Displacement

by LudicrousBot

Rating: mature
Tags: Tempest Shadow, Sex, Comedy, My Little Pony: The Movie, Adventure, Griffons, Storm King, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance, Original Character
Length: 15169

You know, getting sent to another universe and becoming dragons wasn’t on these best friends To-Do-List. Was it on yours?Didnt think so.

Jack and Jake are just your average brothers from another mother, that is, until they were sent to a magical land filled with mythological creatures that roam the planet as dragons with special powers. How will these two nut jobs survive this world? Oh yeah did we mention ponies are the dominant species? Follow these two young adults into the nation of Equestria.
*Offensive jokes and memes:You have been warned*

*Remember you don’t have to read if you don’t like the story*

*sex tag is here because there will be a lot of sexual refernces and jokes, and maybe a few sex scenes, just maybe*

*art by Allagar on deviant art
Link:https://allagar.deviantart.com/art/Double-strength-513066158 *

*descriptions of characters*

-Jake-
Name:Jake Millard
Height:6’0 ft
Weight:170
Age: 18
Skin tone: Tan
Hair color: Red
Hair style: Short on sides but long hair on the top of his head combed to the right
Eye color: Green
Description: Jake is not the brightest of people per say but he won’t abandon his friends that are in need

-Jack-
Name:Jack Howard
Height:5’8 ft
Weight:150
Age:18
Skin tone: White
Hair color: Blonde
Hair style: Short on the sides but trimmed on the top with hair spiking upwards
Eye color: Blue
Description: Jack is calm, smart and a logical thinker

This story will be on a short hiatus, ranging from a few days to a couple of weeks due to problems occurring in my life. This story isn’t dead and I intend to keep it alive.

Published 2017-11-18 04:50:05 UTC
Last updated 2018-08-30 03:39:34 UTC

Prologue (Rewritten)

*Loctaion: San Antonio, Texas*

*POV: Jack*

The bell had rung and every one in the classroom had jumped out of their seats and bolted through the door, ignoring the teacher saying good luck in the real world. By the time everyone had left, excluding me and the teacher, I had barely put away my binder and journal into my backpack. The teacher had looked in my direction and spoke.

“So which college do you plan to apply at?” This was an easy answer.

“Texas A&M University sir.” Years of playing in football kept me disciplined and gained a habit of calling teachers ma’am or sir.

“No need to call me sir, you are about to graduate, we can have a normal conversation as friends and not as a teacher-student relationship. So just call me Bastion.” I was about to graduate tomorrow. A single tear slid down my cheek.

“Time really does fly by, doesn’t it?” I said. So far in my life, highschool has been the best years of my life. All the memories and friends I have made throughout these four short years. Memories ranging from bad to total happiness swirled in my mind. I had begun to revisit memories good and bad. I noticed the my teacher was tapping my shoulder, taking me out of my memories.

“Jack you just dozed off for a minutes, is Jake rubbing on you the wrong way?” He said jokingly. I chuckled at my soon to be ex-teacher’s statement. My longtime childhood friend, Jake. Let’s say he . . . Isn’t the . . . Brightest of people but is a good person overall. Despite doing actions that are questionable, Jake has helped me in times were I needed him the most and vice versa.

“No Bastion, well not that I know of.” I replied in the same joking tone Bastion used earlier. We both chuckled at our conversation. He soon walked towards me and put his left hand on my right shoulder and looked at me with a knowing smile.

“I hope only the best wishes for you in the upcoming future Jack.”

“Thank you sir-I mean Bastion, out of all the short years I’ve been here, your probably my favorite teacher. You were always so understanding and caring for your students, unlike a lot of other teachers who wouldn’t give a rat’s ass about us and our grades, you do. I won’t forget you.” I spoke with absolute truth, a lot of other teachers didn’t give off the same positive attitude that Bastion had circulating in his veins.

“I’m an optimist at best, no need to thank me, It was YOU who put the work into your classes, I merely guided you.” Damn he is really getting to me.

“I’ll be on my way, It was a fun ride we had.” I said.

“I was honored to be your teacher.” With that said and done, I begun to put on my backpack and walked out the classroom. The hallways were emptied due to me talking to my teacher for several minutes. The hallway looked stretched and would take me at most two to three minutes to get out to fresh air. Luckily I was on the bottom floor of the building. Our school had multiple buildings that had different subjects each with two buildings having two floors. I was in Language Arts Building which had English, World Geography and our Electives. I started a brisk steady walk, taking out my IPhone X and AirPods. Yes I’m a spoiled brat, so what? Getting good grades and becoming valedictorian has benifits ya know. I turned on my AirPods, with them connecting to my phone via Bluetooth, and started playing Delirious (Boneless) ft. Kid Ink - Steve Aoki, Chris Lake, Tujamo. Such a good song being underrated, man that sucks and Steve Aoki is such a talented artist.

I had my eyes closed and my body relaxed, even with my eyes closed, I could still navigate my way through the school. Having a tight schedule, maneuvering around crowds of kids through a tight hallway, and being in multiple sports has its benifits. Calculating my walking time and speed I’m about ten feet away from the door. I open my eyes and I’m right. I keep the brisk pace and reach for the door handles. As I open the doors, Jake jumps out of nowhere and moans as loud as he could muster.

”UUUNNNGGGGHHHH. OOOOOOHHHHH. AHHHHHH. EEEE-YUGNK.” All the other kids within 5 mile radius and teachers could hear his moans. I rolled my eyes and and facepalmed. Despite being basically an adult, Jake still does this shit.

“Tell me Jake, how have you not been kicked out of this school? You’re basically an adult and you moan like a damn pornstar. Do your parents know of this?”

The once moaning mess was now as quiet as a lion ambushing it’s prey. He pondered on for one minute before replying.

“Um . . . I don’t know how I haven’t been kicked out despite being chased by security like a million times and yes my parents know about this behavior.” Like I said Jake isn’t the brightest of people, it surprises me that he is quite smart and is in the top ten students, with me being number one.

“Sooooo . . . Ya like jazz?”

“No.”

With that, we walked towards the pick up area. As me and Jake walk towards us, a girl walks in front of us. I’ve never seen this girl but DAMN she is smoking hot! She seems short, reaches at my chest, long blonde hair, big breast and a nice ass.

“Are you guys both Jack and Jake?” She questioned.

“Yes we are, I’m Jack and he’s Jake,” I said then pointed at Jake and brought my hand down “How may we help you?” She smiled and took out a note pad. I paused the song I was listening to and took off my AirPods

“I just have a few questions for you and Jake.” She said with her smile getting bigger and looking down at her notepad with a pencil.

“Excuse me, may I know what is your name?” I said.

She looked up from her notepad and her smile disappeared.

“I’ll tell you my name after I get answers from you.” Um . . . Ok? Damn. She is a real bitch. Her smile returned and she started with her first question.

“If you could have an opportunity to go somewhere exciting and have fun would you go?”

Me and Jake nodded.

“If you could be any mythical creature, what would it be?”

This is the easiest question ever. I’ve done my research of mythical creatures and I’ve seen plenty of them online but I would want to be a Dragon.

“Without a doubt, a dragon.” Me and Jake said in unison. My mind broke. Jake . . . Was no-nor-norm-normal. How? Pushing aside, the girl put started writing on her notepad. When she was done the notepad just . . . disappeared. What the fuck. How? She started giggling and took a step forward.

Instead of being outside me and Jake were in a dark void with the same girl. She was still giggling and booped our noses. Pain sky rocketed through out my body. The pain was so much that I didn’t have the strength to scream, instead i fell on my stomach and started to tremble. An excruciating pain shot through my bones and skin. My bones were cracking and shifting along with skin being ripped and got replaced by something else. I felt something explode on my back and something wet getting on my back. The places that felt more painful than the rest were my face, shoulder blades, fingers, toes, cock and ass. After what felt like an eternity, the pain stopped.

My body was badly sore. My ears were ringing and I was slowly going unconscious. I weakly pick up my head and look to my sides, only to see the same girl boop a shocked Jake. His body fell and started to tremble. His body was . . . changing. His body was getting bigger while he twisted and turned in all the wrong directions. While that was happening his limbs started to get bulkier and longer, his skin color seemed to change to a near dark red. His finger tips were morphed into sharp claws. Soon his clothes could no longer bear his size and ripped. His body soon stop after that. He looked like a red demon. However his body still trembled. Soon his structure changed. His bones snapped and cracked as he was abruptly forced into a bipedal stance by an unkown force. At his shoulder blade areas, something was trying to get out. Soon the same area exploded, exposing small wings covered in a mixture of blood and a green slime. The wings just twitched but out of nowhere, they started to rapidly grow. The wings themselves were black with a grey membrane skin. His wings stop growing but look like they were at least twice Jakes original height.

Soon a tail erupted from behind him and his face elongated slowly. I could hear the sickening crunch each time his face got longer. Soon his face looked much as a dragons with a muzzle that resembled a dog’s muzzle. His eyes soon changed color, changing from green to yellow. Now he looked like an anthropomorphic dragon in a bipedal position. But that changed as his legs, arms, and torso twisted and turned with loud snaps and crunches. Now he looked like a true dragon with small hands. Little did I know his changes weren’t over. While his body stopped trembling, his hands and feet were still trembled. His palms were increasing in size along with his pinkie and ring finger joining to form a longer, thicker claw, the same happened to his middle and index finger while his thumb started growing. His thumb looked the same as his other two fingers, and somehow his ex-thumb was no longer in its original place and was next to his other fingers. His hands now looked like claws. This happened to all his fingers and toes. His appendages started to grow and stop growing once they were in proportion to his body.

I just weakly blinked at the horrific transformation.

Did that happen to me? I had thought to myself. I weakly look to my hands, at least hoping they still are. Instead I saw black claws. Well shit. I changed my gaze towards Jake. He was looking at me with closing eyes and was about to say something but unconsciousness took him away. Soon I followed in his footsteps.

Author's Note

Guys if you were wondering why I removed the prologue, it’s because i was rewriting it. This will also happen to the other chapters. Provide feedback and critism please.

Not The Brightest (Rewriten)

you are about to read some sexual shit in the beginning of this chapter! This includes masterbation, lots of cum and comedy. Prepare to taint your tight puckers.

*Location: Unkown*

*POV: Jake*

A painful headache awoke me from some weird dreams. Well you know that means? Time to jerk myself off, then watch dank memes, and prepare for graduation day. Ewww . . . College . . . Ughh! I opened my eyes, expecting to see my cum covered ceiling. Instead I saw the sun barely coming up. What? And I was in some waste land filled with pools of lava and mountains. By this time I notice that I felt . . . Different to say the least. I set my arms in a push up position and instead of seeing my hands, I see three long claws. I don’t have a thumb! Fuuuucccckkkkk! I can’t properly masterbate. Wait, let me check if I still have a cock. I quickly got into a quadruped stance and then touched my crotch area but there was a slit. Am I female? I could still feel my cock but it felt like it was . . . inside me, no homo.

“Let’s try something.” I started to think of the hottest things I could imagine, Shrek. Soon I felt my cock leave its home. It looked weird. It looked like a dog with a blood red cock honestly except I didn’t have balls. I felt like I had balls but they were inside me, internal junk? Nice! The knot was there and it seemed pretty big . . . And slimy. My new hands looked bigger than my original hands. My Cock was about a foot and maybe 8 inches long. Damn! 20 inches of meat. Now time for the width. I studied my meat Pillar for a few seconds before guessing how wide my meat was. It looked about two to four inches wide. I’m proud of myself.

But the real question lingers. Can I fap or go no fap November for the rest of my life? I stroked my cock and expect to get a little cut with my claws, but I didn’t. It felt really good actually. I sat on my haunches and started to stroke slowly. As time went on I increased my pacing, the slime proved to be good natural lube. About 20 minutes passed and my loins started to tense and pressure being built up. I moan quietly as I’m so close to cumming. My release was closing in, so I stroked as fast as I could and tightened my grip. I’m cumming. I excepted a few strands of semen but it was much more. I hissed in pleasure as my load was blown. Waves and waves of pleasure passed through me as my body emptied its special sauce, making a large, smelly puddle of baby juice. I panted after the tiring session. It smelled like really sweaty balls though. When I looked for the puddle, I noticed it was a few feet ahead of me. Intense cumshot? HELL YEAH!

“I guess I could sleep, after all I was painfully changed into a dragon and will never see my friends, probably ever.” As soon as I said that, I started to look around, just my luck. Jack was laying next to me. Did he hear my quiet moans? I had barely noticed my eye vision, hearing senses and other senses were sharpened. Maybe he’ll smell my cum? I mentally laughed at that thought. It WOULD be funny as hell. My penis started to retract back into its hiding spot.

A low groan came from Jack. His eyes opened groggily with a little drool coming out of his mouth. He became less groggy and started to blink normally. He looked at his surroundings. He then turned his gaze towards me.

“It smells like sweaty balls. Why?” He asked. Apparently he is taking this pretty well. I mean I could give less of a Shrek if I was turned into dragon but Jack was a logical thinker and would probably lose his crap.

I ponted at my body fluids. He just looked at my sauce then shifted his sight on me. He closed his eyes, brought up his claws to his forehead and took a deep breath then exhaled. His hand left his forehead and Jack opened his eyes again.

“Somethings never change.” He soon got into a bipedal stance and started to practice on his trotting. Is it trotting or walking? Ehhh whatever, dank memes. “Nevertheless, let’s get moving.” And so we walked, For a long time. We had swam through pools of lava, with Jack being spectical about being able to swim through lava, and climbed over large mountains with minimal effort. Eventually we came across some retarded ass dragons glowing weirdly. A tall red dragon with slightly torn wings and some black skinny fuck, some purple fat cunt and some other degenerates bullying a dragon that seemed to be baby or a small child. Despite doing retarded shit in my life, I won’t tolerate bullying. I was flying towards them even though I didn’t have a grasp on flying techniques with Jack by my side. I was yards away from them before a massive shadow loomed over the majority of land around me.

The biggest fucking dragon I’ve ever seen was on top of a mountain with a smaller blue dragon flying next to his gigantic head. I was scared for my life. Sound wasn’t present as I gaze at him. He was talking but I was too stricken with fear that I couldn’t hear him. What felt like an endless loop of time reverted back to a normal passage of time and sounded became heard as the dragon brought a small staff with a red gem and then threw it inside what looked like to be a weird volcano on a different island. As soon as it was inside the volcano, a wave of red energy passed through the glowing dragons and they stopped glowing. Weird. The dragon and smaller blue dragon were arguing about something but I paid no mind to them. What should I do? I’ll just watch the baby dragon.

*A few minutes later*

Jack was quiet the entirety of my silent watching. The baby dragon was pushed off a cliff with the view of the island by the red dragon. I was gonna save the baby dragon but Jack tapped my shoulder and pointed over the cliff, showing he was in the water not injured. But then I see seaweed with two pairs of colorful eyes, and he’s talking to it. Wtf? Anyways, I started minutes pass and he saves the small blue dragon but she was wearing armor, covering most of her body, while doging giant ass eels. Damn. What happened next was funny. The red dragon gets hit but a giant boulder, then was crushed by it when he fell on the ground.

“ FUCKING NOOB!” I roar at him from a distance. Jack chuckles at my antics. He hears and diverts his attention to me but then brings his gaze back to the baby dragon. I’m getting annoyed of calling them baby dragon and tall red dragon. I’ll call them green, red and blue. The seaweed started to move. I looked into their eyes and they saw me looking at them from a distance. While hovering, I started wiggling my brows at them with a perverted grin. Jake looked at me with a disapproving look but when he did I moved my sights towards the dragons. Green started to push the boulder off of Red but when the boulder was pushed, Red tripped Green and taunted him and then sniffed the seaweed but Blue got in front of the seaweed and said something I couldn’t hear. Apparently Red gained a approving look and flew off.

*A few more minutes later*

Shit started happening. Green was by himself because blue ditched him while red was failing at the death traps. Whoever was following him had desguised as two fake rocks. Wow. These dragons are stupid. Green entered a cave and it had the staff. I quietly hovered high above Green.

“WE MADE IT! I can’t believe I’m the only dragon who made it this far!” Green exclaimed.

“You’re not” Red said at the entrance of the cave with an angered expression.

“And I’m not losing to a pony-loving-dragon like you!” Red said while picking up spike by his head and jamming his claw into his forehead. This has gone far enough.

I launch myself towards Red with a single powerful flap of my wings. I cocked my right hand back. When Red was in a one foot ranged, I launched my fist towards him, launching him into the fake props, revealing two unicorns. Um . . . whatev’s.

A purple unicorn with wings and a white unicorn. Interesting. Red was dazed but so were the ponies. Red recovered but sniffed the air and looked at the ponies.

“What the?” He at first with a confused face but quickly got turned into a predatory grin. They were too far for me to reach in time. His massive jaw filled with equally massive sharp teeth opened, ready to chomp the ponies into bits. However he couldn’t, as Jack quickly flew to his side and bit onto his neck, drawing blood. Jack was shaking the dragon in a attempt to snap his neck or knock him out. When that wasn’t working, Jack flew a few feet in the air and jetted on the sides of the wall, dragging Red across the wall. Red wailed in pain as scales fell off of him, making him bleed more from missing scales. With momentum, Jack maneuvered and threw Red at the bridge leading towards the staff. Blue was seen putting Green down and yelling at him.

“GO SPIKE! GO GET THE SCEPTER!” Quickly shifting her gaze towards the red body in front of her. He was coughing blood, covered in dirt and bruises. He tried getting up into a kneeling position but his arms were shaking, making him drop and fall unconscious.

“Oh. I didn’t even touch Garble and he’s down for the count. Ha!” She said triumphantly. She looked from his body to me and Jack. Me and Jack gave a toothy grin, with Jack showing Garble’s blood on his small yet sharp teeth. She was about to say something but something behind her caught my eye. It was Spike holding the scepter with red electricity flowing through the scepter and then through him, making him go wide eyed. After a short second, Spike’s eyes reverted back to normal. Blue was wearing a proud smile.

“Dragon Lord Spike has a nice ring to it.”

“No, I think Dragon Lord Ember sounds better.” Spike said handing the scepter to Ember. Past that I stop listening and dragged Garbles body away from them and near the ponies and dropped his body behind me. They apperantly went back into their rock disguises, they had pretty eye big holes or in my eyes, glory holes.

“Nice costume. Where did you buy it?” The white unicorn with blue eyes replied.

“Oh! Why thank you, I made them myself-“ came a fancy sounding accent. she paused as soon as she realized her mistake. Both ponies jumped out of their disguises and cuddled next to each other, shaking in fear. These ponies are scared of me. Not surprised. I kinda punched Garble into them and then Jack basically raped Garble in front of them. How to make them not scared? A stupid idea popped into my head.

“You look . . . Pretty?” I said directly to the purple pony. I wasn’t lying. For a pony, I thought the purple one was pretty cute. The white one looked okay, she had to much make up for my liking and seemed to be those snotty rich people-ponies I mean.

They stopped shaking. Both with confused faces and the purple one with a blush on her face. The white unicorn tilted her head.

“So you aren’t going to eat us?”

“What! No! I’m not like that.” I said defensively.

“You . . . Think I’m . . . Pretty?” The purple pony asked.

“Honestly, yeah. Your eyes are pretty, have a nice voice, and a nice ass.” Her blushed reddened as he said the last part. Her friend only shook her head in disapproval.

“Anyways, what are your names? My name is Jake” I said pointing at myself “ and that’s Jack. The one that saved you.” They said a quick thank you to Jack.

“My name is Twilight Sparkle, The Princess Of Friendship, and The Element Of Magic.” She said proud but still wearing a light blush.

“My name is Rarity, Owner of Ponyville Boutique, and The Element of Generosity.”

“Nice to meet you Twilight and Rarity.” I said with an open claw. This day would be a long day.

Author's Note

I know I ruined this fic with the beginning of this chapter but come on! There will be a lot sexual stuff in this story. It’s rated Mature for this reason and the insane amount cussing in the future

Meeting The Gang (Slightly Rewritten)

*Location: Ponyville*

*POV: Jack*

Things have been going pretty smooth so far. Well . . . as smooth as this situation can get now. Seeing a child, no less than a baby, being basically bullied and tormented by others. It didn’t settle inside my stomach at all. So I understood why Jake followed Spike, to help him when needed. As to why he didn’t just go help him directly confuses me. Then again it sounds like a good idea since we just appeared in a different universe or something and Jake doesn’t think most things through.

Anyways, me and Jake got introduced to 2 ponies and 2 dragons. With the ponies names being Princess Twilight Sparkle and Rarity, and the dragons names being Spike and Princess Ember. Anyways with the conversation we had, with the exception of Princess Ember staying at her homeland, while going to some village called ’ponyville’. I learned about the world and towns near ponyville. Surprise surprise. The towns all had something relating to horses in the names. Ponyville was a straight up pun in and out of itself. Trottingham? Manehatten? Do I need to explain further? Despite this world being ridiculously unexplainable, Twilight, Spike and the rest of her friends, that I learned about, have done some pretty tough shit! They turned a reality warper to stone then reformed him, a queen shapeshifter with an army of shapeshifters who feeds on strong emotional feelings, one of her friends made a fully grown dragon cry, one of her friends broke the sound barrier and they beat a centaur with the power of a god. That’s really impressive, not AS impressive as someone beating their meat at the emoji movie but impressive nonetheless. That’s not even starching the surface of what they’ve done.

I was cut out of my thought as twilight said.

“Here we are. Ponyville, my home.” Twilight sent Rarity to take Spike to where they lived, they stayed quiet the whole time surprisingly. I looked at what was infront of me. A bunch of small buildings with thatch roofs along side a large building at the center at it all and a crystal . . . Tree castle? Um . . . Yeah? Anyways I saw ponies of all different colors could be seen walking about their own business, mostly female for some reason. For some reason the females had similar if not the same body types with the exception of their colors, manes and tails. They were pretty much basic at first. At first. I started to notice tattoos on the side of their flanks. Why do they have tattoos on their as-

“If you want a tour of ponyville, I could show you myself.” Twilight said, again interrupting my thoughts.

“No but thanks for the offer.” I said. She soon levitated two large bags with what I guessed were bits.

“This is for saving me, Rarity and Spike. Two thousand bits in each bag. One for you and one for Jake.” HOLY SHIT! From what I learned from twilight, that is a LOT of bits. Enough to buy a nice house and live off the rest for a while. I grabbed the bags with my wings, I learned how to use my wings over the trip to ponyville and they felt like a different set of arms. It was weird at first but I kinda just got use to them.

“I’d like to ask you some questions but my friends are probably worried me and I need a castle to run. It was nice to meet both of you, bye.” With that, she teleported smiling and waving a hoof at use.

I looked back at the village, still wondering why they have those tattoos . . . EVEN THE CHILDREN!?

”Wha?”

I whispered to myself. I switch my gaze to Jake, only to see him drooling while looking at the adults flanks and seeing his ’little partner’ poking out.

I quickly went by Jake’s and whispered something into his ear.

”You retard! Are you trying to make these ponies look at you like you were a pervert?!”

He turned his head slowly and looked at me. His face was one of ecstasy. It was. Then his face turned into a evil grin.

“Sometimes . . . Your homie . . . Needs a big kiss . . . On the . . . LIPS!” Time froze as he said that. He quickly leaped at me. When ever he said that . . . gay shit happened. With quick thinking, I quickly turned and just as Jake was about to jump on me, I slammed my black tail on his side. Time sped up to its original flow as Jake was blown to his left. With a quick tumble, Jake used the momentum to help himself up. Mid air roll, he slammed his claws and hind claws into the ground.

“Papi y u do dis?” Jake said in a obviously fake sad tone.

“Jake you may be my best friend, but I’m not gay and neither are you . . . I think?”

“No I’m not . . . Or am I?”

“Let’s just go into the village and see what happens from there.”

“Ok.”

With that, we trotted towards the town with our bags of bits. The ponies looked at us wearily but seemed calm nonetheless.

We walk aimlessly for about a minute before 3 fimilars faces along with some new faces appearing out of a corner of a random building. The most noticeable one there was some tall serpent-like creature with many different animal parts. I suppose this is Discord as Twilight described him. He looked a bit freaky. The others I saw are Twilights friends as she described them. Twilight, Rarity, Spike and who I guessed was AppleJack, looked calm, I couldn’t say the same for most of the others. Discord and the Pinkie Pie looked giddy to say the least. Fluttershy seemed a bit nervous, Twilight did tell me she had a fear of dragons so I’ll have to be careful with her. Rainbow Dash seemed . . . Cocky? Smug? Confident? All of the Above?

Seconds passed before we were infront of the group of friends.

“Girls meet Jack and Jake, Jack and Jake meet the girls.” Our introductions with the girls were okay. Pinkie Pie’s and Discord were the most interesting. It was kinda funny actually. Jake was probably thinking what could that mouth of hers do. He probably thought that about Rainbow Dash too since she was bragging a lot about what she’s done. It all went pretty smooth up until the last one, Fluttershy.

At first she seemed pretty nervous as expected. Jake already introduced himself but she was stuttering and sweating a lot. I felt bad for her then and there. Despite her wreck of an introduction, she seemed less nervous than before. She knew we didn’t mean any bad but her fear was getting to her.

“Hello, what’s your name?” I asked in a friendly tone, despite all ready knowing her name. My introduction seemed calm and kind opposed to Jakes surprisingly casual introduction. Jake seems to be getting ’cleansed’ from his perverted nature. I’ve met his parents and I see no behavior similarities between them. How Jake got perverted to me is unknown. Anyways I’m getting off track.

”M-my name i-is . . . F-Fluttershy.”

She said in a whispered tone.

AppleJack went along the lines of,
“Sugarcube, Ah’ don’t think Jack here heard you.”

“Nah it’s ok, I actually heard her pretty well.” I said honestly.

“It’s a pleasure to meet you Fluttershy.” I said kindly. Now Fluttershy seems surprised. She must be thinking why a dragon is being so kind to her.

“It was nice to meet you Mr. Jack.” Fluttershy said in a normal volume voice. Finally, she’s opening herself more towards me. Good progress.

We quickly wrapped up our introductions and in the process, asked a few questions. So many places to explore. I may have had money on Earth but I was never able to explore it or go anywhere. Now that I had a more durable body and a hell of a more free time, I could explore this bizarre world. But I ain’t complaining!

Author's Note

I kinda rushed this chapter and don’t murder me on the poor character personalities you sexy bastards

Update #2

Hello you SEXY FUCKS! I got some possible characters for the future.

Name: Hunter

Height: Six Foot Five Inches

Weight: One Hundred and Ninety Pounds

Age: Thirty Two Years Old

Species: Diamond Dog

Rank: Ex Alpha

Job: Mercenary

Hobbies: Likes To Make Weapons

Bio: Hunter is a dog who’s out for money and power. He was previously an Alpha to a pack of Diamond Dogs but stepped down to pursue his own dreams. He will stop at nothing to achieve his goals. His razor sharp claws are able to rip most metals and dent the strongest ones. His speed is remarkable. Not to mention his flexibility is superb. He can maneuver his body to the point that he can even dodge objects going at hypersonic speeds. Not to mention that he can make massively dangerous weapons and spells. He would be the ultimate mercenary if he didn’t get burnt up so quickly.

Name: Gustav

Height: Five Foot Two Inches

Weight: One Hundred Fourty Pounds

Age: Nineteen Years Old

Species: Eared Griffon

Job: None

Hobbies: Craft Objects

Bio: Gustav is cocky, arrogant and has an inflated ego. For good reason. He has dominated every other griffon in speed, agility, strength and intelligence in Griffonstone. He can reach near supersonic speeds that rivials even Rainbow Dashes non Sonic Rainboom speed. He can easily turn large boulders into small chunks of rocks. He is smart enough to predict most of his opponents moves. He however can’t handle more than two targets.

Name: Apollo

Height: Five Feet From Shoulder To Claws

Body Length: Around Twenty Five Feet Long

Weight: Two Hundred Sixty Pounds

Age: 25

Species: Dragon

Job: None

Hobbies: Collecting Gems

Bio: Apollo is greedy when it comes to his hoard and is aggressive towards others being near his hoard. Apollo isn’t just your stereotypical dragon though. He is a ground dwelling dragon and has abilities not found in most dragons. He is able to breath green fire that is capable of teleporting objects long distances and has a slightly poisonous bite. However, despite these abilities, he isn’t the fastest of Dragons. Good thing his hide is thick enough to tank most attacks.

Name: Abby

Height: Five Feet

Weight: Ninety Six Pounds

Age: 27

Species: Wolf

Job: None

Hobbies: Hunting For Sport

Bio: Abby is always cautious when making decisions. She prefers to stay quiet due to her wolf instincts but when needed, she can break the silence. She is as well one of the very many Wolves in Equestria. She may look harmless but don’t let her colors fool you. Usually when an animal has many bright colors, it means no good. Abby isn’t any different. Abby can run at an outstanding 180 miles per hour. She can fire bolts of electricity out of her mouth. She can manipulate clouds to her favor. Despite all these abilities, she still has her limits. She can get tired quickly from running, she can’t fire constantly and she can lose control over the clouds if not concentrating hard enough.

Name: Vesper

Height: Four Feet

Weight: Sixty Two Pounds

Age: 22

Species: Bat Pony

Job: Lunar Guard

Hobbies: Singing

Bio: Vesper is a cheery and a free spirited pony. Despite her overall attitude, she is a Lunar Guard for Princess Luna. Over the few years she has been a Lunar Gaurd, she has acquired many skills. She has mastered hoof-to-hoof combat, she has learned to make thousands of potions and learned how to use spells. Not only has her knowledge been boosted, she has also been boosted physically. She can rival speeds with the fastest of the fast in Equestria and she can endure the worst of pains with mild difficulty.

What do you think of these characters? Want to see them in future chapters of my stories? No? Too bad. Friend or foe, you don’t want to mess with these five. Bye you SEXY FUCKERS!

A Helping Hoof And A Mercenary

POV: Jake

Location: Ponyville, Twilights castle

Time: 5:30 A.M.

Time Passed: 1 Year

I was in a magical land of hot stripper Shreks. Their fat jiggled with each motion. They moaned Donkey ever time I slapped their ass, making it all the more arousing. My cock was coming out of hiding as I continued my Slapping. Soon it was fully exposed, showing twenty inches of meat. Being a human did suck, having an six inch dick was puny compared to my twenty inch meat pillar. Spike probably had a bigger cock than most stallions here in ponyville. I’m sure Spike has assisted Twilight in many ways. The landscape shifted and all the Shreks formed into one small figure. Princess Ember.

I was now in a cave with torches aligned on the walls. Ember was laying on her back on a large flat stone rock. She was gently rubbing her soaking pussy. This, somehow, added just a little more length to my already throbbing cock. Ember noticed my presence as she halted rubbing herself. She removed her wet claws off her snatch and spread her legs just slightly. I swiftly went in between her legs and started to sniff her pussy. Every one of my sniffs brought an arousing aroma. I gave one long lick, electing a moan from her. I jumped up and pinned Embers head by her horns. She quickly grabbed onto my arms as I lined up my tip to her soaking pussy. I teased her a bit by rubbing my length across her impossibly wet pussy.

She was breathing hard and sweating already with just a tease.

“J-just fuck m-me al-already!” She spoke in a tired and desperate tone. I quickly pulled away from her and rammed into her at unbelievably fast speeds. She screamed in pleasure and slight pain. I stayed still for a few seconds, enjoying her hot and tight grip she had on my cock.

I was about to thrust but something interrupted me. I felt something poking my sides. I turned to look and nothing was there. Eventually the poking stopped. It was soon replaced by shaking. I felt something shaking me as my surroundings blackened and changed into a black void. Ember eventually disappeared, leaving my cock alone. My eyes became heavy and were slowly closing. As my eyes were closing, I heard someone yelling my name. It was quiet at first but it quickly escalated into a full on yelling. My eyes were closed and I could distinguish the voice. It was Jack’s.

”JAKE!” I opened my eyes and saw Jack shaking me.

“What the fuck dude. I was having the best dream of my life!” This nigger! Sure he was my best friend but come on man! Let me dream.

“I would have let you sleep . . . if your cock wasn’t hanging out and exposed to the ponies!” Oof.

“It’s not like they haven’t seen a cock before!” I look behind Jack and see varied expressions on their faces. Rarity had a face of disgust. Rainbow Dash had a . . . dreamy look? AppleJack was shaking her head in disappointment. Fluttershy was on the ground unconscious. Twilight wore shocked expression. Spike and Discord were laughing their asses off at the ponies. Pinkie- wait.

“Where is the pink one?”

I was soon answered when I felt something prob at my pillar. It was Pinkie. She had a curious look on her face. Soon, a pinkish glow caught pinkie and dragged her back to her friends.

“It’s about time . . . we go.” Jack said. The others nodded. We quickly said our goodbyes with the ponies being awkward around me, with the exception of Fluttershy. HAVE THEY NEVER SEEN A COCK?!

Time Passed: 2 Hours

Me and Jack have been flying over the Everfree Forest, barely over the tree line, for some quite some time. I haven’t mentioned what has happened this past year mainly cause the stupid author made a fuck up in the story, what a stupid whore. Wait?! What did I just say? Anyways, the shit that has happened in Equestria got me knocked the fuck up and shook. Some unicorn tried to fuck up the past so ponies could be equal then got reformed, a previous shapeshifting queen with a shapeshifting army tried took over Equestria and almost succeeded a second time around and then the violent shapeshifting army turned into some peaceful race because one of them were different and some ancient heros were brought out from a limbo along with with some pony with a Venom symbiote rip-off but was then reformed.

Legit shook. These ponies are something alright. I’ll never forget the time Pinkie Pie hade a party for me and Jack. Let’s just say alcohol doesn’t mix well with dragons.

“I’ll never forget when I farted and the whole bakery blew up.” Jack shot me a questionable look.

“How about the time when all the mares went into heat? You nearly got fucked to death by Dash and Pinkie from exhaustion, Twilight and Fluttershy nearly broke my dick, every other stallion were running for their lives and . . . poor Spike . . . I never knew you could fit that many gems and apples in such a small space. He still walks funny to this day.” R.I.P Spike’s Asshole. He was such a youngling and always carried out his duty.

“Remind me not to piss off the princesses, I don’t like space a lot.” Jack only chuckled in response.

“I’ll TRY to remind you next time we meet them. I can’t guarantee that Shinning Amour won’t be pissed off. You kinda did just stare at his wife’s ass and teach their baby every imaginable racial slur and curse. I can just imagine her yelling Dirty Nigger, Dirty Jew, Dirty Mexican and Dirty Nazi every midnight.”

“Hey! That baby needs to learn da wae of life. Plus that mongrel was an annoying little brat. That bitch can eat too!” I was about to say something but Jack said something.

“What are those?! They seem to be some kind of airship. Almost like its transporting something like a small army or guards of some sorts. The emblem only further supports this.”

A large airship was seen with other similar airships behind it. Pinkie did mention about ordering some clowns a few days earlier for some Friendship Festival or something like that. Then again, these ships look shady. Nah, pinkie would order something from shady dealers. Whatever that was, I’m sure the ponies are gonna do great with the festival.

Something else caught Jacks attention.

“ Is . . . that a . . . village?” I looked at the direction he was looking at and I indeed did see a village. A large village at that. However, dark clouds loomed over it. The atmosphere held a gloomy, sad and hopeless tone to it. The village itself was surround by cobblestone walls and had a bridge crossing over a small river. It was weird because the forest surrounded the village. Only a few hundred feet was between the forest and the village. Not to mention all of its inhabitants were inside large metal cages. Most of the ones in the cages either had a sad and gloomy, or mad and frustrated, facial expressions. Now that I noticed, most of the inhabitants weren’t only ponies. Beside ponies, there were anthropomorphic cats, griffons, bat ponies, and many other different species. Outside of the cages were big black creatures. They had big arms and rather small legs in comparison. They also wore black masks, had white fur around their neck and shoulder area. The creatures all had spears and shields. They were either soldiers or guards. Fuck. There a LOT of them. At least a few hundred.

“Jake, they are clearly being taken as slaves or hostages. If we were to try to save them, then we would need to land in the forest and try sneak up on them. Are you willing to do this?” Hmm, I wasn’t one to let people suffer. Sure. Why the fuck not?

“Yeah, let’s do this.” With that said, we tucked in our wings and fell under the tree line. We landed firmly with a few chunks of dirt being thrown up in the air. We could see the village through the trees and the bridge. Two guards could be seen at the entrance, guarding.

“If we are to get close enough to the entrance, we’ll have to go underground. Flying is too risky because of the spears and the ground is risky as well, mainly because they could easily grab us and crush us. However, our claws don’t look like they were built for digging and more for ripping flesh. Look at our claws, they look more like a Lion’s than something like a Echidna’s claws. They are more curved in and sharper than longer shovel-like claws that have a gap going the whole length of the underside. Hell! Our bodies are structured to be strong and enduring, yet are still capable of flying and maneuvering in the air at fast speeds. Then again we do have some kind of scales. It’s really more of a thick hide with a few scales than full on scales. We could probably tank their weapons and a few of their punches. We also have speed. What do you think Jake?” What? Ummmmmm.

“Whatever you said.” I said. Jack only sighed.

“Ok, so we are going in full speed and take out as many as we can. You go for the gaurd in the right side and I’ll take the left. Remember to stay a decent amount of feet away from the ground. About four to six feet. In three . . . two . . . one!” We blasted at insane speeds, breaking trees with just a single flap of our wings.

If that didn’t get the guards attention, surely the trees flying at them would. However, they weren’t your typical lazy stormtroopers. They noticed the trees and brought up their sheilds. What the fuck? How is a shield going to defend them from an object hurling towards them and that same object weighs over 2 tons? Probably not gonna survive.

What happened next was unbelievable. The tree was about to hit the shield but with strength and speed, the creature thrusted their shields foward, successfully breaking it into a few thousand pieces. Um . . . what the fuck?! How is that possible? Even my dumbass knows that isn’t possible! Fuck. I forgot this was a world where literal friendship can beat any deity with ease.

This may have shocked me but it didn’t deter me. In fact, it made me push more effort into my wings, as well as Jack. We flew over the small river. With the force was the air around us, water was shot up in the air.

I cocked back both my arms and opened my claws. I grabbed the creature as I flew straight into it. I didn’t stop there, I continued before I hit a wall, slamming me into the creature and leaving a crater on the wall. The bastard was out for the count. Possibly dead. I started to look for Jack but never found him. Not even the gaurd was seen.

“Where’d the cunt go?” I was soon met with a loud booming crack to my left. I saw a smoking Jack and an unconscious smoking gaurd inside a decently sized crater. I don’t know if the ground is what made the cracking sound or the thing’s back.

“Now THAT got the guards attention. I see Rsinbow Dash’s lessons did you well.” We quickly flew into the center of the village. Out of the corner of my eyes, I could see the inhabitants in the cages wore a hopeful expression as we passed the cages. Good. Justice will be served.

The same black creatures surrounded us in large numbers. At least a few hundred of them. Why so many guards for such a village in the middle of the Everfree Forest?

“Shit. Even if we were to fly up. The chances of us not getting our wings crippled by spears are like the chances of me not getting aids. Very low” I said. Jack scoffed.

“While that may be true, we won’t go down with out a fight. Right?” I turned back to look at Jack with an all knowing smirk.

“No way in hell would I let these creatures enslave others. I’ll fight for what’s right.” Jake chuckled.

“Ironically coming from the person who acts like a perv. I’d fight with you by my side, no matter what we’re going against.”

“Damn right.” The creatures stood still for what felt like an eternity. It was until me and Jack shot up into the air. The millisecond we moved is when the creatures started to throw their spears at me. Me and Jack were synchronized with our movements and speed. There were so many spears. They had just been slightly grazing me. I grabbed one the spears before shooting back down. I swiftly dodged each spear and maneuvered in ways I was impressed by. I started to slightly slow down as I got closer to the ground. Even though I had just been slowing down, I was still going at fast speeds.

Eventually I was so close to hitting the ground but quickly did a nintey degree turn. Thank the lord Dash for practicing with me on my flying or else I would have broken my neck. I didn’t ponder a second longer as I maneuvered up and impaled two of the creatures. I flied up faster and faster until I was a safe distance away from the creatures. I then stopped and flung the dead bodies at the others along with the spears. Since I was high up in the air and the bodies were pretty heavy, they crushed others into flat corpses. Most of the Spears that were thrown earlier were in the ground, the creatures started to get any spear they could.

Fuck them. I blasted towards them. I got low to the ground and started to swipe at them. My claws either took off their heads or sent them flying with deep wounds. I lost count on how many I killed. Maybe three hundred in a span of three minutes? What is this new feeling? Blood lust. I have the urge to kill anything, even if it meant to kill the innocent. This sickened me. I was so lost in deep thought that I didn’t notice a white furred fist launch at me. It hit me with enough force to completely bounce me backwards.

“RAAAAGGHHHHH!” I was sent flying back, crashing through a cobblestone building. Shit. That hurt me bad. I felt the blood lust leave me as exhaustion and pain replaced it. I laid on my side, my muscles aches and felt sore. My chest felt as if it was about to explode and my ribs would shatter if anymore pressure was put on them. I tried to get up but that only caused more pain.

“S-Shit,” I could feel the building shaking “this building is abo-o-out to collapse! If I don’t leave I could d-d-die!” The structure started to crumbling little pieces at a time before the whole thing was about to fall. With a second to spare, the whole thing collapsed. As if time slowed, my memories started to play before my eyes.

Me and my parents celebrating my first birthday and me receiving my first gift, a small robotic dragon. The next was me and my first girlfriend going on a date and having my first kiss. Soon after, major events started to play though my mind. When I first met Jack, my grand parents dying, me getting my first dog and then seeing it get ran over with me crying for hours, me graduating middle school, meeting even more people, losing my v-card and . . . that damn girl sending me here.

I closed my eyes, waiting for death as time started to pass faster. I expected to be hit or something but I didn’t. I felt air brushing against my face. I slowly opened my eyes and found I was on Jack’s back. I look back to where I use to and found it in flames.

“S-Shit, t-t-thanks for the save. N-nearly died.” Jack looked back but didn’t say anything, he switched his gaze on something. It wasn’t one of the creatures. It looked smaller than them. Yet he held a deadly tone to him. His glare buried deep into my eyes.

I turned to look infront of him and soon landed carefully. He placed me down and I took a closer look at Jack and noticed burn marks on him. What could burn a dragon?! He looked tired and slightly out of breath. Also the village, it was nearly destroyed but the cages were empty.

“W-What’s Wrong?” I asked in a shaky voice.

“That bastard! He is much stronger than those other creatures and has some kind of strange magic. I haven’t seen that Magic in any books. Even Starswirl’s books didn’t have any knowledge on this type of magic! He is unbeatable! He nearly killed you! WHAT IS HE?! He can dodge any thing I can throw at him! At least I got the inhabitants hiding somewhere.” I’ve seen Jack frustrated but not this frustrated. I looked in the distance and saw a white anthropomorphic wolf in the distance. His eyes were entirely blood red with the exception of his black slitted pupils. He also had some kind of blood red cape. He wasn’t a wolf, he seemed like a Diamond Dog with more proportioned arms and legs.

“Lanuae Magicae!” I heard the dog yell loudly. In an instant, he appeared in front of us.

“Quit fighting. Your struggle only satisfies my power further. Surrender and maybe I’ll let you live. Don’t surrender and I’ll make sure to play with your insides like a kid playing in mud.” His voice was dark and cold and held no emotion in it other than hatred.

“I’LL KILL YOU!” Jack roared and rocketed towards the dog.

The D-dog simply just avoided Jack’s speed. WHAT?! How?!

“You never learn do you? Easy as a child breathes a wish at a dandelion . . . is exactly how hard it would be for me to tear your limbs from their sockets! Lanuae Magicae!” He disappears and reappears in front of Jack with a fist cocked back. He throws his fist foward and sends Jack back wildly tumbling at immense speeds with a boom. Jack started to tumble slower and conveniently stopped tumbling next to me. He gets back up, rather shaky.

“T-That all y-you got?! I-I’ve seen Chihuahuas put up a b-better fight than you!” Jack says in an exhausted and beaten voice. Jack would never say that. Unless he was planning something. I guess I’ll have to wait and see.

“Says the one who can barely stand, let alone talk! What chance do you have against me? You’re beaten and your friend is on the verge of death. You’re testing my patience! I could obliterate you in an instant and continue on with my day! That wouldn’t affect me in the slightest bit.” He was about to say something but a red beam cut him off. He barely ducked the incoming beam.

“So little prissy pony inbreed shows up? I never thought I’d see the day. You have quite the magical ability though. You’d be a good slave.” He says in a dark tone. Me and Jack turn and see a tall pony. She has a brown coat and blue eyes. She has a black mane and tail with two horns. Two horns? I could aske questions later and be thankful now. She did save our lives.

“Be quiet mutt! You’ve caused chaos and destruction to innocent lives! I’m rather kind most of the time but you’ve crossed the line. You and Storm King WILL perish.” The mare says.

“Hehehehe . . . AHAHAHAHAHAH! You can only dream of that kind of wish.” The mare shoots a red beam at the dog to which he easily avoids and follows up with quickly running up to her, quickly pulling a dagger out. He starts violently swiping at the mare but she summons a red shield. His swiping gets faster and harder as the blade starts to glow a blood red digital-like aura.

The mare’s shield starts to crack and weaken every passing second. The shield then breaks and the dog jumps.

“inspiratione!” He yells and a blood red digital beam blasts towards the mare. She has no time to recover as her death approaches. The beam quickly hit as dirt was thrown up in the air, covering the mare in dust. The dog lands soon after. He puts to blade inside a pocket in his red cape.

“That was easy. TOO easy. She would have made for a good fighter.” He looks at me and Jack.

“You two are still breathing? You wouldn’t believe how much your bodies are worth. I could easily sell one of you and live the rest of my life in comfort.” He starts to form a toothy grin slowly, “The Storm King will certainly be happy with you two. Dead OR alive.” He lifts up his hand and a small blood red ball of magic starts to form, “It’s been nice knowing you but your time is coming to an end.” The ball of magic soon blasts towards us. “Have fun burning in hell.” Time slows down as the same mare, we thought was dead, jumps in front of us and forms a red shield. The blast bounces off and hits the dog.

The blast carried the dog towards a building to which he hit it and a large implosion happened. All the materials nearby were carried and smashed into the dog.

The mare was heavily panting as she turned around to check us out.

“Dragons? I Huff never thought I’d Puff be saving any dragons.” She continued panting. A sound caught my attention. It sounded like brick being pushed aside. I look towards the source and found the pile of bricks the Diamond Dog was buried under was moving. The white dog emerged from the rubble. He was in bad physical condition.

He was wheezing and was caked in blood. He has several large deep cuts that looked like they needed immediate attention. His left eye was swollen shut and bruised. Both of his ears looked as if they had been cut in half in an angle and his right arm was bent in an unnatural position.

“Ac sana resurgent!” He wheezed out. His brutal injuries disappeared as he appeared in his peak physical shape. The previously dead guards were surrounded in a red circle. The red circles disappeared and showed unscarred guards. At least physically anyways.

“How?! You were on the brink of death! You should have died! You only do all of this for money and power! Why?!” The dog just chuckled.

“Let’s say I have my reasons. I seek money to provide for loved ones and I seek power to protect those I love. This is something you wouldn’t understand as you lost the ones you loved long ago.” The mare was once mad but now was infuriated.

“DON’T TALK ABOUT MY PARENTS! YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT I’VE GONE THROUGH! YOU DONT KNOW THE PAIN OF NEVER KNOWING THOSE WHO LOVED YOU BEFORE YOU COULD EVER LOVE THEM BACK!” The mare yelled with noticeable tears welling up in her eyes. The dog only stared at her with an unemotional expression.

“It appears I struck a nerve.” His left ear flicked. “I’d like to stay and chat but I’m needed elsewhere. Ad regem praeveni et virtutem meam, quia novissima hora est!” With that, the dog and the hundreds of soldiers disappeared with a red hue left in their place.

My eyelids started to get heavy as I heard Jack drop to the ground. My felt my body get picked up in a red glow as I let darkness consume me.

Author's Note

I’ve introduced Hunter into the story and more characters shall be introduced in later chapters.

Update #3

HELLO MATE! YOU

SEXY FUCKS!

I’m sorry. You are beautiful though. Anyway, I’m making a change in my OC Hunter’s backstory and make a chapter dedicated to his back story. You might be like “You fucking cunt! Why’d you make a chapter for something as small as this?!” Ummmmmmmmmm . . . I don’t know actually. Bye you

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-SomeRetardedCunt69

From Hunted To Hunter (Part One)

POV: Unkown

Location: Unkown

Time: Unkown

I was lonely. I had played with the other pups but they weren’t fun to play with. Until I met three other pups, Buddy, Charlie, and Archie.

Buddy was short, a Corgi breed of Diamond Dog, had small arms and claws that only reached the lower part of his torso, a yellowish coat and white underbelly, large furry ears, a collar with half metal circles surrounding it, and completely hazel eyes. A big, fluffy butt as well. Don’t judge me.

Charlie was mid-size, a Dalmatian breed of Diamond Dog, had medium sized arms and claws that reached his knees, a white coat with black dots of all sizes covering his body and large dot covering his left eye, long and broad ears that hung at the side of his head, a collar with spikes spiking downwards, and completely hazel eyes. Rather playful really.

Archie was tall, a Greyhound breed of Diamond Dog, had long slender arms and claws that easily touched the ground when standing, had a grey coat and white underbelly, his ears weren’t all the way up at attention nor at his sides but more in between the two at a curve, a collar with spikes curving backwards, and completely hazel eyes. Surprisingly calm.

“Wait up! No fair! You have longer arms than me!” Buddy yelled as he attempted to catch Archie.

“No can do! Hahahahaha, haven’t had this much fun in a while!” Archie yelled as he swiftly turned to his left.

“Let’s see how cocky you get after this!” Yelled Charlie, as he dug out of the ground and grabbed Archie’s torso. They both tumbled in dirt for a while before they eventually stopped.

Charlie’s clean, white coat was covered in dirt after the tumble. Buddy quickly jumped into the pair. Soon after, they started wrestling, laughing and giggling madly all the way through.

I watched from a distance as their antics continued. I wish I had friends like that. They continued playing before eventually stumbling in front of me.

“Hi! Who are you?” Charlie asked me. I was nervous but I answered.

“I don’t really have name yet.” Charlie looked up in deep thought, a concentrated expression present on his face.

“I’ll give you a Name after you play with us. Deal?” Charlie said, holding out his hand intending to be shook. I smiled, shaking his hand and replying.

“Deal!”

Thirty Minutes Later

I was introduced to the others. We hit it off. We wrestled, chased, and dug for thirty minutes straight. I was tired and exhausted, so were the others. Charlie tiredly walked next to me.

“You . . . are pretty fun . . . to play with.” He said, pausing in between words to breath.

“You are fast . . . strong . . . and smart . . . like a Hunter should . . . be. I talked . . . to the others,” He said finally gaining his breath back. “we all agreed on the name, Hunter. Sound good?”

I pondered for a moment, it did sound good. Why not?

“Sure!” I nearly yelled in excitement. It was the first time I’ve ever been nicknamed. We usually get our names when we are old enough to protect, or serve, our pack. Besides, our parents couldn’t give us a name because they mate and give us to alpha.I knew it would one crazy ride from here on.

POV: Hunter

Location: Inside The Pups Den

Time: One Year Later At Three A.M.

Sounds of howling could be heard from the Pups Den. I’ve never seen outside of the Den but I heard there were other tunnels that lead outside. Us pups were never allowed outside. We were easy prey for, from what the rumors say, Timber Wolves. The alpha kept us inside, guarded by many soldiers. I kept on thinking how things had been going. Buddy, Charlie, and Archie were next to me sleeping peacefully. It had been fun to be able to play with them. There was something to do everyday with these three. I wonder what would happen if we were to separate?

Suddenly, screams erupted from outside the den. Soldiers closed our den quickly, shields and spears in claw. Pups got startled and awoke. It didn’t take long to find out what was happening. Everything happened in a blur.

Mass numbers of wooden wolves entered the den, drenched in blood and other bodily fluids. The wolves easily savaged the guards into nothing more than piles of lifeless meat bags. They didn’t just go for the guards. They went for the other pups. I could hear flesh being ripped apart and bones being snapped. The scent of blood and urine was present as the pups were mangled and killed. Their whimpers and cries of pain were echoing through the tunnels. The only thing on my mind was getting the hell out of here. I looked around the den, looking for any kind of escape. I was so focused on trying to look for a way out that I didn’t notice Charlie yelling my name.

I was violently pulled back. I struggled on whatever had its grip on me. Turning my head, I saw that Charlie was hurriedly dragging me through a hole with Buddy, Archie, and other pups. I turned to look in front of me only to see a Timberwolf standing on top of a dead Guard, looking me straight in the eyes. It jumped off the Guard and rushed at me. It launched itself forward. I was lucky enough to be through most of the hole, a new scent filled my nostrils. The maw of the Timberwolf jammed in the hole and could barely fit through it. It savagely kept on snapping at all of us before it left.

Charlie let go, just in time too. A wolf jumped in between me and Charlie. The moment that happened, all of us scattered in random directions. I saw many tall, thick stick-like objects that had some sort of green stuff on them. I believe they were called trees. I started running on my two paws, thinking I was quick enough to outrun the wolf. I wasn’t able to.

There was one but now there were four on hot pursuit on my tail. I opted to run on all fours. Terror raced through my veins, new energy was bursting inside of me, and I had new objective. Survive.

Despite running on all fours, the wolves were still gaining speed, albeit closing the distance slower. It felt as if I was running for minutes, my heart beating against my chest, threatening to burst out. I thought I wasn’t gonna make it.

By some miracle, I saw a small hole, just possibly barely able for me to fit. It was a few meters away and I would have to act fast. I jumped with all I could towards the hole. My head slipped straight into it, however, I struggled shoving my body into the right space. Just in time, my body was able to enter the hole as a set of wooden jaws came down where I was previously.

The room in this hole had a few feet in length, around my height, and it was big enough to accompany my arm span, but was still only a few feet in length. I got very lucky. I was gonna sit and relaxed but a wooden claw swiped at me, making me reel back in surprise. I could hear the growling of the wolf swiping at me, failing to actually hitting me but close. My heart started to pound against my chest. What if the wolf somehow managed to reach me? Would I be able to escape? The paw retreated out of the hole along with the sound of running.

They were gone and I was glad. My rationality returned to me. Why had I thought about survival rather than the safety of my friends? Instinct? Flight or fight response? Adrenaline? Charlie was the one who saved me, I was closer to Charlie than the others. They were great but Charlie had a spot in my heart. Guilt slowly washed over me as I thought more about my friends. I left them. A Diamond Dog leaving his pack behind is like a dragon leaving it’s hoard unprotected. Whatever, I need to live to fight another day. I went to sleep soundly. Thoughts lingered in my mind about what happened to the others. The thought of them possibly being mangaled like a corpse brought a tear to my eye, as it was a high possible. Buddy could fit in small spaces and was hard to hit, Archie was simply too fast for them to catch, and Charlie had a lot of energy and could run for hours. This eased my worries a bit but not completely. I closed my eyes as I brought my body down to lay on the dirt. I let darkness slowly take me into my dreams and out of reality within a matter of short seconds.

Author's Note

Please help spot for errors and have a good time. Criticism is appreciated :moustache:

Short chapters for: Backstory/Ideas/Updates

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Hello,YOU SEXY FUCKS!!!If you like any of my stories, you probably do if you’re reading this, this is an important message. I’m am putting all of my stories on Hiatus for a short time. No, the stories aren’t dead. I need to deal with some things in my life and relax. I hope you beautiful people understand that and hope the best for me. Good bye,YOU SEXY FUCKS!!!

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From Hunted To Hunter (Part Two)

POV: Hunter

Location: Unkown

Time: Unkown

Music Starts

I was running through a forest. Panic and fear coursed through my veins. The tall trees, which seemed to disappear into a cloudy sky, were old, withered and oddly close to each other. I quickly slipped through the trees. I may have been fast but I wasn’t fast enough. Trees were broken and thrown aside as I could hear a loud roar. I turned my head around, not noticing the tree in front of me. A gigantic wooden wolf could be seen smashing through trees and bared eyes of malicious intent.

“WHAT!?!?” I turned my head back to what was in front of me and smashed into a tree that surprisingly didn’t cause me pain. I didn’t fall back, I had been running so fast that I smashed right threw the old tree. I trip and started to roll.
The ground quickly became a black void leaving me spiraling in a fall. My body stopped with a jolt. I was relieved but something else became apparent. My head was facing up and I could see the same wooden monstrosity falling towards me. It wide, open jaws exposed its sharp wooden canine teeth.

I could only stare as my death awaited me. I was done for. A tear shed as I could only accept my impending doom. I closed my eyes as I could feel it jaws about to snap on me.

Music Ends

Waking up in a panic and out of pure Instinct, I jolted up and bolted to my right. This only caused me to slam into a dirt wall and fall down. I was slightly drowsy and didn’t know what happened just yet. I half expected myself to be in the afterlife or to be in the jaw’s of the massive wolf. I was in neither, I was in the same dirt dugout. Frankly, I was relieved beyond belief. Still able to live another day.

Sunlight shines through the small hole that I myself could barely fit through, and I was small too. My appetite had drastically risen as I stay awake longer. No longer waiting it out in the dugout, I squeezed out the hole.

Several Days Later

I felt fatigued and tired. The moment I had come out of hiding, the same wooden beasts jumped out of their hiding spots and nearly killed me. They were still chasing me and never gave up. Luckily for me, I was able to climb and hide in the trees, and catch small mammals and insects.

Even then, they still found ways to get me on the ground. At first, they simply jumped on smaller trees and jumped till they got to me. Next, they waited patiently for several long hours, knowing the only suitable food source for me were the ground rodents and many other small mammals. That forced me to jump off the tree, snatch a meal, and run for my life. Lastly, they broke themselves and combined together to make a bigger wolf. When they did this, they broke down the trees. Even with its huge size, it was faster. I might even say it was smarter. I remember it tricked me into being safe and swiped at me. Luckily, my instincts told me to jump away. Although I survived, it cut a large portion of my tail.

That brings me to right now. Losing blood quickly and having no sleep affected me horribly. I was now lying on the ground. The large beast simply slowly put pressure on my stomach, digging its claws into my abdomen. In a horrific manner, it quickly pulled its paw back. It’s claws were already deep in my abdomen, so when it pulled back, it tore open my stomach and spilled intestines.

I wanted to scream or howl in pain but my body was fatigued. I couldn’t even have the pleasure to scream in pain. My vision faded quickly. My consciousness blinked in and out. I recollect one where I’m in its jaws and it slowly crushing me. Sadistic beast.

The last thing I remember is a green energy flying at the wooden monstrosity.

Many Months Later

I feel good to put it simply. As well stronger and more energetic. I also didn’t feel hungry. I put my clawed hands on my abdomen and felt it fully healed. Something I noticed felt off. Like I was submerged in water but could still breathe. I opened my eyes and all I could see was a dark green liquid. I spun my body and swam up. I emerged out of the liquid and found I was surround by massive trees and a massive hut that was on a piece of land. Surprisingly, the liquid didn’t wet my fur. Instead, it slid off my fur. Not thinking about it much longer, I swam to the land. Once getting out of the green substance, I noticed many more unexpected changes.

I had grown quite a bit. All I know about my kind is that we stay as a pup for a while before having a massive growth spurt and going into our teens. We stay teens for several decades later and mature into adults when we are eighty years old.

I also rubbed my claws on my abdomen and found it completely healed as well as my . . . tail wag?!?! I thought it had been cut off but it seemed to have regrown. I tried to contain my excitement and almost exploded with joy until a yell caught my attention.

“ZEEEEED! The D-Dog is up and awake! He seemed to have grown a bunch and has fully recovered!” It was some type quadruped creature with white and black stripes and some kind of mohawk. It was obviously a male with its genitals and sheath.

Soon, another creature, assumed to be ‘Zed’ (Zéd), came out of the hut and stared at me in confusion and shock. It was a female, sporting a slimmer look, bigger rump, no genitals, and long eyelashes. The mane seemed to be longer and hung from her head to neck rather than point upward.

“Well . . . you seemed to have grown stud.” She uttered in shock.

“I knew you would be healed but I didn’t know you’d be able to recover this quickly let alone regrow one of your body parts.” The male seemed on edge, like prey tensing up its body when a predator catches it.

The female on the other claw seemed much more shocked than scared. She had a weird scent on her. It was oddly . . . arousing.

I only stared at her confused. She slightly blushed under my sight. She snapped out of her daze and followed up.

“S-Sorry. It’s just that you’ve recovered so quickly. It really amazing. Anyway, my name it Zed and my brother over their is Zeb. What’s yours?”

I didn’t have a name, only a nickname. Hunter is what my . . . friends . . . called me.

“The names Hunter.” I spoke with a surprisingly deep voice. The arousing smell Zed had became even more tempting. My “Red Rocket” was threatening to come out and make Zed beg for it. This feeling . . . lust . . . SNAP OUT OF IT!!!

I managed to hide my rocket for a bit longer. It became awkward with this scent. Time to change the subject.

“So, how did you manage to find me and heal me?” Surprised with my question, Zeb answered first.

“Me and my sis were looking for a specific type of flower for an upcoming event. As we were walking, we smelled blood. Zed ran towards the smell and found you and a gigantic Timber Wolf. I then shot a spell at it. I missed and it picked you up in it’s mouth and tried to run away before Zed shot it with a spell. We took your body and put you in a magical lake. We call it the ‘Healing Lake’ for self explanatory reasons.”

Healing lake? Magic? I’ve only briefly heard the den leaders talk about magic and how it could provide for us for thousands of years.

“Hmm . . . thank you. I owe you my life.” The two both wore shocked expressions following after my graditude. Strange. I guess my species aren't that well known for being kind.

“Well, anyways, I guess I should get going after I give something back in return. How about a-“ I was suddenly cut off the Zed.

“No no no no. It’s fine. You can stay with us for a while. Besides, we could use a little help around the hut.” The female hasn’t even known me for long and is already offering me a place to stay? How kind.

“You’ll let me stay? How can I turn that down? I have a lot of catching up too.” Zed and Zeb led me towards their hut.

Several Years Later

I had learned many things. From Inner Magic to Molecule Manipulation to most that the world had to offer. A different array of creatures and their biology.

The ponies. Viewed as demi gods to some
and nuisance to many others. Their leaders are goddesses due to having the only type of magic capable of moving celestial bodies on this planet.

Dragons. Fierce greedy creatures that live in intense environment and have recently been discovered to even have a monarchy-like government to keep themselves in check.

Griffins. Once mighty and fell from power. They have barely started picking themselves from their broken legacy. Despite this, they are still a force to be reckoned with.

These are few of the many creatures that reside on this planet. Or so the books say. I could care less of the history of these species due to something Zed taught me many things like magic. She taught me an ancient technique on how to gain complete control over inner magic. When I first used my inner magic, she was impressed with how much magic and potential I showed on my first try.

I improved massively ever since and she herself thinks I could compete against powerful unicorns and maybe stand a chance against the rulers of the sun and moon.

However, none of that compares to what else she taught me. Love.

Over the few years we’ve been together, there was something about that intrigued me. I don’t know if it was her laugh, personality, intelligence, stubbornness or all of the above. She had a special place in my heart. Her brother and I also grew close and had a bromance as he called it.

Looking back to what has happened is truly amazing in my eyes. I was soon to be having a pup with Zed. She was expected to give birth in a few days. She may have been a Zebra, as I later learned down the road, but heat can do wonders. We were expecting to either have a foal or pup. I’m hoping to have a pup.

Talking about Zed, she had gone to some village to acquire some food to make, even though I could have easily killed a manticore, she insisted I took a break. Why would I need a break? She’s my mate and about to give birth. I need to protect her in case something happens. Not barring another thought, I attempted to make a telepathic link with her.

It didn’t work.

It usually doesn’t work because the link isn’t accepted due to the receiver refusing it, being unconscious or dead. I was nervous and attempted again with the same result. I didn’t hesitate to teleport to the village.

I shocked nearby ponies when I appeared. It didn’t matter though, I could smell smoke nearby and chanting saying burn witch.
Fearing the worst, I teleported to the source of the smoke. What I saw was horrific.

Music Starts

It was Zed, tied to a wooden pole, burnt. I could smell the charred flesh and hear the ponies cheering.

Something had snapped inside me. I fell onto my knees in shock. My mate, my future offspring, burnt by ponies. Ponies . . .

Tears streamed down my face as the memories ran through my head. It had only been a few years knowing her but I could feel a massive loss slice through my entire body as if I was a hot blazing knife cutting through warm butter.

My hate had started to boil inside as I could feel a powerful force inside me build. This has continued on for a short while and I couldn’t contain it anymore

Music Ends

I teleported away in a random part of a forest and let out a scream as magic exploded out of me, random blast shot in random directions. After letting my anger release. I dropped to the ground with steam coming off my body. I only cried out in misery and emotional pain. I would have massacred that entire town but . . . Zed wouldn’t want me to do that. She would tell me to leave that for their sins to haunt them in the future.

“SELF RIGHTEOUS BASTARDS! WHY?! SHE WAS INNOCENT! WE WERE GOING TO HAVE A CHILD! WHYYYYYY?!” I continued to cry to for a while. I was deeply saddened by Zed’s death, it’s time I went to her brother and tell him what happened.

Author's Note

Hello you SEXY FUCKS!! I don’t have much to say other than give out constructive criticism to help in the future. Goodbye you SEXY FUCKS!!

From Hunted To Hunter (Part Three)

POV: Hunter

Location: A Quiet Desolate Forest

Time: Several Years Later

“I had told Zeb about . . . the incident. He was in total denial. It didn’t take long for him to release his rage on him. He screamed at me with so much rage, saying that I was the reason Zed was dead. And to be honest . . . I agree with him. He then started blaming himself. He bursted out like a waterfall. It took many hours later before it was a soft sob. I remember his last hateful words that he said to me.”

“I wish I had never met you, you fucking dirty mut. Get out! GET OUT!” I did as he said but as I left the hut, it exploded and I was sent flying. Zeb . . . was in far too many pieces to count. That was my breaking point. Not only had my mate and future child been burned alive, but my best friend had only spat hateful words on me and then committed suicide.”

“ Her charred skin . . . I could smell it to this day and the ponies . . . the ponies . . . “

“’THOSE DAMN PONIES!’ I remember yelling. I guess it rains in hell and angels could be bad. I can remember when they hurt me so bad.”

“Anyways, It had been many years since that day. That horrific day. Ever since then, I met a pack. I started as a low rank, then quickly rose up to the top. I had many mates but none of them compared to Zed. The only good thing that came out of those mates where the pups. Unlike the other high ranking dogs, I took care of them all. I had found something to protect. A new purpose. While I was an alpha, I became a mercenary. Earning bits and gems for the packs. I’d always return with a huge smile on my face. The pups . . . they grow up too damn fast. I’d even help some other species while doing my job, even the ponies. ”

“I remember seeing a little Zebra foal. She looked so hungry and she looked like Zed. I gave her a few bits so she could buy herself food.”

“I had returned, only to see large creatures attacking my pack. A few dogs were injured but nothing much, having a diet consisting of a large amount of gems said a lot about our jaws and teeth. I broke up the fights as quick as I could. Even trying to reason with the creatures. They didn’t care though, so I subdued them. However, a large ship landed close by and The Storm King arrived. He offered me a deal after seeing my abilities. If I agreed, he’d leave my pack alone, and if I’d refused, he’d use his entire army to kill every last one of my pack members and pups.”

“Of course I agreed. Though I was a mercenary, I had done dirty jobs before and was paid fully. I was at first skeptical at how I would get paid but those thoughts were quickly set aside as I saw the full amount. I had the gems shipped to the pack to provide. Due to this, I became loyal to him. I did as he asked and never failed. I even gained some trust from him. I would pillage towns but wouldn’t kill.”

“I may have done dirty things but my actions spoke for themselves. Whenever someone payed me so I could kill another being, I asked why and who. If it was selfish fued, I wouldn’t kill the victim, I would kill the one who ordered for the assassination. But before killing them, I’d check for family and background. A nasty criminal record would be immediate death. A criminal trying his best to provide for his family and protect them was a different ball game. I’d often leave both alone if they had the best intentions for not only themselves but for their family or loved ones too. Pretty dumb logic and off-topic but I thought it was worth mentioning.”

“Back on topic, I told the villagers flee but some unlucky few that gotten captured. It truly pained my heart. The Storm King is a truly evil creature, and even if I told him that, I’m sure he would just relish that fact.”

“It’s really pitiful. I appreciate yet hate the tyrant.”

“So what do you think Tempest and Grubber? You asked about my past and I delivered.” I said somberly.

Tempest Shadow had wore watery eyes and so had Grubber. They both rushed at me, gripping me in a sympathetic hug.

“Never knew I needed a hug so
badly. Thanks guys . . . we’ll will make it out of this. I . . . Promise.”

Author's Note

Short chapter but I wanted to end this on a previously unkown point of view. There’s more to these ’Villains’ than you thought.

Update #1

Hello you SEXY FUCKS! How are you? I’m just posting this on the story because this’ll get more attention than a blog post would. I am making changes in the future of this story, such as the main characters and adding new characters. I was originally gonna have the Jack and Jake settle down in Ponyville and live the rest of their lives with the main 6 and Spike but I decided not to because I’m still trying to get a hang of the main 6’s personalities. The Adventure Tag is also involved. It wouldn’t be an adventure type story if they just settled down. Spike will still be involved since he is a dragon. What kind of story would this be if the characters are dragons but don’t meet Spike? Also, if you want one of your characters to appear on the story, I’ll take suggestions and credit you. Good bye you SEXY FUCKS!