A bat in pony fur

by Germanbrony2001

Rating: teen
Tags: Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Main 6, Drama, Fluttershy
Length: 1807

Fluttershy is again a vampire but this time she want to share it with her friends

(Takes place one week after Bats!)
Twilight convice Fluttershy to help searching for artefacts in the old castle. Fluttershy found one, one to overcome her shyness. And she want to share this gift with all her friends.

Published 2017-07-19 23:40:11 UTC
Last updated 2017-09-18 20:24:38 UTC

Batty again

„A-are you s-sure about this Twilight?” Asked Fluttershy nervous.

“Yeah, Fluttershy. We will only search the Castle of the two sisters for artefacts. What could possibly go wrong?” Replied Twilight in an attempt to calm Fluttershy down.

“Your probably right. I mean it’s only the Everfree Forest the *gulp* most terrifying forest in all of Equestria. No, I-i don’t want-t to go.” Stutter Fluttershy.

“Oh, come on Fluttershy. The other will come too.” State Twilight.

“O-okay I will-l come.” Fluttershy hoped Twilight was right. The journey through the Everfree Forest was uneventful. The Mane 6 arrived at the old castle in no time.

“We should split up. Fluttershy, how about you searching the lower levels?” Suggested Twilight. Fluttershy whispered an “okay” and tiptoed to her part of the castle to seek. The dark dusty rooms were empty if you searched for artefacts. After a filled eternity Fluttershy found finally a room, where a great Rubin laid on a podium.

" This-s could be an artefact!” Fluttershy told herself. As she looked around she found countless bats hanging from the ceiling. She creeped quivering to the Rubin. As she stands right before the podium she recognized an inscription. Unfortunately, Twilight wasn’t there to encrypt this. Anyways she would simply take this Rubin and return to her animals. It was a long time ago she could truly relax. It wasn’t a week ago this terrible Vampire-fruit-bat incident happened. After she have taken the Rubin she could hear a soft and calming Voice.

“Have no fear take him. Don’t look at the inscription.“

„I can’t read it.“

„Forget that I was talking.“ During this conversation Fluttershy looked after the voices ‘owner. After some time she assumed the voice was coming from the Rubin. I hope Twilight know about voices in heads more than me. “Yes take tit and give it to your friend.”

“Of course.” Fluttershy whispered. Her eyes shimmered in an dark red ton not unlike the Rubin. As she tried to touch the Rubin it turned itself into dust. Fluttershy heard the voice now in her head.

“Ah, finally a new body. Fluttershy allow me to improve your body and soul.“

„Of course Mistress.“ Answered Fluttershy monotonously. All of a sudden Fluttershy became tired and laid on the ground and slept.

The other Main 6 came together outside the castle in the begging sunset. Have anypony saw Fluttershy?” Asked Twilight.

„No, but I will seek her now!“ Stated Rainbow Dash and flew in her typical speed back in her castle before anypony could say something.

Fluttershy awoked with a strange feeling. “I have to-“

Change

“-find my friends.” Fluttershy was confused about the train of thoughts. She stretched her wings. They felt stronger than usual. She gave a confused look at her wings. Instead of her normal feathery wings she stare on leathern Batwings. They looked almost like the wings she has at the Vampire-Fruit-Bat incident or how her friends had described them. She found after a short search a puddle. Fluttershy saw her wings wasn’t the only thing which has changed. Instead of her soft pony ears now they were formed more like bat ears and the blue of her eyes had change to a crimson red. All so she possessed now two thin fangs. She looked terrifying at the puddle. She started weeping as she heard the voice again

Accept!

“No, I am a monster.“ Tried Fluttershy to resist. The voice simply didn’t care.

Accept!

“I’m a Vamppony” Stated Fluttershy as she accepted the voice.

Thirsty!

„I’m so thirsty. I am thirsty for apple juice?“ Asked Fluttershy.

Blood!

„I am thirsty for blood!” Sayed Fluttershy with an evil grin as images of herself, her fur blood-soaked, while she drinks blood from other ponys.

Friends

“I should start with my friends.” Asked Fluttershy.

Change

„I will change them! MUHAHAHAHAHA!“ Fluttershy laugh evilly.

Author's Note

So it begins
(Please this is my first story and english isn't my native tongue so if you find any mistakes or grammar issues please tell me.)

Interlude

Interlude: Settling in

The next morning

Rainbow awoke after a long nap, even by her standards. She felt weird. She tried to stand up and after a while she
succeed . “Shh. Everything will be soon okay my servant.” Said a voice, which sounded to Rainbow like an angelic choir.
“If I can stay with you my queen it will.” Rainbow replied.
“Oh, your cute. You know you don’t have to be soo submissive. If you see me as your queen you can keep your personality.” Her queen stated. Rainbow felt a buzz and she felt more in control.
“Huw. Thanks Flutters. This was weird. So, what exactly happen?” Rainbow asked.
“Your welcome. Well, I found a red Rubin and when I touched it there was a voice in my head which told me to convert you and this is.” Flutterbat told Rainbow.
“Wait convert?”
“Yeah.”
“But I haven’t changed!”
“Are you sure?”
“Yeah, I mean my wings feel stronger and I can hear water dropping but this doesn’t mean I have bat wings and fluffy ears, right?” Flutterbat chuckled. “I have, haven’t I?”
” Yeah, you have.”
"I hate myself sometimes.”
“It isn’t that bad really, I mean you have to drink blood sometimes but you see some cute things, like you hypnotized. And besides don’t you want to be like your queen and help her convert our friends?” Flutterbat said giving a hint.
“Yes, your right and what shall be my name. You got a new name from Pinkie one week ago but me? And what is our next target?” Asked Rainbow.
“That are both good questions.” Said Flutterbat while thinking of an answer.

(Hint, Hint)

“Ach, neues Kapitel fertig. Jetzt kann ich mir meinen Apfel gönnen.” I said while trying to get to my apple.

*Hiss* „Ah, Flutterbat!“ I cried as a certain yellow Pegasus jumped out of my Pc trying to get to my apple. While drawing my pugio, she changed back to her normal form.

“Please don’t h-hurt me. I know I can a little bit batty-y but I won’t bite you!” She said while trying to hide behind her mane.

“Aw, how can anyone be mad at you for a long time?”

“So, you won’t hurt-t me with this thing?”

“Of course not. Anyways why do you are here? Wait don’t say it Twilight?” I asked.

“Yeah. So, what are you doing?”

“I’m writhing on my fanfiction. I have an idea. You help me answer questions/ help me with my fanfics and I do my best to help you?” I asked.

“Y-yeah. But under one condition-n no clops, o-okay?” She asked.

“Yeah sure. See you next time, bye.”

“Bye”

Author's Note

So yeah I am back, yay. As always I hope you like it (it isn't a full chapter but hey)! So questions, tips and issues are appreciated. Hope you like Fluttershy entering the scene. And I have a question for you: I will definitely write stories with german persones, how should I write: 1 just the german text. 2 the german text and the english in ()? See, ya.

The fastest bat on earth

Rainbow Dash flew through the endlessly seeming corridors of the old castle. After a half hour of search, she begun to feel annoyed. Where in this Celestia forsaken Place were this Pegasus. She continued searching until she found a chamber its ceiling covered with bats. Mysteriously this chamber was lit even if the rest of the castle was abandoned 1000 years ago. Rainbow Das walked into the chamber because there might be Fluttershy in. Her entrance hadn’t gone unnoticed. Out of nowhere she couldn’t move. She could fell the Stare. This made her confuses. Only Fluttershy could do the Stare. But why would Fluttershy, the kindest pony in Equestria, do the Stare on Rainbow? “You may wonder why you can’t move.” Said a familiar but deeper voice.

“Fluttershy?”Asked Rainbow puzzeld.

“Yes and no, Dashie. I am your friend but better. And I want to shear this gift with all of our friends.” Stated Flutterbat as she stepped into the light. Rainbow realized with fear Fluttershy was looking again like a week ago during the Vampire-Fruit-Bat incident. Except she had now an evil grin on her. Rainbow tried to look away from the beautiful eyes of the Vampire the key word “tried”. The were to beautiful to her. Shortly after this she felt pain at her neck but she didn’t care. The only thing important to her was those beautiful eyes. She could hear a choir of angles. „Open your mouth.” Rainbow open her mouth. She had followed a command from her mistress! She could feel a smooth fur at her lips and a liquid. “Drink!” She gorged every drop of the copper tasting Liquid. It tasted wonderful. She felt tired. „Sleep!“ Rainbow Dash complied this command with joy, It was her last „free“ thought. She sank to the ground and fell asleep ASAP.

Flutterbat was pleased. She had expected more resistance from Rainbow. She wouldn’t complie of course. She looked at her first servant. She slept peacefully. So she was improved, too. It was hard to stop her inner desire. She had to do better next time. She had nearly killed her. She want to improve her friend not kill them. But she would rest before she would improve the next of her friends, Fluuterbat hung herself with her tail on the ceiling and considered who of her friends she should improve next.

Outside had Lunas ‘night begun. The 4 remaining ponies were still waiting for the old castle. “Okay. Two of our friend are in an old, dark and abandoned castle. Most likely is there a monster, who has captured them. We should split up and search for them.” Said Pinkie Pie. The other nodded in approval and split up.

But after a long time of searching they didn't found Fluttershy nor Rainbow Dash. "Ah think we won't find them, Twi. Ah think we should call it a day." Appeljack said even if she wanted not. They had to go to Ponyville before the big predators came out.

"I know but I don't want to abandon them. It was my fault after all." Twilight whined.

"It wasn't your fault, darling. You couldn't see this was coming." Rarity tried to calm Twilight down.

"Tomorow is another day. Then we will find them." Pinkie Pie said. They could hear a howl. They tried their best to come as fast as their hooves could carring them to Ponyville.

Author's Note

The the last Paraghraph Pinkie Pie randomness of doom
(I hope you like this story it will sleep for a while. I have some other story I will post now so until next time)