Equestria's New Legend

by DylantheArtist

How (some) Legends Start Pt. 2

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Dylan's dream, unknown area, 1st person

"Hey son, come over here for a second would ya?" I heard someone who sounded just like my missing father, but that can't be right, can it?

"Sure thing dad!" The words came out of my mouth before I could even process what was happening, and so too did my feet think for themselves as they were already headed for that man's voice. 'Why is my body reacting on its own, and why does this all seem, familiar?' As I thought this my body had already turned the corner leading to that man's voice, and as soon as I turned the corner I saw him, my father, "What is it dad?" As soon as I said that I remembered, this was around the time my father disappeared. But, why am I suddenly remembering this now, I haven't had this dream in years. Just as my father was about to say something, I felt a tug pulling me from my dream, and all I could think at that moment was confusion.

Real world/equestria, present time

I woke up with one hell of a headache, I mean it was bad, like imagine when you wake up on a Monday and you have one of those aches in the back of your head that makes you the worst type of person, now multiply that time 10 and you'll understand, "Ow, god damnit, this really frickin' sucks." I said as I rubbed the back of my head, only to get, "GAAAH!" You guessed it, a stabbing pain where my hand just was. After a moment of consideration I've come to the conclusion, "Fuck! Don't touch the back of your head. Fuck that hurt." As I said this I took a few brief moment to take in my surroundings, as I did this I also noticed that I was in some type of hospital wing. And as I was looking around the door was suddenly burst open with a panicked... Horse, lady, nurse? 'Okay, now I know I'm still dreaming, because there's just no other explanation for this. Wait, if that was really true then I shouldn't have felt that kind of pain when I woke up.' I thought to myself as the nurse went from panicked to relief.

"Well I'm glad that you're alright, you really gave me quite the scare their mister... " I heard the horse nurse.

Now that I a better look at her, I'd say she stands at an average height of 5'6. Also she's wearing a white nurse outfit, not much to say there. Her hair, well from all the animes I've watched, her hair is nowhere near as deeply colored as those anime chicks, the color is just, let's just say it's both lighter and brighter than any light pink I've ever seen, not to mention her blinding white fur that makes the two pairs of colors just, too bright, well, at least for my tastes. Now her eyes, they were the same blue as mine, well not exactly the same blue, again everything about her is, bright, ugh, her eyes are multiple times brighter than my own, her eyes are more of a light sky blue where as mine are more of a royal blue in my right and a slightly lighter shade in my left, not that she could tell. Anyways everything about her just said, 'don't look to long or else I'll blind you with my colors of death', I know I'm a dork. Also her tail is also the same color as her hair, and her equine like ears the same as her fur. As I was staring I noticed her face turned a little shade of red, and a little bit sheepish.

I cannot begin to describe to you how, weird, I felt at that moment, I mean I've lived with humans my whole life, and most would assume my attraction to be, well, human. And I'm pretty sure that my attraction won't change just because I hit my head extremely hard, no matter what anyone says otherwise, but, strangely enough, she looked more human than what you'd expect from a, uhm, horse-lady. Still doesn't make me feel any less weird for pretty much 'examining' her with my eyes, and I'm pretty sure that she's dying from embarrassment judging from her tomato-red face.

"Guh, s-sorry about that I didn't mean to 'check' you out per say, i-it's just, you look a lot different from what I'm used to is all." I said in a surprisingly quick manner, but I'm surprised that she completely understood.

"I-Its alright, you don't look like you're from around here at all, so it isn't that surprising." I heard her say in what I'd assume an embarrassed manner.

"Thanks for not misunderstanding, oh, and my name's Dylan, Dylan Rayson miss-,"

"O-Oh right, my name's Nurse Redheart, and that's quite an unusual name you have there mr.Rayson." I sat there in silence for the next few seconds contemplating what's happening right now.

"Well this has been nice and all misses horse lady but-"*SLAP* I sat there with the left side of my face felling like it got hit by a metal glove, holy hell she has some wicked strength behind her frame, but, "WHAT THE HELL LADY?!" I said with as much restrained anger as I could at the moment.

"I don't care if you're a patient or not, but I am not a whore." I heard her say with even more restrained anger than my own, which I could tell was also greater than my own anger.

"Wait, since when did I call you a whore?" I said with nothing but confusion replacing my rage.

"You just called me a horse, now I don't know who taught you that kind of language young man, but I will not tolerate those kinds of words in my-"

"Wait, so, you're not a horse? Then, what are you?" As soon as I said that I could have sworn that the air turned a few degrees colder, but when I saw her face is when I truly regretted interrupting her.

"I'M A PONY YOU IDIOT!"

Oh, oooh, oh, 'Well, shit'.


Author's Note

I'm extremely sorry that this chapter took so long to come to light and I hope that you all don't hate me for it. I've just been extremely busy with school lately, but these upcoming breaks are coming up so I'll be able to work on future chapters, and I promise that I won't neglet my story any more. Anyways I hope that you all enjoyed the 2nd chapter, I will now be accepting suggestions for the story like OC's, storyline that changes due to Dylan, and how the original mlp storyline changes due to Dylan. I will also need some beta-readers and an editor, I would sincerily appreciate it if any of you could help me out with these, then they would help speed up the progress of this story a lot, those who are interested please let me know by sending me a private message that you're interested in helping in the development of this story, and I will reply back. Now I will set the limit of beta-readers to set number at around 10-15 beta readers at the max, soplease if you're interested please let me know and I'll lend you access to the unfinished chapters and letting me know what you think. Anyways thank you very much for sticking with me forsolong and not losing hope in me, thank you and stay 'as awesome as you wanna be'.

Also I'm starting to go back and fix the issues with the dialogue that someone pointed out, so please give some credit to Orion Light for helping me realize my mistake in dialogue. And with this I hope that you all will be able to understand the story better :)

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