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A Story Told

by Lil Penpusher
After an exhausting journey on sea, Edmond Dash and the rest of his crew dock at the port of Baltimare at last. Eager to see his wife and his father, he fails to notice the voices in the shadows, as his enemies forge a devilish plot against him.

A long, exhausting journey by sea comes to an end as the Venturer, a merchant ship, approaches the docks of Baltimare. On board are ponies such as as Edmond Dash, the first mate of the vessel, and Danglarjack, an equally ambitious as mysterious mate.

Edmond in particular is grateful to be home at last. His heart yearns for his soulmate, Shycedes, a beautiful mare who had lost both her parents in a tragic incident one year ago, living her life as an orphan ever since.

But in his hurry and eagerness to meet up with both family and loved one, he turns a blind eye on those that wish him harm.

The next days will be joyful for him, that may be certain, but his enemies don’t rest, and they won’t show pity.


This story is quite obviously heavily inspired by the ‘The Count of Monte Cristo’ musical and the animatics of the musical, created by Ink Potts. This also means that most of the Mane Six are playing male roles in this story, as they did in the animatics.
This is not an exact replica of the story, however, and will vary in various places and outcomes.

Proofread and edited by the lovely 'Don't Look At My Name Bro and TwiWonderfilly

Teen
Incomplete
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Romance
Tragedy
Crossover
Sad
 
SBM

19843 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

10 Chapters:

  1. The Arrival 2017-08-01 11:54:23 UTC
    2932
  2. Father and Son 2017-08-01 11:54:16 UTC
    2694
  3. A Rising Storm 2017-08-02 14:00:57 UTC
    2047
  4. The Dawn of Evil 2017-08-03 18:57:14 UTC
    1846
  5. Until Death Do Us Part 2017-08-06 16:00:18 UTC
    1771
  6. The Stage is Set 2017-08-14 18:30:25 UTC
    1489
  7. Springing the Trap 2017-09-09 17:50:37 UTC
    2325
  8. The Trial 2017-09-18 19:34:37 UTC
    2369
  9. Taken Away 2017-09-22 20:24:07 UTC
    1099
  10. All in due time 2017-10-07 20:11:50 UTC
    1271