Newbie Dash

by FrantheHorsegirl

Rating: teen
Tags: Alternate Universe, Sad, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rainbow Dash, Tragedy, Gore
Length: 1144

my ending to Newbie Dash

my ending to Newbie Dash with a change to the story.

Published 2017-07-27 17:50:06 UTC
Last updated 2017-07-27 17:50:06 UTC

Newbie Dash

Rainbow Dash’s POV

I can’t believe one moment I was soaring in the sky the next I was lying in a pile of cotton candy. I could feel a blinding pain in my wings. I hear screams from all around. The feel of a warm liquid dripping down my back. My back starts to go numb with the pain. Then my hole body has a light tinging sensation because somepony is holding me in their magic. The screams and shouts gets quieter and quieter until all sound fades away. My magenta eyes start to close but I do my best to keep them open but my eyelids keep falling over my eyes. My vision keeps getting blurry and slowly my eyes completely close.

I wake up to hear the sound of beeping. The pain on my back is still there but not as bad as is was when I crashed. The Doctor walked thou the door in with a disheartened expression on his face. He looks at me surprise to see me a wake. “Rainbow Dash do you know why you are hear.” said the Doctor.

“I remember cotton candy” I said with a small smile.

“Well you were flying in the Wonderbolts show when you crashed.” the Doctor said.

“So why am I hear” I said looking around the room.

“Well, Rainbow Dash when you crashed you broke both of your wings and the way you broke them you won’t be able to fly again.” said the Doctor with a grim expression on his face. I just stare at him but then the clear tears ran down my face, as quite as a mouse, then there is the sound of hoof steps walking in the room. I look up and see that it’s the rest of the Wonderbolts team.

They all looked angry and annoyed except from Soarin. “What was that about CRASH, do you think it was OK to try and do something like that.” spitfire shouted.

“I’m so sorry” I said in a quite voice trying to control the crying.

“You are officially no longer a wonderbolt” spitfire shouted a gen. She and the other Wonderbolts walked out of the room.

“Sorry about what happened to your wings, Rainbow. I’ve got to go, I try to talk to you later, bye.” Soarin said in a soft and worried voice just before he walked out of the room to catch up to the rest of the group. I still just sit there crying no longer trying to control it.

“Why did this happen to me.” I say with pain in my voice.

I turn to try and look at my wings to see how bad it is, but what I see makes my hole body go ice cold. My wings aren’t there. As soon as I relies that my wings are gone, I stop crying. Everything goes numb. I don’t know what to do because all of my dreams of being a Wonderbolt had just been ripped away and thrown down the drain. And I can’t fly which was one of the most impotent things in my hole life.

* 2 days later*

I slowly opened my eyes after hearing a small noise. My eyes adjusting to the bight light in the room, I look up and see fluttershy walking into the room. “Hi Fluttershy” I said quietly.

“Hi Rainbow” Fluttershy said in her calm and soothing voice. “Is there anything I can do to help you after what happened?” Fluttershy said a bit louder than normal.

“Can you get my stuff from my house.” I said.

“I’ll do that for you later for you.” Fluttershy said. “Is there anything else you want?”

“Do you know where I can stay after I got out of hear?” I said.

“Applejack is fixing a old wooden hut she found in the woods 1 year ago.” Fluttershy said.

“Thanks Fluttershy.” I said.

“Going to be ok Rainbow.” Fluttershy said.

*5 days later*

“Well Rainbow Dash your ready to go home” said the Doctor.

“Yea, I’m ready to go” I said “bye”. I slowly walked down the brown dirt path to ponyville but before I got there, I turned right and continued walking until I got to the small wooden hut. Fluttershy had kindly put my stuff from my old house in the corner of the hut. Applejack did a good job fixing the building up. “Home, sweet, home” I said sarcastically when walking in to the building. I am lucky to have friends like them. Just wish I didn’t try that stupid trick, I should of known I wouldn’t work.” I say. I started crying a gen. I just crawled over to my bed and just lied there.

*2 days later*

“Rainbow Dash, are you in hear.” I hear Fluttershy say. As Fluttershy walked in thou the door, her hoofs were making a soft clip-clop sound on the wooden floor. I was crying under my covers on my bed.

“Rainbow why are hiding from everypony?” Fluttershy says worriedly.

“What does it look like, I just got my dreams crunched and my wings cut off.” I say angry and distraught with more tears rolling down my cheeks.

“We both know that you can’t stay in hear forever, going outside will help.” Fluttershy replies.

“But what if I want to.” I say even more upset.

“Ok, that’s it, you are going to get out of that bed. Applejack can you please get Rainbow out.” Fluttershy said in unusually loud voice. Applejack walked in, looked at Rainbow Dash and it looked like Rainbow was going to put up a fight.

“I am not getting out of this bed.” I shout but me being weak from not eating and the crying, Applejack easily got me out of the tear stained bed. I just gave up after that because I Knew I wasn’t going to win, so Applejack put me on her back carefully and started to walk towards ponyville and twilight’s castle with Fluttershy.

When we got there I just lied there on Applejack’s back not bothering to do anything. A minute after we got there Fluttershy went in the room with the map in it and Applejack put me on the floor in the middle of the room. All of our friends came out of the room worried and anxious expressions on there faces. “Rainbow you can’t stay in there forever.” Twilight said.

“RD, please talk to us.” Applejack said.

I still just lie crying. “I can’t, I can’t, I can’t, I can’t” I said it over and over a gen.

“What are we going to do.” Twilight said to the background of crying and wailing echoing thought out the castle.

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