Author's Note

Another request, and likely inferior to or repetitive of the first chapter.

Sunset's Swirlie

Sunset Shimmer was sitting at her desk, waiting impatiently for the class to end. She was wearing her short, gray shorts, and she was fidgeting, for she needed to pee very badly. Class was almost over, she could hold it until then.

Adagio Dazzle had challenged her to a soda drinking contest at lunch, which she had thrown to Sunset, and was hiding out in the bathroom ever since, waiting for Sunset to come.

While Sunset crossed her legs in the classroom, Adagio felt pressure in her bowels, and grinned evilly. She stepped into the stall, in which she had already peed into the toilet for just under a minute due to all the soda she had drank, and not flushed. She wanted this to be as bad for Sunset as possible.

Adagio pulled down her pants and sat on the toilet...

...

The bell rang. Sunset felt a little more relieved already. She immediately stood up and ran to the bathroom, both hands on her crotch.

As soon as she was in the bathroom, she ran toward a stall, but Adagio tripped her and she fell face first to the ground. Adagio picked her up and took her into the stall.

"What are you doing?" said Sunset. "I have to go!"

"I know," said Adagio.

Adagio positioned Sunset's head above the toilet, giving her a full view of the water. It was very yellow and had a lot of poop in it.

Sunset struggled to get free of Adagio, but Adagio forced her head into the dirty toilet. Sunset closed her eyes and held her breath, trying to avoid getting any of the toilet's contents into her mouth. This was so disgusting.

Her head had been submerged for five seconds when her shorts grew warm and wet. The experience had been too much for her.

She was still peeing when Adagio flushed the toilet. As soon as it started filling up with water again, Adagio released Sunset. Sunset was panting and coughing. Her hair was soaking wet and very dirty, and her shorts had a big wet spot. Her face was red with embarrassment.

Just then, Pinkie Pie came in, took one look at the scene, and hit Adagio over the head with a rubber chicken, knocking her to the ground. Pinkie hiked up her skirt and sat on the toilet, her feet on Adagio's back to keep her on the ground. Pinkie made sure Sunset could see her, and began peeing through her blue panties into the toilet, sighing of relief and giggling. She must have really needed to go, for she peed for just under two minutes.

Sunset felt a little less embarrassed at Pinkie Pie having seen her in this state, if she was willing to pee in her panties in front of her.

Then, Pinkie stood up, grabbed Adagio, dunked her head in the toilet, and flushed it. Once the swirlie was done, Adagio was coughing and spluttering, her hair soaked and smelling of pee.

"I knew I should have listened to Aria," said Adagio, and she ran off.

"She'll never do that to you again!" said Pinkie Pie cheerfully.

"Thanks," said Sunset, still a little embarrassed but feeling better.

"Come on, let's go hit the showers so no one can tell."

They made it to the showers without anyone seeing the state of Sunset's hair or shorts, and Pinkie turned on the showers. Sunset thoroughly enjoyed it, washing all the pee off her, and the traces of poop out of her hair.

"Isn't anyone gonna wonder why we're soaking wet?" said Sunset.

"I'll just say I took a random shower and convinced you to go with me," said Pinkie.

No one would believe for a second that she wouldn't, though Sunset.

...

Adagio returned to their house.

"Heehee, what happened to your hair?" said Sonata Dusk. She sniffed. "You smell kinda funny..."

"Quiet," said Adagio.

"So, you tried to give them a swirlie," said Aria Blaze.

"I did, until Pinkie Pie ruined everything!"

"I told you that would happen."

"There's a snake crawling through your pigtail."

Aria screamed with fright and wet her pants. She checked her pigtail for a snake while Sonata laughed.

"That wasn't funny!" Aria headed to her room to change, while Adagio felt a little better now she'd taken out her frustration and humiliation on someone.