Submissiveness

by Tomcat

Rating: mature
Tags: Alternate Universe, Human, Twilight Sparkle, Anthro, Applejack, Mrs. Cake, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Spike, Romance, Mr. Cake, Sex
Length: 3781

Spike feels his days of hypnosis are coming to an end. But not before he enjoys the company of one last honest friend.

Spike's journey of sexual exploration with the obedience spell has proven fulfilling. Only one more friend can bring his adventure to a close. Let's hope it goes well.

Published 2017-08-27 21:40:05 UTC
Last updated 2017-08-27 21:40:05 UTC

The Last Command

This is chapter 1 of Submissiveness. Make sure you have read Submissive, Compliance , Compliant, Obedience and Obedient first.

Spike awoke to the sound of loud thumping on the floor. The morning sunrise broke through the window of Fluttershy’s cottage and helped slowly lift Spike out of his blurry slumber.

“ThumpThumpThumpThumpThumpThump”

Spike looked to see an impatient looking white rabbit standing next to an empty bowl, rudely tapping its foot as he eagerly waited for Fluttershy to get up and feed him.

Fluttershy was sprawled across her cushioned bench with a blanket draped over her. She awoke like a hungover college student as she sat up to investigate the annoying thumping. The blanket fell, revealing her total nakedness. Never seeing her owner naked before apparently startled Angel, sending him running out of the room. Served him right.

Fluttershy was unphased by Angel fleeing the room. Still under the spell, she had no commands other than to sleep. As for Twilight and Rainbow Dash, they were sleeping on the couch next to Spike, lovingly spooning each other as they made the most of what little room they had. Feeling unable to sleep any more, Spike quietly got up and went into the kitchen to get some cereal. Fluttershy didn’t have any of his favorite, Applejacks, cereal. Instead she had some organic whole grain looking stuff. And some bird seed.

“Meh… I’ll just have some tea”.

As Spike started heating the water and fetching the tea packets, he had some time to think. Maybe it was time to put this whole thing to rest. He had already fucked so many women with the help of the obedience spell. And every new girl he entranced added more risk of getting caught. Not to mention, nobody had been able to write letters to Celestia about their friendship lessons because they were too busy getting banged in a field or having lollipops shoved up their ass. Well not anymore. After days of lustful adventures, Spike had decided to go back to the library, and find a way to reverse the spell!

Later, once Spike finished drinking his cup of tea, he promptly got dressed and headed out the door, leaving everyone alone to sleep in.

It was now 7:45 AM and all the shopkeepers and produce stand owners were getting started for the day. Sugarcube Corner was being set up without the help of Pinkie Pie, for obvious reasons. It probably wasn’t the first time Mr. and Mrs. Cake had to run the shop alone. They knew how unpredictable Pinkie Pie could be. Lucky break for Spike.

Spike had almost made his way across the market before he was stopped by a familiar voice.

“Howdy Spike.”

Spike turned to see Applejack standing in front of the feed shop, with a bag full of what he assumed was chicken feed.

“You’re up early.” Applejack continued.

Spike was surprised to see Applejack in the market this early. It was nothing new for her. She had been an early riser from a young age. There was something charming about her in the morning glow that made Spike take extra notice of. She had on a pair of tan shorts and a white shirt with a leather jacket that kept her warm in the frost of the early morning. She looked rugged and professional and yet, strong and sexy.

“Whatcha up to?”

“I’m heading over to the library to help Twilight with a spell”.

“Twilight huh? I haven’t seen her, or anyone else, for quite some time now. Startin’ to wonder if everything's alright.”

“Oh yeah everythings fine. It’s been a quiet couple of days I guess.”

“Well I best be gettin’ to my chores on the farm. Ya’ll take care Spike”.

Applejack threw the bag of feed over her shoulder and went about her business. Spike couldn’t help but steal a glance at her from behind as she walked away. Her long legs were toned from years of hard work. Her lower back was visible under the jacket with her arms raised over her shoulders. She wore a pair of brown leather cowboy boots that fit perfectly around her calves. And her entire outfit was completed with her iconic cowboy hat. Spike stared for so long he almost didn’t notice the shopkeeper’s gaze of judgement as he did not approve of Spike’s not so subtle butt staring. Spike Awkwardly averted his gaze and went along his way.

Moments later, Spike couldn’t get the thought of Applejack out of his head. He had never thought about her this way before. Maybe the existence of the obedience spell had given Spike the ability to think about his friends in a new light. It would be so easy now. All he had to do was find an excuse to show up at Applejack’s farm with Twilight. And boom he could fuck her too. Spike was walking extra slow to the library at this point, not really wanting to arrive, until he came dead in his tracks.

“Okay.” He sighed out of frustration as he turned and walked the other way, back to Fluttershy’s cottage. If he reversed the spell now, he would never get this opportunity again. He had to do this one more time.

He eventually arrived to pick up Twilight, whom at this point, was peacefully burying her face in Rainbow’s cheeks while Fluttershy watched. They were all still in a half sleep while the spell was slowly taking them over as they awoke. Rainbow was biting a throw pillow to mask the moans of ecstasy Twilight was skillfully giving her. Spike hated to bring this morning pillow fight to an end, but he had a cowgirl to fuck.

“Cmon Twilight we need to go.”

Twilight emmerged from Rainbows slit as she gasped for a lustful breath of air. Panting before and after, she replied, “Okay, master.”

Rainbow continued moaning as the vibrations of pleasure were still emmenating through her. Fluttershy was still staring at Rainbow as she slowly continued to service herself. It seemed that sex was always on their minds while under the spell. Whether the master was present or not. There was no doubt that the orgy would continue after Spike and Twilight would leave. Come to think of it. God knows what Rarity and Pinkie Pie were up to back at the library.

In no time, Twilight was dressed and ready to go. Spike didn’t bother with a goodbye as he walked out the door since they probably wouldn’t hear him anyway.

“Okay Twilight, so we’re going to visit Applejack. Try to act natural okay?”

“Okie dokie Spike.”

Well that was easy. Spike thought about all the times that this would have been useful in the past. He still wasn’t aware of the full potential of the obedience spell. It seems it not only had the potential to command tasks to complete, but it could also alter behavior patterns; That was good to know. He felt more comfortable walking next to Twilight now. She had less of a hypnotized look and more of a natural stride that helped them fit in as they walked across town.

“Yes, we’re in the clear. This is gonna be awesome.”

Spike’s joyous demeanor was cut short when Mrs. Cake quickly and suddenly confronted the two of them.

“Excuse me Twilight but have you seen Pinkie Pie? I haven’t heard from her in ages.”

Spike’s heart jumped up to his throat as he quickly thought of something to say. Before he could speak Twilight answered on her own.

“She’s back at the library assisting with a friendship problem.”

“Oh wonderful. I just wanted to make sure she was okay. Thank you Twilight.”

‘Impressive.’ Spike thought. Twilight didn’t seem like she was under a spell at all. And she made up a lie right on the spot like a pro. He was sure he didn’t have anything to worry about now!

Feeling victorious, Spike and Twilight made their way up the winding dirt path that lead to Sweet Apple Acres. Spike could see Applejack carrying hay into the barn. He didn’t see anyone else around, so he quickly walked across the field and followed her inside through the open barn door. The barn had four stalls on both sides with a ladder to the loft which held most of the hay plus some barrels. The walls were littered with farming equipment, and bags of feed were placed all around. Applejack tossed another bail onto the pile before turning to notice Spike and Twilight.

“Oh hey y’all. I’m surprised to see you here. What can I do for ya?”

“We thought we’d stop by and pay you a visit.” Twilight chimed in.

“Well it’s always nice to have company. Been awhile since I’ve seen you Twilight. What have you been up to?”

“Oh just spell testing with Spike, Rarity, and everyone else.”

“So that’s what ya’ll have been up to. Spell testing without me? What kind of spells?”

“Obedience spells.”

Spike was a little off put with that last comment.

“Obedience spells? What in tarnation have you been doing with obedience spells?”

“UHH Nothing Twilight we haven’t been using obedience spells we’ve just been turning frogs into oranges. Hehe yeah that’s it.”

Even with Twilight acting natural, Applejack could smell a lie a mile away.

“Is everything alright Twilight? You seem...different.”

“Yes, we’re great. As a matter of fact it would be a huge help if we could test a few spells on you.”

“Well I really should be gettin’ back to my chores but maybe later I cou-”

Spike took a careful step forward and kissed AJ right on the lips. He figured he might as well see her reaction before casting the spell on her, a missed opportunity with the others in his opinion.

“Wha- Mmmm”

Spike was surprised by how long AJ had permitted him to kiss her. By now girls would have usually resisted or get all confused but she didn’t move away. Heck, she might have leaned in a little bit. Spike released her from the kiss as he waited for a reaction. Applejack was standing there mystified by what had just happened. She was not at all angry with Spike’s sudden advances. More blown away with his boldness and sudden change in his behavior around her.

“That was...okay.” Applejack said, feeling awkward with Twilight still watching them.

“I...this...I don’t understand. Exactly why did you just kiss me Spike?”

“Because I’ve been wanting to for a long time now.”

Applejack noticeably blushed. Feeling a loss for words, she squeezed her way around the two of them and headed for the barn door.

“I really should be gettin’ back to my chores now.”

“Now Twilight!”

Twilight charged up her horn and shot the spell at Applejack. She instinctively tried to dodge the purple beam and succeeded. Then made a break for it across the field. Spike and Twilight followed her out of the barn until they had a clear shot. Twilight launched another spell towards her which hit with excellent precision. Applejack stood confused for a moment before standing solemnly out in the field like a mannequin. She was dazed and captured by Spike. Now the fun could begin.

“Whew that was close.”

Spike took a quick look around to make sure nobody was watching. Her family must have been back in the house, which was a few hundred feet away. Too far to hear anything. And nobody was in the apple orchards either, Big Mac must have been somewhere else. It was just them in the fields with a few cows and some nearby chickens in the run. Spike took a moment to look Applejack over. She had on the same wardrobe he saw her in back in the market. Minus the jacket. But she put on a pair of black leather chaps to protect her legs from the mud. Other than that. She was still dressed the same.

“Okay Applejack. I want you to take all your clothes off.”

“Yes, master.”

Applejack got to work first removing her cowboy boots, then her chaps, then her hat, shirt, and shorts which she layed out onto the ground until only her panties and bra remained. She had on a pair of painties with a red sripe flannel pattern with a matching bra that quickly disappeared onto the ground along with the others. Revealing her toned breasts and southern pussy! There was an obvious tanline where her underwear had been. She must have been tanning in her underwear. Maybe even naked. Her breast appeared to have gotten some sun too. Spike couldn’t wait to get his hands on her, but noticed that he had stopped her right in the middle of her chores. She had pales set out to milk the cows, bags of feed was leaning on the fence, and the fields desperately needed to be plowed, among some other things. If Applejack didn’t finish her chores then her family wouldn’t be able to sustain their farm. Spike decided to let AJ finish her chores for now and to save the naughty stuff for later.

“Okay Applejack. I want you to finish your chores like you normally would. And when you’re done. We are going to fuck.”

“Darn tootin’”

Applejack started to put her clothes back on, but not all of them. She ignored her bra and panties and went straight for her chaps. Then she put her boots back on, and then her gloves, and finally her hat. She didn’t have a need to put the rest of her clothes on because she was instructed to fuck Spike after working. They would only get in her way. So, with only her affects, she went back to carrying the rest of the hay into the barn.

Spike watched with growing excitement as AJ went about her nude business. After moving the remaining bales of hay into the barn. She went over to the cows which were waiting patiently to get milked. She positioned a pale under the first cows udders, then knelt down beside to milk them dry. Spike was turned on by her unusual comfort with outdoor nudism. He could clearly see her pussy and anus as she was kneeling down. He tried to let it play out, but because of her nudeness he couldn’t take it any longer!

While AJ was milking the cow, Spike was gonna milk her! He got down behind her and grabbed her tits, making sure to grasp both her nipples as he did. AJ did not mind this distraction, she just went about her chores as she was instructed to. Feeling kinky, Spike ran his fingers and thumbs down the length of her nipples as if he were milking them. Alternating from left to right as if she were a real cow. Applejack played along with this and leaned forward until her breasts were positioned over the pale. Needless to say, no milk came out, as AJ was not lactating; But she acted as if she was. She moved her arms onto her knees as she willfully presented her breasts out for Spike to milk. Left and right she leaned over the pale. Eagerly waiting for the imaginary milk to come out. Willfully allowing her nipples to be fondled and pinched. Just like the cow in front of her.

Spike was thoroughly enjoying himself, that was until his fantasy was cut short when he heard the obvious sound of a door opening nearby that rattled him to the core. It wasn’t the barn door since Twilight was the only one in there and she hadn’t been instructed to move. It must have been the door to the house! One of the Apple family members must have been home. Spike had seconds to think before someone walked in on him fondling a barely dressed Applejack. He didn’t want to say anything because that would give away his position. In the spur of the moment, Spike hightailed it away from the barn and started sprinting toward the apple orchards. Spike was afraid someone might see Applejack naked, and he didn’t want to have anything to do with it. Feeling that playtime was over, and a new rush of panic setting in, he started trotting down the dirt path back to Ponyville.

Meanwhile, back at the farm, Granny Smith was making her way into the barn for a basket of fresh picked apples. Lucky for Applejack, she wasn’t exactly known for her eyesight. She walked within ten feet of AJ without noticing anything out of the ordinary, she then mosied on passed Twilight who was sullenly standing in the corner of the barn. It was no surprise she didn’t notice Twilight or AJ. She could have walked through a nuclear testing plant and thought her pies were burning. Then after collecting a few dozen apples, she promptly turned around and went back to her business.

Spike, on the other hand, thought he’d dodged a bullet. He was panicking as he ran back into Ponyville, trying to blend back into the crowd in case somebody found Applejack in her ‘not so natural’ state. What was he gonna do? He couldn't reverse the spell without Twilight. And Rarity couldn’t cast the spell because she didn’t know it. Then he remembered Twilight’s spell book was back at the Golden Oaks Library. All he had to do was get the book, and Rarity back to the farm to reverse the spell before anyone notices AJ doing her chores without underwear on. If they haven’t already. Having no time to waste, Spike stepped lively through the now busselling crowds of the Ponyville marketplace. His heart almost jumped out his throat when someone shouted his name through the crowd.

“Well hi there Spike!”

It was Mr. Cake accompanied by his wife. They were standing out front their bakery, watering the flower bushes.

“Gaaah!... oh um… hey guys…”

Spike really didn’t want to stop and chat. He had much bigger things to worry about right now.
“How is the friendship problem coming?” Mrs. Cake asked.

“The what?”

“The one Pinkie Pie is helping with.”

“Pinkie Pie?... Oh yeah Pinkie Pie. Yep she sure is helping us out with that friendship problem hehe boy what a helpful girl you got there.”

Spike was nervously looking over his shoulder for a reason to leave the conversation. Nothing in the world would prepare him for what he saw next.

Through the crowd, behind shoppers and fruit stands, was a determined looking terminator-esque figure making a Beeline for Spike. It was Applejack, parting the red sea of people as she walked unphased through the crowds of gasping, and traumatized shoppers in her fully exposed state. She must have finished her chores which meant it was time for her to carry out phase two of her command, Fuck Spike.

Spike stood like a deer in headlights as he saw Applejack quickly closing the distance between them. He didn’t want to be associated with her public display of indecency. Spike panicked as he took refuge inside Sugarcube Corner, Abruptly ending the conversation with the Cakes as he did. Mr. and Mrs. Cake were off put by Spike’s strange behavior, but not as surprised as they were when a half clothed Applejack casually strided passed them. Needless to say, Mr. Cake stared longer than he should have, earning him a smack on the cheek from his wife.

Spike correaned up the stairs like a racecar up to Pinkie’s room, hearing AJ walking close behind him. He wanted to give her a command, but that would reveal to the Cakes that her altered state was Spike’s wrongdoing. He had to evade her until he made it back to the library. Luckily, Pinkie had a plethora of possible exits installed in her room. There was a slide that went down to her secret party planning bunker, which was private but still a dead end. There was an open window which went out onto the roof. Possibly an escape but right in eye shot of everyone watching outside. Then there was a trap door Spike had never seen before. Feeling out of options, he chose the trap door which conveniently lead down a metallic tube that spit him out of a hinged floor panel outside with a mailbox on it. Thank god for Pinkie’s unconventional means of leaving her house.

Spike didn’t look back as he ran quickly to the library, it was finally in sight. He was nearly in earshot of Rarity who he was ready to be given the command to reverse the spell on Applejack. He was a mere thirty feet from the door as he started to yell for his maiden.

“Rarity! Get the Spellbo- CRASH.

Spike’s sentence was cut short when a well aimed rope caught him around his legs. Applejack pulled him kicking and screaming back towards her.

“AAAAA RARITY!”

Rarity was just out of range to hear his desperate cries. Spike did what he had to as he started to command AJ to stop. But the words never left his mouth before a handkerchief was shoved in his face. It seemed Applejack wasn’t the submissive type. Spike had been trapped in a prison of his own creation. Applejack promptly tied his wrists and removed his pants. Not caring about the crowd they were attracting. Spike was both turned on and humiliated as Applejack started orally pleasuring Spike while a slew of shocked onlookers observed the events carry out. Spike closed his eyes and tried to visualize them making love in a private place. But the shocked chatter from the crowd made it impossible. Surprisingly, it wasn’t killing his boner. There was something hot about it. It was new territory for him. Applejack finished thoroughly sucking on his cock and proceeded to slide it into her soaking pussy for everyone to see. Applejack didn’t care in the slightest. She passionately rhode Spike like a professional pornstar. Giving him no room to struggle as he had no hope for escape. He had to endure every waking moment of it. After what seemed like an eternity of fucking, Spike finally felt his load leaving him. It was an explosion of humiliation and kinky shame that undoubtedly completed Applejack’s final command. She removed Spike from his bondage and took the handkerchief out of his mouth. The puzzled crowd was still pining for an answer. Spike was about to wrap this whole mess up before a blinding light of magic emminated in the middle of the crowd. It was... Princess Celestia?

“Spike, we need to talk.”

Author's Note

Special thanks to Sterlit for collaborating.