A Broken Mare

by DJ Variety

Rating: teen
Tags: Main 6, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Rainbow Dash, Sad, Romance, Rarity, Tragedy
Length: 10814

Rainbow Dash finally shows an interest in colts and Rarity is ready to give her advice. Unfortunately things don't go so well and the events of one horrid night leave Rainbow Dash scarred and defeated.

After an eventful day Rarity is approached by Rainbow Dash who is seeking advice on dating. After building up the courage Rainbow Dash decides to give it a shot. All was going good until it took a nasty turn. Rainbow Dash is left broken and fragile and it will take the help of all her friends to piece her back together.

This is my first time writing a story. If it's not good or if you see places where I can improve it would be much appreciated. Just so you know this story is going to be clean but with some less then pleasant things that are implied. I promise I won't go into any gory or disgusting details.

Published 2017-10-02 14:30:06 UTC
Last updated 2017-11-22 06:07:37 UTC

Ponyville, Pink Pony, and Pranks

It was another good day in Ponyville and “good” meant that some ancient magic wasn’t running rampant trying to destroy the small village. While the lack of excitement use to be considered boring or mundane, these peaceful and otherwise uneventful days have become extremely sought after by the local residents. This was especially true for everypony’s favorite fashionista Rarity.

Rarity was enjoying the beautiful autumn day void of any worry. Leaving her home, her pride and joy, Carousel Boutique she headed to the local market for some late morning shopping. As she locked up her shop, hanging the ‘Be Back Soon’ sign on the front door, she hoped she would remember all the supplies crucial for her latest design. Rarity had a tendency to “temporarily” remove items she needed from her memory; for, “ladies do NOT forget necessities” as she had said to her younger sister in the past. Twilight Sparkle has, on many occasions, suggested Rarity simply make a checklist to avoid such mishaps. On all of these occurrences Rarity has agreed, but alas when the creative juices get rolling there is no time for lists.

Trotting down the road towards the markets Rarity was enjoying the lovely weather, making a note to thank the weather team for this perfect day. Celestia’s sun hung overhead with clouds sparsely decorating the sky to complete the picture. Life was beautiful in Rarity’s eyes and for as long as it didn’t ruin her hair or affect her hooficure she was content.

Finally reaching the market Rarity quickly, but elegantly, went about gathering the supplies she’d need. Chatting with each salespony she did business with. No matter how eager she was to get back to doing what she loved Rarity couldn’t pass up an opportunity to socialize, and while Ponyville was no Canterlot or Manehattan she still enjoyed the company of the town’s populous. If given the opportunity and time Rarity would converse with anypony in town about almost any subject with the exception of gossip. Contrary to popular belief Rarity was not a fan of gossip, at least not after the Gabby Gums incident.

After gathering all the supplies needed to create the masterpiece she had imagined, she started to head back to her boutique. Glancing at the clock tower on her way back she noted that she had only been gone for just under an hour. Joyous at the fact that she still had ample time to work on her newest design she was halted in her tracks by a faint sound erupting from her stomach. Quickly she glanced around checking to see if anypony had noticed. Relieved to find nopony staring at her she relaxed; glad she’d be spared the humility and embarrassment she would have suffered from the uncouth sound her belly had made. Once again noting the time on the clock tower Rarity realized it was noon and time for lunch.

Since she was already out and about Rarity decided it would be a splendid idea to have lunch with one of her friends. Given she was only a few buildings down from Sugar Cube Corner, Pinkie Pie seemed like the most reasonable choice. Not only was Pinkie located nearby, Rarity felt like it had been a little time since she had spent some one on one time with the pink pony.

Upon entering the bakery Rarity smiled at the sight of the over energetic pink pony at the counter. “Good day Pinkie Pie, how are you doing this gorgeous day?”

“Oh, Hiya Rarity. It’s terrific! What brings you by today? In the mood for some cookies? A cake? Cupcakes? Cookie flavored cupcakes on a cake?” The hyperactive pony asked getting more and more excited with each suggestion.

“While those all sound lovely darling I just dropped by to see if you would want to get some lunch with me. I do say it has been awhile since I’ve sat down and had a proper conversation with you. Are you free?” Rarity asked with a smile.

“Hmm… well I was waiting for Dashie to do some pranking but she was suppose to be here like forever ago. Maybe she’s not coming. It’d be rude of her to not let me know though. Maybe she just forgot.” Pinkie pondered to herself. It seemed to Rarity that Pinkie was more or less thinking out loud rather then actually answering. After years of being friends with the pink mare Rarity knew it was hard for Pinkie to do something that might let one of her friends down.

“If you’d rather wait for Rainbow Dash that is perfectly fine dear. After all it would be rude of me to assume you’d drop all plans on my account. No, if you have plans with Rainbow Dash then that is just fine.” Rarity replied not wanting Pinkie to feel like she had to choose between two of her friends.

“Well,” Pinkie said while rubbing her chin. “I could let Mr. and Mrs. Cake know that I’ m leaving with you and if Dashie shows up to let her know where to find me. Oh oh! It’s perfect, that way if Dashie does show up the three of us can go pranking TOGETHER!”

“Darling, pranking isn’t really my thing. Besides Carousel Boutique will be waiting for me, but we can still have lunch together and enjoy each other’s company. If Rainbow Dash comes looking for you we will simply part ways till another day.”

“Okie dokie lokie,” Pinkie replied bouncing up and down with a huge grin on her face. “Let me just let Mr. and Mrs. Cake know I’ll be heading out.”

As the two friends sat down for their meal they chatted about their day and anything new or exciting that had happened to them. As per usual Pinkie would break off into long tangents about adventures and antics that seemed farfetched but with Pinkie Pie you can never truly know what is reality and what is her imagination. Pinkie had just finished telling Rarity about this prank she had set up for Applejack. Long story short the farm pony was less then amused by the outcome but upon hearing her friend’s laughter chuckled right along side her.

“And with how perfectly that prank went I thought of a super duper awesomely spectacular prank for later today but I’m going to need Dashie’s help because it’s quite the doozy. And I maybe good but even I can’t pull it off alone.” Pinkie proceeded to tell Rarity.

Rarity chuckled, “that does sound quite amusing. You’ll have to let me know when this ‘super duper’ prank is taking place because if it’s half as good as that last one I want to witness it for myself.”

“It won’t be half as good it’ll be like a zillion times better!” Pinkie exclaimed excitedly, “and don’t worry you will totally be there!”

“Marvel… wait, come again?” Paused Rarity as the realization of totally being there started to settle in. “Pinkie, darling? When you say and I quote ‘don’t worry you will totally be there’ what are you implying?”

“Sorry Rarity it’s a secret.” Replied Pinkie with a nonchalant smile on her face.

“Well if I was to be in this master plan of yours then why did you invite me to prank with you? Wouldn’t that have ruined your plan?” Rarity questioned a little worried about what the pink pony was planning.

“I would have just saved it for later silly.” With that reply Rarity knew with almost certainty that she was going to be the target of some future prank.

“Well if you would be so kind to hold off until after this evening it’d be much appreciated. I do have a lot of work I want to get done before the day is done. Besides I’m sure there are plenty of other ponies to be pranked.” Rarity answered excepting her future fate.

“Ahhh…” Pinkie whined. “But it’s going to be so good.”

“Pinkie promise me,” Rarity said with a confident smile feeling like she had just announced checkmate.

“Cross my heart hope to fly stick a cupcake in my eye,” Pinkie recited while performing the necessary actions including sticking a cupcake that had previously not been there in her eye. Satisfied with her friend’s actions Rarity switched subjects and the two continued their meals in pleasant moods.

After saying their farewells Rarity proceeded to head back to her boutique. Glad to have spent some time with her friend she was ready to begin working on her latest design. Even though more time had passed then Rarity would have liked her latest design was still fresh in her mind and what little parts weren’t quite as fresh in her mind got re-jogged back to her memory after looking at the sketch she had made before she had left that morning. The irony of Rarity finding time to sketch her ideas down to the finest detail but not make a list of materials needed was not lost on the unicorn. It was simply her process she reasoned but in reality she knew it was because she simply didn’t think she’d need it.

As the sun was setting in the sky and dusk started to fall upon Ponyville Rarity smiled upon the work she had put in. While not quite finished her latest dress was divine and marvelous. Giddy with excitement about the reaction that the Canterlot elites would have upon seeing such an elegant gown Rarity started to clean up her workspace a little in preparation for dinner and later sleep.

Rarity levitated some red silk up onto a rack when a knock was heard at her front door. Rarity always made time for costumers even when she was in the middle of actually making a dress but given the hour she would have to let the patron know that she’d be more than willing to help them tomorrow with whatever it was they needed. Approaching her front door she hollered, “I am terribly sorry but I am closed for the evening. But if you wouldn’t mind coming back tomorrow I will be more than happy to help you with anything, I’ll even through in a discount for the inconvenience.” Finally reaching the door and grasping the handle in her magic Rarity opened the door to see which pony it was in need of her special talent.

“Rainbow Dash?”

Colts

“Rainbow Dash?” Rarity was a little surprised by the mare’s appearance for she had assumed that Rainbow Dash would still be about pranking with Pinkie. “Pinkie promised me there’d be no pranks this evening so don’t even…”

“What? No, shut up.” Rainbow interrupted. “Look, I’m not here to prank you. I haven’t even seen Pinkie all day. I need…”

“Oh Rainbow Dash! How could you?” Now it was Rarity’s turn to interrupt, “Pinkie was practically exploding with excitement just thinking about the pranks you two would pull today and you stand her up? Poor darling. What kind of a friend just ignores another friend?”

“Rarity, please! It’s not a big deal. Pinkie will be fine” Rainbows tone and expression showed her annoyance with her theatrical friend. “Look I’ve been a little distracted lately and I was hoping for…” she trailed off rubbing the back of her neck and glancing around, avoiding eye contact.

“Hoping for what dear?” the white unicorn prodded, curious with the unusual way the brash mare was acting. “Darling is something wrong?”

“No, I’m fine.” Dash replied quickly. “It’s just that I’ve been thinking a lot and… well you see it’s just… I’m not really sure how to… I’m not as experienced as you are when it comes to…”

Rarity stared at the rambling mare with a deadpan expression. “Rainbow Dash?”

“Uh, yeah Rarity?” Rainbow said cautiously with a nervous smile on her face.

“Why are you here?” questioned Rarity.

Rainbow glanced around gathering her thoughts and her nerves. Exhaling she said with a defeated look, “I was hoping to get some advice about…colts.”

The last part of Rainbow’s sentence was extremely quiet and almost inaudible. For a split second Rarity was almost positive she had heard the mare wrong. “I’m sorry, what did you say?”

“Please don’t make me say it again Rarity,” was the only reply and all the proof Rarity needed to know she didn’t need to get her hearing checked. With her stomach bubbling from giddy excitement and her eyes lighting up Rarity inhaled preparing to screech out in uncontainable joy but a hoof was quickly placed over her mouth. “Don’t you even dare,” said the cyan pegasus with a stern look in her eyes.

A short time later the two were sitting down at Rarity’s dinner table with refreshments. As eager as Rarity was to hear all about her friend’s latest interest she wouldn’t be able to stand herself if she wasn’t the perfect hostess. “So Rainbow Dash please do tell. Which stallion has caught the eye of the best flier in all of Equestia?”

“It’s not like that Rarity. It’s just that I’ve never really noticed colts before I guess. Recently however I keep feeling like something is missing in my life. I’ve always kind of felt this way actually. Dreaming about my future has always included things like being a Wonderbolt and being a hero. Well, I am those things now, but there was also another part of me that wanted a family. It never seemed as important because I was too busy trying to achieve all these other goals that I deemed more important. Where I am now in my life though, it’s clear to me that starting a family might just be the most important one of them all and its the hardest one too.”

“And ponies think I’m dramatic,” teased Rarity. “Look Rainbow Dash, you’re thinking to far into the future. You see a goal and want to complete it but finding love is not that easy. What you need to do is find some gentlecolts who you enjoy being around and ask them on a date. If you feel a connection you continue to see them till you’ve both come to the consensus that you want to be together.”

“Well that doesn’t seem to hard. So I just find a colt who shares my interests and bam! A couple dates and my perfect future is secure.”

“No no darling. With that attitude you’re asking for trouble and heartbreak. That’s the same mentality I had about Prince Blueblood and remember how that turned out.” Rarity shuddered at the memory. “It’s not about finding one colt and then just putting in the time. You’re going to have to peruse a little. See a few colts and see who it is you’re compatible with.”

Rarity watched as Rainbow Dash thought over their conversation. “Okay. Where do I start?”

“So brash as always Rainbow Dash. Well, the only place to start is by finding a nice colt. You have the right idea about finding someone who shares your interests. As far as somepony specific that is up to you. While I’m more than glad to give you advice I will not make any decisions for you.”

“I understand, nopony knows me better than me right?” Replied Rainbow with a confident smile.”

“Exactly, now if you don’t mind it is getting rather late. Wouldn’t want you getting lost in the night sky again.”

“One time. I party too hard and misplace my cloud home one time and never hear the end of it.”

“Darling your house is magically stuck in one place. You didn’t misplace it. You drank too much and tried to fly to your parents’ place in Cloudsdale.”

“Yeah, well. I wasn’t lost. I knew where I was going.”

“We found you the next day in the opposite direction of Cloudsdale.” And with that Rarity proclaimed her victory. Uttering their final goodbyes for the night Rarity asked to be kept informed on Rainbow Dash’s newest adventure.

“Yeah, yeah I’ll keep you informed. Just promise me you won’t go around telling the whole town I’ve gone soft. I have an image to uphold.” Replied Rainbow as she departed Carousel Boutique. Rarity waved goodbye to her friend as she soared out of sight. In her heart Rarity was overflowing with happiness for her friend and hoping Rainbow would find a colt who would treat her right.

Author's Note

Okay so I'm not sure if I like my own writing style or not. Also this chapter seemed really short but it got across what I wanted it to, I guess. If you can't tell back and forth conversations aren't really my strong suit. Dialogue be harder then I thought. Especially when trying to convey complex concepts like love.

Thunderlane

Once more the weather team had blessed Ponyville with a gorgeous day. Well that was the common consensus, but for one mare it was not. Rarity was struggling to keep her mane perfect as she walked through town back to Carousel Boutique. The wind was, in her opinion, unnecessarily strong. Earlier that day on her way to the spa to meet up with Fluttershy she had thought the light breeze was just divine but now it was just the worst possible thing.

Approaching her abode, grateful to soon be free of the wind that was wrecking her mane, Rarity started at the door. Finding it unlocked at first cause slight alarm in the mare but her fears where instantly squelched upon remembering Sweetie Belle. Rarity had given Sweetie Belle a key to her home and while she wasn’t fond of surprise visits couldn’t complain too much this time. For her little sister had informed her that she planned on dropping by soon, and while Rarity would have preferred a specific date and time she was just glad to have gotten any form of warning at all.

Expecting a large mess, and possibly some destruction upon entering, Rarity was knocked off guard by not only the tidiness of her living room but also by the presence of Rainbow Dash. The cyan mare was lying on Rarity’s couch reading a Daring Do novel.

“Oh, Rainbow Dash I wasn’t expecting to see you here. Especially since this is my house.” Rarity wasn’t upset but wanted to get the point across that you shouldn’t be lounging in ponies’ houses without permission or an invitation.

“Sweetie Belle let me in. Give me a second to finish this page would ya?” Replied Rainbow without looking away from the book.

“I had assumed," Rarity looked around her house. "Did you clean my house? I don’t remember it being so spotless.”

“Na, once Sweetie Belle let me in she made me some tea and started to clean up some stuff.” Said Rainbow still not looking away from her book. “Ya know she really does take after you. Being a good hostess and what not.”

“Yes and where is the little angel now? Not in my inspiration room I hope.” Asked Rarity with a hint of sarcasm and immediately followed by the fear of a potential disaster. Rarity loved her sister and she knew how much Sweetie just wants to help, but Rarity also knows of her sister uncanny ability to cause destruction.

“She’s with Scootaloo.” Stated Rainbow Dash as if it were obvious. “The squirt follows me everywhere and I’m here so it wasn’t long before they ended up together.”

With her guest having already been taken care of by her sister Rarity took a seat across from Rainbow Dash and waited for her to put the book down. Fixing her mane Rarity considered asking Dash about the need for such strong gusts of wind but decided it wasn’t really that important. Plus she didn’t want to deviate the conversation she was hoping they’d be having off course. It had been four days since the two mares had had their little talk and with the weekend coming to a close Rarity was hoping to hear about any possible dating activities.

Rainbow Dash finally closed the book, sat up, and turned to Rarity. “Why are you smiling at me like that?” Asked the rainbow maned mare with a creeped out expression on her face.

Rarity was unaware of the look on her face because she was teeming with excitement. “So Rainbow Dash how was it? Did you enjoy yourself? Who was the lucky colt? Were there sparks? Oh please, give me the details darling,” begged the unicorn.

“Whoa whoa whoa. Calm down Rarity.” Started Rainbow Dash followed excitingly by, “Good, yes, Thunderlane, I don’t know what that means, and it was totally awesome!”

“Oh darling, Thunderlane?” Rarity was trying to be supportive and didn’t want to upset her friend but she wasn’t fond of Rainbow Dash’s first choice in a colt. “He’s a nice colt and all but he is kind of known for… getting around.”

“Yeah, duh, that’s the point.” Responded Rainbow Dash with no falter in her demeanor. “I still don’t want anypony to know that I’m dating yet. You know? My image. So I figured if I went out with Thunderlane everypony would think it was as friends. Nopony would believe that I'd go on a date, especially with Thunderlane.”

“But that defeats the point,” protested Rarity. “There is a difference between being with a friend and being on a date.”

“I know that. I told Thunderlane that it was a real date. For us it was real but to everypony else we were just friends. It was perfect.” Reasoned Rainbow Dash looking like she had just one an intellectual debate.

“Aren’t you afraid he’ll tell other ponies? It would be quite the story to be the first colt to date Rainbow Dash.”

“Nah, I’m not worried. I asked him to keep it on the down low. Plus even if he did who would believe him, right?” Rarity couldn’t argue with her friend’s logic.

The situation did leave Rarity feeling as though Rainbow Dash had some how cheated and she wasn’t about to let her friend get away with it. “So, if everything was so perfect, are you planning on going on a second date with him. Is my sweet little Dashie in love?” Teased Rarity.

“Okay so first, only pinkie can call me Dashie. When other ponies do it its weird. And second, I’m not sure if I want to go on another date with him or any other pony for that matter.”

Rainbow’s comment had surprised Rarity. “I thought you said you enjoyed yourself. Why do you want to stop?”

“I did. It was a lot of fun but it seemed like a lot of work you know?” Rainbow looked dejected now. “The feeling I got while on the date was great. I can’t really explain it though. I felt girly but in a good way.”

“You still haven’t answered my question darling? If you enjoyed the feeling, why stop?” Prodded Rarity.

“I don’t know. The feelings I got were from the date itself not from the pony. I don’t think it would have mattered who I would have been on the date with.”

“That’s been my point exactly Rainbow Dash. You don’t have any chemistry with Thunderlane. I really wanted you to discover this on your own but it seems like left to your own intuitions you won’t find what you’re looking for. If I could make a suggestion then, how about Soarin? I remember seeing you two at the Gala a few years back.”

At the mention of the Gala and the memory of that entire night made Rainbow’s cheeks redden. “I… I don’t know Rarity. I mean Soarin is great and all but we’re both Wonderbolts and it’d be hard to keep secret…”

“Then don’t,” interrupted Rarity. “There’s no rule about dating other members of the Wonderbolts, is there?”

“Well not but…”

“No buts Rainbow Dash,” interrupted Rarity once again. “I think in order to find what you’re looking for you can’t be focusing so hard on keeping it secret. It doesn’t matter if ponies know because those same ponies also know that you’re the best flier in all of Equestria, right? You’ve saved the kingdom and multiple lives, including my own, on many occasions. Nopony will think any less of you. I promise.”

Rarity waited patiently for Rainbow to process all that was said. The contemplation on Rainbows face was starting to change to acceptance and understanding. “Okay, you’re right. I’ll give it a try,” was Rainbows final response, which was one of both determination and hesitation.

Shortly after Rainbow Dash had departed. Rarity was feeling quite satisfied with how the conversation had turned out. Once more Rarity was left hoping for the best in Rainbow Dash’s future.

Soarin

A peaceful night, Celestia’s sun had just vanished and Luna’s moon was hanging overhead. Darkness’ veil rested over the residents of Ponyville. Rarity had already turned in for the night and was quickly approaching a deep sleep. Right before unconsciousness fully consumed her a loud and terrible banging noise jolted her awake. Slightly dazed and confused she exited the comfort of her bed and headed out of hear bedroom. Upon reaching the top of the staircase Rarity knew the ruckus was coming from her front door but the reason anypony would disturb her at this hour was beyond her.

To say Rarity was a little grumpy from being woken at such a late hour was an understatement. She wanted little more then to run the culprit off her property but knew to do so would not be becoming of a civilized pony. Swinging the door open forcefully with her magic Rarity came face to face with the one and only Rainbow Dash. “Rainbow Dash do you know the hour?! What could be so important that you would dare disturb my beauty sleep, hmm?”

“It’s not that late Rarity. Can I come in?” Replied the cyan mare who was already entering the house upon asking her question.

“As if you’re not already,” grumbled Rarity through clenched teeth. Rarity loved spending time with her friends but knowing Rainbow Dash this wasn’t a matter of life or death and could have waited till the morning. “What can I help you with Rainbow Dah?” sighed Rarity in defeat just wanting to get it over with so she could return to slumber and good dreams.

Rainbow walked over and sat down on Rarity’s couch. “You’re not gonna offer me any refreshments or anything?” asked Rainbow surprised it wasn’t Rarity’s first comment like usual. Upon turning and looking at her friend’s glare Rainbow sheepishly smiled and quickly replied, “It’s okay I’m good, heh heh.”

“Why are you here Rainbow Dash?” Rarity’s patience was cut extremely short after that last comment. “I would prefer to get some sleep sometime tonight.”

“Look I’m sorry to have disturbed your slumber but I just really wanted to talk with you.”

“And why couldn’t we have talked in the morning?” was Rarity’s response, still waiting for the answer to her question.

With a small nervous smile Rainbow said, “Well, I couldn’t sleep so here I am.” The statement came out almost more like a question. As if Rainbow Dash were asking Rarity if that was a good enough reason.

“Leave,” was Rarity’s short response. Just because Dash couldn’t sleep doesn’t mean she shouldn’t get to.

Quickly Rainbow replied “But it’s because of romance. You love romance. Don’t you wanna know how my date with Soarin went?” Rainbow was smiling gleefully now hoping that by using the word romance that Rarity would cave.

“I don’t need to know so bad that I lose sleep over it,” answered the sleepy fashionista.

“But I’m already here,” pleaded the unwanted guest.

“Ugh! Fine! Let me make myself a cup of coffee.” Rarity was too tired to argue and added in spite, “But you don’t get any!”

After a short period of time Rarity re-entered the living space with a cup of coffee. Rainbow was waiting surprisingly patiently for her friend to situate herself and take a few sips of her hot beverage.

Feeling a little more awake Rarity set down her drink onto the coffee table in front of her. “So, how is Soarin doing these days?”

“Ohmygosh, Rarity it was awesome! I’ve never felt like this before. I thought the date with Thunderlane was great but today with Soarin it was on a whole other level. He’s a hoot to be with, being both confident and nervous at the same time. Kind and funny, making me feel more special than anypony ever has before. Understanding and willing to do whatever to make me feel more comfortable.” Rainbow had seemingly burst, not even answering Rarity’s original question and just spewing everything she was thinking. “Besides, compared to Thunderlane he’s at least 20% more hansom… (cough) I mean cooler.”

Rarity was taken off guard by the sudden ramblings of her friend. Even though she knew this was something Rainbow had been wanting, it still seemed strange to see this rainbow maned mare excited about a date. “It seems to have gone well. I’m glad to here it darling. What all did you two do tonight, if you don’t mind me asking?”

“Well, first it was just dinner. He had made reservations at one of the best restaurants in Cloudsdale, but not one of the more fancy places. Neither of us are really fans of fancy things. Next he took me to downtown Cloudsdale where we ran around just participating in any old random thing that seemed to interest us. After that he…”

“Hold on Rainbow Dash,” interrupted Rarity. “He planned the entire evening then?”

“Yeah, isn’t that what colts are suppose to do?”

“Well, I’ve always felt like it should be whoever asks the other out. You feel like putting all the pressure on him to plan the date he wasn’t even prepared for was fair?” Rarity agreed that it should be the colt’s job to plan the date but traditionally it’s also the colt who asks the mare out.

“I was going to but he insisted. Said since he didn’t get to ask me out the least he good do was make an evening I’d never forget. And I won’t.”

“I suppose chivalry isn’t entirely dead after all. Please do continue, where did you two go next?” Rarity couldn’t have been happier for her friend. The look on Rainbow’s face filled Rarity with such joy that she didn’t even mind that she wasn’t sleeping right now.

“Okay, right. So, he took me out of town. Told me to just fly next to him for a while. When I asked where we were going he said it was a surprise. We just flew as the sun was setting. Finally we landed at this little pond where he had laid out a blanket on the ground. He asked if I recognized the spot. I had no idea where we were apart from being directly under Cloudsdale. I didn’t think I had ever been there before but he told me we were directly under the spot where I saved you and him during the young flier competition remember?”

“Yes, yes. Though I’d rather forget. I acted dreadfully, but do go on” Rarity encouraged.

“Apparently after all that happened Soarin would go down to the pond a lot. He told me it became his spot. Anytime he was confused or had questions he would go there to think. He told me one thing he thought about a lot while down there was me and that’s why he wanted to share it with me. He said I was the only mare he wanted to be with and asked if he could kiss me.”

“Did you?!” Shouted Rarity in excitement, just wanting to know if her friend had made such a huge step.

“Of course not. I’m not ready for that yet. But the offer was nice,” Replied Rainbow. “He was very understanding.”

“Oh darling that’s terrific! He asked you out again undoubtedly?”

“Yeah, for next weekend but I had to say no,” was Rainbow’s response with a lot of disappointment in her voice.

“But why not?” Rarity was afraid that such strong emotions from Soarin might have put off Rainbow but her friends over all demeanor prior to this statement had been sheer excitement and joy.

“I already made plans next weekend with another colt, but after tonight I don’t wanna go. I just wanna be with Soarin.”

“Who?”

“His name is Flash Sentry. He’s a royal guard apparently. I haven’t met him but Twilight set me up with him.” Rainbow sounded less then thrilled with her next weeks date.

“Why did Twilight set you up with a colt?”

“Well, after you suggested I don’t keep my dates secret I told Twilight. She was happy for me and all but ended up telling me about Flash. I guess he’s a newer guard but Shining Armor said he had a great reputation. I was all for it at the time, figured the more colts I dated the sooner I’d find one I truly liked. Now though I wish I could just cancel.”

“It won’t be too bad. It’s one date. Who knows maybe you’ll like him and you two could become friends. I doubt Soarin will mind, I’m sure he’d understand,” reassured Rarity. “Did you explain the situation to him?”

“Yeah, and in classic Soarin style he brushed it off as no big deal and said there would be other opportunities for us.”

“So don’t be too downtrodden about the whole thing. Have a good time with this Flash Sentry. Let him know that the date isn’t serious and I’m sure he’ll understand.”

“Oh, and I almost forgot. Apparently I’m gonna need a dress for that date. Apparently he wants to take me to some fancy pants restaurant and then a tour of the castle. Twilight said I’d have to look my best because delegates from Saddle Arabia will be there.” Rainbow seemed less than enthused about having to go so formally.

“Have no fear Rainbow Dash, I’ll make you a dress that’ll stun all that see it. And just for you I’ll make it light and not over the top. Just like you I’ll make it, how do you put it, 20% cooler,” smirked Rarity.

“Thanks. You’re a true friend. For everything, really.”

Author's Note

Okay, so as far as Flash Sentry goes, I don't watch Equestria girls so I don't know his personality or anything. I didn't want to make up a character so I'm just using him. For people waiting for this story to hit its actual plot, soon I promise. In my head it wasn't going to take this long to get to but it just happened.

Applejack

At the crack of dawn, the first glimmer of Celestia’s sun, Ponyvilles’s resident fashion designer awoke. Normally Rarity tosses and turns in the mornings, taking time to fully wake herself up, but her excitement couldn’t be caged. The night before had been her cyan friend’s date in Canterlot. While she was certainly happy for her friend, Rarity was just yearning to know what the Canterlot elites thought of her elegantly designed gown. Her excitement had kept her up late the previous night and she was a bit disappointed that Rainbow Dash hadn’t turned up in the middle of the night like she had before.

Despite her desire to know what everypony thought of the dress, Rarity knew it wouldn’t be proper to hunt down Rainbow Dash and extract the answer. Rarity knew that the best way to handle the situation was to wait for her friend to drop by and wait until after they had discussed the date itself before asking about the dress. She envisioned all the admirers who were left stunned by the sleek gown that complemented Rainbow’s mane and complexion.

After the morning had passed Rarity was beginning to think Rainbow Dash wasn’t going to drop by. She was almost certain that Rainbow would have been eager to discuss her date. Perhaps Rainbow didn’t enjoy the date. Although if that were the case Rarity would assume that she’d still drop by. Rarity decided that her friend probably didn’t really care for the evening but probably enjoyed it to some degree.

Rarity reasoned that Dash probably had fun but wasn’t into the stallion she was with. Rainbow Dash had certainly made it clear that Soarin was her desired companion. Realizing that she might not see her friend today, Rarity cleared her mind of the whole thing. She figured she could always ask Rainbow Dash about it at a later date, but in the mean time she had work to get done.

A few days later, Rarity sat in her home board out of her mind. She had finished her last order earlier in the day and was prepared to get right back to work on another design. Unfortunately the creative juices she was hoping for seemed to be evading her at the moment. Staring at several sloppy drawings of potential dress designs a relief came to her in the form of a knock on her door.

“Coming,” she hollered out in a singsong voice.

Upon opening the door Rarity was greeted by Applejack. “Howdy Rarity? You busy?”

“Not at all, the opposite actually. What is it that I can help you with?” replied Rarity with a smile, happy to be actually doing something.

“Well I was just wonderin’ if you’d seen Rainbow Dash? Can’t seem to find her anywhere, myself.”

“Not since she picked up her dress several nights back. Has something happened?” Asked Rarity worriedly.

“Not that I know but she never stopped by yesterday. Normally we have ourselves a little competition. Tossin’ horseshoes or what not. It’s not like her to pass up a chance to compete with me.”

“Well that hardly sounds like cause for alarm. She’s been a little preoccupied these last few weeks as I’m sure you’re aware.”

“Oh I know,” replied Applejack. “She couldn’t stop talkin’ about Soarin last week. It was sweet till it wasn’t, but that’s the other thing. Soarin just stopped by the farm asking if I’d seen her. Apparently she missed practice.”

“With the Wonderbolts? That can’t be right, she’d never skip a practice.” Rarity couldn’t believe that Rainbow Dash would deliberately not show. She began to worry for her friend. “Has anypony been by her home yet?”

“Yup, had Soarin fly up. Nothin’. Not even Tank was there.”

“Maybe Tank was feeling ill and she took him to see Fluttershy?” Rarity was trying to think of places where Rainbow Dash would be.

“Thought of that myself,” was Applejack’s response. “Stopped by Fluttershy’s place on my way into town. Shy hasn’t seen her either. An’ before you ask she ain’t pranking with Pinkie Pie.”

“Reading with Twilight?” suggested Rarity hopefully while she truly doubted it. Rainbow enjoyed reading adventure novels but she normally read in private or if she was waiting for something.

“Maybe, haven’t stopped by Twilight’s yet. Figured it’d be more likely she’d be with you. Considerin’ how close yall’ve become over this datin’ thing.”

“Hey sis, what’cha doin’ here?” Applebloom and the other Crusaders were now approaching Carousel Boutique. “I though ya had a lot of chores today?”

“I do but it seems Rainbow Dash has gone and went missing on us. Nopony’s seen her in a few days,” answered Applejack.

“That’s not true,” blurted Scootaloo. “I saw her just earlier today with Tank.”

“Where darling?” asked Rarity.

“Well, I can’t tell you. I promised her I wouldn’t,” replied the filly.

“Look Scootaloo, we’re all a little worried about her an’ we just wanna make sure she’s doin’ alright.” Applejack’s response was perfect. Everypony knows how much Scootaloo looks up to Rainbow Dash and to get her to break a promise from her idle wouldn’t be easy.

“I can’t okay. She was really sad. Said she didn’t want anypony seeing her like that.” Scootaloo, who is normally full of energy, had a look of sadness herself.

“Darling, wouldn’t it be better if she was with her friend’s so we could cheer her up,” insisted Rarity with a reassuring smile on her face.

“I’m sorry but I can’t. I tried to cheer her up myself but she wouldn’t listen to me. She told me to leave her alone and that if anypony wanted to find her to tell them to look tomorrow,” explained Scootaloo.

“Darn nabbit! Scootaloo tell us where RD is right now! If my friend’s out there hurting I wanna be there.” Applejack was done messing around.

“Ugh! I can’t! I promised!” Scootaloo hollered in response. “It’s okay. She promised me she’d be better tomorrow. Just relax.”

“Scootaloo!” Applejack started.

“Everypony stop!” interrupted Sweetie Belle. “Rainbow Dash wants to be left alone so I say we respect her wishes. Besides she’s not really alone, she has Tank. If she promised Scoots that she’d be better tomorrow then wait until tomorrow. Besides, if she really doesn’t want to be bothered its not like any of us would be able to stop her from just flying away.”

Applejack sighs, “I reckon you’re right.”

“Yes Sweetie has a good point,” chimes in Rarity. “I say we all meet up first thing tomorrow morning and head to Rainbow Dash’s home.”

“Yeah, I suppose that makes the most sense,” agreed Applejack. “I’ll fill Twilight in on what’s goin’ on. I’m sure Fluttershy will be lookin’ for me here shortly. You’ll let Pinkie know?”

“Of course,” answered Rarity.

“Well in that case, let’s get goin’ Applebloom. We’ve got a load of chores that need to be done”

“Wait what? I finished my chores for the day already,” protested Applebloom.

“Yeah well I’m not gonna have time to finish by myself, so I’m gonna need your help,” replied AJ.

As the Apple’s left Rarity was trying to figure out what could have Rainbow Dash so upset. Preparing to ask Scootaloo more questions Rarity was surprised to see the orange filly zipping away on her scooter with Sweetie Belle in tow. Rarity conceded to just having to wait for the next day.

Morning

It was early, almost too early. Celestia had just barely risen the sun, but despite that Rarity was already up and awake for the day. Anxiety and worry coursed through her veins as she approached Twilight’s castle where her friends would be waiting. Rainbow Dash would be the subject of their get together.

Rarity entered the caste and headed towards what can only be described as a dinning room. While generally dinning wasn’t done there Rarity couldn’t think of a better description, map room? Regardless, upon entering the room containing the arcane table of untold power Rarity greeted those who were present. “Good morning everypony. Just missing Pinkie Pie I see.”

“Already here!” shouted the before mentioned pony from another room. “Just making a ‘Hope you’re not sad anymore and feeling better’ chocolate filled donut for Dashie.”

“Pinkie’s making breakfast,” chimed in Twilight before adding, “if you couldn’t tell.”

“And we’re still missin’ Soarin. Said he wanted to tag along. On account of how close them two have been getting I figured it couldn’t hurt,” Applejack informed.

“Girls,” Fluttershy started. “I think we need to talk about how we’re going to talk to Rainbow Dash. I’ve known her the longest and, well, she doesn’t get emotional too often. When she does however…” Fluttershy started to trail off.

“We know what you mean,” said Twilight. “I’m sure none of us have forgotten Tank’s hibernation.”

“Don’t forget about her confidence. Rainbow Dash can be the most confident mare in Equestria but let’s not forget just how defeated she can become. Remember how sad she became over that written test for the Wonderbolts,” reminded Rarity.

“I s’pose this could have something to do with failure. She ain’t never been good with failing. Though it would have to of been pretty bad for her to shut herself in. Normally losing only motivates her more, makes her louder,” added Applejack.

“What ever happened, it’s important that we let her know that we’re here for her,” replied Twilight. Shortly after a knock was heard at the front door. “That must be Soarin. I’ll go let him in.”

Twilight exited the room and headed towards the castle’s entrance. “Pinkie you almost done in there!” hollered Applejack.

“Just adding the finishing touches. Do you guys think I should make her a ‘cheer up we’re your friends and will always be here for you’ lemon meringue pie?” asked Pinkie from the kitchen.

“RD don’t like pie, remember?” answered Applejack.

“Rainbow Dash?” A surprised sounding Twilight could be heard saying. The others immediately fell silent. While they were planning on seeing their friend, never would they have suspected she’d be the one coming to them.

“Hey Twilight. Can I come in?” a defeated Rainbow Dash could be heard saying. “and can you get the other girls?” Everyone in the room was waiting silently.

“Actually, they’re here already. Just in the other room, let’s go.” Twilight lead Rainbow Dash, whose head hung low, towards the others. “Girls, Rainbow Dash is here,” announced Twilight as she re-entered.

“Ah, Rainbow Dash, good morning,” greeted Rarity not sure of how to proceed. The previous night Rarity had gone through multiple scenarios in her head. Some where the situation was resolved quickly, others where Dash became angered with them. Out of all the possibilities, never once did Rarity plan on this.

“There’s nothing good about it,” Dash said flatly. “Look, I know you were planning on coming over to cheer me up this morning. Well, I’m fine so it’s not necessary.”

“But, if it’s fine then why were you crying the other day?” asked Fluttershy.

“How’d you know we were gonna come see ya?” followed Applejack with her own question.

“Scootaloo,” replied Rainbow Dash to Applejack. “And I wasn’t crying. I had sand in my eyes when Scoots came by.”

“You don’t honestly expect us to believe that do you darling?” said Rarity with a concerned and caring tone. “We can see you now, you look miserable.”

“I’m just tired okay. I’ve had a long week.” Rainbow Dash was starting to become irritable.

“Well tell us about it. If its stress you’ll feel better, many studies say so,” encouraged Twilight.

“It’s not stress, and who cares about your studies. You’re not always right you know. You can’t predict everything,” Rainbow Dash spoke with venom on her tongue all while staring daggers at Twilight.

“Whoa nelly. Now calm down there sugar cube. You’re getting all riled up for no good reason. We’re your friends and we just wanna help. No need to attack Twilight,” interjected Applejack.

“Applejack’s right Dashie. We just want you to be happy.” Said Pinkie Pie as she bounced in from the kitchen.

“I know, I know. It’s just… I don’t wanna talk about it.” Rainbow Dash had just gone back to the same defeated look she had when she first entered. “I just want to forget about it okay. Everything will be okay.” She said the last part so quietly that it seemed more like she was talking to herself then any pony else

“Forget about what?” asked Fluttershy.

“Please, I don’t wanna think about it. It’s in the past and I’m past it,” answered Rainbow Dash putting on an unconvincing smile.

“Hey, sorry to just intrude like this but… Rainbow Dash?” Soarin had just entered the castle and was stopped dead in his tracks by Rainbow’s presence.

Rarity wasn’t surprised by Soarin’s sudden appearance, a matter of fact she was waiting for it, but what did surprise her was Rainbow Dash’s reaction. Rainbow Dash was terrified. She was slowly backing away and breathing heavily. She started to glance around quickly. “Darling are you okay,” Rarity was even more worried now.

“Um, ah, yeah. I’m fine, but, um… I got to go!” and with that Rainbow Dash bolted out of the castle but not through the front door. Instead Rainbow Dash darted towards the window on the farthest side and slipped out that way.

“What’s going on?” asked Soarin, truly puzzled.

“I’m not sure but one thing is certain. Rainbow Dash is not okay,” answered Twilight.

“Oh dear, I’ve never seen her act like this before,” said Fluttershy.

“Well let’s not wait around here. I say we go find her,” suggested Applejack.

The group started to head out in search of their distraught friend. The brief conversation they had just had with Rainbow Dash left Rarity even more confused then before. Rainbow Dash had shown so many different emotions in such a short amount of time. Depression mostly but she did get angry at Twilight and then terrified by Soarin. “What happened to you Rainbow Dash?” Rarity asked herself in thought. .

Author's Note

In case anybody is reading this and notices that the writing is bad, that's because I don't write. I'm not really a writer. Don't necessarily enjoy it really, but I had an idea that I wanted to get out. TBH this is way longer then I wanted it to be but I'm finding it necessary. Hell, I don't feel like I'm describing these conversations fully but I really just want to finish and have my idea out there. Not sure how much longer it will take before the conclusion since I'm only now starting to get to the problem, but hopefully I can keep some of your attentions long enough.

Chaos

Rarity sat quietly in Twilight’s castle contemplating the events of the last few days. After Dash’s sudden retreat the other day from the castle it had taken the entire day and most of the night before Rainbow Dash was found. Upon returning to her home that night to feed her woodland friends Fluttershy was the one who found the mare. Nopony else saw Rainbow that night in according to her own wishes. The only reason the others knew was because of a letter delivered to Twilight’s castle by Angel the bunny.

In the letter Fluttershy told them that Rainbow wished to be left alone but would be staying at Fluttershy’s cottage for the night. Fluttershy urged her friends to be patient and wait till the morning.

The next morning ended up being no better. Everypony was planning on heading to the cottage just outside of town but instead were met halfway by Fluttershy. Rainbow Dash still wasn’t ready to talk to them all and while Applejack protested, Fluttershy convinced them that it was for the best. Fluttershy had convinced Rainbow to stay with her for a while, and Rainbow had agreed as long as it would be just her and Fluttershy.

A couple days had passed since then and still nopony but Fluttershy had seen Rainbow Dash. Rarity wasn’t fond of this agreement but understood why Fluttershy felt it was the best option. At least this way they knew where Rainbow was, and Fluttershy kept them all informed on any changes, even if the only real news they got was that Rainbow has been crying herself to sleep every night.

“I can’t stand this anymore y’all! All this wait’n is getting us nowhere,” Applejack had been growing more and more impatient as the days went by. “I know Shy’s afraid that we will scare RD off but we’ve got to do somethin’. Sitting here isn’t fix’n the problem.”

“That’s the biggest problem, we don’t know the problem,” interjected Twilight. “I think we need to wait a little longer. I’m sure Rainbow Dash will eventually tell Fluttershy what happened.”

“Eventually? Well how long we s’pose to wait for that?” The situation had made Applejack very tense and uneasy, which didn’t really surprise Rarity at all. Situations like this weren’t really the farm pony’s forte.

“Girls! She’s gone!” Fluttershy burst through the front door panicked.

“What do you mean she’s gone? Wasn’t she with you?” Twilight inquired.

“She said since she was gonna be staying with me for a while that she wanted Tank there too. I thought she was just getting Tank and coming back but only Tank showed up.”

“Why didn’t you go with her darling. You couldn’t have thought it was a good idea for her to go by herself given the circumstance.” Rarity said.

“Well she seemed like she was doing better. She was smiling when she left and she was acting like she always does with Discord.” Flutter shy responded

“Wait, why was Discord there?” Applejack asked with a little too much anger.

“Well, um, we were having tea.” Answered Fluttershy cowering back.

“RD doesn’t even wanna see her friends but you thought she’d be okay with Discord?” Applejack was shouting now, causing Fluttershy to retreat even more.

“Applejack!” Twilight snapped. “Now’s not the time. You said Tank is at your place then? If that’s the case I’m sure she’ll come back soon.”

“I don’t think so, she left a letter.” Replied Fluttershy.

“What does it say?” Rarity asked.

Without saying anything Fluttershy revealed a letter that was quickly grasped by Twilight’s magic and hovered in front of her eyes. Twilight started to read out loud, “Fluttershy I’m going away. Don’t try to find me. I don’t plan on being found. Please take good care of Tank for me. Tell the girls that I love you all.”

“Oh nelly, this ain’t good. We’ve got to go, now!” Applejack was visibly worried as was every one else.

“Okay, Fluttershy go get Pinkie. Rarity, Applejack and I will start looking,” Twilight commanded and with that the group split up.

It had been an hour since the group had started their search and Rarity was now searching around Ghastly Gorge. Rarity was terrified, fear for her friend consumed her entirely. She wanted nothing but to find her friend and help her in anyway possible.

As Rarity continued to search the area around the gorge a familiar draconequus appeared in front of her. “Ugh, Discord now is not the time. I’m sure Fluttershy has filled you in, yes?”

“That’s why I’m here Variety.”

“My name’s Rarity,” the mare replied flatly.

“Tomato, tomato. Hmm, that doesn’t work very well in writing,” said Discord.

“I beg your pardon?” Rarity was confused by the last part of his statement.

“Pay it no mind. Look I’ve managed to find our good dear friend Rainbow Dash and..”

“WHERE? Take me to her!” Rarity interrupted.

“Yes I was getting to that before I was so rudely interrupted,” Discord said while crossing his arms and looking away in disgust.

“I don’t have time for you Discord, please,” Rarity was annoyed but pleading with the master of chaos. “I need to talk to her before she flies away.”

“Oh you don’t have to worry about that I’ve changed the gravity around her so she can’t fly, or fall.” With that last part Discord took on a more serious tone. “I’ve been around for a while and I know when someone’s at the end of their rope.” Discord added while holding a rope with a swinging stuffed Rainbow Dash hanging from it’s noose.

“Yes I know she’s hurting that’s why I need to convince her to stay. She needs her friends.”

“Oh you naïve little pony,” said Discord shaking his head. “She wasn’t running away she was going away. Permanently. It was quite obvious to me. I thought it was strange that Rainbow Dash would be staying with Fluttershy, and after she left Fluttershy filled me in on the situation. Once we read the letter I knew immediately what she was planning.”

“Why didn’t you tell us!?” Rarity was shocked and scared.

“If I had you’d be looking for a body. I’ve been using my magic to keep her from, well you know.” Discord’s tone and mannerisms were unlike anything Rarity had every seen from him before. “I love chaos but there is nothing more ordinary then death. I’m not a fan. Especially when it’s a friend, but I’m not really great at sentiment, that seems more up your alley. I’ll stay near by incase you need my magic but the rest is up to you…” Discord paused and pondered, “It’s Rarity right?”

Author's Note

Okay, so I missed a week but I'm back. Hope you got through this chapter ok. Again, writing is hard but I'm going to finish this story no matter what. Even if only one person wants to read it.

Hurt/Comfort

Rarity walked while in deep thought. Her heart pounding, mind racing, she pushed through the brush in the direction Discord had told her Rainbow Dash was. Paying no attention to the twigs getting caught in her main or scraping against her flank she was racking her brain hoping she would find the right words to comfort her friend.

As she progressed forward her ears were met with the sound of soft sobs. Just on the other side of a few bushes Rarity could make out her friends trademarked rainbow main. Slowly passing through the bushes and entering a small clearing she softly announced her presence. “Rainbow Dash?”

“Leave me alone,” Rainbow answered without turning towards her friend. Pain was evident in her voice. “Please,” she pleaded before continuing to sob.

“I can’t darling. Discord told me you tried to…” Rarity couldn’t finish the statement. The thought alone started to make her own eyes water, but she swallowed deeply to regain composure. She must remain strong for Rainbow Dash. “I can help Dashie. So can the other girls but you have to talk to us.”

“I told you only Pinkie can call me that,” Rainbow replied, “it’s weird when you do it.”

“Darling please, I’m worried about you, everypony is. What happened?” Rarity slowly approached and walked around to face Rainbow Dash. Slowly raising Dash’s chin so that their eyes would meet Rarity added, “I’m here for you Dashie, for as long as you need.”

Once their eyes met Rainbow Dash fell into an even deeper sob. “Oh Rarity,” she cried while pulling her friend into a hug. Rarity returned the embrace and patted her friend on the back, letting Rainbow’s tears roll down her back. “I’m sorry Rarity. I didn’t mean to cause everypony to worry so much.”

“It’s okay darling. Just promise me you’ll never try to leave us again. Promise?” Rarity was trying her hardest to stay poised but she could feel the tears forming in her eyes and the lump building in her throat.

“Okay,” Rainbow said shakily, “I promise.” The two sat there awhile just embraced in each other’s hooves. Soon the heavy sobbing of Rainbow Dash subsided and the two slowly separated. Rarity continued to sit quietly staring at her friend waiting for Rainbow’s next action. Rainbow Dash, who hadn’t looked up at her since Rarity had lifted her chin before the hug, finally broke the silence. “I think I’m ready.”

“To meet up with our friends? They will be so relieved, though I’m not sure if any of them no what you were trying to…”

“No, not that,” Rainbow interrupted. “I’m ready to tell you what happened.”

Rarity felt a chill run through her whole body. This is what she had initially been wanting to know but now that the time had arrived she felt frozen. A pressure built in her chest. She knew what ever had happened to Rainbow Dash must have been extremely bad. After all, it was bad enough for her to consider suicide.

“Do you remember how a little while ago I went to Canterlot?” Rainbow asked.

“Yes,” Rarity answered slowly.

“And I had that,” Rainbow paused mid sentence then closed her eyes before continuing, “date? With that royal guard? The one Shining Armor set me up with?”

“Yes, of course darling, I remember,” Rarity was unsure where this was going but could tell she didn’t like it. Rarity waited for Rainbow to continue, but the only noise coming from Dash were quiet sobs as the mare started to softly cry once again. “Darling, it’s okay. I think we should meet up with the others. They’ll be able to help too,” Rarity offered while placing one hoof on Dash’s shoulder.

“No,” Dash said sniffing while taking Rarity’s hoof off her. “Only you.”

Rarity sat there for a second not really sure of what to do or say. Realizing that she’d have to comfort Dash alone she repositioned her self so that she was sitting next to Dash. Putting her hoof around Rainbow’s shoulder, Rarity said, “Like I said before, I’m here for as long as you need me.”

Rainbow then took a deep breath and continued, “At first I thought Flash was a nice colt. I was enjoying his company. Not like when I was with Soarin but like Thunderlane. I told him right from the start that I only wanted to be friends but…” Rainbow took another pause and forced herself to contain her sobs. “He took me to a secluded place in the castle. Told me he liked it because nopony ever went there and it was quiet, far away from everypony else. Then he tried to kiss me. I pushed him away.” Rainbow started to breathe heavier and heavier, increasing the pace of her words. “I told him I didn’t like him like that but he kept coming at me. I pushed him away and tried to leave. He said the fun wasn’t over and blocked the exit. I… I was yelling for him to move. I tried to force my way past him. He hit me.” Rainbow was crying loudly again. Rarity’s heart broke. “I was dizzy. He got above me. Lifted up my dress. I tried to yell for help but he said it was useless, nopony would hear me. Then he… he,” Rainbow broke down into an uncontrollable wail filled with pain from the memory. Quickly she turned and re-latched herself to Rarity, burrowing her head into Rarity’s chest.

Rarity returned the embrace and cried as well. “Oh Darling. I’m so sorry you had to go through that.” Rarity was at a loss for words and decided to just hold her friend tightly and let her cry. “It’s okay now.”

“I felt so… so. Weak.” Rainbow said through her tears

“Your not weak darling. You’re the strongest mare I know and you’ll get through this, we’ll get through this,” Rarity comforted her hurt friend. “I will be here for you Rainbow Dash, always.”

“Promise?” Dash asked still crying loudly.

“Promise.”

The two mare’s sat there for a long time, just holding each other close. Rainbow Rainbow Dash had told her story and Rarity could say nothing to end her friend's pain, so instead she just sat there letting the mare cry in her forelegs. After several long minutes Dash’s cries started to calm back down. “Dashie,” Rarity started, “I think we should go meet up with the others. They’re probably worried sick about you.”

“Are things ever going to go back to normal?” Rainbow Dash asked.

“I don’t know darling.” It hurt Rarity to say it but she couldn’t lie to her friend, not now.

“Do I have to tell the others?” Rainbow was trembling in Rarity’s chest.

“Only if you want, once you’re ready. You know they’ll be there for you,” Rarity stated.

“I got a lot of complements on the dress you made that night,” Rainbow said while pulling herself away from Rarity.

“That doesn’t matter right now. Come on, let’s get back to town,” Rarity responded, standing up, extending her hoof to Rainbow Dash.

The two got up and proceeded to head back towards Ponyville. “You look like a mess Rarity. All those twigs in your hair, you’ve really let yourself go these last few day.” Rainbow teased, trying to act like her old self.

“Yes, well, something more important then my mane has kept me preoccupied these last few days, Dashie.” Rarity answered, glad to see a small smile on Rainbow’s face. The pain was still there, behind the smile, in her eyes, but Rarity knew Dash would get through this. Dash was strong.

“Something more important then that precious mane of yours. Never thought I’d see the day,” Rainbow chuckled forcibly. “And I guess you can continue to call me Dashie,” Rainbow added quietly, quickly followed by, “as long as nopony else is around to hear you.”

Author's Note

And that's it everyone, hope you've enjoyed. I feel like the best fanfics are hurt/comfort fics but there never seems to be enough of them. I'd really appreciate any feed back. I don't really care about getting views or comments but I'd love to know what you guys thought of the whole story. Things you like. Things you hated. What I did good. What I did bad. Please let me know everypony.