so guys, long story short, as i was reading over my story i realized that i was moving the story just a bit fast. i also disliked like how i had made jynx almost robotic in how he had reacted to other characters. finally i couldn't help but notice that the taking over Crystal empire angle was getting a bit overused. so on that note where do you think jynx should have his empire. personally im thinking the everfree.

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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/421945/a-kitsunes-haven