The Angel That Drives You Batty

by Israel Yabuki

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Human, Anthro, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Second Person, Romance, Fluttershy, Sex
Length: 4116

A little Nightmare Night Special between you and Flutterbat

Fluttershy has been acting weird for a while now. She's keeping a secret and she doesn't want you or your son to find out, but you're gonna make it your mission to find out what it is she's afraid to tell or even show you, but when you do find out, you're definitely going to be in for the night of your life.

Published 2017-10-31 07:40:06 UTC
Last updated 2022-11-01 00:04:24 UTC

You Sure Drive Me Batty, My Lovely Angel

Nightmare Night is just around the corner in the town of Ponyville. The young fillies and colts are all getting their costumes ready for the big night. But for your little boy, Warm Breeze, you got Fluttershy to ask Rarity to make him a costume you saw on the TV show you loved. You had a drawing of the character's outfit so it was easy enough for Rarity to make the design before the holiday can ever take place.

Fluttershy planned ahead and took the liberty of stopping by Sugar Cube Corner to get some treats that Pinkie and Frosty made for the fillies and colts. You told Fluttershy about your plans for Nightmare Night, which was walking around the town with your son to go trick-or-treating. She thought it was a great idea, that is until she started acting differently on the week before the holiday began.

She would always seem to be tired in the morning and too exhausted to make any breakfast or lunch, so you had to cook up something for you and Warm Breeze. Naturally, your son was worried about his mom and kept on thinking she might be sick or something. But to keep him from worrying a little, you tell him that she's probably been a bit exhausted from all the hard work into putting up decorations for Nightmare Night and more exhausted from the friendship problems that have been ocurring around Equestria.

It seemed to calm your son down a bit, but you were still worried about your wife. One way or another, you were going to see what she's been up to all night. You just hoped that you'll find out in time before the Nightmare Night festival begins. Tonight, as expected, Fluttershy had woken up around 7:30 P.M and your son was in the bathroom, brushing his teeth, getting ready for bed. You had prepared Fluttershy's dinner beforehand and set it on the table so she could eat.

"Hi, honey." Fluttershy says to you. You look back at her with a smile.

"Hi, hun." you reply. But your smile was only a mask to cover up your concern for your wife. She sits down at the table and starts eating her food. You start washing dishes as you continued on the conversation. "Listen, hun, I'm getting really worried about you. Warm Breeze is worried about you, too. So what exactly has been going on with your recently, honey?"

"I... I don't know if I should tell you, Genus, but please understand that I don't like doing this as much as anypony else, but there are certain problems about me that I just can't get you involved in. I can only say that what's happening with me right now is a curse. A curse that's usually been happening once a year. That's all I can say for now, Genus, I hope you're not too mad at me." Fluttershy explains.

"Fluttershy, I could never be mad at you. I love you just as much as our little boy. I just want to help you with whatever's troubling you so we can be done with it."

"I know, and I appreciate you wanting to help, but this is something I have to take care of on my own."

You turned around and walked up to Fluttershy, kneeling down to her eye level, looking worried.

"Come on, Fluttershy. I want to help you. We have a whole Nightmare Night planned out for all of us. But what will it be if my beloved wife, the same loving mare whom I married and who gave birth to my son, isn't there to celebrate it with us?"

Fluttershy knew you were right. She was also looking forward to the Nightmare Night festival and spending the whole night with her loving son and you. She hugs you and whispers in your ear.

"I want to celebrate with you all, too, honey. I wouldn't miss it for anything in the world. But I still stand by what I think is best for you and Warm Breeze. I'm doing this so you and Warm Breeze won't get hurt. I love you both too much to put you in harms way. Okay, Genus?" Your wife asks, gently rubbing your cheek.

It pained you to let your wife handle whatever was getting to her, but you let out a sigh of defeat. "Alright, Fluttershy, but promise me you'll be careful and that you'll make it back home just in time for the Nightmare Night Festival, okay hun?" you ask her back. She answers with a nod and then a kiss on the lips.

You stood straight back up on your feet and walked over to the dishes, but then, Fluttershy grabs your hand and says "I'll take care of the dishes, you go on ahead and check up on Warm Breeze."

"Hi, mommy." your son calls out. You and Fluttershy look to see him in his green and blue PJs and walks into the kitchen straight towards you. "Hi, daddy. Can I get a cup of water, please?" he asks.

"Sure, kiddo. I'll get it for you. Did you brush your teeth like I told you?" you ask. Your son breathes out and your nostrils caught the scent of mint. "Okay, good work, kiddo. Go on upstairs and I'll have it ready for you and a nice bedtime story."

"Okay. Thanks, daddy." Warm Breeze stretches his arms up to you, wanting to hug you. You lift him up and hug him warmly in your arms for a few seconds before bringing him back down to the floor. He runs up to Fluttershy and hugs her, earning a hug back from her.

"Good night, sweetie." Fluttershy says. She kisses her son on the cheek.

"Good night, mommy. I love you." Warm Breeze replies.

"Mommy loves you, too." she says sweetly.

Warm Breeze runs out of the kitchen and upstairs to the bedroom. You got a cup from the cabinet and put in some cold water with two ice cubes. You walk out of the kitchen and let your wife eat her dinner while your son was sitting on the bed, his smile had disappeared.

"What's wrong, son? What's got you so down?" you ask, giving your kid comfort.

"Is mommy gonna be okay, daddy?" Warm Breeze asked, choked up.

"Well, if I know one thing about your mom, she's grown a whole lot more independant and strong than what she was before I met her." you reply, handing your son the cup of water. He takes a few sips.

"What do you mean?"

"Well, before I met her, she use to be very shy and quiet. Kinda like how you are." you say. Warm Breeze blushes and turns away with his adorable pouty face. "But, as time went by, little by little, she warmed up to some brand new friends, as well as me when Trusty and I first arrived here. But my point is, your mom is just trying to solve a personal problem that's kept her up all night and wants to handle it alone."

"Oh. Okay."

'But somehow I gotta find out what's going on with her. Starting tomorrow I'll see what Fluttershy's up to, but I'll have to find a babysitter before anything else.' you thought to yourself.

"Thanks for telling me, daddy. So can I have my bedtime story now?"

"Sure, which one do you want me to read?"

"OOH, OOH, OOH!" Warm Breeze went under the bed and pulled out his favorite children's book he got from Twilight on his previous birthday. "This one! I want to know how it ends!"

You chuckle and grab the book and set your son on the pillow. You sat next to him and flipped straight to chapter 7 and began reading it.

"Sparky stopped, and he rolled in a field of wildflowers. The dandelions tickled his nose 'till he laught out loud. And then, something caught his eye." you paused and saw your son's excited smile. "It was Bumper, the rabbit, Sparkly jumped to his feet and ran towards Bumper, barking loudly. Sparky knew the Bumper would run and that he could chase him over the fields, but Sparky could never catch him or hurt him, because Sparky was not that kind of dog..."

5 minutes later, after finishing the story, Warm Breeze fell asleep on your left side, cuddling up to you with his whole body covered in the blankets, except for his head. You put the book away and kissed your son on the forehead and fell asleep.

The next day went by very slowly. Fluttershy, as usual, was asleep during the day, your son was at school with his friends and you were caring for the animals at the cottage all on your own. Trusty became less active around the time the same time that Fluttershy started sleeping in. Who could blame him? Fluttershy was a mother to him just as much as you were a father to your pet dog.

When the animals were all fed and cared for, you went over to Sugar Cube Corner to talk to your friend, Pinkie Pie and asked her to watch over your son for the night. She agreed to help, but she got curious of why you wanted her to watch over him. You didn't go into specific detail, other than you would be out with Fluttershy for the night, but Pinkie was a lot smarter than she seemed.

She knew there was something up with you and she wanted to find out exactly what it was. She wasn't gonna let you go without telling her the truth, so you did just that. You explained to her that Fluttershy's been sneaking out into the night and would sleep in all day. Something about this curse that was placed upon her that only happens once a year and you wanted to try and help her.

Thankfully, Pinkie agrees to watch over Warm Breeze and made a Pinkie Promised not to tell anyone about it, not even your beloved wife. The hours went by a little quicker and finally, it was time to pick up your son from school and bring him home. You helped your son with some of his homework before spending some playtime with him out by the gazebo, listening to his amazing flute-playing skills.

The flute was another one of his birthday gifts. One that was given to him by his aunt Rarity and uncle Silver. Since that day, he's been playing it nonstop up until recently.

Hours went by slower than you thought until finally, it was now night time and your son was tucked neatly in bed and Fluttershy was heading out into the night for some unknown reason. Pinkie had arrived moments after Fluttershy had left the building. With your son being watched over, there was nothing holding you back from pursuing your wife, but you had to keep a low profile.

You followed Fluttershy to the place that you had least expected: Sweet Apple Acres. You hid behind one of the trees so she wouldn't spot you and only peeked with one eye. For a whole minute, Fluttershy did nothing but just stare at the apple trees completely motionless. You took your eyes away from her for no more than two seconds and then looked to see that she had disappeared.

It almost made you panic, but you kept your cool and scouted the area. She was nowhere to be seen and it was too dark for you to see where she was. But then, just as you turned around, you got slammed to the ground and heard a loud hiss in your ear. You let out a grunt of pain and hit a tree with your back. The hissing could be heard right in front of you and you were curious about who or what was hissing at you.

You checked and saw what looked like a pony who had faded yellow fur and magenta eyes. Her hair was a faded pink color and looked similar to your wife's. You nearly felt your heart about to jump out of you when she hissed at you again in a territorial way. But then, you saw your wedding ring on the bat pony's left hand and looked straight into her eyes, shocked at who you were face-to-face with.

"F-F-Fluttershy?" you ask, hoping it was her. She glared at you, ready to bite you, but when you said her name, her eyes widened and she looked directly into your eyes, too.

"Ge...nus...." she hissed gently. You nodded at the nickname she called you by. She backed away and covered herself with her bat wings.

"No, wait! It's okay. I'm here." you reassured her. You got closer and she slashed at you with tears, ashamed of herself for being seen by you in her current state. "Fluttershy, it's okay."

She shook her head, not wanting to look at you. You got a bit closer to her and this time she went and tried to slash at you again, but you caught her hand and held it in the palms of your hands. She covered herself with her other hand and her wings, waiting to see what would happen. Your next action catches her off-guard. You leaned down onto her hand and kissed the back of it.

Fluttershy looked at you with confusion. Normally, other ponies would run in fear if they ever saw her like this, but you took the opposite view and showed her you're not afraid. You gently rubbed her hand, letting her know she doesn't have to be ashamed or afraid.

Slowly, but surely, she opened up her wings and took her vacant hand away from her beautiful face and looked at you with that adorable timid smile. She scooches up closer to you and grabs your arm with one hand and caresses your cheek with the other.

"It's alright, Fluttershy. I understand why you've been sneaking out at night. Just remember this. I will always love you no matter how difficult the problem is." You say. You spread your arms out, wanting to give your beloved wife a big hug. She accepts it and lunges at you with her open arms.

You both hugged each other and soon you felt yourself being lifted up off the air. Fluttershy, or as you'd mentally call her Flutterbat, carried you and flew the two of you to a more secluded place that was a bit farther from anyone else that no one would dare to find you two: The abandoned castle of the royal sisters. Inside the abandoned castle, Flutterbat flew you over to the royal bedroom and set you down on an old bed. She lands on her feet next to the bed with her back turned against you for some reason.

She glances at you with a sultry smile and licks her lips. You smile at her, not needing any hints on what she wanted to do with you. You quickly undressed yourself and watched as your wife stripped herself of her clothes until she was completely naked and turned to face you. It looked like her breasts had grown a cup larger from D-Cup to E-Cup and your rod had stood tall from the sight.

Flutterbat straddles on top of you and licks your neck. You shuddered from the feeling of her tongue making contact with your skin. If she was gonna bite you, you weren't gonna run from it, whether you had a choice in the matter or not because it felt so good. Your hunch was correct. Her fangs sank into your neck, but thankfully, she didn't sink them too far inside your skin.

You felt her breasts graze your nipples and her fangs nibbling on your neck. She pulled away just to lick her fangs before she grabs you and sits you up, facing her predatorial gaze. She looked so cute and yet so hot and you gave her a kiss, stroking her messed up hair. Flutterbat pulled away after a few minutes of making out and stood up off the bed, signalling you to do the same. You obeyed without hesitation.

Then she kneels down and stares directly at your hard shaft. She grabs a hold of it and starts licking it for a while before taking in the whole thing into her mouth and bobbed back and forth. You placed your hand on the back of her head, making her deep throat you. She didn't object to it and instead grabbed hold of one of your legs and your butt cheek. You hummed and moaned in approval.

"Ooh, fuck! Even as a bat pony, you're still good at this!" you moaned out loud. Her tongue wrapped around your rod, stroking it as she was sucking you off. It felt so good, you nearly climaxed, but kept it together and let go of Flutterbat so she could breathe. However, she wasn't letting up for one second. She sped up the blowjob she was giving you and even massaged your balls.

You couldn't hold it in much longer and exploded your cum inside her mouth. She drank it all hungerly and licked off all the leftovers from the tip and stood back up to face you with her sultry smile. She grabs the back of your neck and pulls you onto the bed with her. You layed on top of your transformed wife, staring down at her with your love-struck, heart-warming eyes and kissed her cheek.

"Buck...me...honey." she said seductively. You went ahead and leaned your lower body down and inserted your rock hard shaft inside her. Flutterbat hissed with a smile as she felt your shaft enter inside her like it use to years ago when she was about to have her first baby. But then you realized...

"W-Wait... are you sure you don't want me to at least get you good and ready by eating you out?" you ask.

"Buck... me... now! Can't... take... heat!" she says, in a struggling tone.

"You're in heat, huh?" you ask again. She nods. "Alright. Do you want it hard or gentle?"

"HAAAARRD!" she yells, nearly scaring you to death. You grabbed her boobs and started humping inside her dripping sex with a whole lot of force. Flutterbat hissed out loud, not sure if she was liking it or hating it, but you didn't want to get on your wife's bad side like that one time when she scolded you and gave you the stare when you got into a fight with her little brother, Zephyr Breeze.

Her inner walls squeeze your hard shaft as you kept banging your wife. Flutterbat never stopped looking at you with a sultry smile and her tongue hanging out. Her bat wings spreaded out and stiffened, showing off more of her sexiness. To make things more interesting, you grabbed her breasts and fondled them and slammed your cock deeper into her pussy harder and harder.

Flutterbat pulled you down onto her and slammed her lips with yours in a heavy make-out session. Your hands had been pinned down onto her boobs when she did that. You didn't mind it, though. You then mixed in your speed with your power into your thrusts. You grunted as her inner vaginal walls started to constrict around your hard shaft as you kept pumping in and out of her. She was literally trying to milk you for all the foal-maker cream you had stored away inside you.

"You sure drive me batty, my lovely angel." you flirted with your wife after breaking the kiss. In that moment, you took one of your hands away from one of her breasts and stroked her beautiful, yet messy, silky pink hair and made your batty wife hum in approval.

Then in a quick sudden movement, Flutterbat grabbed your shoulders and switched positions with you now being at the bottom and her on top. She bounced herself on your shaft, pressing her hands onto your bare chest and never stopped looking at you with her hungry and lustful eyes. She stuck her tongue out and leaned down to lick your neck before sucking on it. You moaned and gasped as she did that, somewhat out of fear being that she was still in her bat form.

But Flutterbat was careful enough to only playfully nibble on your neck instead of sinking them deep into your skin and sucking the blood outta you. You hated yourself for thinkin she wasn't in control when in reality, she actually was. She never stopped bouncing on your cock and some time into your love-making session, your legs would end up twitching from the pleasure of her nibbling on your neck. You hugged Flutterbat and thrusted upwards pressing your manhood up against her womb entrance.

Flutterbat leg go of your neck and had her eyes shot upwards with her tongue hanging loose and hissed nonstop, meaning she was probably getting close to climaxing. Judging by how fast she was riding your cock and how hard she was slamming onto it, she was definitely getting close. You moaned and grunted, feeling your legs twitch a bit more and held Flutterbat down by her legs and pumped your shaft deep into her, driving her crazy and she let out a hiss out loud, digging her sharp nails into your skin.

"Nnngh! Careful honey!" you grunted. Flutterbat eased her grip on you and synced her hips with yours, slamming down onto your manhood while you slammed upwards into her marehood. Her breasts bounced violently from the rough sex you two were having. You stared at them hungerly and leaned up and locked your lips on one of them, sucking on one of her erect nipples.

That was it. Flutterbat couldn't take the pleasure anymore and sprayed her love nectar all over your crotch, causing you to moan out loud and blow your hot seed into her womb. Flutterbat hissed and collapsed, causing you to collapse onto the bed with her on top. All of the energy you had was now gone and you felt your eyes shut and you passed out with your arms wrapped around your wife.

The next morning, when you woke up, you noticed you weren't in the abandoned castle anymore, and instead you were in Fluttershy's cottage. The sounds of your son laughing could be heard from downstairs and same with your dog, Trusty barking happily. You took the blanket off of you and noticed your clothes were back on, making you think it was all just some kind of dream.

If it was, it certainly felt real to you. Either way, you ran downstairs and there they were in the living room, your son Warm Breeze playing with Trusty and sitting on the couch was your wife, Fluttershy, looking as beautiful and cute as ever before and finally back to normal. She looks at you with a warm smile and signals you to come over to her, in turn you obeyed her and sat next to her. She then leans into your ear.

"You were amazing last night, honey." she whispers, catching you off-guard. "And thank you for getting Pinkie to watch over our son. It's thanks to you, the curse is gone for now and I can finally spend some more time with you and Warm Breeze. I should've just told you I transform into a bat pony, but I couldn't stand the fact that you might have been in danger."

"It's alright, honey. What matters now is that you're back and we can finally be prepared for the upcoming Nightmare Night festival tonight." you reply.

"That's great to hear, Genus. But I think you should know something else." Fluttershy leaned in and placed her hand close to your ear and whispered quietly. "I'm pregnant again."

Your eyes open wide in surprise and excitement. Fluttershy had on her timid smile, blushing. It's like she doesn't want to stop being cute. You leaned in and hugged her gently. She hugs you back warmly in her arms and her beautiful wings.

"I can't wait for when we have our 2nd child." you whisper in her ear.

"Me too, my beloved Genus." Fluttershy whispered back warmly.

Author's Note

This was a little Halloween/Nightmare Night Special I wanted to make for all of you bronies who enjoy my stories and gave me all the kindness and support I could ever ask for, so thank you all so much for supporting me for the past whole year I've been in fimfiction.

Happy Nightmare Night (Re-written version)

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