The Unforgiving Pt 1

by Thunderdashxx

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Adventure, Dark, Alternate Universe, Human, Sad
Length: 390

My first fic i hope you guys like!

When you have a life like mine you wish for a miracle everyday… and finally it came….

This is my first fic, so tell me how to improve it

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-07-16 18:02:01 UTC

Chapter 1 The Mirror

When you have a life like mine you wish for a miracle everyday... and finally it came....

     “I’m going to school now.” So far it was a dark and gloomy day i went to school like any other day, riding on a scooter, doing tricks and i arrived. I went inside with my My Little Pony lunchbox  thermos and backpack.Then my teacher greated me

    “Ah Mr.Kirkizan, why are you so early?”

     “Oh i was just going to study our science from yesterday, i had no time and my parents kicked me out”

         “WHAT thats horrible, i’ll have them arrested if i could!”

          “I wish!”

Mrs. Waterson was one of those nice teachers that likes all kids evenly, while my parents were the opposite, they were rude and always abused me while they praised my brother Siru, even though he was a little jerkish brat!

  Suddenly the bell rang and my two “best friends” who are really the bullies but everyone says their nice because they are the “Populars”

“Hi pony boy” they said to me.

REALLY! i said to myself.No matter how many times i tell them its a complement, but they dont listen.

“Today, we will be studying a fantasy world from request from the student of the week,Noann

    Then suddenly my two best friends came bursting in

“SORRY MRS.WATERSON!”

They said in harmony

  “Anyway, we will be in groups of 3, first up Noann pick your partners” Mrs.Waterson

It was a no brainer, my best friends were going to be chosen,we met strangely through recess and we liked a lot of the same things, but especially My Little Pony so we bonded

“Lyra and Peeta”

“YAY” they said together

‘WERE DOING EQUESTRIA RIGHT?” I said

“EEYUP”

“And kids,”Mrs.Waterson began,

“Do them outside”

we went outside and  for the rest of the day studied Equestria and studied the ponies,

then we walked home together and say a garage sale next to my house,

“Oh hi Noann and friends!” the neighbor said

I looked at a mirror

“Hey what is this?”

“A mirror want it?”

“Uhhhh sure!” i said

We walked home and went into my bedroom, I looked at it and touched it.My hand went right through.

“uhh guys?” i said

“yea?” i went inside and couldn’t believe it,

I was in...............

Equestria