Bred for Success - A Rainbow/Anon Story

by Clopficsinthecomments

Rainbow's Rough Ride

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Based on a fantastic recent picture by PussPuss on derpibooru #1480936

And a second great picture by lunarmarshmallow #1497895

Chapter 4 - Rainbow's Rough Ride

Anon swallowed deeply as he tried to take in the sight before him. The rambunctious, athletic, standoffish tomboy-mare (who would gag and skip over any hint of romance, even those in her beloved Daring Do series) was now revealing everything to him... Everything about her begging Anon to dominate her, breed her... to own her body, emotions and soul completely.

He nearly choked as he felt his breath catch in his throat; his tongue and palate could taste the thickness of the musk suspended in the air like a fog. The sticky-sweet vanilla odor stuck to Anon's nose, the inside of his throat, his clothes, even his hair and skin as if Dash were some kind of... beautiful sex-skunk. With that image in his mind, Anon couldn't help but chuckle, remembering the Pepe Le Pew cartoons of his youth.

That chuckle caused Dash (even in her current frenzied, panting, erogenously activated state) to snap out of it for a moment. Her look of lust transformed to one of worry and doubt.

"W-what is it Anon? Am, am I making a fool of myself?" Dash looked down. "It's... it's not how I wanted things to start between us b-bu-" Dash was cut off by Anon laughing harder and waving her worries away.

"Dashie, I don't know if you know this, but this is what I love most about you. You act so tough to cover up this little layer of insecurity." Anon approached Dash carefully on her right side, getting closer to her neck and reaching out to stroke her mane with his hand. As soon as he made contact Dash leaned heavily into it with a bemused grumble, making it easy for Anon to pet her straining strong neck muscles. Anon ran his fingers reverently from her mane into the damp fur behind a her ear, scratching deeply and gripping softly to turn her head toward him and hold her gaze. With a smile on his face Anon chuckled to her,
"it's like even you can't believe how awesome you are, you big goof-horse." He leaned in and stole a kiss from Dash, planting it on her muzzle which was still parted from the leather bridle and bit in her mouth, before pulling away quickly before she could respond leaving her flummoxed and frustrated.

Dash stomped a hoof in frustration and jerked toward Anon's retreating head while huffing in anger. "No fair! That was our first kiss and it was all mushy talk and no awesomeness." Anon pulled further away from the thrashing mare, smiling with newfound appreciation for the leather lead that left Dash bound and hitched to the breeding pole. "Get BACK HERE and kiss me harder than that before you rut me senseless Anon, you JERK!" Dash's hind leg kicked out wildly striking nothing but air as Anon stood off to one side safely, whistling in awe at the pegasus's power and speed.

"Easy there girl, easy... I'm here for you..." Anon ran his hand down her neck and between her shoulders and wings, making Dash shiver and helping her relax before he cinched the mostly perfunctory saddle a notch tighter to remind Dash who was in charge here.

"H-hey, enough *huf*, enough with the talk... I'm not some animal for you to tame Anon... *ummnnnf*" Dash complained, even as Anon's fingers stroked through her delicate primaries and then down her barrel making her rear leg muscles tighten and quiver as her body reacted with waves of sensational pleasure. "S-stop messing *unf*... stop messing around and just buck me already!" Rainbow spat out, stomping one of her powerful forehoofs.

"Patience Dashie, I promise to take care of you and your hot little feather-butt." Anon chortled as he drew his hand along her arching back and across her trembling and powerful buttock. Her right hoof lashed out in another powerful kick at this teasing touch as he once again deftly twisted away from the strike, clicking his tongue as he scolded... "now, now Dashie... if you misbehave I'll just walk right out of this barn and leave you to cool off on your own."

"No... NO!" Dash shouted, before whimpering, "I-I'll be good, just don't tease me please... it aches so much Anon, I've never felt like this. I want you... I n-need you so badly. Your stiff human cock... *umnf*..." Dash's whole body rattled and her feathers ruffled as she shook from a light orgasm induced by merely thinking of her human partner's equipment.

With a deft shuffling of his feet Anon positioned himself behind the restrained mare and took a moment to enjoy the view before him. Her lashing, wet tail whipped wildly from side to side above her pert, taut ass. Between those beautiful toned ass cheeks lay Rainbow's perky upright dock, complemented by a single sticky strand of her mare-honey attached from the end of her dock's fur across her tight ponut and to the top of her marehood... and what a marehood!

Those long puffy lips were engorged and swollen, the pink inner flesh so full and throbbing they were pushing back the slick outer lips to reveal the mare's hidden, velvety love tunnel. This slight parting of her flesh would become a full blown spectacular reveal every time her love bulb (which was now so fat with hot blood and juices it had turned into an angry, red-heart shaped fleshy nub the size of his thumb) winked outwards with a spattering of juices. This heavenly wink hinted at Rainbow's churning and coiling depths, sucking and squelching at the very air, demanding a stallionhood (or manhood) to fill her.

"Here we go..." Anon muttered to himself nervously, as he stepped forward and almost into the pegasus's constraint range.

Rainbow was watching Anon and panting like a great as she looked over her shoulder at her lover's advance. As he reached the critical point within her reach she thrust backward with all her might, the hitched bridle and heavy leather strap the only thing preventing her from bodily tackling Anon with all of her mass. Even then, she came just a few tantalizing inches short of making contact with him.

"Nooooo, aww c'monnn..." She whimpered, shaking her hips at the end of limit of her bindings. Giving up after only a moment or two of this struggle she stepped back toward the hitching post, withdrawing her hot, still-dripping rear end.

With a final gulp, Anon took another big step forward, putting his hips just behind Rainbow's... for some reason he felt like he'd just stepped into the lion's cage.

Rainbow instantly squee'd in joy and pushed herself backwards with renewed vigor. Her hips slammed into the front of Anon's jeans. From Anon's perspective it was as if a hot wet mop slapped into his crotch. He was instantly soaked to his skin, through denim jeans and cotton briefs. The wet heat of her sex was incredible. He could feel the heavy pressure of Rainbow's rear grinding up and down his crotch. His genitals, already at almost full mast just from the sights, sounds and smells assaulting all of his erotic senses at once had become rock hard in his clothes, and was now uncomfortably constrained in his wet pants.

Now a quick word about Anon (and little Anon). It is a little known fact of the magic that transports Anons to Equestria has a few interesting quirks. For instance, when an Anon is drawn into the world of Equestria, he can choose from among the best physical and mental characteristics of the various Anon's online (on particular boards and websites) at the time of his transportation.

In this case, there happened to be one particularly well endowed Anon online who could attain a throbbing, wrist-thick, uncircumcised 9-inch erection along with a pair of heavy low-hanging balls. As such, our current Anon found himself very much in the well-endowed department. With his rugged, frankly slightly intimidating, human cock he could compete with some of the largest earth-pony stallions, and would easily put unicorn and pegasus stallions to shame...

Rainbow ground her tight, powerful rear end up and down the now slick denim before rubbing part way down Anon's left pant leg. "Oh *mnn* man... *nnf* that feels good... b-but where is it?" Rainbow moaned, saying words no man ever wanted to hear, as she tried to locate Anon's cock through his pants with her ass.

Knowing that Rainbow was barking up the wrong tree (or in this case, rubbing down the wrong leg), Anon gripped her powerful haunches with his hands. His fingers dug as deeply as they could through the almost non-existent layer of fat to the smooth muscle underneath. He used his powerful grip to drag her rear back up to his crotch and the base of where his thick cock started. The grinding motion let loose another torrent of liquid from Rainbow, making Anon feel so soaked it was like he'd wet himself.

Rainbow wriggled her butt again, her cunt's winking opening mashing itself into the bulge of Anon's crotch as she moaned out from behind her bit, "Anon, *mmnnf* show me, *unf* let me feel it!"

Following that needy, begging instruction, Anon guided Rainbow's beautiful ass down his right leg, the only thing separating their flesh a soaked layer of denim, her throbbing cunt grinding down the outline of his thick length, painfully constrained in his jeans. "Holy FUCK!" Anon swore, as the mare's hot rear dragged further and further along his length, passing the point where his penis had escaped his briefs to be trapped between his leg and his now soaking jeans.

"Oh my gawsh, *huf* oh my gawsh *huf*, oh my gawwwwwwwsh!" Rainbow moaned as her lips dragged almost three quarters of the way down to Anon's knee before finally reaching his cock's pulsating head. "Are you for real, dude? You're freaking huge!" Rainbow moaned, as she traced up and down his fat length, her ass-cheeks sandwiching the outline of his manhood. Her moans dropped an octave and she shuddered as her ponut rubbed over his bulge, making her rainbow-colored tail lash about his chest in delight as she ground herself to another orgasm.

"Take *huf*, t-take those damn jeans off already!" Rainbow whined through her bit, panting heavily as she stomped in frustration.

Anon begrudgingly backed away from the best lap dance of his entire life, thick strands of mare honey still connecting him and the little rainbow pegasus as he quickly unbuckled and pulled down down his jeans and briefs, letting 'not so little' anon spring up in his full glory, pointing skyward with throbbing pride, already slick with the mare cum that had drenched through the clothes.

"Ohmygawsh Anon! *squeak*" Rainbow whimpered, her wings ruffling as she looked back at his thick organ. "Don't you dare tell anypony, but... I'm actually a little nervous to take THAT monster." Rainbow whimpered in a smaller but still husky voice.

"Don't worry Dashie, we'll go nice and slo-" Anon said as he started to try to comfort her when she interrupted him by slamming her butt back into his now naked crotch, her tail wrapping tightly around one of his legs, pulling him off balance causing him to fall to the floor on his ass. Rainbow Dash promptly planted her rear end right down on top of the now seated Anon, trapping his cock between her warm, slick, vaginal lips and his abdomen.

"Don't you worry, Anon... I'm so awesome that a little..." Rainbow gulped with trepidation as she felt her lips parting and stretching just to be able to hot-dog around Anon's thick shaft as she began to grind up and down along his impressive hardness. "OK... maybe not so little problem... well... really a pretty frickin' huge problem... it won't stop me!" she grinned as she continued riding up and down his shaft.

Anon could feel her juices soaking his groin, the streams of juices trickling over his balls and down his butt-cheeks to the ground beneath him. He could feel her winking clitoris's heat and texture on his shaft and balls each time she would reach one end of a slide on his cock. He'd feel the bump of her asshole when it would squash over his cock's head as Rainbow reached the high point on his body. He was tickled by the thin, damp, musky hairs of her rainbow-colored tail as it swished over his chest in joy while his meat continued to be coated in lubricant. He moaned and groaned at the warmth of the two firm globes of Rainbow's butt as they rode alongside either side of his dick, like a firm pillow smushing into his abs. He basked in the pleasant feel of her small, pert breasts and hard, sensitive teats as they brushed against his balls and inner thighs. In short, he was in heaven.

As Rainbow began panting deeper and heavier Anon gripped the based of her tail with his right hand and jerked her dock upwards to stretch her asshole. Simultaneously he pushed down her butt with his other hand, grinding her sex deeper around his. The result was immediate as the little mare stopped sliding and began shivering and convulsing on his dick.

"Oh gawwwwd, Anon I'm *hic* I'm *mmn*, I'm CUMMINGGGgggGGGg..."

With a mighty shudder and a particularly powerful wink Rainbow gushed her largest ejaculation yet, her clit staying out for a protracted amount of time while she splashed all over him in embarrassing volume. Even as Anon enjoyed the incredible sensation of wetness and heat (which required him to focus to resist his own urge to release then and there) a sudden curious impulse took Anon's imagination.

Reaching down with his right hand from its position yanking Dash's dock, he slid his index finger along the inner side of Rainbow's extended clitoral bulb letting the natural bulge in the surprisingly heart shaped organ guide his digit inside her marehood. Immediately Dash fell forward, and was now resting her weight on Anon's thighs, her rear end displayed perfectly to him as his finger slid into her twisting, gripping, convulsing vagina.

"*mmmnf* oh Anon! I feel you!" Rainbow squeaked, still in the throes of her orgasm.

Hooking his invading index finger, Anon reached as far back into Dash's most female depths as he could before pinching inwards, catching the main muscle of Dash's still-extended clit between his thumb and digit, making a firm 'OK' sign as if he were plucking the most delicious strawberry from a strawberry bush.

Instantly Dash reacted with unprecedented intensity as her rear left hoof spasmed, her wings locked out at their utmost extension, and her eyes rolled back in her head slightly while she began moaning and squeaking in ecstasy.

Anon could feel Dash's powerful clitoral and associated pelvic muscles winking in his fingers' grasp, trying desperately to retract the sensitive bundle of erotic nerve endings back into Dash so it could hide away from the sensations she was being flooded with.

With each throb of Dash's fluttering heart, the muscles would fire with agonizing surges of adrenaline, trying to escape Anon's grasp. Instead the bulb was trapped, wriggling and retracting futilely, in its fully extruded position which kept flooding the pegasus's sensory system with an absolute overload of pleasure, prolonging and intensifying Dash's ongoing orgasm with each failed retraction.

Dash's moaning was devolving moment by moment, becoming incoherently throatier and gurgling. "Anonnn, you g-g-gottaaaannnn, stawwp, pweeeeEEEeeease, ah' hahmm mewltinnnnnnnn... *squee*!"

Dash's eyes began to roll in different directions as her brain became fully flooded with dopamine and other pleasure inducing endorphins from the never-ending orgasm she was trapped in. The blue mare's tongue lolled out of her groaning muzzle, her mind's capacity reducing to primitive, animalistic levels as her higher order functions were swamped with orgasmic chemicals that heightened in concentration with each passing moment. Unable to swallow because of the bit in her mouth, Dash's drool slid down her tongue and dropped to the ground as she shuddered and twitched.

With one hand clamping on to Dash's winking clitoris, and the other trying to hold down her powerful butt as it thrashed in ecstasy, Anon felt like he was wrangling a champion bronco. He managed to maintain his grip as he felt her thrashing weakening, her powerful vaginal contractions losing force with each throb.

Suddenly, after one particularly violent shudder and squeak, all of Dash's muscles lost their rigid tone. They had been locked in the throes of blissful agony for well over 2 minutes now, and there was no fuel left in them to fire. Dash collapsed into a puddle of relaxed and exhausted muscles in his lap, her squeaks and moans now a contended mewling purr. Releasing her swollen, angry clitoris, it remained in its extended state, with no strength left to pull itself back into its hiding place. Her gaping slick pussy lips let loose a steady trickle of honey from an unseen source as it flowed uncontrolled from a perfectly relaxed Rainbow Dash.

Anon reached down and stroked Dash's extended but loosely hanging wings, feeling her rumbling purr as she drowned in the storm of pleasure toxins saturating her neurons. He played with her beautiful tail hairs and tickled her sensitive dock, traced along her delicate inner thighs and caressed her pert breasts and teats, while she continued her soft whimpering mewl as she tried to nuzzle and snuggle with his legs. Her body still had no strength to do so however, so she continued to melt like a limp rag-doll over her lover's limbs.

After a few minutes of this blissful utopia Dash finally stirred, her wings slowly reasserting their erect posture, her legs and haunches regaining muscle control, her clitoris slowly retreating back into its wet, tightening home. Dash's head slowly lifted from its nest in Anon's legs as she looked back at him with a dizzy look of passion. Anon had to resist chuckling at Dash's drunken, wall-eyed visage, which would have looked more appropriate on some sort of sexy amalgamation of Deeply and Berry Punch.

"W-*huff*" Rainbow paused to smack her dry lips and to try to get some feeling back into her otherwise numbed from pleasure face, "w-wow." Like a desperate sex addict, Rainbow looked hungrily at Anon's fingers to give her another ride to ecstasy. "Let's do that again, big guy!"

Anon had other plans. With a hearty open-handed slap to Rainbow's quivering cutie mark and a quick jerk of her tail, Rainbow yelped and sprung back upright to her four still shaky hooves. That sudden sharp impact of pain contrasted beautifully against the intoxicating pleasure Rainbow had been luxuriating in; it sent shivers down Dash's arching spine. Nonetheless, Rainbow turned angrily toward the human with a growl.

"What the heck was that fo- *umph*" Rainbow was interrupted as the human (who had quickly jumped to his feet at the same time as her) slammed her forward into the hitching post. "*Oomph*" Rainbow grunted as the air was partially driven from her lungs with the impact.

Anon pressed up against her rear end as he leaned over the top of her body, reaching one hand under her barrel and gripping at her chest floof, while the other hand took hold of a handful of her mane. Rainbow breathlessly choked out "woah!" as she felt his heavy, thick shaft laying up against her vaginal opening and asshole, the head poking her dock and tail hair. Dash chuckled nervously as she felt the moist heat of his sweaty body laying across her back (his shirt having been removed as he leapt to his feet), before Anon leaned forward and growled into her ear.

"Now I'm not just gonna breed you, my awesome little Dashie... I'm gonna brutally buck the shit outta you..." The words came out with a guttural predatory rumble.

Some deep desire in Dash's psyche to be hunted, bred, beaten, conquered, dominated was triggered and Dash could only squeak out a meek "*eep*!" as her pupils dilated back to their heart shaped caricatures and her wings sprung out to an almost painful full erection. She felt her body shift and position itself instinctively to try to align Anon's cock for entry, as her vagina winked itself as open as it possibly manage, squirting and squelching as it did so.

Removing his hand from Rainbow's shuddering chest to guide his dick to its target, and dropping his hips, Anon felt his sensitive cock head drag over Rainbow's hot and hard little ponut, making her groan in delight and fear. Pushing and aligning a bit further southward, he felt the boiling, humid, wet atmosphere of Rainbow's outer lips. Like a lover puckering herself to reach a little further to her partner, Rainbow's wet labia seemed to reach out to kiss more of Anon's cockhead with a powerful wink.

Rainbow began to nicker and whinny around the bit in her mouth, snorting and trembling. Not wanting to play or teaser her any longer, Anon grabbed a full handful of Rainbow's mane and drove her into the hitching pole with his strength, letting out a bellow as he thrust forward with his hips.

Tight.

Very tight.

Rainbow was Anon's first pony conquest in Equestria, but he had heard from stallion buddies that pegasi mares tended to be slimmer and much grippier. The stallions would joke that if you didn't want to hurt yourself with a pegasus you needed to spend a good amount of time warming them up.

Anon could only imagine how disastrous this moment could have been if he hadn't spent so much time playing with Rainbow earlier. As it was, the athletic mare's vice-like, velvety love tunnel was almost painfully pulling at the skin on his shaft, slowing and halting his initial thrust after only a few inches sank into her. He looked down to see what looked like most of Rainbow's outer visible marehood being pulled into the hot clenching tunnel he was sinking himself into. Rainbow groaned as he slowly pulled back to try to gain momentum for another thrust, but her tightness wasn't having it.

Anon braced his hand against Rainbow's hip bone, pushing against her to slowly pry out the three inches he had sank into her grasping tunnel. He resisted bellowing out as he felt the walls of Rainbow's grasping cunt squeezing and clenching on his cock's head. Rainbow, sensing Anon's attempted withdrawal, groaned out plaintively, "nooooo *uhhhngh!*" Dash whimpered, shuddering as he withdrew, leaving only the tip of his penis inside her.

Anon reversed course and began thrusting forward, driving Rainbow's head back up against the barn wall. Using a wiggling thrust of his hips to get more penetration into Dash's burning depths, two, three, and finally four inches disappeared into her tight little marehood.

"Ohhhh! A-Ah-Anon! Keep going!" Rainbow moaned into the wooden wall. Anon wanted to oblige her but was running into the same impossible resistance he had moments earlier. Moving his hands from Rainbow's mane and tail, he gripped either side of her ass-cheeks and placed his thumbs on her sopping labia, trying to pull them apart as Dash's body resisted his sexual invasion.

Finally, after more grunting, stretching and thrusting, a squelching and embarrassing high pitched '*plbrttt*' of air escaped from Rainbow's marehood... the grip around Anon's cock had been too tight to let any air trapped in Rainbow's vice-like depths out. He instantly felt the suction on his penis go up exponentially as his cock expanded into the vacuum left by the departing air letting him sink another inch into Rainbow.

This high-pitched 'queef' wasn't missed by Rainbow, who blushed visibly brighter and squealed, "ohmygawsh dude, I'm so embaras- *unf* mmmm!" but she quickly forgot what she was saying as she felt Anon's fat cock rearranging her insides with each new throb and thrust. Her arching head and neck were mashed back into the wall as one of Anon's powerful hands gripped her neck's mane and drove her forward, the power of his movements sliding another inch of thick shaft deeper into her than she would have ever thought possible.

"Holy Celestia you're BIG *squee*!" Dash squeaked, without even knowing Anon was only slightly over halfway in.

Reaching forward, Anon grabbed the metal hitching pole on either side of where Rainbow's chest was being mashed against it. Gripping tightly with both of his hands for added leverage, he used his arm strength to thrust deeper into the little pegasus's vice-like entry in a series of short, aggressive, staccato hip thrusts. With each heave an agonizingly small amount of Anon's organ would slip further into Rainbow's hot depths.

Rainbow tried to cry out for mercy from the onslaught but found herself interrupted each time Anon's forceful penetration would bump her chest into the post... and bounce her head into the wooden barn wall.

"Ano- *mf*... An- *ungh*... Ah-An *unh*... Anon *bump*... the AnnnRGHH...!" Rainbow grimaced as the 8th inch of Anon's cock slipped into her and the head of Anon's dick finally slammed against the entrance to her womb. Her lithe body had now done almost all it could do incorporate the massive invading entity into itself, stretching and extending Dash's vaginal canal and releasing as much lubricant as a poor little pony could muster... but it had still reached very close to the zenith of its capability.

The uncomfortable mix of the pounding, deep cervical ache with overwhelming surges of pleasure left her completely unable to speak coherently. Desperate, Rainbow instead began merely yelping as each thrust slammed up against the gateway to her womb again and again.

Anon wasn't remotely aware of the delightful agony he was subjecting Rainbow Dash to... he was completely on autopilot now, unable to slow himself as all his muscles exerted, ached and strained to stuff himself into her fully. With each small retraction he would pull Dash's body back with him from the force of her fleshy tunnel's suction to his cock... before driving her chest into the hitching pole and her head into barn wall causing wet thuds to reverberate through the barn. He was literally trying to slam her through the wall in his efforts to fully enter her small body. Her yelping moans finally seemed to reach his ears, but only drove him to plow her harder. This seeming callousness arose because Anon was only aware of the the pleasure the pegasus was feeling; he felt the mare's clitoris throb and massage the underside of his shaft and her powerful pelvic floor muscles massage his deeply embedded head. He thought she was only feeling orgasmic ecstasy.

Behind the pair's piston-like assembly of limbs, hair, sexual organs, sweat and other fluids, the barn door creaked open.

Applejack poked her head in and politely asked, "everything OK in here you two? 'Yer makin' quite a ruck- *eep*" AJ blushed as she noticed that their sexual activity was still very much underway. She quickly cast her eyes down at the floor while trying to block her view of the scene with her stetson hat. "Sorry 'bout interruptin' sugarcubes... but you be careful with her, ya' hear? She h'ain't built for... THAT 'tah be slammin' intah her!" AJ scolded, even as she began backing out and shutting the door behind her.

Anon simply looked over his shoulder at the intrusion and growled, throwing one of his haphazardly discarded shoes toward the source of the unwanted interruption.

Rainbow's yelps became a moaned as she watched the shoe sail toward the rapidly shutting door and bounce harmlessly to the ground. Something about knowing one of her best friends and fiercest rivals had seen her being so manhandled, so bred, so fucked, so brutally dominated that some hidden part of her competitive spirit was broken and her body reacted physically.

Call it Equestrian magic or simply a case of internal flexibility, Rainbow's body found some way to lengthen her internal vaginal canal, her abdominal muscles straining and shifting to allow for that final inch to slide into her. There was a moment of pure clarity amidst this rampaging storm of passion, like the calm in the eye of some sexual hurricane, as Dash finally felt her lover's hips hit her rump... felt her labia slide past his hilt to collide with his groin... felt his heavy testicles bump against her clit and swollen mons pubis.

Almost as quickly as it had come, the moment of stillness passed; a massive wave swept through her, starting from the very depths of her gripping marehood, where Anon's cockhead still squished itself against her aching, resistant cervix. It rippled from that deep point out in all directions, little sparks of electricity racing down each branch of her nervous system, racing out to the finest nerve fibers in her outermost extremities before rebounding off of those thin ends and racing back to her already fragile and vulnerable amygdala.

"I'm cum-, I'm cummin-, I'm cumming agaiinNnnnn *hng*!" Rainbow choked about before beginning to spasm, her mind now a noisy cacophony of electrical activity, cascade after cascade of sexual explosions detonating all throughout her central nervous system. To protect itself, her mind had no choice but to begin shutting down non-essential functions. Dash felt her vision becoming fuzzy, the wall in front of her seeming to be getting more and more distant as it retreated to the end of a long black tunnel, her breath came in shorter and shorter gasps as her vision finally faded to complete blackness.

Yet Dash wasn't scared... instead, her last thought as she passed out was a dreamy-drunk thought about just how wide Anon was stretching her out before she went completely unconscious.

Anon felt Rainbow go from spasming to slightly limp in his grasp suddenly. However, Dash wouldn't fall to the floor. Her tail was still whipping back and forth in uncoordinated frenzy, and her legs had locked in a steady, wide stance, holding the mare upright against the wall. Anon noticed almost immediately that she had passed out on her feet, like a punch-drunk boxer, her well-honed muscle memory sufficient to keep her body 'in the fight' in this sexual battle, even though Dash's higher order senses had completely checked out. Still, the sudden loss of her consciousness gave Anon serious pause and caused him to halt his thrusting.

"Dashie...? Dash!?"

No response came as fear and adrenaline began to surge through Anon's veins. "Holy shit! Dash! Wake up! DASH!"

The last plea came as he lifted her limp head from its loosely hanging position, one hand under her muzzle and another holding her mane as he tried tapping her lightly on the side of her snout to rouse her...

Anon breathed a deep sigh of relief as he saw her eyes groggily open, one before the other, as she blinked heavily while trying to remember where she was. In the moments that reality slowly came back to her, Anon groaned aloud because of the incredibly erotic sensation of his lover's vaginal muscles rebooting... twisting, flexing, tightening and convulsing around his still rock-hard member as Dash came back to life.

Dash abruptly nickered and was about to rear up in sudden panic. Anon reacted just as swiftly though and soothed her with a gentle hand and whisper. "Shhh... shh... it's OK Dashie, I'm here. We're here! You just passed out is all..." He said as he removed the bridle from her head and the bit from her mouth.

"Wha-what? Oh... OH!" Rainbow worked her muzzle around as the bit was freed from her teeth and tongue, her sore jaw muscles unlocking from their long-held positions. "Wait... what are you doing?" Rainbow asked, as Anon finished unbuckling the saddle from her barrel, letting it slide to the ground.

"Uhh.... shutting this show down. You just freaking flat-lined on me! I think we both should take a little rest-" Anon began, as he gripped the base of his ever so slightly less hard cock, preparing to withdraw it from Dash's marehood.

"No. Freakin'. Way. Dude." Dash growled while backpedaling and turning in a semi-circle, interrupting Anon's concerns. The perky pegasus mare's little backwards shuffle caught Anon off-balance and made him stumble backwards, as he turned in coordination with Dash's powerful butt trying to keep his feet under him to avoid falling on his ass. He was quite literally being pushed around by his cock until Dash quickly completed her little turn and thrust him up against the barn wall.

"So I run a little hot sometimes. There's no way I'm letting you out of this barn until you fill me up with a hot load of human spunk!" Dash ground her ass backwards into Anon's groin, her hips pivoting and twisting, making Anon groan aloud as new angles and sensations ran through his re-hardening shaft. "That is... unless you're a little filly who still wants to tap out..." Dash snorted playfully with a nasty grin directed over her shoulder at Anon, her competitive spirit coming into play.

Anon felt his lust returning at the childish goading that was so characteristic of the Rainbow Dash he knew and loved. He grinned back at her and slapped his hands to her ass, gripping her butt tightly with his hands which removed her smug smile as she bit her lower lip. "Sorry, just who was it again that was ready to tap out a moment ago, my little filly?" he teased.

"Now just hold on there, bud..." Dash growled as she began pistoning back and forth onto him, slamming 4 inches of Anon's cock in and out of her squelching cunt in a pistoning motion and bouncing the human off the sturdy wooden wall. "I'm in the driver's seat now." Dash braced her front hooves against the floor and increased the pace at which she was spearing herself on his meat.

As tempted as Anon was to simply lay back and let Rainbow plow him into oblivion against the barn wall, seeing as how her powerful mare butt easily able to top even the most well-trained twerker in terms of sheer ass-grinding dominance... he knew that wasn't the reason Rainbow had chosen him as her special somepony... he had to fight back, to make this a real challenge for the competitive pegasus.

As Rainbow drew forward, pulling away to the very top of his throbbing cock head, in preparation for yet another crushing backwards thrust, Anon stepped forward from the wall, pulling into Dash with both his arms as he drove her forward in a stumble.

"I ain't givin' up that easy, bluefast." Anon chuckled as he reached forward to grab her mane and tail for leverage.

With his newfound purchase Anon drew his strong hips away from Rainbow, gathering momentum before slamming back into her. This sudden assault found Rainbow slip forward off her front two hooves; she face-planted into the hay on the barn floor while her ass remained suspended in the air, held up by Anon's firm grasp on her tail... even as a he continued to pile-drive down into her.

"Ch-cheater! If you're using your hands I'm using these!" Rainbow gave a powerful flap with her wings to draw herself back to all four hooves, and resumed her own rearward butt thrusts. With her legendarily powerful wing muscles assisting her in pistoning forward and back, she and Anon were now slamming into each other like mindless animals.

The sound of sweaty, dripping slaps filled the barn. With each retraction Anon and Rainbow would lock eyes with one another, Rainbow always looking back over her shoulder while Anon would lean toward her with a smile. With matching predatory grins they would reverse course and drive their hips into one another's. As they came together, Rainbow and Anon would close their eyes and groan, basking in the amazing feelings of being impossibly filled and unbelievably gripped respectively. Like two fierce rivals pushing each other to greater and great extremes, their thrusts became longer and more powerful with each iteration, until Anon was drawing his cock almost fully out of the little mare before slamming all the way back to the hilt, making her whole body shudder in pleasure each time his balls would slap up against her clit.

"*Huff* Why-... *huff*... haven't... *huff*... you... *huff*... given up yet?" Rainbow whined out between thrusts, her heart rate unable to sacrifice even a single breath to speak fluently to Anon, who was panting himself.

"Why?*heff*... ready to.. *heff*...tap... *heff* ...out?" Anon grunted, finishing his taunt with a little hand smack to Rainbow's left ass-cheek.

"NO WAY! Rainbow... *huff*... Dash never... *huff* gives up! *huff*" She replied with a little hip twist at the end of her shout.

"Still... *huff*... most stallions would... *huff*... be done after... *huff* after like 5 thrusts! *huff* This is just... *huff*... just... *huff*... crazyyyeeeEEEE!" Dash half-screamed, as another orgasm reached its zenith, overflowing and cascading through her body and made her tail lash itself around Anon's thigh in pleasure.

"Sheesh, bluefast... *heff* what was that... orgasm number 9!? *heff*... 'sides, I'm no... *heff* measly 5 pump chump stallion... *heff*... when you and me get... *heff*... get together, Dashie... *heff*... we'll shatter all kinds of records." He couldn't help but allow a shit-eating grin to spread across his face.

Dash moaned and rolled her eyes, partially from the subsiding throes of her latest orgasm, partially from the horrible joke Anon had just made at her expense. Still... she couldn't help but chuckle herself, as the pair continued their happy, competitive, sexual exercise.

Soon, there was little capacity between either of them for laughter or talking. They went on and on, his full length emerging from her with sopping squelched, before stuffing itself powerfully back in, causing his aching balls to slap forward and her constantly winking clitoris to throb... both mare and man found their considerable fortitudes waning. The only thing carrying either of them on at this point was the returning animalistic drives that had overtaken their senses before.

5 minutes of their renewed lustful copulation passed...

Anon had lost count of how many times he'd felt Dash orgasm on him. Each time she did, she would make some kind of verbal grunt or groan before he'd feel her powerful vaginal muscles deliver a crushing massage, desperately trying to coax his orgasm out of him. Her clenching orgasm would finish with her releasing a small spray of mare-juice, re-coating his shaft and trickling to the floor. Anon was grateful for this seemingly never-ending source of lubrication, otherwise he'd be worried about chafing and tearing with the amount of power he was still putting into his penetrative thrusts. As it was, his organ slid squishily into Dash's tight-twisting depths without any pain, just as nature intended.

That being said, Anon was surprised he hadn't orgasmed yet. He wasn't a quick shot by any means, but this encounter from start to finish was well-beyond even some of his longer solo sessions in terms of time... not to mention how insanely more stimulating it was than a gap session (or any of the drunken tumbles he'd had with girls on Earth).

Anon wasn't sure if his ejaculatory longevity was some kind of inherent atmospheric Equestrian sexual magic taking its toll on his junk, or merely a herculean effort on his part to impress his beloved little mare. Nonetheless, he could feel his orgasm steadily approaching; his balls felt heavy and swollen... no doubt the juices from what would have been multiple released loads by this point built up in his vas deferens. The urge to release during particularly incredibly hip grinds from the panting, begging, Rainbow was dizzying, but even though he wasn't resisting the urge to release, he still could not summit the final peak, stuck in an almost painful state of near-orgasm.

10 minutes of full shaft, bestial pistoning of Rainbow's marehood...

Dash's forelegs had given out a few minutes earlier from sheer exhaustion. Though the sporty little mare could run (and win) marathons when she chose to, the day's exertions had pushed her way beyond any limit that even an experienced Equestria Games athlete would set for themselves. As such, Anon was now driving mostly downwards into the pegasus's upwards facing pussy, her sopping, exhausted and squelching cunt still spreading wide as he jack-hammered her over and over. Rainbow's head was down on the ground, grinding into the dusty hay floor, her tongue out as she gasped for breath, each new thrust causing her to squeak and her eyes to flutter.

Anon could sense she was loving it, even in her utter exhaustion. He could feel her body's reactions to each little change he would make in his lovemaking; he'd change angles and rhythms hoping to drive her even more wild. She was so incredibly easy to set-off into little orgasmic fireworks, each new erotic detonation causing her to strain her neck and wings in ecstatic agony before she'd lash her tail in delirious joy.

He could feel how close he was to joining her in orgasmic bliss. He wanted nothing more than to release in her, to give in to her hungry marehood's grasping desire... to fulfill Dash's barely audible whispered begging... "*mnnn* P-please... *huf* *huf* *huf*... p-please Anon... *huf* *huf* *huf* *huf*... please sp-spray it... *huf* *huf* *huf*... spray it in me... *mmnnn*."

15 minutes of sensual, ball-slapping, heat induced, passionate love-making...

Anon had finally felt his glutes cramp and begin to give out causing him to slink to the ground with a grunt. Dash's hind-legs followed suit, having been held up mostly by Anon's dwindling strength for the past few minutes.

As Dash slumped to the floor, fully prone with her legs fully splayed out flat in front and behind her heaving barrel, Anon collapsed over top of her, draping himself across her back and gripping around her shoulders in a tight embrace.

Anon continued powerful thrusts with less frequency. Everything lustful drive was now being launched from only his hips since his knees and things were also on the ground since he was splayed over Dash. His cock was still plunging deep into her despite the new angle, Anon could feel the hardness of the barn floor on his cock through Dash's belly.

Exhausted, he pressed his forehead deeply into Dash's neck, nuzzling her while trying to rest his aching neck even as he continued to make love to her. He could feel the frothy sex-sweat everywhere on their bodies as he wrapped himself between her outstretched but exhausted limp wings. He could feel his twitching muscles and hers melding a cacophony of spasms and tired joints and limbs, yet he knew that both he and her were in absolute bliss despite their tiredness. He felt like he was melting into the blue mare's body, and that she was melting into his. Their sweaty-sticky heat was fusing them into a single organism of pleasure and loving oneness.

But why? Why couldn't he finish?

He was actually getting a little bit of performance anxiety at this point. If he hadn't been able to cum in Dash when he was fucking her from behind while she was tied up, when they were screwing each other unbound from the rear, when he was pile-driving her... he had doubts he would be able to stimulate himself sufficiently in this slower, more passionate position... and he knew that his release was the only thing that could give Dash the relief that she so badly needed.

Dash's pussy had stopped having separate, powerful jerking orgasms, and now seemed to be in a state of constant, slow, milking orgasm. Her squeaking had died off to a loud purr that he could feel in his chest as much as he could hear it in his ears.

What could he do? He could feel his energy running out completely, even as his balls yearned desperately for release. It was then that he heard it, so softly that he thought it was just Dash breathing at first.

"I... I do l-love you Anon..."

"What?" Anon asked lazily, not believing what he heard, rolling his head forward against Rainbow's neck to see that her straining with all her might to turn her prone head toward him.

In a still very quiet voice, barely moving her lips, Dash whispered, "I love you, dude... I-I know you know... so I never say it... but..." Her eyes brought his face slowly into focus, revealing that they had the beginning of tears forming in them.

Anon felt a surge of energy from what could only be of inherent magic origin, woven into the very air of Equestria. "Dash, I love you so much, please. Please just look at me and say what I think you just said."

Dash used the last bit of her strength to twist her head toward Anon's, locking her beautiful indigo eyes with his, revealing little streams of tears now running freely from their corners.

"I freakin' love you Anon, OK!?" Dash angrily squeaked, her big soulful eyes pouring into Anon's soul.

Something deep within Anon felt unlocked, released, unbound. Starting in his chest, he felt a huge outpouring of energy, as if his heart were growing two sizes larger.

He squeezed the little blue mare in a tight hug as hard as he could, with every last bit of his strength, as he simultaneously thrust deeply than ever before into her willing, grasping marehood, the tip of his penis kissing her cervix and poking ever so slightly inside her womb.

The rush of magical energy roiled down his body and into his balls, finally triggering the release that both of them so desperately awaited.

Dash's eyes opened even wider as she stared deeply back into Anon's eyes and her pupils dilated when Anon's already fat cock throbbed and swelled inside her to its largest size yet. She could really feel the strange mushroom-like head embed itself against her cervix, lodging itself in place with Anon's urethra peeking inside her uterus, a prelude to what she knew was coming.

Just before the unstoppable cascade began, she twisted around and leaned into Anon's stunned face and planted a deep, hungry kiss on him.

The torrent blasted out of Anon's dick, splattering into Rainbow's vagina with heavy, thick ropes of semen. Like an expanding fire-hose, a small ripple ran through Anon's shaft with the surge of his spunk through his glans and out his urethral openings before it spattered directly into Dash's fertile womb.

As the first rope landed inside the fleshy, protected garden of Rainbow's reproductive system, the much sought after chemical mixture of semen, testosterone, prostate fluids, and magical essence exploded throughout Rainbow's expectant biochemistry.

Instantly, her marehood walls contracted in, grasping, clenching and milking Anon's 9-inch penis in a rhythmic massage that would leave Lotus and Aloe's skilled hooves in the dust. Suckling all along his throbbing, fleshy pole, it coaxed shot after shot of ejaculate from Anon.

"*Mmmmmmmm* *smack* I love you, so much!" "*smack* me *mmmmnnnn* me too!" The two lovers broke their kiss for a moment mid-mutual-orgasm to profess their love once again, before diving into another kiss to sate their powerful thirst for one another.

Ten, eleven, twelve... Anon's hips were bucking in small thrusts as he continued spraying into Rainbow. The satisfaction of emptying his swollen testes was indescribable. Whatever force or magic had been holding him up must have caused him to store up several orgasms worth of spunk. That same power seemed to be drawing more from him than he thought possible as his ejaculations were only becoming thicker and larger, even as he passed his sixteenth spurt.

"*MMMMMMMnnnnnnnnn*.... oh my gawsh that feels sooooo gooooooooo......" Rainbow broke off her kiss and began moaning to the ceiling before her eyes rolled up in her skull and she gave out her loudest whinny of the evening, her cutie mark seeming to almost glow. She thrashed about, managing to buck and twist underneath Anon as he held their embrace with all his remaining might, trying to keep pumping his fluid into her and not be thrown off.

A moment later Dash's whinny and her glowing effect finally subsided and she lay her head back to the ground. Dash had never experienced anything like this, it was like doing a sonic rainboom, using her element, having an orgasm, and something much, much more, all rolled into one. She could feel her soul, her purpose, her loyalty being fully satisfied, bound to the man emptying himself inside her.

Anon began to groan loudly as he humped into Dash uncontrollably, feeling the end of his orgasm nearing. As he passed twenty heavy spurts into Rainbow, she was finally filled entirely both womb and vagina. Semen began squelching out over her still erect, extruded, fat clitoris, spurting out from where it still throbbed tightly against Anon's fat cock, which otherwise was totally plugging the mare.

With a final grunt and impossible squeeze of his groin muscles Anon felt the last ejaculate stream squirt from his hard cock, even as more semen splattered out of Rainbow's gripping, thirsty vagina adding to the puddle of sex-juices beneath them.

Totally emptied, Anon slumped off the resting Rainbow. He was still inside her but now lay on her left side, cuddling her as he planted a soft kiss on her forehead.

He heard Rainbow whisper softly in response. "Love ya'... love ya' so much, big guy...." before she drifted off into a happy, exhausted sleep.

Anon stayed next to Dash, softly stroking her mane, before he felt his own strength leaving him. He felt a pang of heavy worry as he realized he was passing out naked in AJ's barn while still balls deep in her now sloppy pussy. He struggled to hold onto wakefulness, to pull himself back to consciousness to sort things out before he passed out, to be found by a member of the Apple family (hopefully not Apple Bloom) in so revealing a position... but his strength was failing him. He too had gone way past his limits, and was dangerously close to heat exhaustion.

Just then, the barn door swung open once again, and a familiar orange pony trotted in with a large basket, hurrying quickly to his side before hovering over the prostrate pair.

"Well, shucks Anon, right good drubbin' yah' gave her, dincha'?" She chuckled, beginning to unload the basket she'd brought, revealing towels, pails of clean and soapy water, bottles of spring water, first aid kits, a blanket and ice packs.

"*huf* AJ... *huf*... th-thank... *huff* thank... " Anon tried to speak and made a pathetic attempt to reach for a towel, before being intercepted by the earth pony mare.

"No no no, you stay right there, stud... Shucks, it's any good farmpony's duty tah' take care of her breedin' stock, afore and after." Anon was about to protest that it would be weird to have her clean up after him, but AJ quickly laid a hoof on Anon's chest, pushing him back so he remained laying on the ground. If Anon was being honest, a part of him was more glad than embarrassed she was here to help, as he barely had the strength to keep his eyes open to see AJ's ministrations, let alone argue against her seeing him naked and Rainbow in her sex-tousled, disheveled state.

After taking a quick moment to assess Rainbow and Anon visually (her nose had tried the olfactory assessment only for her face to blush and her muzzle to scrunch up). AJ placed a couple of small white bandaids on little scuff marks and abrasions she noticed on Anon's knees and Rainbow's chest and wings.

She then pulled out a moist hand-towel and reached down to where Rainbow and Anon remained connected. Before Anon could resist she carefully and deftly gripped his softened but still chubby and erect penis and began extracting it from her friend's marehood. Anon bit back an objection and merely blushed in burning embarrassment as he felt AJ's gentle, soft underhoof on the base of his shaft. That blush turned a brighter shade of red as she slowly pulled inch after inch of his large cock out of Rainbow's love tunnel, before the head caught in her opening. AJ whistled in awe.

"Always suspected you were a big 'un... But I expect this next bit will be especially messy, stud." She said with a little wink and continued methodically pulling and coaxing his cockhead out of Dash's body.

Anon could feel her other hoof pulling on Rainbow's tightening lips to gain a little more room for his swollen head to slip out, which it finally did with a loud *schlorp*... followed by the loud spattering sounds of two *plops* as a good bunch of his seed rushed from Rainbow in two noisy splurts before her lips could tightly seal themselves once again, as they tried to hold every bit of his genetic material inside her.

"Holy Celestia..." AJ whistled, "seems you've got the plumbing tah' match the pipes, Anon." AJ tried to keep up her nonchalant tone as she carefully set aside Anon's long, softening, soaking penis and reached in with the moist hand-towel to clean up Rainbow's back side.

With one bucket of clean water and one bucket of warm soapy water, she worked diligently to give a complete sponge bath, only stopping now and then to inspect some small bruise or mark as she wiped down her blue pegasus friend.

The washing was very complete, as she wiped down her neck, mane, back and wings... before tracing down under her barrel to scrub her chest and bell, smoothly rubbing her sticky teats. Anon watched with a dry mouth as AJ carefully traveled the hand-towel under Dash's sweaty dock, around her tight little asshole and all along her haunches. Wringing the towel out and re-wetting it with the warm soapy water, AJ pulled it carefully along her tender, swollen pussy-lips, cleaning much of the frothy sex juices left all over her rear from Dash and Anon's lovemaking. Finally, she tried as best she could to part her friend's lips and clean just inside her body. Satisfied that she'd done all she could, AJ took out a fresh towel and used the clean water to towel off some of the soapier areas.

"Sheesh, Anon... poor girl's gonna have trouble sittin' down fer' weeks!" She scolded as she looked at her friend's swollen but clean backside.

"Din't I tell 'yah tah be gentle-like?" She shook her head as she placed a couple of ice-packs in strategic locations to reduce future swelling. "Stallions!" she threw back her head in frustration as she lifted Dash's sleeping head carefully, tipping a small bottle of spring water chock full of magnesium and other electrolytes into Dash's throat. "Seems even 'yew human stallions can only think of satisfyin' one darn thing once y'all pop outta 'yer sheaths..."

Anon would have awkwardly scratched the back of his head and avoided AJ's glare... if he'd had the strength. Instead he tried shakily to reach for one of the discarded towels in an attempt to cover himself. At this point, he had pretty much nothing to hide from the orange farm-pony, but his ingrained human cultural habits still demanded he cover himself up in front of Applejack.

"Oh no yew' don't!" AJ said, trotting over to him, once she had finished re-hydrating the sleeping Dash. "I said, it's mah duty to take care of both of yah... the mare and the stud."

Without missing a beat, AJ took a clean hand towel and soaked it in the warm soapy water, before lifting Anon's leg and reaching down behind him and to his sweaty taint and balls, lightly scrubbing and rubbing underneath him, inspecting closely and making sure she wasn't missing a single sticky spot or mare-juice coated section of his skin.

The warm cloth felt incredible as it was worked over and around his butt and legs, his lower abdomen and armpits, out to his arms and in between each of his fingers. AJ gave him a warm smile as she gently wiped his sweaty hair and brow with a new hand-towel, almost caressing his face before finishing with a little *Boop* on a his nose. With so little strength, Anon was totally under AJ's control... the sensation was so strange: it was like being a little kid again, receiving so complete a sponge bath.

AJ paused and changed the towel once again, then gave Anon a smile and a wink, before saying, "only one spot left sugarcube... 'yer real lucky - I hear a Los Pegasus mare would charge a stallion a shiny bit for this kinda service... 'n I wouldn't do this but 'fer a good friend even for all the bits in Canterlot"

Anon thought he noticed a bit of a blush on her face as she reached down and took hold of his penis. Running the clean, warm, soapy rag over his balls and pubic hair, she scrubbed out all of the sweat and dried sex juices from the jungle of the hilt of his dick. Holding his hardening (he couldn't help it!) penis, she slowly ran the rag up the shaft and to his head. He could see AJ staring at the sight in rapt attention, her hooves squeezing and rubbing with the rag, and using the soapy runoff as an excuse to stroke him directly with her pillowy underhoof. His cock quickly passed the chubby stage and had gone right back being to nearly erect once again... sort of a rubbery three quarters erection.

"Woah there sugarcube, 'yew just don't know when to quit do 'yah stud?" AJ chuckled as she blushed and tried (but failed) to avoid Anon's gaze. She delicately pulled back his foreskin and brought the re-wettened rag back up. Anon noticed she gave a furtively quick sniff to his head before re-applying the rag and carefully running it under the hardening ridge and to the delicate frenulum. Anon sighed and felt the final throbs bring him to full mast while AJ toweled him off with a dry rag, finishing with what felt like a few free hoof pumps for good measure.

"Whooowee, that Rainbow took all ah' this, huh?" AJ said, as she leaned back and admired her handiwork: a clean, rigid, dry 9-inch cock.

"Welp... 'fraid you're in no state tah' continue, anyhow sugarcube..." AJ said, breaking her gaze and gently placing his hard cock back against his belly before she helped shift Anon so that he was spooning with Rainbow Dash.

Fussing about the sleeping pair, she made sure the floor they were on had soft, clean hay and they were both well supported with pillows for their well deserved rest.

Pointing to his erection as he snuggled in with Dash, AJ chuckled, "just get 'yer beauty sleep and Dashie should be able 'tah 'take care of 'yah' in the mornin'..."

AJ tossed a warm blanket over the pair as Anon snuggled in with his little Pegasus love, his erection wedged between Dash's butt-cheeks and poked through her wispy tail. AJ planted a kiss on Dash's head and trotted over to the nearly sleeping Anon. With a smirk, she smooched a cute little goodnight kiss on his forehead as well while reaching down and giving his cock's head a little squeeze through the blanket, "but if she ain't up 'fer it just give me a holler' and I'll take good care of yah!'..." her look turned a bit sultry as she winked at him... "it's my duty after all..."

Quickly escaping to the door with more than a hint of embarrassment that she dared to say such a cheesy line, she paused after opening the door and looked back at the sleeping couple before thinking and adding with a shout: "O-Only if Rainbow was OK with it though! I ain't no herd-wrecker!" She left, shutting the door.

Anon could hear her one last dry from AJ as she returned to the farmhouse, loud enough that even the neighbors could likely hear, "good work though, STUD!"

Anon chuckled in amusement and bewilderment.

To be honest, although AJ was also a hot mare... he wouldn't care a lick if Rainbow said no to her little proposition. Anon snuggled into Rainbow's mane, hugging her chest from behind and inhaling her scent deeply as he fell into the peaceful sleep of the utterly content... he knew had everything he ever needed in his arms already...

The End


Author's Note

WOW.

OK!

Done!

So I totally broke all of my rules for my new account with this story... This account was supposed to be all about quick one-shots for any pictures on Derpibooru that gave me the inclination... I'm talking 4K-5K words max...

But... I didn't count on you wonderful readers pouring in... suddenly getting my works featured... responding with tons of great comments... PMs and plenty of favorites and follows.

I had to increase my efforts to earn this consideration your given me!

So, next thing I know I'm writing a 9K word chapter... No story, no filler, just pure clop and romance... and then giving it two to three re-reads, edits and even a partial re-write!

The things you darn readers make me do! :pinkiecrazy:

So couple wrap up points... going forward it seems like opinions are still 10-1 against colored text voices... so those will be going away for the next few fics at least. For those who liked it, j might try it again on another fic in the future.

ALSO: I am going to try to keep things shorter and sweeter as well. That doesn't mean that everything will be wham, bam, thank you ma'am style clop though...I did notice that many of you appreciate a little bit of romance, even in pure-clop style fics, and I've tried to accommodate... I'm hoping I didn't go too far and make a horrible abomination/amalgamation but managed to inject some cute moments in with the eroticism.

Finally, a little request for you!!
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You've heard of the the three R's? Well I'd like for you to give me a rating on my three R's in the comments if you've got a moment to do so! Readability (did the prose ever have you scratching your head, thinking... wait a second what the heck just happened here? Were there any jarring grammatical or spelling errors that impacted your experience?), Raunchiness (did you like the sex-scenes? Enough description? Too much?) and Romance (Did you like the mushy-bits? Did I fully respect your waifu enough? Did you at any point make the sound: *d'awwwwwww*?)

Your comments and feedback are like fuel for my writing fire!!! Even the crazier 'constructive' types. Please feed my feedback addiction with a couple of quick numbers if you don't feel like a big comment!

Readability: ? outta 5
Raunchiness: ? outta 5
Romance: ? outta 5

Hopefully this will help me tune and improve future stories!

Cheers all!

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