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Shades of Grey

by Inquisitor M
Luna and Rarity, with the help of a few of Celestia's elite guards, must fight to make peace with themselves before they can make peace with the past, and Rarity must learn to overcome the harshest enemy she has ever faced: Herself.

Princess Celestia was there before the oldest mortal pony was born; she will be there when the youngest foal dies of old age. She is as much a fixture of Equestria as the sun, the land, and the sky. She is also the rock that keeps Twilight Sparkle's hooves on the ground. No matter how bad things get, they will always be there for each other.

Princess Luna is a newcomer to modern Equestria: a stranger in a strange land. She is a pony out of her time and out of her place, struggling to escape the shackles of her mistakes. When a spectre from the past manifests in the present and incapacitates Rarity, the two cross paths for the first time since Luna's return and something unexpected happens: they see something they need in each other.

Struggling with self-doubt and haunted by a magical malady, Rarity reaches out to the princess and learns more about Luna than most ponies ever will. While Twilight throws herself at unravelling a magical mystery, Luna and Rarity, with the help of a few of Celestia's hoof-picked elite guards, must fight to make peace with themselves before they can make peace with the past. Luna seeks to reconcile her relationship with Celestia, and Rarity must learn to overcome the harshest, most bitter, most devious enemy she has ever faced: herself.

Completed in it's entirety for the second time, Shades of Grey version 3 is the culmination out many hundreds of hours or work, both mine and that of the editors, teachers, pre-readers, and readers. It is the first story I conceived, and it's taken over two years to bring it to this final revision that I am happy with. This is a story I am proud to have written. For better or worse, it will always be a piece of me and vice versa.

Special thanks go to Chris, without whom my ability to write at all would never have gotten off the ground.
Huge appreciation goes to ReplayMasterOfTime for the cover art that I have come to love so dearly in those two years.
Additional thanks go to: Pascoite, who has helped me grow through his reviewing; Mystic, the one-time EqD pre-reader who also helped with early editing and learning; and InsertAuthorHere, just for being an established name who gave me a shout out and filled me with the will to keep going.

There are dozens more to whom I owe the existence of this story. They know who they are, and I love them all.

Please enjoy this legacy of mine.

-Scott

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103392 words: Estimated about 9 hours to read

19 Chapters:

  1. 1. The Best of Intentions 2012-10-08 11:37:17 UTC
    4100
  2. 2. Troubled Minds 2012-10-02 23:07:16 UTC
    4636
  3. 3. Passed into Present 2012-10-03 00:11:10 UTC
    4071
  4. 4. It Comes in the Night 2012-10-03 08:59:02 UTC
    4357
  5. 5. Basking in the Sun 2012-10-02 22:20:41 UTC
    4197
  6. 6. Whispers in the Moonlight 2012-10-05 07:01:21 UTC
    5426
  7. 7. Rise to the Challenge 2012-10-07 10:44:20 UTC
    4882
  8. 8. Actions, and Reactions 2012-10-16 13:28:30 UTC
    5499
  9. 9. Painful Needs 2012-10-20 21:52:56 UTC
    5235
  10. 10. Sleeping Beauty 2012-11-03 12:52:14 UTC
    5586
  11. 11. Shadows on the Sun 2012-11-26 23:00:08 UTC
    5669
  12. 12. Descent into Darkness 2013-04-19 09:20:55 UTC
    4972
  13. 13. Soliloquy of a Wounded Heart 2013-05-04 23:08:37 UTC
    5501
  14. 14. Out of Time 2013-07-14 17:18:36 UTC
    5796
  15. 15. Zenith 2013-08-07 15:23:26 UTC
    6718
  16. 16. Moments of Transition 2013-09-08 00:19:38 UTC
    4936
  17. 17. Moments of Revelation 2013-09-27 18:03:22 UTC
    4715
  18. 18. The Fragile Heart 2013-10-29 00:24:30 UTC
    8606
  19. Luna's Epilogue – Phases of the Moon 2014-04-14 17:06:29 UTC
    8490