Red eye

by haziqqa

Rating: teen
Tags: Main 6, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Human, Other, Romance, Princess Luna, Original Character, Mystery, Tragedy, Adventure, Princess Celestia
Length: 2833

MY right eye turn red when I......

My name is clone, I'm from far away and I want to kill.

Published 2017-07-02 12:50:11 UTC
Last updated 2017-07-08 15:51:15 UTC

My name is clone

Author's Note

Some People marry,
So ring the bell,
I presenting,
My first novel,

Hoped you enjoyed
No mean comment please

My name is clone

It's a beautiful day in ponyville and Everypony makes friends.

Night in everfree forest

One pony wearing a black coat walking alone in the forest but he didn't realize he's been Followed by something and that something is about to attack. It's like a wolf but made of wood. It's timberwolf.

It's attack.

The pony turn around suddenly his right eye grown red and the timberwolf completely destroyed in the blink of an eye. The timberwolf shattered and burned. The pony continued walking...

day in ponyville

Everypony have a nice day. Making friends,do their job. In one castle at ponyville live one princess. Princess of friendship, twilight sparkle. Twilight in her throne room with starlight glimmer they look very shock after seeing the cutie map shows twilight cutie mark in the everfree forest.

"why would the map want me to go to everfree forest?" twilight spoke.

"maybe there's friendship problem in the everfree forest ?"starlight said.

"Is there anypony live in everfree forest? "twilight said.

"maybe..?"starlight said curiously.

"well, what must I do.. I will go to everfree forest tommorow"said twilight.

night in everfree forest

The pony in the black coat panting after kill a lot of timber wolf theirs 30 timberwolf completely destroyed same way as yesterday. Suddenly there's mystery creature appear appear behind the pony. The mystery creature standing with two feet and have a hand like dragon but it's got five finger.

"you still running? " the mystery creature spoke but the pony don't want to talk with him so he just run leaving the creature chuckle to himself.

The pony run and keep running. After a few meter away he decided to take some rest. He found a cave and make the cave his shelter the pony is about to say something.

"I want to kill"

sunny day at ponyville

This is the day where Twilight must go to everfree forest. Twilight has pack everything she need to go in everfree forest right now she's infront of everfree forest all of her friends is There well.

"You sure you don't want us to come? "said the yellow pony with pink hair. Her name is fluttershy.

"don't worry fluttershy I got this"twilight said without no worries.

"You know everfree forest is danger right Darling?" asked by the with pony with purple hair.

" Like I say I got this" after saying that Twilight wave goodbye to her friends and go inside everfree forest.

After a few moment later

"Where must I find this friendship problem!?" twilight said "Is there anypony live in everfree Forest!?"

Suddenly she heard something it's like sound of stomping. The sound getting closer and closer until it stop. Twilight get a closer look but all of sudden there's a huge giant spider jump out and scared twilight but it's not a normal spider it's a........ Robot spider

"WHAT THE!?" twilight scream.

The giant mechanical spider look at her with its red 8 eye and started to say something.

INTRUDER! INTRUDER!

Twilight feel herself in danger so she run as fast as she can. She want to fly but suddenly.

OUCH!

Something shot twilight wing it's like a device. everytime she want to fly the device shock her with electricity she begins to run again. She run as fast as she can but the spider keep chasing her the spider started to do something. There something get out of its back. It's a cannon.

TARGET LOCK

BAAM

The blast almost hit twilight but strong enough to make her thrown away. Her vision started getting blurry,After a few second it's back to normal but spider is in front of her.

TARGET LOCK

Twilight close her eye and wait for whatever is coming but suddenly the spider has been shot right in the face.
Twilight open her eye to see what's going on she see the spider completely collapes and it's face destroyed. She felt someone pat from behind she quickly turn around and see a pony wearing a black coat. She cannot see his face because he wearing a hood. Twilight heard a sound of stomping.

"Oh no there's more! " twilight said with worried voice suddenly the pony grab twilight Hoof and take her with him. After a miles away from the spider they decided to take a rest but for twilight she want to say something but when she's about to say something the stranger say something first.

"wanna go to my shelter?" the pony ask " it's safer in there " twilight just nod. Then they go to the cave where the mysterious pony make as a shelter. In the cave there's campfire and bed made by leaf and wood. Twilight got many questions what is that giant spider? What it's doing here?
Clearly she never saw one of those creature before And why this strange pony in the everfree forest? .She feels herself so dizzy after what happened.

"You should stay until tomorrow or that thing chase you again" the mysterious pony said while trying to light up the campfire.

" But you don't understand! I was here for something important! " twilight said.

" Trust me you can do that tomorrow "
The pony said.

Maybe this guy is the one that I'm searching for.. twilight thought.

night

The night started to fill the cold air.
Twilight still think what is that creature? Is it from here?. Twilight look at the stranger as he take of his hoodie the stranger face is pinch brown, brown eye and Black hair by looking at his face twilight started to think He might be not around ponyville because I never seen him before .

"Uhum" twilight began to ask something " who are you? "

"My name is clone and...... I'm from far away" said clone.

"where? " twilight ask.

"Far away....... " said clone.

"Okay......" said twilight.

.........

"What is that thing? " twilight asked.

"hmm? "

"That thing! That giant robot spider....... Thing" said twilight.

...

"I want to go to sleep" avoiding her question.

"HEY!"

Clone ignore her and go to sleep. Twilight sight and just go to sleep.

somewhere in the evergreen forest

There's a creature standing infront of the collapse spider. It's the creature from yesterday.

"Yo! Man!" another creature same like him greet him.

"what's up.... " he said it with low voice.

"nothing, just trynna see what's going on here! " said the other creature. " WOAH! That little mothafackar really getting stronger ain?"

"So do we"

What happened?

Author's Note

It's short but that's all I got. 😊

What happened?

Flashback

5 month ago....
Location:secret facility

"welcome to X tech" a man wearing suit with red tie said that to tourist that came for visiting and check out but the visitors not a normal visitor, they consist of government people and a high rank jeneral. The man continued to speak. "It's an honor to meet all of you. Now, follow me" All of the visitors follow the man but then suddenly the man stopped.

"Forgot to mention, my name is Juris. I'm the one that controlling this place" After saying that he continued to walk so do the visitors . There so much high technology in the base that we never seen before but Juris wanted to show them something else.

"All right people, I know you're here not to visiting all of this cool stuff" He say that while fixing his shirt collar "You here for our development about that portal. Right ?" juris continued to talk " A couple month ago there's a supernatural energy sense in hutan Jalan lipur which is really surprising cuz there are no people live in there and there are no factory in there iether so the government send special forced to investigate the area then we found the energy in the cave. Turn out it was a portal, A portal to another world that we don't know it exist. The government decided to send a couple of soldier to go in the portal.................but they don't come back, They decided to prepare what's ever in there then we were born, the X tech" Juris is a scientist, he is 29 years old and he's really obsessed with future.

"Excuse me? " Asked one of the visitors.

"Yes? "

" what's the development?"

"oh right, sorry" juris said while scratching his head" we still don't have any data yet but all we know when we enter the portal we became something else"

" And what is it? " asked another visitor.

"We don't know, We send one man but When he comeback after five seconds, he had trauma " hurts said with a smile.

...

"Anyway if you look on your right you can see the new type of future" all of the visitor look at there right and see what infront of them is a glass frame behind the glass frame is an eyeball, a mechanical eye.

" That is RED EYE, it can shoot laser and when you use a gun you can never miss well maybe a little" All of the visitors confused why he created a weapon?

"Mr juris? All we wanted is investigate this world why would we need a weapon? " The visitor asked.

" What if there's a creature in there that don't like outsider ? Or what if when they found out that there's another world then they want to invade it? " juris say that with arrogant way " They have take our soldiers, our man! "

" But who is willing to sacrifice their eyeball? " Asked the visitor. Suddenly there someone appear behind juris he had black hair and white skin.

"Everyone, let me introduce you to our new hope for this weapon, he is one humble homeless guy, his parent left him when he was five and he always being looked down by everyone around him but I see potential, A potential that I've never seen before. Let me introduce you this is....

Clone

In equestria

Clone cave

Clone wake up after dreaming about his 'memories' he seems really regret.

" Why do I accept your help? "

"If I know you would done such a thing I would not join you! "

Clone go to his bag, he brought it ever since he got here. Clone take a mirror and look at himself suddenly his eye grown red.

"This thing is the reason why I became a monster!"

Suddenly twilight awake. " Clone? " clone quickly change his eye to normal and hide the mirror. "What are you doing ?" twilight asked.

"N-Nothing!" clone stutter " Y-you go back to sleep "

Twilight raise her eyebrow and asked again " What happened? " clone turn around and stares at twilight " What happened to your past? "

...

"You don't need to know"

"Maybe I can help you" twilight said.

"YOU DONT NEED TO KNOW! "

"Okay....... " twilight disappointed.

is he always like that or he try to hiding something ? twilight though.

I cannot tell her, she cannot know everything about that giant spider, about what happened especially me clone though and go to sleep.

somewhere in the everfree forest

Theres a secret base hide in the everfree forest. inside there there's a man that look very familiar. It's juris, he's talking to two other people in front of him, one tall and black skin he wearing black and green hoodie coat , another guy is white skin he wearing black and orange coat. Their ' leader' about to speak.

"sai, ken" said juris.

"yes? " them both say together.

" The boy grown stronger " said the white skin guy.

"Yeah, You should see the drone. It completely destroyed like hell! "said the black skin guy.

" can you sometimes be serious KEN?!?" said the white guy.

"I am serious! " said Ken " Bich!"

" enough! " said juris

"Sai, find this boy but don't attack him" said juris "Ken, call the others"

Ken looked excited " Oh yeah time for call all the homie !"

"And find the nearest place " juris said with a smirk " and try to destroy it until he came
"

" I wanna see if he really had become more stronger than he used to be "

Ken go out of the room and take his handphone out.

" Yo Rudy, its me Ken, yeah it's been a long time. you see our old pal has been spotted. Yeah man! Nah we cannot meet him but we can beat him. Yeah man! All right see you tomorrow! " Ken put his phone in the pocket " Well clone, I finally found you"

Old friend

Greet

Author's Note

New chapter
New story
C mon Reader's
Are you ready

Sorry it's too short, I'm too busy right now but don't worry I will post new one after my job is done. #spreadthechears

Greet

X tech

Somewhere in the base there's a operation room and in there's clone laying at the bed. Suddenly the doors open and two surgeon get in.

"You ready? " asked the surgeon to his 'patient'

"Yes" without furthermore the surgeon inject clone with tranqualizer. Clone fall asleep immediately. The surgeon check his eye for make sure he's completely asleep.

Then......the surgery begin.

HELLO?!

"HUH?! " clone realize he's not focusing what twilight just said right now.

"Sorry, I don't pay attention...." clone said with low voice. Twilight just sight.

"Okay listen up" twilight decided to said it one more time " I'm here because my quest is to fix friendship "

"Okay" clone said " Continued...."

"And I think that friendship problem is from you" twilight pointing at clone.

" Sorry but I think you had a wrong person ma'am " twilight raise her eyebrow.

" Person? " twilight asked.

" Oh, ah- I mean pony!" clone say that with shaking voice.

KRRRK KRRRK

"Uhum, okay......so why you said its not you?" twilight asked " I've never seen anypony live in everfree forest before "

" I live in this forest so all of you save" clone whisper.

" What? "

" I MEAN! I live in this forest because I like in here.." Clone say that with nervous voice.

" Weird " twilight said " I've never seen somepony like live in the forest before.."

" I do "

KRRK KRRK

Twilight started to fell weird to talk to him...... Well more weirder actually.

" You know" twilight said" you can come to ponyville if you want to "

oh no

If I go there more live is in danger

" so ?"

"Huh ? " clone said " oh ahhhh... I would like to but I don't think I want to go to your town cuz I got thing's......to do"

" What is it? " twilight asked.

" You know cut down some wood......find fruits....... Kill some animal to eat.."suddenly twilight shocked.

"WHAT! ?"

"What what?!? " clone said.

" You kill animal and then eat them?!? " twilight asked with high voice.

" Well you cook them first.... "

Twilight surprised after hearing what he just said.

" You-you..........TRAP IN HERE!!!! " Twilight said.

" Wut "

" You stuck in here for a month and you suddenly feel all around you is your food because YOU,RE TOO HUNGRY! " twilight take a deep breath " and then you kill an animal and then eat it and then......now you're crazy!"

" NO IM NOT"

" I can help you" twilight grab clone hoof and dragged him " There's some potion I that can help you in my castle maybe it make you feel better"

"Let go!"

"You need help!" twilight said.

" LET GO BITCH!!! " clone never though he would said that.

"Bitch?" twilight confuse " what is Bitch ?"

What?! Is she never heard bitch before
" Ah...... I'm gonna tell you what is bitch are but don't mad okay ?" clone go closer to twilight ear and explain to her. Twilight mouth wide open after hear she heard.

" so that is bi- SLAP!!

"OW!! What's that for?!?! " clone asked.

" For calling me what you just called me MORON! Twilight really mad.

"Come with me to ponyville " twilight about to explode " OR I Will SLAP YOUR FACE AGAIN!!"

" Okay okay sorry..... " clone regret after saying that.

So he must follow Twilight to ponyville but they didn't know that they had watched by someone at the tree.

" I got him, he's on the way to ponyville, what ever that is.. " He communicate with his boss

"good, " juris look at Ken " did your boy's ready?"

" Ma Boy's always ready Dawg "

" good ! Now go.... " said juris .