Can I show you?

by DoctorSerious

Rating: mature
Tags: Comedy, Fluttershy, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance
Length: 5167

Just a clopfic

You, a pony, met a nice mare known as Fluttershy. After knowing her for sometime, your feelings for her became too much for you to handle. When you finally told her, things turned out quite interesting.

A simple clopfic. Basic and barebones, so don't expect groundbreaking story telling here. Thanks to Crimson Valor for helping me once again with spelling mistakes.

Ooh and by the way: THIS IS BAD, THIS STORY IS REAALLY BAD...

Published 2012-07-12 18:04:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-07-12 18:04:01 UTC

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Can I show you?

Written by Doctor Serious

With slight difficulty, I put on my little vest I was given by a certain somepony. Quite nice of her to make me something that suits me. Usually my clothing was some old rags, but not today. I was ready to pay her a visit tonight and tell her something I wanted to tell her for a long time now.

My name isn't important. I always said that to all ponies eager to hear my name. I prefer when I know other pony's names, especially ones who are dear to me. When that happens, I do tell my name. A good example was this one mare I met during my morning strolls through town.

I always enjoyed a little morning stroll through PonyVille. The usual route was a simple walk through town, a little sprint outside town for good measure and a little jogging through town to my home. But three weeks or so I thought it sounded tempting to go a little into the Everfree Forest. Sure I have been told not to go there, but my curiosity and foolishness took the better of me. Yes, you heard me right, foolishness. Not because it was so dangerous, but mainly due to the fact I fell in love with somepony.

As I walked casually through the forest, a glimpse of fur could be seen. I wasn't sure if it was a pony or an unknown creature, so I checked what it was. It was a pony, a mare to be exact. At first I wanted to ignore her, as harsh as it sounds, but then I could feel a gust of wind hit me in the neck. Quickly turning around, a looked into a critters quite angry eyes.

It jumped on my face, digging it's small, but quite sharp claws into my skin. I yelled out in pain, trying to get the critter, which was a bunny, of my face. The more I resisted however, the deeper the bunny took hold of my face, sending more pain through my head.

"Angel! Please don't attack that poor pony like that...”
The softness of the mare's voice echoed through my mind, numbing the pain in my face a little bit. It decreased even more when the bunny let go of it. I fell back on my rump, holding my face with my front hooves. As I looked back, a little trickle of blood caught my eye.
"Umm, are you okay, mister pony...?”

The voice again echoed in my brain. I slowly opened my eyes, which were closed through the entirety of the bunny's attack. What I saw took my breath away. In front of me, was a light yellow mare with a mixture of blue and green eyes. And let's not forget her beautiful pink mane.
"Y-yes," I stammered quickly. "Thank you, miss..".
She took a step back, trying to hide her face slightly from me.
"M-my name is," she began. "Fluttershy...". The last part was whispered so softly that I couldn't make out what she said.
"Can you please repeat that, I couldn't hear what you said after: 'My name is.'".

I hated moments like this, the moment when you just talk with a mare and they kinda chicken out. Luckily that didn't happen a whole lot to me, mainly due to the fact not many mares took interest in me. But that's another story for another time.

"M-my name is Fluttershy..." she repeated, but still too soft for me to hear.
I let out a sigh.
"Look, just come clean with me here. In fact, I think you owe me for that rabbit who nearly clawed my face off." I said, giving the bunny on her shoulder an irritated look. It responded by sticking it's tongue out.
"O-okay then, my name is F-Fluttershy..." she finally said with an understandable voice.
"See? That wasn't that hard now was it?," I replied. Now at least I could talk with her without calling her miss all the time.
Not that really minded, she sure acted the part of something you would see in a fairytale, all that shyness and cuteness. And such mares you could address with such things.

The longer I sat there, the more uncomfortable everything around me became. Not just Fluttershy here, but the forest started to freak me out slightly. After a little while of silence, I decided to break it.
"We should get out of here, this place is starting to give me the creeps...". I waited for a response and luckily after a few seconds, I got one.

She nodded quickly, walked towards me and helped me off with a hoof. She wasn't the strongest, I could tell that, but she sure was trying her best to help me up as best as she could. I admire girls with such willpower, better than mares who just try to show off or ones worrying so much about their bodies. No offence to those ponies of course, I've seen Rainbow Dash, who I admire for her determination and Rarity, who I swear to Celestia is the most brilliant fashion designer I know.

When I finally stood on all my four hooves, we took off. Not too long after we found a little dirt path, leading to Fluttershy's home. Quite surprising, seeing a house so close to the Everfree. But hey, everypony different, right?

"Are you sure you okay, mister Pony? Angel really did get you..." she asked, with a motherly flavour of concern.
"Yeah, don't worry so much. I've seen worse when I was just a colt." I replied. I kinda regretted saying that, when I saw her concern growing even bigger.
Good job, smartass. Now she probably going to ask- I thought, but before I could continue to think, she said:
"Worse when you were just a colt..!?".
Yep, a job well done...

I quickly told her it wasn't much, hoping she would drop the subject, but as expected, she didn't. I was forced to tell her how my life was when I grew up, from the times in pre-school, to when I graduated high school. All the while, she kept saying:
"That's horrible..!" or "You poor thing..!".
Sure it wasn't all that pleasant, but surprisingly, I felt a feeling of satisfaction after I was done talking about it. I didn't know why, but feeling something like that kinda stopped my frame of mind.

At last, she decided it was enough for me to talk. Kind of good time too, considering I was pretty tired after this. And it was only early afternoon.
"Well, thank you, Miss Fluttershy," I said, standing up and ready to go back home. "But I really got to go. Goodbye!". But before I could go, she asked me:
"W-wait, you haven't even told your name yet..," she said, and as soon as she said it, she hid her face again, trying to hide a kind of obvious blush.
"If that's okay...".
I gave a smile and a chuckle.

"Sure thing, my name is..."

After that day, we met each other from time to time in the two months we've known each other. It sure was a lot of fun, but also a stressful time for me. The longer I was with her, the more and more I began to think about her. Not just as a friend, but as a beautiful mare as well.

I scratched my mane violently. I couldn't fall in love, that would be silly. Plus, I couldn't stand if she didn't think the same about me. Marriage and being dedicated to somepony also didn't suit me. None of this love stuff suited me, in fact, I hated it with a burning passion. I also thought being a marynizer was something nice, only going for one thing: Pleasure. But I stopped myself time and time again from doing that, and I'm glad I did.

But tonight I couldn't bare it any longer. The pain of love kept poking in my chest, sending bolts of pain through my upper body. My mind was consumed by her entire entity and my brain could only imagine how we would...

I slapped myself back to reality. This wasn't the time for perverted thoughts, this was the time for a confession. Time to finally hear what she thought. And perhaps, the time to know if my heart could be broken.

Fluttershy didn't live in PonyVille, so I was kinda lucky to get some time to think about what I could say to her. Maybe just throw it out, saying:
'I love you, Fluttershy. Will you sleep with me?'
My eyes widened, hearing the last sentence bouncing up and down in my brain. I quickly tried to shake it away, a small blush appearing on my face. Maybe I should be more romantic about it, like:
'Dear, Fluttershy. You have captivated me with your being. I would want nothing more than you spent the night with you.'
I shook my head again, my blushing only growing bigger.
"No, no, no! Just try to supress it. Come on, think about something else..." I whispered to myself.
I hoped that subtly, my last option, was going to help.
'...Sex...'
I stood still for a moment, giving myself a facehoof.

"Buck you brain, you're a complete dick tonight..."

As I arrived at Fluttershy's home, I started to shake violently. All I could think about now was how the night could be, but mostly consisted of nothing but… you know what I mean. I gulped as I reached out to the door, giving it a tiny knock. After that, I quickly turned around, shrugging and smiling a Derpy smile.
"Ooh well, guess she isn't ho-ome~. So let's go back and-" I tried to say, but was cut off by her soft, gentle voice.
"Ooh, it's you..!" she said with a happy voice. "Please, come in..!"
My eyes widened and my cheeks flushed. All I wanted now is to wind back time before I wasn't in such a predicament.
"H-hi, Fluttershy!". There was an obvious nervous tone in my voice. And my smile gave away even more.
"You okay...?" she asked. Her eyes stared at me, nearly swallowing my mind. And when I mean nearly, I almost said:
"Can I touch your fl-" I tried to say, but I quickly shoved a front hoof in my mouth.
"Can I touch your... what..?". I could see naivety in her eyes, so she hadn't caught on about what I wanted to say.
"N-nothing, I don't want to touch anything! Did I say I wanted to touch anything? I don't remember saying anything like that! Hahahaha.. hahaha.. haha.. he.." I stammered like hay.

My nervous level reached fainting stage and I felt backwards, landing on my back. A crash and a shocked voice later, my vision faded to black. When I woke up, I laid on Fluttershy's bed.
"Ooh goodness..! You're awake..!" I heard her speak.
When I looked up, I saw Fluttershy's face. Her eyes were slightly moist, making it obvious she was fighting back tears. I quickly sat up, being worried sick about the fact I might cause her to cry.
"P-please don't cry, Fluttershy I'm f-". But I was cut off as she grabbed me around my neck and hugged me tightly.
"I was so worried! Don't you ever do something like that ever again!" she snickered.

I felt her tears dripping on my shoulder. Something like this can make a stallions heart sink like a brick in air. And this was such a moment. Feeling her cry on my shoulder made me feel horrible about myself. Not only did I like her, but I felt a new feeling in my heart: Longing. I hugged her back, making shushing noises to calm her down.
"I'm fine, Fluttershy. It's just that.. I.." I tried to speak, but the feeling I had earlier rose up again. My face flushed again, my nervous level shooting up again.
"What happened to you..?" she asked, still snickering with tears.
I couldn't bare it anymore, it was now or never.
"ILikeYou,Fluttershy!" I quickly said. After that, I turned away from her, holding back my own tears now.

It was quiet now, the moon shining through her little window. The light that came from the candle in her room gave everything a slight romantic touch. Too bad it only made me feel worse about the situation. The wait continued and continued, until I finally got a response. At first I thought she was going to send me away, but to my surprise she grabbed me around my neck again, only this time from the back. Her cheek rested on my shoulder again, feeling her fur against mine.
The moment lasted for several minutes, until she disconnect her cheek and turned me around to face her. Her face was once again hidden behind her, showing a deep blush.
"Y-you like.. me..?" she asked with a different type of shyness.
"Y-yes, I really l-like you, F-Fluttershy.." I stammered. I expected the nervousness to take toll again, but this time it was strangely supressed by a warm feeling that creeped up into my chest.

Fluttershy looked at me, her eyes looking at me with a weird, attractive vibe to them. The longer I stared into them, the more a more my face moved closer to her. I didn't know if she did the same, but my mid didn't bother. I was captured by her beauty, from her head to her back hoof, everything was just so beautiful. At last, I switched back to reality and saw her face moving back a little.
"Umm, w-what are you doing..?" she asked me, obviously taken back by how I acted.
I pulled my head back, blushing brightly. I made tiny circles in her bedding.
"I.. guess I tried to kiss you...".
Fluttershy's eyes became wide with surprise and her face turned into a bright crimson. Not only she was that bright. The room seemed to heat up the longer I was here. At last I gave a small sigh.
"I'm sorry, Fluttershy. I probably look really creepy now. If you want I can leave." I said, sounding a little emotionless. After a quick flung, I sat on top of the bed, ready to walk out her room, out her house and on to my own home again.

A surprise would have been kinda.. surprising here, but sure enough something happened that caught me of guard. Fluttershy grabbed my arm and gave it a quite strong pull.
"No, please don't go..!" she exclaimed with her usual kind voice.
The surprise and the power of the pull made me fall back onto the bed, pulling Fluttershy with me. After recovering for a second, I saw her face lined up with mine. A new sensation caught my senses: her amazing smell. Her mane smelled like flowers with a small tint of freshness, possibly stuck in her mane when she flew to the air today. I didn't care, it was intoxicating. She slowly opened her eyes, looking straight into mine. Both of us lay there, our faces close and our bodies closer.
"S-sorry...". Her eyes still glued to mine, the feeling of longing increased.
It became obvious when I started to sweat and I felt a familiar feeling between my legs. Trying to fight it didn't help, as I felt more places where our bodies touched. At last I couldn't help it anymore, as my erection poked her belly.

Fluttershy let out an adorable squeak as my erect member touched her. But that frame of thought quickly broke as I realised what had happened. I was erect, she could see it, be freaked out about it, kick me out of her home and tell me we will never be friends again.
"Ooh.. my..." she said, her face flushing as she looked at my erection.
I'm dead, so dead, so bucking dead...
I couldn't handle this, nothing could prepare me for this. Everything seemed to fade away into complete darkness. I was done, let me be killed.

My eyes wide shut, I could feel tears appearing at the sides of my eyes. A gentle stroke removed them. As I looked up from my scared state, I looked at Fluttershy. Her, the mare that I felt comfortable with, the mare who listened to me, even if I didn't want to. The mare.. who I loved with all my heart, mind, soul and body.
"Don't cry, it's alright..." I heard her say with the same motherly concern she had the first day we met.
Everything calmed down, from then tension in my body to the heat in the room. Everything became soothing, calm and silent.
"Y-you're not freaked out by my..?" I asked her, still a little scared of what may come.
She looked at me, then at my erection, then back at me again. Her blush grew slightly, but didn't get as big as I expected it to be. It became kind of unbearable, seeing her look like this, but something told me she wasn't freaked out, more.. interested.
"K-kind of, but..,". Fluttershy held her breath for a moment, probably holding something up.
"B-but I don't mind it, because I.. like you too..." she said. Her face was the same crimson as before, only this time she didn't hide her face.

I lay there, looking at Fluttershy as she looked at me. The moment continued for what felt like an eternity, but alas, I decided to say something.
"Fluttershy..?"
"Yes..?"
I hesitated for a moment, but my bravery won over.
"Can I show you.. how much I like you?" I asked her.
Fluttershy didn't reply, but just looked around the room for a moment. Then gave me a little nod. This was all I needed from this angel, as I lunged myself at her, pulled her down and rolled her on top of her back. She gave me a shocked face at first, but soon gave me a nervous smile.

Now I could see her in all her beauty. Her mane hypnotizing me with the smell, her wings comforting me with how soft they looked and her eyes, letting me sink slowly to her face. Our noses touched, our bodies lay close. The moon suddenly lit up, the perfect time to shine upon her. Now was the time, everything was perfect. I didn't care anymore, I wanted this mare, I needed this mare. My lips inched slowly towards hers and finally, we met with a sloppy kiss. My mind raced with how incredible this was. Her lips were tender and gentle, her taste was sweet and it seemed like a keyhole where my lips would fit perfectly. She broke the kiss however, giving me a shy smile.
"D-did I do okay..?" she asked me with her usual innocence.
I put my hoof on her mouth before she could say anything else.
"Don't talk, Fluttershy. Just give me more..." I replied, trying to sound seductive.
It obviously failed though, hearing her giggle under my hoof. I gave her a small chuckle before looking at her again. I slowly dove down again and gave her another passionate kiss. This time, she wasn't planning on letting go. The kiss formed into another kiss, and another one, and another one.

After several minutes of kissing, I broke it. We locked eyes once more, giving each other a pleasant smile. I began kissing and licking the side of her neck, causing her to whimper at the pleasure I was giving her. I kept on kissing her neck, while she began stroking my chest with a gentle hoof. After a few more seconds of kissing her neck, I moved down to her chest, belly and at last between her thighs and belly. The slight contact I made with her nipples made her squeal with delight. As I stuck my tongue out to lick her nipples, another squeal escaped Fluttershy's lips. She grabbed the sides of her bed, trying hold any more that may came out. The more I licked, the harder it became for her. But when I touched one of her nipples with my teeth, she yelled. Or at least, how she would yell. But I didn't care, I found a way to make her feel even better. But just to make sure I wasn't hurting her, I let go of her for a moment. I lifted my head to see her desperate face.
"Did you like that, Fluttershy?" I asked her, again trying to sound seductive.
She grabbed the back of my head and pushed it back onto her breasts.
"P-please, I like it when you do that..." she replied, sounding quite desperate.

I gave her a chuckle and quickly continued focussing on the nipples, gently nibbling each one of them. Fluttershy didn't squeal as much this time, more moaned with delight as I kept on pleasuring her. During this, my erection started to yell at me for attention. At first it was manageable, but later it became quite hard to ignore.
"You okay..?" Fluttershy asked me, clearly realising I was distracted.
"Umm.. kinda..".

She suddenly grabbed me around the neck, flipped me over onto my back and gave me a quick kiss on the lips.
"Let Doctor Fluttershy have a look at your little animal~"
Hearing something like that, coming from Fluttershy, was quite arousing. Usual she's so taken back, but now she began to sound more upbeat. Just like me, she began licking down from my chest, to my belly and finally reach my nether regions. My member was pretty hard already, but when I felt Fluttershy's warm breath against it, it nearly reached its peak. She gave me a giggle and began to stick out her tongue to take a taste. As her tongue touched me, a jolt of pleasure ran through my groin, up to my spine and into my brain. I gave her a gasp in response. As Fluttershy continued to lick from the base to the tip, my body started to shake slightly at the pleasure I was receiving. I let out a powerful groan as I felt her lips enveloping the head of my erection, sucking and licking it. All the while, never letting go of my eyes. Her innocence was just maddening, doubling the pleasure I was getting. Suddenly she started to slide my member into her mouth, making me nearly jump of the bed. As she began to bump her head up and down, slightly faster and deeper as time went by, my mind began to race like never before. None of thoughts I could clearly picture, but I was pretty certain all of them had to do with one thing: Fluttershy. She was suprising skilled at this, only gagging if she went to far. But even then, she kept going back to the same point.

Unfortunately, I felt a sudden parade of ecstasy flowing through my spine. I couldn't hold it much longer.
"F-Flutter-S-shy, I-I-I Can't Hold It.." I tried to say, but the pleasure was too much for me to handle.
A powerful yell followed, me unleashing everything that had built up. Wave after wave of pure ecstasy flew out my erection into Fluttershy's mouth. She was quite surprised as she felt my hot seed flow into her mouth, but quickly started swallowing ever drop that I could spill. I lay there, panting. Never have I felt such amazing pleasure in my life, all thanks to that mare. Then I would have return to favour, right?
"That was.. quite fun~" Fluttershy giggles.

I quickly flipped her around, moving as quickly as I could to her nether regions. Before she could reply, I gave her marehood a long, strong lick. She screamed in pure pleasure as I continued to lick her pussy. The juices kept flowing out of her, on my hot tongue. Her flavour was rich and salty, with hints of dandelion jam. Quite interesting, and delicious. The more I licked, the more response I got out of her. Her screams became louder and louder, her opening wetter and wetter.
"Y-yes! T-That feels sooOOO Amazing!" she exclaims between yells of pleasure.
As I continued to pleasure her, I felt my member coming back to life as well. When I discovered her little nub and gave it a sloppy kiss, she grabbed the back of my head wildly and pushed me back, while thrusting her hips forwards. A chuckle later, I continued licking her most sesitive spot, all the while rubbing her private zone with a hoof. She couldn't hold on much longer, and at last she gave in and came wildly. Her voice echoed through the entire room, probably the entire house, her juices flowing freely onto my face.

After a moment of me cleaning myself, I looked back at Fluttershy. Her tongue was lolling out of her mouth, her panting deep and rapid. Her eyes were shut forcefully, tears of pleasure calmly dripping down her rosy cheeks. I quickly wiped them away and took her head in my hooves. Her eyes slowly opened to look at me, her mouth slowly turning into a pleasant smile. My lips touched her cheeks for a moment, before she pulled me down again and gave me a passionate kiss. The kiss continued for a while, calming our fast beating hearts lightly. I gasped in her mouth as I felt one of her hooves touch my shaft, who was once again throbbing for attention. She broke the kiss, looking at me with half slid eyes. I looked at her for a moment. We both stopped, just looking at each other. She knew I wanted it, and I knew she wanted it.
"I-I'm ready for you.." she whispered to me. "Take me to heaven..."
Now was the time for me to show her how much I cared about her.
"I.. love you, Fluttershy..." I whispered back.
"I love you too..."

That was all the encouragement I needed. I brought my hips forward, feeling my erect member touch the outside of her lips. A gasp emulated from her as I pushed deeper into her. Ripples of pleasure coursed through my spine as I felt her marehood enveloping my shaft completely. Until I reached a blockage.
"This.. is probably going to hurt for a bit, Fluttershy.." I said with honesty.
Her hooves wrapped under my arms, around my waist. Pulling me closer, I could feel her heart racing in her chest.
"Do it.. please! I can't stand it much longer..!". Her longing for me filled her soft, loving voice.
I nodded and with a small push, I started to penetrate her blockage. Tiny screams of pain filled the room as I continued sliding into her. At last, the blockage was penetrated, crushing my mind with a whole new level of ecstasy. Her insides were extremely tight, I could barely move. The warmth of it was intoxicating, but her voice was the true show stealer. Her face looked at me with small tears of pain, but with a genuine smile that made my heart beat faster than ever.
"You okay, Fluttershy? I didn't hurt you, did I?" I asked her with concern.
She didn't reply with words, she just shook her head and giving me a look, indicating I could continue.

A smile later, I began to slowly move out of her, not long before slowly sliding back in. She moaned in response, grabbing me tighter. I continued sliding in and out of her, kissing her and nibbling her neck while I was doing this. The goddess under me continued to moan in pleasure, giving my cheek a gentle nuzzle everytime I kissed her. After a short while, I began to pick up the pace, going a bit faster and deeper. I wouldn't expect it to have such an impact on her, but a heartful moan told me otherwise. I continued making love to her, all the while increasing my thrusting. Moans and gasps of pleasure filled the entire room, that sounded faintly like a music orchestra. The music of love, a true symphony. Looking at her gave me an idea. I quickly grabbed her around the neck, twisting around until she was the one on top. At first, she seemed to be mildly surprised, but gave me a sheepish smile.
"You mind being on top for a moment..?" I asked her.
"N-no, I think I would like that..." she replied, beginning to slowly grind up and down on top of me.

The ecstasy was amazing, every single time she bounced up and down. I let out a groan as I looked up at her. Her wings were spread wide, her eyes shut and her mouth hanging open, releasing moan after moan. When I grabbed her flank, helping her rut me, she squealed in delight. She began to go faster now, making me shut my eyes for a moment at the sudden pleasure I was feeling. This mare was amazing at this, even though I was pretty sure she was a virgin. But then again, so was I. The bouncing became quite wild, my erect shaft now forcefully going all the way inside her. I couldn't help myself anymore, and I let out a stream of growls and yelps as she continued to ride me. She was panting wildly, flicking her sweaty mane from side to side. A sudden shock of pressure shot into my senses once again, telling me I was reaching the point of no return. Feeling the wetness, warmth and movement of Fluttershy's pussy told me she was close as well.
"F-FluttershAAAhy, I'm G-G-Gunna CuHNG.." I tried to say, but the ecstasy was starting to become too much for me to handle.
"I-I am tooHooo~" she replied, still rutting me with desperation.

I couldn't hold it anymore. The feeling of my private zone pulsing became too much as I screamed out her name, shooting my seed with force into her. The feeling of my seed pulled her over the edge as well, she screaming out my name as her insides clenched itself around my shaft, milking my member for all its seed. Our shared orgasm continued for several seconds, feeling more like years, until Fluttershy fell of me. There we lay, waiting for the other to make a move. I looked at her marehood, dripping from my large dose of seed. She turned to me and wrapped her arms around me. I did the same, embracing her beauty.
"Thank you.." she said with a soft smile.
"No problem.." I replied.

We just lay there, staring into each others eyes. My mind emptied itself with all the old thoughts. I wanted to marry this mare, I wanted to dedicate my life to her, raising our one foal one day. Yes, I really wanted to show her how much I loved her. How that all happened?

Let's just say: Live never felt better.