FlutterBat vs Big Mac

by Azrael the alicorn

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Horror, Big Macintosh, Fluttershy, Sex, Tragedy, Anthro, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 4155

Big Mac is up against his thoughest adversary yet! Will he survive the night? Or will he get eaten?

Somepony has been getting in the Apple Family Orchards to eat apples without permission.
Big Mac decides to take a nightwatch and catch the thief. But what he will find is going to be much more worst/better than he expected.

Published 2017-08-14 13:20:06 UTC
Last updated 2017-08-14 13:20:06 UTC

A sexy thief

It was a tranquil night. The sky was free from any clouds, letting the stars and the moon shining on the peaceful land of Equestria. Big Mac was sitting in the open admiring the peace of the ranch, enjoying the relaxing winds.
Yet, despite being relaxed, the muscular pony was on alert. In the last days there he and his family had noticed that during the count of the apples some were missing. Somepony had stolen some of them, probably in the heart of the night and the apple family couldn’t allow that to happen again. They planned some patrols during both day and night. Applejack would take the day, with the help of Apple bloom and Granny, Big Mac the night.
Applejack had proposed to ask for her friends to help them on the matter but in end it was decided to let them out of this matter unless the thief was something more than the Apple family could take it.
Big Mac doubted that the thief would have been that big of a threat. After all, what kind of dangerous villain would go after some apples?
Suddenly Big Mac felt a sound coming to his left, in the depth of the orchard. Without a second doubt and armed with a torch he walked into it, ready to find the source of that noise.
The farm pony was sure to be capable to take the thief on. Built by working hard on the ranch since when he could walk and lift stuff, his body was the stuff of dreams from all mares of Ponyville. Sure Bulk Biceps outclassed him on the muscle factor, but Big Mac looked much better and, most importantly, he didn’t took any steroids. One good fist and this apple-thief, whoever that one was, would get knocked down.
Big Mac was sure of himself, but the more he walked into the orchard the more he felt nervous. And felt like somepony was watching over him.
He stopped, looking around. In the middle of the apple trees it would be easy to circle around without being seen. Then he heard something. The sound of somepony sucking something juicy. Following it, he walked into a sector of the orchard less crowded with trees. And there he saw it. No, not it, her.

Sitting on the top of a branch, a bright yellow female pegasus with long pink hair, was savoring the taste of an apple. Fluttershy thought Big Mac, confused. The shy pegasus was one of the friends of his sister, why would she come and steal from them? And then he noticed something weird: the wings weren’t those of a pegasus, but ones of a bat. And her ears looked more pointy. How was that possible? Applejack had told him about that time when, to get rid of the bats that were ruining the apple family ranch, they attempted to use a spell which backfired, turning Fluttershy into some kind of vampire pony. They had managed to turn her back to normal in the end and everything seemed to go back to normality. But apparently this wasn’t true.
“What the” muttered Big Mac. Yet, despite his voice being only a whisper, it was still heard by Fluttershy. The bat-pony turned suddenly around, looking at him with narrow eye, making the muscular pony make a small jump in fear. But then her eyes widened, staring at him with an enigmatic expression. Big Mac was unsure to what to do; one part of him wanted to run to Twilight and warn her about this situation, another part of him told him to try and talk to her. Both parts had their fair points, but he couldn’t manage to focus and choose because he was too busy staring at Flutterbat body. Fluttershy was known to be one of the bustiest mare in Ponyville and even in the world. Not that the rest of her body was less jaw-dropping with long soft legs, large flank and those beautiful eyes. Because of her shy nature the yellow pegasus tried to conceal her attractive form with many clothes and bras made by Rarity to try and keep a low awareness from the ponies of Ponyville and beyond.
But tonight she was not into being humble and shy. She almost had no clothes on, with just some pants and a bra that did little to cover her enormous tits. Each of them was more than enough to cover the whole chest of Big Mac.
Slowly, Flutterbat expression turned into what could be describe into interest. Or, to be more precise, sexual attention. She licked her lips, making Big Mac shiver. And then she leaped down from the tree, going right at him. The farm pony dodged her at the last second, making her almost crash in the bushes. She got up, ruffling off the leaves and sticks, staring at the stallion yes with passion, but with also a bit of anger.

“Fluttershy, don’t you know me? It’s me, Big Mac” he said, trying to get her out of that state.

She ignored his words and step forward, making to lung at him, ripping off his shirt with her clawed hands.
The earth pony grabbed her by the arms, “Snap out of it!”. But once again his words fell on deaf ears. If seeing not-shy pegasus caught Big Mac off guards he was even less ready for what she was going to do next: she head butted.

The muscular stallion release his holds, backing away like he was in a daze, but Flutterbat had not yet finished with him. Grabbing his arms, she forced him into an hug and making her immense rack clash with the beefy chest of Big Mac; a contact that made the farmer moan in pleasure despite his best instincts telling him that this was not the best time get aroused. But he couldn’t help it.
Flutterbat pressed her breasts against Big Mac pectorals, making him feel all their generosity and softness combined with the heaviness. It was so enjoyable and yet the earth pony couldn’t help but feel that something was off by that contact.
He didn’t had time to ponder more on that, Flutterbat head butted him again.
And again.
And again.
After the third head butt she released him from her hold and pushed him away with a flex of her incredibly large breasts, making the powerfully built stallion fall to the ground like a sack of potatoes.
Despite receiving three surprisingly hard hit on his head, Big Mac didn’t felt much of a pain. Maybe it was because compared to the pleasure that it was the contact between their bodies pressed together. Or maybe it was some other magic reason. Whatever that reason may be he need it to find a way to get out of there and warn his sister, so that they may tell Twilight and the others what happened to Fluttershy.
When he finally got his full sight on he noticed the lustful stare of the yellow pegasus and noticed how she was taking off her bra and panties. Big Mac couldn’t help but admire every single curve of Flutterbat, from her long lean legs, her large flank, those slim hips that lead up there to those massive orbs that, now that hadn’t anything to stop them, looked even more impressive than before, those long beautiful hair and those eyes so big and shiny. The farmer couldn’t deny that this deadly femme in front of him looked more like a goddess than an actual pony. Heck, he already found her attractive without the need to see her in her birthday suit. Now a part of him didn’t wanted anything else but bow before her and beg like the most humble of peasant to allow her to do anything to him as long he could have the honor to feel her touch upon him. But Big Mac wasn’t a fool and, most importantly, he had been raised by Granny Smith to not let the lecherous feelings get control over him.

No, he had to fight back. But how could he get out from this situation? He didn’t wanted to hurt Fluttershy, but it was clear that she was not herself and even more clear that, whatever she wanted, she would get it, one way or another.

“Don’t make me do something I’m going to regret later” he said, trying to sound firm.

Flutterbat wasn’t impressed, and made to lunge at him. This time, rather than just dodge her attack, he circled around her and grabbed by the back. Big Mac thought it was a good idea and, probably, it would have worked better. Sure, her ass would have rubbed against his pants, teasing even more his excited male member, but it was always less distracting than those melons.

Sadly for him, Flutterbat was not easy to be submitted. She started to move savagely in his grasp and, with the help of her wings, she managed to escape. Before the farmer could do anything the vampire female flew into the air, landing on his though neck and starting to squeeze it with her long and sexy legs, cutting his breath. Quite a dangerous move, but Big Mac had learned with the fighting lessons between him and his sister Applejack to break free from such positions. Once he figured out the right place to grab and take her off his back.

And so he did. But it wasn’t as immediate as he hoped to be and Flutterbat legs grip was stronger than he expected. When he did managed to break free he found himself taking deep breaths, wasting precious seconds that he should have used to try and run away or, at least, keep an eye on her. If he did, he may have been capable to dodge her next move.

But he didn’t. Big Mac had just regained his oxygen back when Flutterbat leaped again, only mid air this time. She tied her legs around the farmer waist and, without giving him anything but a lecherous stare, she pushed her immense rack into his head, engulfing him inside of her cleavage. Big Mac released a moan of surprise and pleasure, at first too much stunned to do anything. But then he felt that, inside that warm softness that were Fluttershy boobs, he couldn’t see that much. And, more importantly, breath. He started to struggle, trying to push her off, release it from those massive mounds. But this time it seemed that his strength was being denied and every point he thought could use to break free made his hands and arms weak. His hands landed on her long smooth legs, the firm ass and her thin hips or even the very same breasts of her. By doing so he could feel his whole body starting to lose power on both upper and down side. Everywhere except his groin area. Despite his best attempts to keep calm, Big Mac could do only so much before panic started to make him do idiotic moves like muffing for air or walking around blinded in the research of somepony or something that would help him. Nothing. Soon his of breath made his already weakened legs give up, making him fall on his knees. He needed air. Flutterbat wriggle her massive breasts while making lustful whispers that, somehow, managed to reach him. He needed air. His herculean arms still searching for the right spot before they too would lost the force to stand. And finally he found it. It wasn’t a nice move but he needed air. His hands grabbed her hair and pulled with all the strength. Flutterbat screamed in anger and pain, pushing herself back. Big Mac took some breath, savoring the air which was refilling his lungs. And then he punched her. The farmer didn’t wanted to hurt her too much, but he was desperate and doubted that the vampire pony would have let him to repeat the trick. Still he didn’t put that much force into his fist, just enough to get completely free from her grasp. And it did. He got up fast, this time keeping his eyes on her. Flutterbat landed on her butt, looking hurt more emotionally than psychically, making Big Mac feel ashamed. Seconds passed and the farmer noticed that the vampire pony was still on the ground, belly on the floor, staring at him almost watery eyes.

“I’m sorry, Fluttershy” he said. He got up and offered an hand to help her get up too. And in that moment the innocent and shocked expression of the Flutterbat turned into one sly grin.

Big Mac had just noticed that that his female attacker made her next move. Using her wings to give her a great push, she delivered an uppercut to the farmer, using her knockers to knock him away and against a tree. The hit made Big Mac groggy, but it was nothing compared to what would follow. Flutterbat launched herself at him, and this time the earth pony didn’t had any time to dodge her. Her massive breasts slammed against his muscular torso, followed by a loud boing, echoed in a good portion of the apples ranch. Big Mac felt his breath being taken away just as much as his strength, while watching Flutterbat pressing her rack against him, smothering his whole torso with easy, his muscle-bound body powerless against the breasts of his female enemy. But the female vampire pegasus hadn’t finished yet. She breast pressed the farmer pectorals with so much energy he felt it actually being pushed back. And then she started rubbing them on the rest of his torso. Up and down, left and right. The pleasure that Big Mac felt was intoxicating, he could feel his male member getting more and more stiff, while the same couldn’t be said for the rest of his body. The legs were, once again, turning into gelatin and his arms were held back by his female attacker, preventing any attempts to push her back. And just when he thought that Flutterbat couldn’t make him more weak she proved him wrong. She let his arms go, using her owns to grab him by his head. And she kissed him. Big Mac felt his heart skip if not one even two beats, before starting to beat once again much more faster than before. He felt her tongue get inside his own mouth, starting to fight with his own, hot saliva dropping like a summer storm. Big Mac felt even that last bit of strength in him leave his body. With soft lips and tongue ruling his mouth, her breasts suppressing his muscles in a way that he felt them turning from solid concrete to the most malleable of clay, his arms dropped by his sides, dangling with no life in them, he was completely powerless to do anything to stop her.
After who knows much Flutterbat broke the kiss, backing a bit (but still enough to let a good portion of her breasts caress Big Mac body). With nothing to hold him up, the earth pony slides with his back against the tree, defeated. Big Mac was conscious, but he could feel how much his own body had become his prison. The pleasure that Flutterbat gave him had neutralized his self-defense.

He wondered what she was going to do next. And she toke off his pants, tore them to shreds, revealing his bulging cock. Pointy like flagpole and as hard as a mountain, Flutterbat licked her lips in anticipation while Big Mac realized what she actually wanted. Until now the farmer had thought that she was going commando on him to distract him for then plunge her fangs on his neck. But she had a different objective in mind. Knowing how powerless her victim was, the deadly femme focused on shoving his dick into her mouth and started sucking. At first Big Mac felt again an immense pleasure course through his body. As he also felt something wrong. Using the little strength that he had left he turned his eyes to look his fur and skin, noticing with horror how his color was fading, his skin turning into an ash grey. She was literally sucking both the juice and his very life out of him. And there was nothing that he could do. Except try to make the female vampire snap out of it. It was an attempt born from despair, he knew it well, but he had to try.
“Fluttershy”. Nothing from Flutterbat outside moaning of pleasure, savoring his cum, over and over again. “Fluttershy!” he tried again, louder this time. Nothing. He felt so close to the heavens door. “FLUTTERSHY!”.

Author's Note

After some months I have finally concluded the first adult rated story!
Now, there are going to be two endings, and is up to you decide which one you prefer.

Bad ending

BAD ENDING

His last attempt got nowhere. Fluttershy kept sucking him dry, literally. Without even the force to talk left in him, Big Mac laid there, silent, watching the stars above him with glassy-eyed. The last thing he felt before passing away was another great fit of pleasure.

“What a night” yawned Fluttershy, waking up, as fresh as ever. She got up from bed, dressed up, gave her animal friends food, and left home to have a nice breakfast at Sugarcube Corner. She thought that this day would have not be any different from others until she got into the main square of Ponyville. There she noticed that people looked so sad. “Fluttershy!”. Twilight Sparkle, Spike, Pinkie Pie, Rarity and Rainbow Dash made her sign to get to them. The shy pegasus knew that something was VERY wrong the moment she saw Pinkie Pie mane all flat. That, and the fact that somepony was missing.
“What happened? Where’s Applejack?” asked Fluttershy, worried.
“She’s at home, with her family” answered the purple alicorn. Now that the yellow pegasus was close, she noticed how everypony had signs of recent tears in their eyes.
“Why?”.
“Big Mac’s… dead” said Pinkie Pie, her voice cringing as if she was about to cry again.
Fluttershy felt her heart miss a beat, “No” she whispered. Big Mac was one of the most gentle pony that Fluttershy knew. He wasn’t just a pretty face with muscles, but a kind soul, always ready to lend an hand to help others and a lovable brother to Applejack and Apple bloom or a good son to Granny Smith. “How did it happened?” she asked.
Before Twilight replied she turned to Spike, telling him to go inside Sugarcube Corner and take something for himself. He nodded, but his expression remained sad and shocked. “We’re trying to keep the thing under control” she explained, while watching the young dragon leaving, “Big Mac was found dead this early morning in the apple ranch. Something or somepony must have attacked him and, at the first chance, it killed him by sucking the very life out of him. From his… lower parts”. The purple pony looked quite awkward while saying so.
“Because of this we’re trying to keep the last part a secret of hours. The folks in Ponyville don’t need to know that details. Sure as hay not the kids, especially not Apple bloom” added Rainbow Dash.
“I… you’re right” Fluttershy nodded, still wrapping her head about what happened. She didn’t knew why, but she felt guilty as heck. “But what now?”.
“We will search the responsible of this crime, and stop him before others gets killed” said Twilight Sparkle, “But for now, we must go and go cheer up Applejack and her family. They need support to get over this tragedy”.
Nodding, Fluttershy followed them to the Apples farm to pay respect to the fallen farmer. Little did they knew that the one responsible for Big Mac death was right there with them. But it was only a matter of time before this secret would be revealed. But for what would happen then, is up to anyone guess.

Good ending

GOOD ENDING

Just when Big Mac was preparing himself to have this attempt fail and to accept his inevitable demise, Flutterbat stopped sucking him dry. She released his cock from her mouth, her expression shocked and scared. When she raised her eyes to his, the earth pony knew that she was back to herself, at least mentally. Fluttershy got up, staring at him with disbelief, her latest actions fresh in her memories. Without making a sound she flew away, without even watching her back, leaving a breathless yet alive Big Mac behind. He watched her go, before he fell asleep.

Almost three weeks had passed since that night. The day after Big Mac told his sister about Fluttershy mutation and what she had tried to do to him (No point trying to hide it from the element of Honesty, and he wasn’t that good at lying). After that she got Twilight to use her skills of magic to understand the reasons of Flutterbat return and how to cure it once for all. And even then alicorn princess told her to pass by her twice each weeks just to make sure everything was going fine. For the rest, they kept this whole ordeal of the rapist Flutterbat between the Mane 6 and the Apple Family. Last thing they wanted was to let this fact spread, ruining Fluttershy reputation.
In those two and a half weeks Fluttershy kept a low profile, doing her best into avoiding him those time they meet when out to buy stuff at the market. It was no surprise for the farmer. He knew how shy and sensible her nature were. After having him almost raped, she had to feel pretty miserable, he thought, while shaking some tree to make apples fall. He was just thinking to go visit her, ensuring her that there was nothing to worry about. And then he heard a voice calling him.
“Big Mac”.
The farmer knew that meek and sweet voice. He turned around, seeing Fluttershy standing close to a tree with her usual clothing. Now that summer was nearing to an end she had the chance to go back using her most covering outfits. “Fluttershy” said the earth pony, smiling. But, despite his best attempt, the shy pegasus covered herself behind a tree. “Don’t you worry, Fluttershy, I’m not mad at you” he assured, “And neither is my sister, if I can guess what you’re thinking”.
“Even after what I did to you?” she asked, “I doubt it”.
“It wasn’t really you”.
"Yes, it was".
Big Mac looked at her, confused, "What do you mean?".
"I mean that I did what I did because... I love you". The earth pony was speechless, so the shy pegasus continued, "I always had a crush on you since when we met when we were foals but I was too much shy to admit it and so I've kept it from myself" she was blushing madly. "And when I saw you last night, under my savage state, my feelings for you plus the thirst I had, made me do what you and the others know".
"Fluttershy" muttered Big Mac, trying to find something to say, "I... well".
"Don't say a thing, Big Mac, I already know. I have issues".
Those words made the earth pony snap from his stuttering. "Listen, Fluttershy, we can't change what happened that night, but that doesn't have to change what you are" he said, "You are a great friend, more brave than you think you are, with amazings skills with taking care to a lot of animals. Do not let your sins spell what you are".
"Big Mac" it was Fluttershy turn to look impressed, "You... you are truly the best pony" she said, admired.
"Nah, I'm just an humble farmer that doesn't want to leave a friend in need". The two smiled at each other kindly.
"Thank you for your words, Big Mac. Maybe I could repay you by offering you a dinner".
"Would love to".

And whatever resulted from such dinner, the two remained didn't had to worry anymore of the return of the Flutterbat.

Author's Note

My first work for the adult pages. I feel like, while far from perfect, is still a good start that will possibly make other writers try this type of story.
I had opened a new group focused on that kind of works called Boobs Over Muscle that I've made months ago (And hopefully, once I learn how to do it I will post it there).
Will I do another one? Who knows.
Edit: Ok, so I've tried to fix all those mistakes and I have even changed the ending, so that people can be free to decide if the two will get together or not.