With a knock she came...

by Gorypony24

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Death, Alternate Universe, Narcotics, Main 6, Princess Luna, Gore, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Spike, Comedy, Horror, Profanity, Princess Celestia
Length: 1903

In the Everforst there is an old evil, trapt. But when it sees a possible way out he will take it.

There are churches dedicated to the godesess of the sun and moon, but what happened to all the other religions? Where have there followers gone to after the crowns crusade.

Well they retreated to the one place were the crown stopped there crusade. The Everfree forest. Only Celestia knows why thou.

An old evil that was trapped there by Discord thousands of years ago.
has gotten its some of it's strength back over the time his trickster was stuck in stone. But is tied to a stone tablet that keeps the embodiment of darkness and evil in the forest. powerless. so he got creative.
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This is to the readers!

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Published 2017-07-08 10:40:06 UTC
Last updated 2017-07-08 10:40:06 UTC

Chapter 1- the seeds of evil corrupt the kindest of souls

“What happened? Who did this to you Green Ivey?” Weaping Ivey said with concern for her little sister but never shows her emotions openly. “I- I don't know, I cryed f-f-for help and n-no one came to he-help me!” Green Ivey was crying in her sisters imbrace as they where siting in the chamber in witch everypony was sleeping. “WHO DID THIS!!!” Weaping Ivey shouted as she shot up from the hug from her crying sister. “I sware I FIND WHO DID THIS I WILL HAVE YOUR HEAD!!!” looking at the starteld faces as they rubed the sleep from there eyes.

Green Ivey just stoped crying and noticed a itchy, burning sencation in a rather sensative area “Did you see what he looked like?” dreding seeds asked as he looked green ivey over. “Why do you say it was a he? It could have bin a she.” weaping ivey deadpand as she looked at the area green ivey was trying to soth. “You ok? Something bothering you down there?” green ivey was trying to hid herself and was blushing prefusely at her sisters question. “N-no just a little itchy and some burning going on.” green ivey was bluching under her dark green fur. “well tell us if it gets wors ok. I have some interogating to do!”

Weaping ivey got up and did just that. Dreding seeds had gotten nothing from the tromatized yung mare and asked her to start her morning job. Her cutie mark was a pot with a ladal sticking out of it. So now that every pony was up in this religion refuge camp, pony's were hungry. It was a lot of cooking that had to be done.

Green ivey moved to the mess hall and put on her mane net, ignoreing pain, started on the cook work. It was like every other morning for green ivey exept for the pitiful lookes she had gotten from the older ones. The burning and iching in green ivey's nether region had turned into a extreamly painfull twisting in her insides. It only took a minute after the twisting stoped until she was on the ground twisting, turning, crying, and beging for death as the pain got to much to handle. Weaping ivey and dreding were carrying her to the only doctor in this shanty camp.

“Well, um I have never seen anything like this before. It's not normal for healthy little fillies to start doing that.” Doctor heartlock said with confution and concern. “Um doc, she is a 20 year old.” seeds wisperd in the old unicorn mares ear. “Oh, I didn't know. She is rather, um, short for her age then.” green ivey had stilled and was sleeping only to be woken by dreding seeds ear shatering scream that could put a little filly to shame. “WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!!” seeds yeld at the top of his lungs. “What show me!” the doctor sayed with worry. Dreding seeds pointed a hoof at green iveys lower torso as there was something moveing inside of green ivey. “WHAT IN THE NAME OF CREATION HER SELF IS THAT!!!” heartlock shouted as loud as she could. Green ivey had moved violently at the scarre her sisters stalionfriend had coused. “I don't feel so...” with that she vometed all over the floor of the clinic. “Come on greenie, really?” her sister called out. Green ivey rolled over and blacked out.

Chapter 2- death comes easy. but life is more complicated.

Green ivey was laying on cot in the clinic. Looking like she was on her death bed. It had bein 5 weeks since the sexual encounter and she was already in the final stages of pregnency. Every pony around her fells like he or she is being sucked dry of life, but Green ivey gets it the worst. “You dont look so good Greeny.” Weaping Ivey told her sister Green ivey smiled weakly. “You don't look better yourself.” dreding seeds had come in with the doctor and some of Green's friends.

“well looks like someones ready to pop likea bollon!” Velvet Seeds joked seeing her friend in obvous pain. “Ha ha. Funny.” Green ivey said this real sarcaticly. “It woun't be long now.” the doctor said after she checked how far along she was.

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The dilevery was short and Green ivey started dieing. “What the hell is that?” both Derding Seeds and Weaping Ivey sayed in unisin looking at the little newborn filly. “I have never seen a foal like this. It looks like shes part, pegasus, zebra, (unicorn?) And dragon!?” Doctor lockheart said as she was looking over the relatively healthy newborn. “She has her mothers dark green fur, but has blood red stripes. Curious. The wings are intersting, never seen a foal with dragon wings. She has what look like small fangs and, devil like horns? Intrestin. And bat like ears.” heartlock said with wonder as she put the little filly on a blanket and handed the newborn to her dieing mother. “Here you go Green ivey.” Green ivey took her in a cradal and started muzzeling her newborn as her eyelids got heavier.

A guard burst throu the door, out of breath and sayed. “Capten Seeds, SIR, we are under atack! You are needed!” Dreding Seeds shot up from were he was siting and ran out with the guard.

Green Ivey looked at her panicing sister and pleaded. “please, take her. Take her someplace safe. Out of the forest. Away form the thing that wants its creation.” Weaping ivey looked at her sister dumpfounded and sayed. “What are you saying. You now whats attacking us? And why do you fear it wants her?” Green Ivey looked at her sister, weakly smiling and said. “Please. Take. Her.” with that Green Ivey let the crying foal out of her dieing embrase and was gone. Weaping seed took a gift basket, emptied it and heartlock put the foal in it and said. “Go. Get her out of here. There is a small house at the edge of the forest. Put her on the doorstep. Knock and RUN.” Weaping Ivey looked at the old unicorn mare thankfully. Turned to the basket holding her only living rlative and wisperd. “Don't worry little one, anty is takeing you someplace safe.” She snached the handle with her mouth and ran out of the door

What meet her was a creatuer almost a pony taller than celestia with a set of dragon wings, slit eyes, large fangs, two large devil like horns on its head, a second set of pegesus wings to small to lift the creature. Weaping Ivey frose at the monster standing atfront of her as it looked at the filly in the basket. Its horns started glowing a hellsh red and lifting the basket out of her mouth. She was snaped out of it by her beloved when he trou a spear, witch found home in one of the things ears. She came back held on tight and ran for the burning gate.

“AHHHHHH. MY EAR, YOU WILL PAY PUNNY MORTAL!!!” the thing pulled it from its ear and killed Dreading seeds with his own weapon. Then turned to the gate and shouted.“THAT IS MY CHILD. MY CREATION. IT BELONGS TO ME!!!” The monster yeld as it took flight, now after Weaping Ivey.

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“NO I WOUN'T LET YOU HAVE HER!” she yeld as she shot out of the everfree forest. She looked back at the large creature at the edge of the large forest with green ruins glowing around its neck, holding it back like a chain. “it can't leave the forst.” Weaping ivey mumbeld in her head as she started for the only house she saw.

“This must be the house the doc was talking about.” Weaping Ivey thout to her self as she put the basket on the steps of the butiefull house. Kissed the little filly on the cheek. knocked on the door. Turnd and ran back to the forest. Every pony in her town where still outcasts after all.

Chapter 3- welcome to your new home. demon spown.

“He-Hello?” Fluttershy almost wisperd as she opend the door and saw the giftbasket. “Who left you here?” she said with consern as she looked at the basket siting on her stares and noticed the newborn in it. “Oh you poor little thing. Lets get you inside.” she said, snached the basket and turned back into her home. “you must be hungry” the shy little pegasus said after she set the basket on her floor of her livingroom.
She came back with some baby food and a little spoon. “I normaly feed this to the animals, so please don't hate me.” she said softly and mother like as she tried to feed the little foal. “that's it, yes. Now swallow. Good.” she sayed softly as she put spoon after spoon into the fillys muzzel.

“What you doing flutershy?” asked Twilight as she saw the pegasus talk to the giftbasket. “Oh, S-sorry Twilight. I didn't noticed you come in.” fluttershy said in her timed way. “Sorry, your door was open so I came in.” Twilight said as her eyes wonderd to the basket. “What's in the basket?” she sayed as she saw the little blanket stir. The pegasus moved to block the basket. “Oh, um, please don't freak out.”

“I woun't. I promes.” The alicorn sayed as she watched her friend step aside to reveal the infant. “What? When? How?” Twilight studered standing next to fluttershy really confused. “Oh, it was on my doorstep. I couldn't just leave the little thing out there.” Fluttershy said a little defencefly as she looked back at her friend. “You don't even know 'what' what it is!” the alicorn said as she took a closer look at the little foal. “Let's find out then.” Fluttershy told her friend and grabed the basket.

The duo went upstairs to the nursery, the basket now carryed by Twiligh's telepaty. “just put it on here.” flutershy sayed as she moved all the junk off of the table. “Oh come on!” Twighlight said as the infant started crying and fussing. The foal was out of the basket, and blanket removed and was stiring and fighting to get her blanket back. “In the name of celestia. IT HAS WINGS! DRAGON WINGS!” Twighlight shouted as she jumped back and hit the wall. The alicorn looked up when the crying stopted
only to see the little devil slowly drifting off, cradeled in her friends forlegs.
They moved the sleeping filly into a crib that Flutershy keeps for her small animals. “why did you come over?” asked the yelow pegasus still looking at the little ball coverd with its blanket. “You invited us. Remember. Plus my map was on the fritzz and was only showing the everfree floeing with dark red smoke.” The alicorn sayed in a unregularly calm deminor. “Oh in the name of celestia! THE MAP. I FORGOT ABOUT THE MAP!!” laudly panicted twilight but calmed down at the sight of the little creature sitring in its crib.

“Oh dear. I forgot about the tea party didn't I.” fluttershy said looking at the embodyment of cuteness sleeping in her crib. “what about her? We need to look for her perents.” Twilight wisperd doing the same. “I don't know where to start.”