Pinkamena X

by Pinkamena666

Comet

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OC INFO
Comet --- Pinkamena666
Ruby's Personality --- NightSoul

CAST
Pinkamena / Comet --- Pinkamena666
Ruby --- NightSoul


Ruby followed Pinkamena, slipping along the way. On the way back to the Pinkamena's lair, the pink mare stayed silent.
They soon arrived back at Sugarcube Corner about four minutes later. Pinkamena opened and the door and led Ruby inside. Mrs. Cake wasn't at the counter. The mare turned and headed down the side hall, pulling the key out of her mane and unlocking the door.

"Ready?" she asked.

"As ever." said Ruby.

Pinkamena smiled and opened the door. "After you."

Ruby walked in and headed down the stairs happily. Pinkamena stepped through the doorway and closed the door. She then bolted it from the inside and headed downstairs. Ruby was looking at the different doors around the lair.

"Over here." said Pinkamena, approaching the desk and opening the drawer.

Ruby followed standing on her hind legs trying to see

Pinkamena pulled out the two folders and dropped them to the floor.

"There you go, Ruby. Fyre's and Comet's. Enjoy."

She looked at Fyre's first

Fyre
Species: Pony
Gender: Female
Colors: Orange (coat), Red + Dark Red (mane + tail), Lime (eyes)
Cutie Mark: Flame
Likes: Fun, Chocolate, Making Friends
Dislikes: Chaos, Bullies, Brussel Sprouts
Deepest Fear: Drowning
Hobbies: Going to the park (around 3:00pm), strolling around town, hanging with her friends.

"Hmmmmm..." said Ruby.

She flipped to Comet's file.

Comet
Gender: Male
Colors: Grey (coat), white (mane + tail), blue (eyes)
Cutie Mark: Shooting Star
Likes: sweet foods, hay fries, wine on occasion, friends
Dislikes: Mean ponies, sadness, profiling
Deepest Fear: Tight Spaces (Claustrophobia)
Hobbies: Hanging out at the Smoothie Shop (around 4:30pm), hanging at the park (6:30pm)

"Oh... Claustrophobia sounds like fun to play with." Ruby murmured.

"Claustrophobia?" asked Pinkamena. "Sounds like Comet."

"Mm-hm." Ruby looked at his file with a pit of drool. "Imagine putting him in a box."

"Oh..." said Pinkamena, taking a drawing of a trap and dropping it in front of Ruby. "I had something more... interesting in mind."

The drawing depicted the outlines for a room that closed in on it's victim, eventually getting small enough to crush them.

Ruby's eyes lit up at the sight.

"If you make it slow enough, you could get a real rise out of him." she purred

"That's exactly how I designed it." said Pinkamena, picking up Fyre's folder and putting it back into the drawer.

"May I see the room?" she asked, wiping some drool from her cheek.

"I don't see why not." said Pinkamena, closing the drawer and walking away. "Follow me."

Ruby followed happily. Pinkamena passed about five doors on the right until she stopped.

"Here we are." she said, opening the door.

The room was fairly big. Nothing much else.

"So, how's it turn on?" asked Ruby.

Pinkamena left the room and stood in fornt of the wall beside the door.

"There's a control panel here." she explained. "The button on the left opens the room. The button on the right makes the room smaller." She tapped a screen above the panel. "This gives you a view of inside the room. Next to it is a mic allowing you to talk to the victim inside."

"Oh, that sounds fun." Ruby purred.

Pinkamena smiled. "Indeed it does. Now, all we need is Comet."

"Oh, can I help. I can act innocent." she cooed with a set of overly cute eyes.

"I'm sure you can." said Pinkamena, closing the metal door. "I've been wanting to try this room for a while." She locked the door and turned around. "Now's my chance."

"Yay." sang Ruby.

"Ready to go hunt down our victim?"

"Whatever you need." she cooed "can i call you my ant?" she asked looking away "c-cuse you so cool"

"Aunt, huh?" asked Pinkamena. "Well... seeing as how you want to because of hobbies... I guess that would be all right."

"Yay, I have a cool aunt!" Ruby cheered, nuzzling pinkamenas leg.

Pinkamena looked down the hall. "How sweet."

"So, how are we gonna get him?" Ruby asked excitedly.

"This one may take some planning." said Pinkamena. "I got lucky with Berry and Ginger."

"We could try the 'hurt filly at the park'."

"The 'hurt filly at the park' routine, huh?" asked Pinkamena. "That could work."

"And with my specialty with magic, it could be fun." Her horn glowed and her back half turned into a snake's tail.

Pinkamena took a step back and looked her over. "Nice."

"I can also hypnotize ponies with my eyes like this." she cooed smiling.

Pinkamena held out a hoof. "Not now."

"I don't think it would work on you. You're smarter then most ponies." she cooed turning back into her pony body.

"You got that right." said Pinkamena smiling. "I can tell I'm gonna like you." Ruby beamed. Pinkamena patted her head. "But still... whatever you do... stay on my good side."

"Kay, aunty. What are we gonna do?"

"The 'hurt filly in the park' routine."

"Okay" Ruby trotted ahead of Pinkamena.

The mare followed her. "And don't worry about getting him back here. I've got that covered."


Ruby lay on her side with her front half sticking out of a bush, moaning in fake pain. Her lower half was a snake's tail, hiding a needle of a knock-out drug that Pinkamena gave her to use.

"H-help" she moaned weakly.

Comet was sitting at one of the park tables. His ears perked as he heard the cries. He quickly got up and headed towards the noise.

"Hello?" he called. "Somepony hurt?"

"P-please." Ruby moaned. "I broke my hind leg."

Comet trotted around a hedge and saw Ruby. Upon seeing her, he quickly ran and knelt down in front of her.

"Oh, no." he said, not knowing what to do. "You said you broke your hind leg?"

The tail coiled around the needle and slid around behind him. "Th-there was this thing. I-it got me and--" She jabbed him in the flank, injected him, and tossed the needle before he could see.

He looked behind him. "What was that?"

"Oh, nothing much. Just the boogeymare." she cooed as the drug started to take effect.

"The boogey... m..." he trailed off as he felt tired.

Pinkamena stepped out from behind a tree as comet passed out.

"Well done, Ruby. Well done."

"Meh. It wasn't as fun. He didn't last long enough to start hallucinating" she mummerd

"Still... Now we can play." said Pinkamena, grabbing Comet's right foreleg."Come on." She began trotting away.

Ruby slitherd behind her. Pinkamena stopped in front of a large brush. she reached in, grabbed a handle, and opened a hidden door in the ground. She then dropped Comet down the stairs.

"Oh, you have a lot of these." Ruby cooed.

"I do." said Pinkamena, heading down the stairs. "It's how I get around." She disappeared out of sight. "Close the door behind you."

Ruby did as told and followed Pinkamena. The mare continued dragging Comet down the passageway. Ruby snaked her way arond fallowing Pinkamena. They finally arrived at a dead end. Ruby slid her tail around Comet.

"What's up?" Ruby asked, coiling around herself.

Pinkamena pressed on the wall. It swung open, revealing Pinkamena's lair.

"We're back." said the mare.

She dragged Comet out of the passageway and headed to the room. The snake filly followed happily.

Pinkamena opened the door and dragged Comet inside. "Damn, he's heavy."

"Maybe he will loose some pounds in here." she snickered.

Pinkamena dropped Comet in the center of the room. She then lefft, closing the metal door behind her. "And now we wait."

"How long do you think he's gonna be out?" Ruby asked.

"Ohhh, I'd say about... three more minutes. Tops."

The filly coiled around herself, making a little fort from her snake tail.

"Okay." she said.

Pinkamena looked behind her at the room across the hall from her. She turned and trotted over to it

"What's in there?" Ruby asked, watching Pinkamena.

Pinkamena opened the door and looked inside. "This is where I'll be taking Fyre."

Ruby looked inside. Inside the room was a pool of water. Above it were tw chains, each with a cuff at the end. A lever was built into the wall on the left side of the room.

"Oh, this one looks fun." said Ruby.

"I'm sure it will be." said Pinkamena. "It''s a very simple one. The victim is chained upside-down and is slowly lowered into the pool. Before they die they are pulled back up. This goes on and on for a couple times, each dunk lasting longer than the last."

"Oh, that sounds really fun. Are her forelegs free?"

"Oh, yeah." said Pinkamena.

"Oh, you so creative. How long did it take you to make something like this?"

"Oh, about... a day. For this one, anyways. The device that killed your mother took almost a week."

"So how did you make her go?"

"The chair she was strapped to had spikes inside. After every five seconds she didn't drink from the wine tank or booze tank, a spike impaled her. So... in the end... she bled to death."

"Awww, that's too boring." ruby moped.

"Wasn't boring if you were there, Ruby." Pinkamena giggled. "All that blood..."

"Yeah, you right."

Pinkamena eyed the chains and then the pool. "I can already hear her screams."

"Can I help with her to aunty?" ruby asked with wide eyes

"I don't see why not." said Pinkamena.

"Yay!"

Just then there was a moaning sound behind them. Pinkamena turned and looked at the room Comet was in. "Looks like somepony's awake."

"Yay. Let's watch." the filly cooed slithering over.

Pinkamena trotted up to the control panel and watched the screen. "It's about time you woke up."

Comet looked around the room. It was a perfect box. "What's going on?!" he yelled.

"Hey, mister Comet!" Ruby cheered.

Comet looked around. "Who's that?!"

"Thanks for helping me at the park!"

"The park?" asked Comet, thinking. "YOU?!"

"Yay. You remember!"

"Let me outta here right now or I'm gonna--"

Pinkamena giggled. "You're gonna what, Comet? You can't leave."

Ruby giggled slightly.

"WHAT DO YOU WANT?!" yelled Comet.

"Just to have a little fun." said Pinkamena, placing her hoof on the button.

"Hey, Comet. Are you scared?" the filly giggled.

Comet looked around the room. "THIS ISN'T FUNNY!"

"No." said Pinkamena. "But this is. " She pressed the button.

The walls slowly began to move inwards. Comet looked to the sides frantically.

"WHAT THE HELL?!" he yelled, sweating.

"It's a box, silly." Ruby cooed

The walls stopped moving.

"LET ME GO!!!" he yelled. "THIS ISN'T FUNNY!!!"

Ruby licked her lips watching.

Pinkamena pushed the button again, causing the ceiling to start to lower along with the camera. Now Pinkamena and Ruby had a closer view. Comet watched the ceiling coming down, a tear falling from his eye and running down his cheek.

"Awww hes crying like a little filly" she cooed giggling

Pinkamena grinned as the ceiling came to a stop. The room had shrunk about a third of it's starting size. Cometlooked around and saw the metal door. He ran over to it and tried to open it. He was then zapped with electricity and thrown backwards. Pinkamena looked at Ruby.

"Ah, yeah." she said, remembering. "Forgot about that."

"You didn't tell me it was so shocking." Ruby giggled at her pun.

"That pun was bad and you should feel bad." said Pinkamena.

Ruby looked at the floor sadly sorry.

Pinkamena looked back up the screen. Comet was cowering against the left wall. The mare grinned and pushed the button. The walls began moving again, pushing Comet across the floor.

"NOT AGAIN!!!" he cried.

"Awww, don't feel bad, mister." Ruby cooed.

The walls came to a stop again.

"PLEASE!!!" cried Comet. "STOP THIS!!!"

"Stop?" asked Pinkamena. "Why does every pony want to stop just as it's getting good?"

"They, dont like are fun" ruby huffed

"Our fun, huh?" asked Pinkamena. "Hmm..." She put her hoof on the button.

Pinkamena pushed the button and the ceiling began to lower again.

"NO!!! NO!!!" yelled Comet. "MAKE IT STOP!!!"

Pinkamena grinned, watching the screen.

The filly giggled.

The ceiling stopped. The room was now two-thirds smaller than it was at the start. Comet wascowering in the center, forehooves over his head.

"What's the matter, Comet?" asked Pinkamena. "Too small?"

Pinkamena pushed the button again. The walls began closing in again. They stopped just barely touching Comet. The colt began hyperventilating.

"P... PLEASE!!! D-DON'T!!!" he pleaded.

Pinkamena pushed the button again. The ceiling began lowering again. The middle section of the ceiling stopped just above Comet's head while the rest kept going until it touched the floor. Comet was now completely boxed in.

"And now for the grande finale." she said with a grin, placing her hoof on the button.

"Oh, wait, Pinkamena." Ruby whispered so Comet couldn't hear. "Hey, Comet." she said, this time so the colt could hear. "Count down from 10 and and it will all be over." she sang.

"C-Count down?" he whimpered.

"From 10." she confirmed.

"A-And you'll l-let me g-go?" he asked.

"You'll just have to find out." sang Ruby.

Comet gulped. "T-Ten..."

"Hurry." the foal sang again.

"N-Nine..." he whimpered.

"Ain't got all day." said Pinkamena.

Comet sniffled. "E-Eight..."

"Hurry hurry hurry!" the filly huffed.

"Seven... S-Six..."

Pinkamena sighed. "Come on..."

"F-Five... F-Four..." he started crying. "Three..."

"Almost there." sang the foal.

"T-Two... O-O-One..." He cried.

"You forgot death." the filly purred.

"D-Death?" asked Comet.

"Now you die." she chimed.

"Wh-What?" he whimpered.

Pinkamena pushed the button and the ceiling started to come down.

"NO!!!" yelled Comet.

Pinkamena grinned.

The ceiling came into contact with Comet and began pushing him downwards. He let out a blood-curdling scream and then there was a sickening crack.

"Ooh." said Pinkamena. "Felt that one."

"the camrias all bloody" ruby huffed

The ceiling continued crushing Comet, stopping when it got to the floor.

"That was awesome." said Pinkamena.

"I'll say!"

Pinkamena pushed the other button and the room started to open up. She then opened the door just as the ceiling and walls returned to normal. The crushed, bloody corpse of Comet lay in the center of the room.

"Ooh." said Pinkamena. "Nasty."

"Would you like some help cleaning up?" Ruby offered.

Pinkamena looked at her. "Perhaps."

About twenty minutes later they had cleaned up the mess and stuffed the remains of Comet in a bag. Pinkamena set the bag down outside the door and trotted to her desk.

"That was so much easier than having to tell Fray what to do all the time." ruby side

Pinkamena smirked and opened the drawer, pulling out Comet's file.

"Whatcha doing?"

Pinkamena opened the folder and picked up a pen. "Finishing up a few things." she answered, writing 'Crushed' on the 'Cause of death' line.

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