

The night started to fill the cold air.
Twilight still think what is that creature? Is it from here?. Twilight look at the stranger as he take of his hoodie the stranger face is pinch brown, brown eye and Black hair by looking at his face twilight started to think He might be not around ponyville because I never seen him before .

"Uhum" twilight began to ask something " who are you? "

"My name is clone and...... I'm from far away" said clone.

"where? " twilight ask.

"Far away....... " said clone.

"Okay......" said twilight.

.........

"What is that thing? " twilight asked.

"hmm? "

"That thing! That giant robot spider....... Thing" said twilight.

...

"I want to go to sleep" avoiding her question.

"HEY!"

Clone ignore her and go to sleep. Twilight sight and just go to sleep.

somewhere in the evergreen forest

There's a creature standing infront of the collapse spider. It's the creature from yesterday.

"Yo! Man!" another creature same like him greet him.

"what's up.... " he said it with low voice.

"nothing, just trynna see what's going on here! " said the other creature. " WOAH! That little mothafackar really getting stronger ain?"

"So do we"

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