The Great Serpent

by Nightcreature26

Discord meets Jor

Previous Chapter

That night, Fluttershy was squirming and whimpering. She was having a nightmare.

She was running from something. She turned and saw that it was Jor chasing her with a look of anger on her face. She screamed and ran as fast as she could. She tried to use her wings to fly but she couldn't. She turned and yelped as Jor was inches from her. Jor wasn't the same size as she saw. Jor was 5x bigger now! Jor opened her mouth. Her teeth were serrated, razor sharp like that of a shark. Fluttershy yelped as Jor snapped her teeth. Trying to catch her. "I'm sorry!" she yelled. Suddenly, Fluttershy was plucked up with two fingers.

"What did I do!?" she yelled to the giant creature. Jor sneered and turned Fluttershy around. Fluttershy gasped. It was as if Tartarus itself had come to the surface. The sky was a hellish red. All around her, the forest was on fire. But then, she noticed something else. Jor's temple! It was completely destroyed. Ad from the rubble, she saw the different colors of the Elements of Harmony. She realized what it was. It was her friends. They had destroyed the temple. And now, Jor was furious because she broke a promise. She screamed as she was brought up above Jor until she was dangling over her.

Fluttershy screamed as she was held over Jor's lips. The lips split as Jor opened wide. Fluttershy screeched as she gazed into the saliva dripping cavern. The pearly white fangs, pointed red tongue, and dark red gullet all exposed. "Jor please no!" She was let go. Fluttershy screamed as she plummeted into blackness.


Fluttershy's eyes opened with a start and she looked around frantically. She saw that the temple was okay. And she wasn't being eaten. She turned and saw that Jor wasn't around. She was curious, where was Jor? She didn't know, so she decided to go look for her. It's not impossible to miss Jor.

Fluttershy continued to look around and didn't look where she was going, she bumped into something and heard something shatter. Fluttershy turned to see what happened and saw she had bumped into a pedestal that had a glass gem on it. The blue gem was shattered into a million pieces. Fluttershy gulped as fear built up in her.

She had broken one of Jor's many treasures! Her mind went through many scenarios. She remembered the nightmare she had. Would Jor be so angry, that she would eat her?

Fluttershy whimpered as she heard the noise of slithering coils approaching. She turned and saw Jor's serpent body and collapsed onto the ground. "PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!! I DIDN'T MEAN TO BREAK ONE OF YOUR TREASURES!!" she cried hysterically. Jor raised an eyebrow and saw that her Gem of Lino was shattered. Was Fluttershy that scared? She had hundreds of trophies. One broken trophy isn't even a tragedy. Jor rolled her eyes. Fluttershy continued to cry and beg. Jor sighed.

She heard a quick snort. Fluttershy stopped crying and looked up. She saw that Jor wasn't mad. She just looked down at her with a look that told her just how silly she was being.

"Y-you aren't going to hurt me?" she asked. Jor shook her head. Fluttershy soon calmed down. She shook her head before looking down embarrassed. "Sorry I reacted like that." she said.

Jor nodded. She then leaned down and gently picked up Fluttershy and placed her on her shoulder. She then set off to the area where she first met Fluttershy. That area was where she loved to sunbathe.

ONE HOUR LATER

Jor soon entered the clearing and set Fluttershy down before lying onto her back and sunbathed. Her serpent body uncurled. The tip of her tail swaying gently. Fluttershy sighed. She remembered her dream she had and scolded herself. Jor made it clear that she would never hurt her.

It was silent for a moment before laughter could be heard. "Ohohohoo!" a cloud appeared in front of Fluttershy and saw who it was. It was the Lord of Chaos himself, Discord. "Hey Fluttershy." he said with a smile.

Fluttershy smiled. "Discord." she said. "How are you doing?" she asked.

Discord grabbed his antlers. "I am doing so well that I might as well as pull off my antlers." he said. He ended up doing just that. His antlers then reappeared back on his head. Fluttershy suddenly realized that Jor was still here. "So, where have you been? Angel told me you went to Fillydelphia." he said. "But when I went there, I searched high and low." he flew up high then lowered to the ground.

Fluttershy gulped. Discord noticed this and gasped. "Fluttershy, you didn't keep a secret from your friends did you, a secret from me?" he asked hurt. Fltutershy stammered.

"N-n-no Discord you have it all wrong." she said. Discord looked at her with his arms crossed. "Okay, I might have lied and kept a secret." Fluttershy said with a wide nervous grin. But this made Discord's frown grow. "But all for a good reason." she blurted.

"And what is so secretive that you can't tell me?" he asked. Fluttershy gulped. Discord didn't even notice that Jor was standing right behind him. Fluttershy's gaze shifted up to Jor who looked at Discord with a look of surprise and anger. Discord noticed the look, and just noticed the shadow that had been lingering over the both of them. He sighed and turned. He looked ahead and saw a giant serpent belly. His eyes widened as he looked up and saw Jor's face looking down at him. "Oh my." he said in complete shock. He was genuinely surprised. But even then he couldn't help but crack a joke in the form of his body turning completely white. Jor's eyes suddenly shifted to Fluttershy and looked at her with an accusing glare. Fluttershy gulped.

"N-n-n-n-no Jor, I-I-I didn't know he was c-c-coming, honestly. H-h-h-he just likes to pop in and out like that." she said quickly. Jor saw how true Fluttershy was and nodded then looked back down to the strange creature. She had never seen such a creature.

Discord looked at Fluttershy with a serious look. "Fluttershy, do you know who this is?" he asked. Fluttershy leaned her head curiously.

"Yes." she said and smiled. "Jor, this is my friend Discord. And Discord, this is Jor." she said. Discord slowly nodded. He gulped. And he thought Torch was big. But Jor here was bigger than him. Yet, deep within the back of his mind, he couldn't help but wonder if he had seen this creaturebefore.

"When did you two meet?" he asked.

"It was a few nights ago. Angel told me he saw something, so I decided to go check for myself." Fluttershy explained. "Just as I landed. A bear attacked me." she said. Fluttershy said. Discord's eyes widened and looked closely. He did indeed see three faint scratch marks on Fluttershy's side. His eyes widened. Fluttershy nearly. . .

He looked at Fluttershy with a glare. "Where is he?" he suddenly appeared in armor and a giant sword in his other hand. "Where is that bear who hurt you?" he demanded while slashing at the air.

Fluttershy looked down. She wasn't going to lie. She still couldn't forget what she saw. "Well, I thought I was going to... but suddenly she saved me." Fluttershy gestured towards Jor. Discord still wanted to know where the bear was.

"But where is the bear?" he asked. Fluttershy sighed.

"Like I said. Just as he was about to swipe me, I heard it roar in pain. I opened my eyes and saw..." Fluttershy said and shuddered as she remembered the bear's enraged look as it was trapped in the jaws of her new giant friend. "Jor saved me from the bear." she completed.

Discord realized what Fluttershy meant. He shrugged. "Well, at least you're safe. Also." he looked at Jor. "Thank you for saving her." he said. "She was my first friend and I don't know what I'd be without her." he looked down. "Probably still locked in that blasted stone prison." he said sadly.

"Discord, you have redeemed yourself many times." Fluttershy said. "So do not worry about the past." she said. Discord smiled. He then looked up at Jor with a look of mischief. In a poof of dust, he was dressed as a professor with monocle glasses.

He suddenly flew up and around Jor before noticing a particular organ that rested below the navel where her serpent half meets her human half. "What is that?" he asked.

"That's Jor's..." Fluttershy's cheeks flushed. Discords eyes widened. He felt a little stupid. It was obvious that Jor was a female. So it was obvious she would have the organs that a female would have. But he kept his embarrassment brilliantly hidden.

"Interesting." he said. Writing on a clipboard. Jor just watched as Fluttershy's crazy friend observed her. He then flew up to her chest and looked at the lumps. "So I guess these are udders." he said. Jor nodded but that was not what hers were called. They were called niislah.

Suddenly Discord flew up to her eyes and then, her hair, and looked into her ears. "One last place to look at." he said and flew down to her lips and opened her mouth wide. He gazed into the dripping maw and flew right into it. Jor closed her mouth in confusion as she felt Discord move around in her mouth. And felt the creature nearly fall into her throat hadn't she shifted her tongue forward so he wouldn't fall into it. The last thing she needs is an actual discord in her system. Besides, he didn't taste very good either. In fact, He was the most disgusting thing she's ever felt touch her taste buds. Finally, she couldn't take it anymore and spat him out. He found himself being shot out and into the ground bellow. He looked down at himself and shivered with disgust. He was covered in saliva. "I'll say one thing Fluttershy." he said as he wiped his suit. "Besides the fact that she is in a bad need of mint. She really is something. Inside and out." Jor set him back on the ground.

Disocord soon made his professor suit disappeared and looked up at Jor. "So looks like you two get a long just fine." he said. "But here's a good question for you my dear." he said. "What will happen when your friends find out?" he asked. Jor and Fluttershy looked to each other then back to him.

"Discord." Fluttershy looked at him with a serious expression. "Jor is to remain secret from them." she said. Discord's eyes widened.

"I thought you were honest as you were kind." Discord said. Fluttershy sighed.

"Yes, I normally would be. But just look at her." she said. Discord looked up at the towering serpent that was Jor. "Just imagine what my friends would do if they found her or found out about her?" she asked.

Discord thought about it. Her friends would defiantly freak out. Though he couldn't suppress the snicker as imagined what their faces would look like. "I do see your point." he said.

"I am serious Discord." Fluttershy said. "I do not want anyone to know about Jor. Please. I don't want anything bad to happen to her. I don't want her destroyed." she said. Discord grinned.

"What makes you think I'm a little bird?" he morphed into a tiny bird before morphing back into his former self. Fluttershy sighed.

"Just don't tell anyone about her. Under any circumstance that happens to me, or my friends. Do not go to her." she said. Discord sighed. Fluttershy turned and looked at the sky.

"Fine." he said. He then turned to Jor and flew up to her. He flew to her ear and whispered. "How far would you be willing to go if something happened to Fluttershy?" he asked in a whisper. Jor turned to him then back at the Pegasus. She turned to him with a snarl and opened her mouth wide. Her teeth dripping with saliva. She snapped her jaws. Discord nodded. "Okay, looks like we both have something in common." he said.

"Well." he stretched. "It has been fun." he said with a yawn. "But I really need some shuteye." a bed appeared and he laid on it. "I won't tell anyone." he said as he vanished.

Jor looked at Fluttershy with a look of confusion. Fluttershy smiled. "It's okay, he's always like that." she said. Jor looked at Fluttershy and thought back to what Discord said.

Her eyes widened as an idea came into her head. With a grin. She went to her ear and pulled something from the ring. Fluttershy never noticed she had an earring. Jor then opened her palm before Fluttershy and showed her an old horn. Fluttershy looked up at Jor.

"What is this?" she asked. She gently picked it up and studied it. She then blew into it. It made a deep noise. She stopped and looked up to see that Jor had turned her head to the side and showed her her ear. Fluttershy's eyes widened as she realized what if was. It was a horn that if she blew into, only Jor would hear and she would come to her.

"Jor, thank you, but I do not need this." she said. Jor backed away.

Jor didn't want Fluttershy to give this up. If she was ever in trouble, Jor would help her. Jor will always help someone who she considers an ally or friend. Fluttershy nodded. "Thank you. If I am ever in trouble, I will call for you." she said. Jor nodded. Fluttershy looked at the sunset and realized she had to get home. "I have to go back to Ponyville or my friends where wonder where I really am." she said.

Jor nodded. Fluttershy flapped her wings and began to fly away but turned back to Jor. "By Jor, see you soon!" she called out. Jor nodded. Little did they know that a fly with Discord's head had watched the whole thing. With a poof of clouds, Discord had vanished. And Jor slithered back to her temple.

Fluttershy flew back to her cabin and went inside. Angel was sleeping soundly. She landed on the ground and looked at the horn, she then placed it in a drawer next to her bed. After that, she paced for a while. She was now desperate to know what Jor was. She knew that there was only one place that might have that information, and she really didn't want to go there. But now, she had no choice.