A pony askes Discord for help which Discord says yes in exchange for some help. As he fufills his task: things become more sinister.

This is my first story I have ever written, outside of school, I based it off something but I don't know how many people will know what it is. I would like people to criticize it so I can improve my writing skills and know whether to continue it.
A lot of different refrences and designs of other media works.