The Flaming Flower

by Rosie Nature

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance, Equestria Girls, Mystery, Main 7 (EqG), Adventure, Original Character
Length: 1556

Years of being apart Rosie and Cloud find each other. But also darkness

After years of being apart. They find each other again. Some crazy stuff happens. What will happen when an ex-girlfriend of Cloud comes and a boy that is crazy about Rosie and another girl that wants Rosie out to way. Also magic comes into play. What is with the darkness that Rosie can sense?

This is my first story so if I'm not good I would love it if you guys can give my some tips.

Published 2017-09-29 01:20:06 UTC
Last updated 2017-12-30 15:21:40 UTC

Chapter 2: An Odd Incounter

Someone or something pulled Rosie into a shadow than she walked by. It was so dark that Rosie couldn't see who it was but did know it was boy.

Rosie was ready to throw him on the ground but something was telling her not to.

The boy put his hand over her mouth and said "Shhhh"

Rosie push away his hand and started to say "Who..."

But the boy put his hand back over her mouth and said "Shhh"

Than with his other hand grabbed her right hand (the one with her vine) and he put her hand in his hair. Than old memories of an old friend came back to to her.

His hair was so soft like Rosie's hair.

He than left the shadow and in the sun Rosie saw that he was covered head to toe in black. He than looked back and Rosie saw sky blue eyes like an old friend of hers.

Rosie was feeling all shorts of things like she didn't know him but felt like she did than Rosie walked out of the shadow and those old memories came back as she watched him walk away.

Rosie said "It can't be. It can't be him." with tears in her eyes.

Author's Note

This one is a short one. I think and The Tour is going to be longer :twilightsheepish:

Chapter 3: Moving to Canterlot High

In a house at Cloudale, three people were packing. One was man, his hair was spiky and dark blue was saying to his wife "I can't believe I got transferred to another school to teach!!! Isn't great, Maple?"

A woman with orange skin and dark red hair said "Oh yes. Hey Golden were is your bother?"

A girl with golden, curly hair said "I think he went to see our new school."

Than a boy that was covered head to toe came in and took off a hat that was covering the boy's two blue soft hair. Than his jacket to show a blue shirt with fire on the selves.

Golden said "And here he is right now." with a knowing face.

His mom cam and hugged him and said "Hi mom."

Maple said "Don't scare me like that again."

The boy said "Okay"

His mom said " Go pack you car with your boxes"

The boy said "Okay." The boy went to put his boxes in his car.

The boy yelled "Goldie! Pack your boxes in my car!"

His sister yelled "Okay!" back. Golden Fire packed her boxes in her bother's car.

They moved into a victorian house the was walking distance from the school. Across the street one house down was another victorian house. The house was home to one of the boy's friends but does not know who.

Goldie said "Wow look at that house it is bigger than ours!" Goldie than said "Cloud what were you doing in Canterlot?"

Cloud than said "I went to see our new school."

Goldie said "You are a bad lair. Well at least we get two days to unpack"

Cloud said with a sad voice"Yeah. We do."

Goldie said "Are you sad because you won't see you friends again?"

Cloud said "Yeah."

Goldie saw how sad he was and said "You okay?"

Cloud said "No."

Goldie asked "You miss her don't you?"

Cloud said "Of course I miss her. It has been 8 years. She was 8 when she moved and I was 9. She has probably forgotten about me."

Goldie said "Well if she is your best friend she would not forget you."

Cloud said hopfuly "You really think she would remember me if she saw me again?"

Goldie said "Yeah."

Cloud asked "Hey, mom were is Sliver?"

His mom said "She will be here soon." An hour later a girl with sliver, wavy hair got out of her car.

Cloud said "Welcome, Sliver"

The girl said "Thanks, little bother."

Author's Note

Third chapter yay!! Cloud is moving!

Chapter 4: Meeting the Principal

Author's Note

Not my best Chapter but it moves the story along. I'm sorry if this Chapter sucks. You have be warned. The next Chapter (The Tour) is going to be longer. I think

Chapter 4: Meeting the Principal

The next day the Fire kids got a surprise visit from Principal Celestia. She was wearing purple pants, a orange jacket with a sun pin.

When she entered she said "Hello. I'm Principal Celestia. I run Canterlot High."

Cloud asked "What are you doing here?"

Principal Celestia said "I came here to tell that you three will be toured around the school. Cloud your guide will be wait for you at the front entrance. For you girls, your guide will be waiting for you in my office. Cloud if your guide is not there when you are there wait for her. I already told her teachers that she's going to be late to the her classes same with you girls. Thank you for your time. I'm also sorry for showing up unannounced."

Cloud than said "It's okay."

Sliver said "Yeah it is okay. We were taking a break from unpacking anyway."

Principal Celestia said "I hope you have a wonderful first day and that you feel welcomed"

Goldie said "Thank you, Principal Celestia."

After she left Sliver said "Well tomorrow is going to be interesting."

Cloud said "To say the least."

Goldie said "I heard that they have a 'magical' past. I don't know the means"

Cloud and Sliver looked at her.

Sliver said "And how do you know that?"

Goldie said "I heard rumors about Canterlot High"

Cloud said "And you believe those rumors?"

Goldie said "Not fully."

Cloud and Sliver groand

Chapter 5: The Tour

Something has gone wrong. We don't seem to have an archived copy of that chapter.

Chapter 1: A Stressful Week

One day in Canterlot High, Rosie was outside with her basketball team. Sitting in the bleachers wanting to to practiced. But can't because of her head injury.

Rainbow Dash, one of her friends is in her basketball team came over to her and said "Hey Rosie, I'm sorry you can't play until next week. But on the bright side the compaction ageist Cloudale High is two mouths from now."

Rosie than said "I know, It's just that... Cloud was Cloudale High basketball captain and was also dating Lighting Dust.. I heard that Cloud is moving so Lighting Dust going to be the caption and you know how she bullied you, me, Cloud, and Fluttershy."

Rainbow said "I know." Rainbow saw how sad she was and said "I know you miss him"

Rosie than got a really bad headache "OW!"

Rainbow hears the pain and sees Rosie hold her head. Rainbow asked " Are you ok?"

Rosie says "Yeah just a headache. Don't worry about it"

Rainbow looks at Rosie with a worried look "Well okay. But if you want to talk about...

Rosie nods her head "Of course"

Then the first bell rang signaling that it was time for students to go to their first period. Rosie went to her first period class which was math. Math is one Rosie's favorite classes. Mr. Geo was her teacher. Mr. Geo a tall man with orange hair.

When the class settled down, Mr. Geo said "I have bad news or good news to some of you. I'm transferring to a other school" and everyone said "Aww!"

After class Rosie asked "Um... Mr. Geo Who will be the new teacher?" and Mr. Geo said "I didn't know. Rosie will you make sure the students don't give him a heard time?"

Rosie said "Sure"

All of Rosie's classes before lunch were the same until Principal Celestia wanted to see Rosie after class which was before lunch.

After class Rosie went to Principal Celestia's office and said "Principal Celestia. You wanted to see me?"

Principal Celestia said "Yes" and Rosie said "I'm I in trouble?"

Principal Celestia looked up surprised and said "No. You're not trouble. I want you to show the new kid who will be here in two days. Will you do it?"

Rosie said "Yes. I will. You can count on me."

Principal Celestia give Rosie a smile and said "Thank you, Rosie"

Rosie returned the smile and said "You're Welcome, Principal Celestia."
When Rosie was about to leave Principal Celestia said "Oh I almost forgot. The kid you will be showing a round will be in the front to the school."
Than went to go and get lunch. When Rosie got her lunch and went to sit with her friends who already got their lunch.

Rarity the one curls in her hair said "Rosie, darling, why did you get you're lunch late?"

Rosie said "Uh. Oh. Principal Celestia wants me to show a new kid around the school in two days. This is going to be a long week."

After school, Rosie went to her school's field to make a few sketches. Want she did not know was that someone was watching her.

Rosie than said "AGH!!! I can't think of everything. I should go to the park and sketch there. I find lots of inspiration there"

After she sketched she went by a shadow and than someone or something pulled her in and then she was gone...

Author's Note

Here is the very first chapter. YAY!!!! and first story. YAY!!! again