Crime and Punishment (Rewrite/Clean Version)

by LegionofPony

ALTERNATE Chapter 3: Acquittal and Dismissal (Not dark; Happy/Cloppy)

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Author's Note: This is simply part of the original chapter three with only the cloppy and happy bits included for your 're-reading for the clop and/or happy ending' pleasure.

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"C'mon Applejack, y'almost got it! Ah can see his head crownin'!" Big Mac encouraged, hearing an acknowledging grunt from Applejack.

Applejack was in labor now, stretched out on her side in her barn on a bed of hay as she delivered her foal as her ancestors had before her. Ever since 'the incident' over a month ago, Applejack had vehemently avoided hospitals, preferring natural or magical remedies or treatments over organized medicine. Now, as she was surrounded by the father of the foal – her brother – as well as her five closest friends and little sister, Applejack pushed with all of her might as she felt another contraction, feeling as the new life was slowly being passed out of her.

As she heard a gurgling followed by a cry once that pressure within her had ended some minutes later after a particularly long contraction, she collapsed and rested as she drowsily looked downward. As she saw a sandy-blonde mane and a brief glimpse of deep orange fur she couldn't help but smile. Soon after, after the foal had been cleaned and being found completely healthy, Big Macintosh held out a small cloth-swathed form to her, a small tuft of that same sandy-blonde mane sticking out. "Here ya go Applejack...meet yer son." Mac said, a pride swelling in his chest as Applejack held her hooves out and accepted her foal.

Applejack smiled. "Ya mean our son. Our son, Burgundy Apple."

"Eeyup."

As Applejack moved the receiving blanket aside, she smiled as she saw an adorable little colt looking back at her. His coat was a deep red-orange, his obvious lack of wings and horn easily identifying him as an earth pony. His mane was a sandy blonde like his father's, his eyes an emerald green that the two parents shared. Applejack instantly felt as her heart was claimed by her little foal, and she only too gladly gave it.

"So, mah husband, Ah think we did a good job on him." Applejack said weakly, giving an equally weak smile to accompany it as she was so drained from the birth.

Ever since the abolishing of the falsely-implemented so-called 'Taboo Laws' and all other related illegally-implemented laws, and the dethroning of Princess Celestia for that among many other crimes the previous month, it was now legal for brothers and sisters to be in relationships and to have sex the same way anypony else was, including in designated public places. Applejack and Big Mac had been betrothed the very next day after the abolishment. The abolishment didn't change some ponies' views on incestuous, interracial, or interspecies relationships being wrong, with ponies having that idea rammed into their heads for the past nine hundred years, but it made their opinions legally irrelevant.

"Ah think...mah next heat...we need t' head to the park. Ah've always dreamed of showin' everypony else how much Ah love mah brother and husband... how perfect we are t'gether. What better way than to show 'em that than by how willing Ah am to bear his second foal, an' for all to see?" Applejack asked, only getting a small smile from him.

"You worry 'bout recoverin' from havin' this foal first, then we can discuss havin' more and just how we will, yeah?" Mac asked, getting a soft nod from Applejack as she held her little colt to her chest, now humming softly a tune her own mother used whenever she was upset. As he started fussing, and with some help from Twilight, he was placed to his mother's teat as he started to take in his first meal. "Ah ain't against havin' more though, handsome as this'un came out."

Twilight looked down at the beautiful little foal, unable to help it as tears came to her eyes as she remembered how he just might not be here right now if things hadn't turned out how they had.

"What's th' matter Sugarcube?" Applejack asked as she saw her friend crying, before Twilight quickly wiped away the tears.

"It's, uh, nothing. It's just, he's such a handsome little colt...almost reminds me of my own son from Mac, Crimson Dawn. Thanks again for him..." Twilight fibbed, getting a knowing look from Applejack, but with it being dropped after that.

"Eeyup." Mac replied simply.

"Um...after he's done eating...would it be OK for me to hold him?" Fluttershy asked quietly, "I've gotten really good at handling foals since I had our foal Butterscotch. Um...speaking of, Mac, would it be possible to give me another foal this upcoming mating season? I'm sure Butter would love a brother or sister to play with..."

"Eeyup, we'll discuss it later." Mac said, before focusing back on his sister and son. After all, Applejack had agreed to let him keep studding for other mares so long as she came first and foremost to him, and Mac agreed to let Applejack have sex freely with other stallions so long as she used protection and he was the only one allowed to give her foals. Neither had a problem with that arrangement.

"Oooh, me next!" Pinkie asked significantly less quietly, "in holding the cute li'l' foal, AND getting studded by Mac! I want a cute fuzzy little baby too!"

"Yeah, Ah don't mind them holdin' our foal, do you bro?"

"Not at all, mah love. Not at all."

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It was nearly a year later, with Burgundy and Apple Bloom playing together in another field with Granny Smith watching them, that Applejack and Big Mac stepped out into the grass fields of Ponyville Park. Big Mac could smell his sister's fertile scent, his penis already dropping from its sheath as he was called by that scent to breed his mare. "So," Big Mac asked, "Y' ready t' make yer dream come true; to show everypony just how much we love each other?"

"Ah've...never been more ready in mah life Mac. Get on mah back and rut a little brother or sister for Burgundy into me, like ya did fer Fluttershy 'gain. Knock me up with our second foal, just like you gave her and Pinkie one," Applejack replied, flagging her tail over her back for all to see, Mac completely hard by this point.

"Only too gladly, mah wife..." Big Mac whispered into her ear, before mounting her without further ado, getting a loud moan from her that caught the attention of the other couples having sex nearby, or those others simply enjoying a meal and a show of the others having sex, "...y'ain't gotta be quiet no more. Let everypony hear how much ya love me an' mah cock."

"I love YAAAAAH!" Applejack exclaimed as she felt Mac impale her onto his dick in one fluid movement, her so wet and ready from her estrus that he slid to her core in one slick thrust. She'd never felt so much freedom before, just being allowed to be mounted and bred like this in public without fear of persecution feeling so utterly liberating to her.

They held together after that, savoring the feeling of filling or being filled, the eyes of many other ponies on the Element of Harmony as she was being given a second foal by her brother. Some of the other ponies who had been passive now mounted on their mares or mares on their stallions, a chorus of moans joining Applejack's as she felt Mac's huge cock once more sliding perfectly through her as she looked around, a shudder going through her as she saw how many eyes looked back; how many ponies could see just how much she loved her brother. "F-Faster..." Applejack demanded, and Mac was only too happy to oblige, widening his back hooves a bit to get the needed leverage.

Applejack leaned her head back as she met Mac's lips in a kiss. This was not a kiss to desperately try to hide their pleasured sounds, oh no, they let those bellow out for all to hear. No, this was a kiss of lovers as they worked to make a new life, Mac's hips now moving at a smooth, rapid pace as he bred his mare. "M-More..." Applejack demanded as she felt the pressure in her building, the burning in her womb for her stallion's seed growing more insistent, her inner muscles kneading the cock within her to try and sate it.

"Be patient mah love...Ah'll give ya our foal soon..." Big Mac teased, though the stimulation more than make his hips want to rock faster into the nearly-hot, slick, demandingly-tight walls of his sister's pussy.

"Ah...Ah want it...n-now. Show everypony...how much Ah want yer foal...gimme..." Applejack stammered out, before squealing out as her orgasm hit her and her back arched up sharply, her body going into overdrive as her rhythmic, orgasmic contractions rolled through her pussy. The eyes of everypony on her, and the promise of getting another foal, made it all so much more intense.

"Ahlright...y'win...here it comes..." Big Mac said as he felt his internal ripples kneading him for all he was worth, slamming home and meeting his fully-swollen flare to her cervix again with one firm hump. Applejack squealed as she felt him pulsing within her, then letting out a loud cry of pleasure and nearly collapsing as she finally felt as each massive glob of her brother's cum made its way up his cock, before then being launched into her womb. She could feel it all pooling there as more and more was added with each rapid throb, her womb eventually stretching a bit to accommodate the huge, unending load pumping into her.

Both ponies stayed there stock still as their bodies worked hard to conceive a foal, Applejack claiming every drop from her brother, slowly rocking her hips and keeping him deep to assure she got every last sperm. They held like that, quickly hearing the orgasmic cries of other ponies around them as more new foals were likely conceived as well, the scent of virile stallions and fertile mares mixing together alongside the scent of sated lust.

"There ya go sis...that should be enough for a foal, huh?" Mac asked, enjoying the gentle ripples that Applejack's orgasmic aftershocks sent along his cock as he remained hilted, an occasional dry pulse rewarding them as his flare kept his seed dammed in her womb.

"E-eeyup...Ah can't wait t' meet them next year..." Applejack said, before meeting Mac's lips in another passionate kiss as she felt just how much Mac had 'donated' to her, "Thank ya'gain, mah love."

Eventually, Mac slid off of Applejack's back, a large glob of his excess semen following his partially-swollen flare out. They then lay cuddled together there as they shared their afterglow, looking around at all the other satisfied ponies around them. Ponies who now knew just how much they loved each other.


Author's Note

A version of the final chapter without all the dark elements. Nuff said.

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