Tales of the "Good Doctor"

by Cold Hooves

Silver spoon

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Silver spoon

Tales of the "Good Doctor"
patient two: Diamond Tiara

It was late at night as Bartok was preoccupied hosing down the O.R. after slicing up Apple Bloom the day before. "Yesh we sure maid a mess of this place. Well now that Im finished with this I might see what dads up to" he said to himself walking outside to the spacious backyard where Dr.Cold was standing with a charred training dummy.

"Need to perfect my spells" The doctor muttered to himself using his 'Operating voice' panting heavily. "Triplicate!" He shouted charging his horn and with a flash there were suddenly three of himself.

"We look good, nice hat" the trio said simultaneously, in a flash they were gone.

"Dad, you must not force yourself" The foal cautioned "no point in revenge if your horn burns out from over use"

"I know son" Dr.Cold said putting his hat back on, reverting his voice to normal, and removing his goggles, "By the way we need a bit of intel on these ponies I herd that Twilight hangs out with, so your starting school starting monday" Cold Hooves smiled "This shouldn't be a problem, besides you were getting sick of home-schooling anyway".

Bartok smiled "Thanks dad, your the best" he quickly hugged his dad then adjusted his own hat and goggles

The doctor laughed "I know I am, in the meantime we must check the rest of this town out" he said as Bartok walked back inside. "Now, lets trying looking into the future one more time" said the doctor. His horn began to glow along with his eyes, seconds after he passed out from exhaustion.

After a good night sleep the two set off to comb the town, after a bit of shopping they settled on a small café, and were enjoying some fine pastries when Bartok noticed something "See something kid?" Cold Hooves asked his son.

"Yeah dad, that orange pony we dropped the corpse off with and a unicorn with luxurious white fur sitting at the table behind you"

"Listen darling, I know your a strong mare but bottling up grief only ends in disaster, remember Big Mac after his hard cider reserves were sucked into that tornado and he raided 5 homes?" the unicorn said hooves over Applejack's

She sighed "Yes I remember, Im going to go harvest something" she muttered leaving her half of the bill on the table.

Dr.Cold thought to himself "If that was Applejack then the unicorn was Rarity, Maybe I could use to my advantage". Cold Hooves approached Rarity "Excuse me miss, I couldn't help but over hear your conversation so who was your friend anyway?"

Rarity looked up at the older pony "If you must know her name is Applejack she was close to a filly who was murdered yesterday, but the question is who are you?"

"Im Dr.Cold Hooves, I unfortunately was the one who found the body, shame too she was so young" The doctor said hat over heart and shedding a few fake tears.

"I know, we just got back from the burial, it was a small affair, your not from around here are you?" she questioned

"Moved in last week" the doctor looks up at the sky "I smell a storm coming, might we continue this back at your place over tea?" he asked butting his hat back on

"That would be lovely" she replied

The doctor smiled "Go ahead I'll catch up" he said as Rarity ran off.

Bartok rolled his eyes (Though you couldn't see due to his eye ware) "Your a monster" he said sarcastically.

"Oh that may be true son but for that your carrying the all the bags" Cold ran off shouting "Coming or not?"

When the group go to Rarity's the rain had started and the group was soaked

"Remind me to pen Cloudsdale weather inc. at some point for overdoing the rain" Rarity said stepping in

"Happily" replied the doc annoyed.

"Someone help me with these bags, I ran out of magic half way over and had to shove everything in my saddle bags" Bartok said collapsing on the ground

Doc cleared his through "About that tea?"

Rarity nodded and walk into the kitchen. Around that time Sweetie bell walked downstairs, the grey foal caught her eye. "Rarity who are your guest?"

"Just some ponies I met a the café" She replied

"Dr.Cold Hooves, and this is my son Bartok" Stated the good doctor

"Nice to meet you" said Bartok
"I haven't seen you in school, you new?" the filly pressed

"I'm starting in a bit" the colt replied

the two looked each other in the eyes Cold Hooves sensed something but his son's love life being useless to him he disregarded it.

"I'm Sweetie Bell, I like your mane"

Bartok blushed noticing the unkempt mane on the back of his neck

"Thanks, I like your mane too" he said almost chocking on his tongue. He could not believe this the foal who could decapitate a rabbit and screw the neck-hole was nervous over some filly albeit cute.

As Rarity brought drinks and everypony was enthralled in there conversation an all too familiar cyan pony flew through the door nocking over Cold Hooves

"Sorry about that, I tried to cheer up AJ with a stunt show then the rain started. I was on my way some when a stay wind gust blasted me though your door. It was awesome!" she said as the doc stood up with a large crack in his goggle's left lens

Revealing his horn Dr.Cold launched Rainbow off of him and into the wall "Well this has been fun, but I must be getting home, Bartok can stay if he wants" Cold said with a hint of his "Operating voice" and teleported home

"Are you ok?!" Rarity shouted with worry rush to Dashie's side

She stood up "I've taken worse" she said ignoring the gash on her side

Rarity sighed "Sweetie Bell take your new friend upstairs"

Bartok stood up "Wait I can fix this" he said firing a red magic bolt patching up the wound

Sweetie Belle Gasped in amazement "What else can you do?"

"A lot more" he said smugly

"Wow, and yet your still a blank" she said gesturing to his flank "You know Im in a secrete order of blanks trying to find our callings, maybe you could join?"

Bartok pondered this, he remembers a newpaper article with the headline "Crusadeing foals accidentally torch park". He spoke up "maybe I will. But for now I better get home" Bartok finished then proceeded out the front door

The day started off smoothly as the students all walked into the school house where a suspiciously perky purple pony sat behind a large desk while Bartok grabbed Apple Blooms old seat though it was the only one available the others just glared.

"Good morning class" The teach chimed

"Good morning Ms.Cheerilee" the class replied as one

"Nice to see you all again, I know were all a bit down about the loss of one of our students" She said looking at the picture of Apple Bloom on the wall.

Bartok tried to stifle a grin

Cheerilee resumed speaking "But we do have a new student, every give a warm welcome Bartok"

The other students just glared at the "Replacement"

"Ok then, due to recent events I'm going to go easy on you today with a few review asignments" Ms.Cheerilee said sensing tension in the room.

Class were simple for the most part, nothing Bartok didn't know before. After a long hard day the midday lunch break in the yard finally arrived. Many of the foals avoided Bartok forcing him to sit alone, till whats left of the Cutie Mark Crusaders showed up

"So your the unicorn Sweetie Bell keeps going on about" Said an orange pegasus sounding almost impressed "Name's Scootaloo by the way"

"Bartok, nice to meet you" He replied. As the group chatted amongst themselves as Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon walked to to them

"So new kid whats with the hat? Its so lame" Questioned Diamond.

Bartok glared "It was a gift from my late mother to my dad. I would appreciate a little respect thank you very much"

Diamond Tiara's only response was that she grabbed the hat, threw it to the ground then stomped on it. "Don't look so sad. I did you a favor. later loser" she said as the pair walked away.

Bartok stared down at his ruined hat, leaving his unkempt mane and horn exposed. Sweetie Bell and Scootaloo left seeing he needed space. Even Though one could not see them through his goggles the colt's eyes were full of pure rage hotter than a forest fire.

Bartok muttered "Cloak" and with a flash vanished instantly. The started creeping behind Diamond Tiara

"I have to use the little fillies' room" She told her friend walking into the bathroom with Bartok following behinde

After doing her business she turned around to flush but and invisible force dunked her head into the piss filled bowl "Lets get surgical, teleport" the pair warped to Dr.Cold's operating room

Once they arrived Bartok uncloaked and wasted no time strapping her in, once strapped in Diamond Tiara's ride began

"Do you think its funny mocking others? Lets fix your mouth then" he said with an "Operating Voice" a bit more demented but not as deep as his fathers. Applying a head restraint Diamond was now immobile. With a bit of magic and acute precision Bartok sutured her mouth shut, though a work of craftsponyship it was still unbearably painful

"Lets try the 'other lips' now" using the same sill sutured her love-box shut. "Lets make a detour" he said using a drill on her abdomen just above the waist.

then stuck in his erect penis as she tried screaming but her mouth remained shut but Diamond Tiara kept trying but still gave off only muffled screams. Finishing he removed his 'probe' as his fluids and her blood leaked out he lapped up this mix then smiled. "Lets alter your flank to be a bit more fitting" He took the same mix and signed his name with it over her cutie mark.

Barley awake Diamond's eyes showed nothing but fear and agony. Bartok always one to end on a high note stabbed both her eyes and stole the tiara she was wearing.

"My job is done. You're finished" Bartok said warping back to class leaving his patient to die a lonely death.

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