Chapters Chaos, Fire and a Pinch of Romance
Time to Take You Hostage my Dear
"Discord STOP daydreaming! Where are the elements!" demaned Celestia.
"In a volcano in side a mountain inside my new CASTLE! Where you shall never find them!" I shouted.
"Could you pl-plea-ease give them back?" the made of my dreams asked.
"NEVER! And dear Fluttershy, time to take you hostage my dear, sweet Fluttershy," I said.
SSSSSNNNNNAAAAAPPPPP!!!!!
She was caught in my Chaos magic and in my Castle.
" How dare he take FLUTTERSHY captive! Gimme my friend back!" Rainbow Dash shouted.
"Ahh, Dash?" Rarity asked.
"Yeah, what?" she replied with a rather annoyed tone.
"He's gone," said Applejack," He ain't her' no more."
Dash paused...
"Oh yeah, COME BACK YOU TWISTED MONSTER! YOU'RE SO UGLY I CAN'T EVEN SAY 'TIME TO TAKE OUT THE ADORABLE TRASH', HUH YOU BIG BAD HORRIBLE GUY!" she shouted so loud the WHOLE EQUESTRIA could hear.
And speaking about the whole of Equestria.
Discord with his chaos heard the ugly remark. He said a word to Fluttershy,"Here make your self at home, I literally brought your house here. I will see you in an hour..."
"Umm, oooh. Ok, Dissey."
"Wait did you call me Dissey!?"
"No, um. Yes."
"Call me that from now on."
SNAP CLICK....!
Author's Note
Sorry if it was short this was just to get you into the story, my chapters will get longer, I Cross my Heart, Hope to Fly, Stick a Cupcake in my Eye!
Chaos, Fire and a Pinch of Romance
Fluttershy was puzzled, did Discord really only take her... because he loved her? No! How could a monster love her, oh yeah if she could find him cute he has to be in love. But still. Why not stay longer, get to know each other better. Then she saw something amazing in his garden,”MY HOUSE!” He had actually telepored it here. How? Never mind that, she had a jod to do now.
”Angel, where are you? Are you here?” she said.
She heard a noise...”Angel is that you?”
She saw a trail of half eaten carrots and at the end was a fluffy white tail.”Angel! There you are!” A spueak came from the little rabbit.
”What do you mean why didn’t we defeat Discord and why has gained control over Equestria? He got to the elements first and captured me!” Another grunt came from Angel.
”Yeah what, if I am ok with being taken away from them he is kinda cute.” And Angel started tapping his foot viciously.
”What do you mean you spied on him and... wait, WHAT!? He sawed off Rainbow’s wings!?”
I was sooo angry at him, I had to, to find this TWISTED monstrosity. I flew off and heard Discord whistling. I followed the noise. Until I came across a door it was unlocked so I opened it and to my surprise there was two cyan wings dripping with blood and a moaning, de-winged, pegasus who at least stopped bleeding. The
I nodded,”It’s true.” She dropped her jaw.
”Well I was,” I finished.
”Fluttershy it’s not as it seems she, she CALLED ME HORRIBLE NAMES she, she said the F-word to me and bul-...” he said.
”Really, Dash did you say that to Dissey!?” I demanded, Chaos inside me was taking over.
”Yeah, I kinda did.... But he kindnapped you!”
“Well, WELL THEN I DON’T BLAME HIM! Dissey mind if I join in?” I said,”After all the deal was I had to learn tha was of chaos. And then she’ll be our servant. Female...Buttler! In other words?” Chaos took over.... me now.
“Give her a rip in the ear!” I demanded him,”If thats ok? Dissey. Oh and Dash, we won’t kill you and we are still friend but you hurt him and that hurts me. And we’ll give you mechanical wings and use his Chaos magic to grow back a part the other, and Dissey rip off her leg!” Chaos took over I still had my kindness but she did something she could only forgive through her pain.
She said this to me,”Fluttershy, I still love you. I understand what you are going through. I deserve this as long as I get my wings back. Even if one is metal. I mean wouldn’t that be AWESOME huh?”
“Great to know you are in the spirt Dash now... THINK FAST!” said Discord as he gave her a rip in her ear and then he got a chainsaw. It Zzzzzzzzrrrrrwwwwooooaaaar-ed and Dash was still crying from the the rip went moaning and sobbing from this she was scared.
Zrrrwwwooooaaa-.... “OUCH, OWW, OWW OW, IT HURTS! PLEASE STOP IT-....” she stoped. Click! Her leg came off.”Well looked like you took that well.” SNAP! He stopped her bleeding.
Chaos, Fire and a Pinch of Romance
Fluttershy woke up she had a been in a deep sleep, then she saw Discord,”Hey Fluttershy! Rise and shine my dear!”
I was immediately alert,”Wait DID I SLEEP with YOU!?”
Discord chuckled,”No I have my own bedroom, dear.” He reasured me. Oh few, I thought.
Discord called somepony,”Hey Rainbow! Bring us the Coffee so we can drink together!” Wait, Rainbow was here!
Rainbow enter the room she was different she had one of her whole wings now replaced by a metal one and the other one had only half of it left as flesh rest was electronic. Her front left leg was replaced and she now had a rip in her ear. Fluttershy had forgotten what happened last night...”Hey Dash, what happened to you?” I said shyly. RD burst out laughing.
”Don’t you remember you and ‘Dissey’ punished me. Ripped me apart. But don’t worry Fluttershy, I deserved it. After all it didn’t hurt that much,” she said the last part sarcastically.
“Wait, I did WHAT! DID I REALLY DO THAT, oh I feel like a horrible friend,” Fluttershy murmured quietly.
”It’s ok Fluttershy, I forgive you. Infact I think I look 20% cooler, now!” she reassured me,”Now drink up.” I tasted my coffee, Applecino with Goat Milk. My favourite!
”Thank you Rainbow, Disssey, you know just how to make me feel better,” I yayed as loud as I could YAY.
Discord knew something, he knew that I wished he didn’t have to rule Equestria like he did.” Fluttershy for you I will summon the Princesses and your other friends. Ok, then we will chat about ruling Equestria together. Well in such a way I am in charge, they raise the sun and moon and I keep Equestria from falling in Chaos completely ok?” he asked.
“How did you know I was thinking that?” I asked,”Oh Chaos Magic huh?” He nodded.
“Well then yes,” I said,”You can.”
........SSSSSNNNNNN-CLIC-AAAAAAPPPPPP! KKKKK!
“WOW THIS PLACE IS AMAZING! CHOCOLATE RAIN, CANDY FLOSS CLOUDS and well hmmm. Thats all I got, wait RD what happened to you!!??” Pinkie shouted.
”Long story, we can tell it later,” RD said.
Then Discord spoke,” I have a deal for you, Princess...”
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Chaos, Fire and a Pinch of Romance
You Can Take the Chaos out of Equestria but You Can’t Take the Chaos out of Discord
“Fine Discord, but me and Luna have a spell to turn you into stone any moment. I warn you,” Celestia said.
I chuckled,”Well then, no Wings no agic rule!” SNAP! The princesses were now equal to Earth Ponies. Only now that they could still rise the Sun and lower the moon as normal.”I will give you a deal, I keep Equestria from falling into Complete Chaos. You give me the right to rule Equestria.”
“Never!” they shouted.
I chuckled,”Fine never see your horns and wings again.”
They nodded,”Fine, deal.”
I chuckled,”Well any way here are your horns. And if you dare try turn me into stone, your spell will back fire and your horns will expode. You can take the Chaos out of Equestria but you can’t take the Chaos out of Discord!” And POOF! There wings were back. The Princesses left but Fluttershy’s friends stayed.
“Fluttershy, are you ok. What did this monster do to you! And RD what happened. Carbon Mesh wings must be horrible. Being half digital.... and all,” asked Rarity.
”She’s fine aren’t you Fluttershy?” asked Discord he had that look.
”Yes I am fine and Rainbow, Rainbow just had some ‘punishment’,” I said Chaos took over again.”Yes I am fine Rares. But you won’t be...” RD said.
Author's Note
Sorry if it’s short it is the preparation for a 1000+ words chapter!”
Chaos, Fire and a Pinch of Romance
SNAP! Rarity was now scared, what had they planned for her. But you won’t be... she still remembers what Dash said to her, Rarity was just terrified. She opened her eyes to find she was on a metal table with bloodstains. Her neck and hooves her traped in hoof cuffs... “Looks like you are awake!” shouted Discord,”You fell unconscious when Dash said something to you... Your friends are waiting her with you.”
He paused,”Now ladies tell Rarity the rules here.”
AJ, Pinkie and Twilight said,”Do not say anything horrible to Discord, Fluttershy or Rainbow. Or else suffer unbearable pain.”
Discord and his crew chuckled,”Good, very good. Looks like you were listening and Rarity you broke the rule so...” She gulped,”I will now suffer unbearable pain...” then she saw that Twilight was missing her horn and her other friends(-RD and Fluttershy) were trapped too. Rarity gulped.
“Lets start with the horn,” said RD.
”Ok then,” said I. SNAP! I got a hand chain saw in my hands with my Chaos magic. Rarity gulped. I came closer. Rarity gulped. I went around the table. Rarity gulped. I was now behind her. Rarity gulped. I got the hand chain saw ready. Rarity gulped. I got the chain just below her horn. Rarity gulped. I pulled the saw. SNAP!
Rarity cried,”OW, OW, OW! IT HURTS, OUCH IT HURTS, IT HURTS!”
Her horn was now part with her and she started to bleed.”Great job Dissey! No the big, fat meanie has learnt her first lesson. Now for Lesson Number 2. Remove her eye!” I shouted. The Chaos in side of me was going haywire.
“Oh, sure my love...” CLICK! he said. He now and a little contraption. You place it on a eye, push the button and it cuts it out of its owners face.
He place it on Rarity’s eye, then Dash spoke,”Don’t worry. It will only be extremely painful.” Then Rainbow pushed the button.
ZRRRrrrrreeeeCccKkkkkKWAOAOAOAOARRRRRrrrrrrrssssszzzz
“OW, OW IT SORE, PLEASE STOP, I AM SORRY. NO, NO PLEASE! MY HORN SURLY WAS ENOUGH. PLEASE, OUCH IT HURTS!” SNAP! Rarity was now bleeding.
”Oh, I am sorry Rarity, hmm... Here we made you a ‘Eye-Patch’,” said Dash. The eye patch was really a robotic eye. It was black with a white pupil. After inserting Rarity could see out of it and it moved.
Rarity had stopped sobbing and moaning but she was still bleeding. The spell used on Dash was not used on her. The was an out break,”Ahh! You can’t do such things you ‘reep! Ya monster! How dare yo! And RD’aa how could you. Fluttershy... WHAY DID YA BETARE US!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
I paused,”Who said that! Tell me! I order you to! Discord, Fluttershy and me have had ‘horrible things’ said to us who said that! AJ who said that! You are the element of honesty, now TELL.”
AJ gulped,”Me’y, ya back stabbing USED-TO-BE-FRIENDS-WITH pony!”
SNAP! Discord had the saw again.”Now does anypony else have something to say?” he asked. They all gulped.”Good, now let remove the legs!” he shouted. AJ gulped.
“Ar’ ya gonna remov’ ‘em all?” she asked. I nodded.
“Please don’t RD, Fluttershy and Discord. IM SORRY!” AJ sobbed.
I could not believe what I was doing to my friends, but I had to regain Fluttershy’s trust. She was almost like a older sister to me. She was all ways there for me. She stood by my side through thick and thin, even if it was just a small “yay”. If I could I would knock the living daylight out of Discord... But Fluttershy was in love with him there was no doubt.
Then, Fluttershy collapsed....
“Uhh, what happened? WHY AM I HOLDING A CHAINSAW!?!?!” I screamed.
“Ya were unconscious and WERE BOUT TO SAW MAY LEG OFF!!” shouted AJ.
“I, I was!?” I said in shock,”Discord!”
“This is not what it looks like. She was rude to you! I didn’t mean to get my Chaos magic transferred into you!...”
“It doesn’t matter I am leaving!”
I flew off deep into the Everfree. I knew I had to stay there. Discord’s magic could not reach me there, the Everfree is the only place that blocks his magic.
“Fluttershy...” Said Discord. I started to cry, my love flew away from reach. Then an anger built up inside me.
“RAINBOW! LOCK UP THE PRISONERS!” I shouted.
“Yes master...” Rainbow replied.....
RD walked off with the prisoners, then she whispered to Twilight,”Maybe he isn’t so bad?”
I arrived by the dungeon, it was rusty old looking. But the beds looked comfy and there was a bathroom and dining room and mabye even more rooms which all the cells contected to.
“Welcome to your new home!” I said to the ‘prisoners’. Then I took them into their new cell one by one.
“Why did ya take his side!” spat Applejack.
“Stop the back chat!” I shouted back. Then I shoved her into her cell.
“Looks like some one is going to have smaller dinner tonight!” I said to her,”And I need to regain Fluttershy’s trust, AJ, if Discord can trust me, I might be at help. Get some limbs back, bigger meals etc.”
I left them..
Then I flew up stairs then. These robotic wings are AWESOME! I thought.
I rested up against a tree in the Everfree Forest, I was near to where Daring Do lived, ”Time to take a break...”
I was a bout to fall asleep when Angel appeared!
“Angel! You followed me!”
Angel nodded.
“Thanks, I needed a friend,” and I hugged him so hard. I put him on my back, then ventured further into the Everfree....
I heard soming in the bushes....”Who’s there. Please don’t hurt me...”
I saw a tail and a mane then something jumped out at me.
It was a Zebra, but not Zecora. Her fur was black and she had orange stripes. She was carrying a bag on her back.
“Hello little pony friend, need some help to defend?” She asked.
“Against who?” I wondered.
“The mighty beast of branches, which puts you into trances.”
“Huh?” I turned around....
“AAAHHHH! A TIMBERWOLF!!!”
It hit my wing and broke one of my wing’s bones.
“Run pony of yellow! Now me, you must follow!
“I am running!” And I held on Angel bunny
Then we ran. She lead me to a plat form. She spoke in a ancient language,”Lungi Sapi Trikaz!”
The platform lifted us into a Zebra village. In a tree... There was so many Zebras, bridges and and huts in side the tall trees which went on for a mile in every direction. “Thank so much.... uhhh, what is your name?”
“Zexra, now I will take you to our leader.”
“Uhhh, ok,” I said.
We passed so many Zebras, they followed us to a special meeting place. It was full of colour full flowers and birds. Then I saw a huge Zebra, his fur was yellow with green stripes. Zexra whispered to me,”Bow down to Chief Zurcurow.
“Now, now no need to bow Zexra, and who is this friend you brought with you?”
“My name is Fluttershy, I am a pegasus and this is my bunny, Angel. I represent the Element of Kindness,” I said.
“A Element of Harmony is standing infront of us! Every one bow down.”
They all bowed...
“And why are you here?” he asked.
“I broke my wing and I am living as a fugitive. Almost the whole of Equestria is living under corruption. Here was the only safe place to hide.”
“Well you are welcome here....”
Chaos, Fire and a Pinch of Romance
That Old Book that my Dad Left Me
“Master?”
“Oh, yes Rainbow Dash?” asked Discord.
“I miss Fluttershy...”
“I miss her too,” said the sad ruler of Equestria. His world had been gloomy since she left. He looked of the balcony into the Everfree. Why did he need to resort to violence. And why did he have to affect Fluttershy too.
It had been 6 months since she left. Equestria had fallen into Chaos, everypony was protesting against him as ruler wondered why the Princesses have him the right to rule and that their heroines went. Well they knew Rainbow Dash was his second in command and if Fluttershy came back she would rule side by side with him.
The truth was that it had led to many kidnapping of foals who’s family was driven into insanity. What happened to them, a whole underground trading system was built. Discord trip to gain their trust by finding them. He found a few but then they moved into the Everfree.
A few signs were put up. Every one said ‘DOWN WITH DISCORD! JOIN THE UNTI-CHAOS CLUB!’ and Discord burned them all.
Dicord shook his head,”RD, get Twilight. Make her search the library to... Look for The Commanding Tablet! Yes make her search the whole library!”
“But... But, you could do tha with your magic can’t you?” I asked.
“Oh yes!” He replied.
SNAP!
Discord blew on the dusty book. He read the title, A Guide to Chaos and it’s True Power! By Visions Yes this was the book his father wrote 3 thosand years ago before his defeat by Celestia’s father and mother (who also lost their lives) and he was left to care for his mother for another 300 years before she offered to take him back to their homeland and leave Equestria. He decided to stay. He needed to rule Equestria again. His raced ruled 5 thousand years ago then and they should again now. Then his mother gave him this book which also had a map to their homelands and left him in a snap. The book was enchanted and whenever something documented in the book changed it changed.
He opened it and turned to the table of contents.
“Ancient Chaotic Artifacts: The Commanding Tablet! Page CDXLIV or in other words 444!” He turned to the page. He read:
The Commanding Tablet is an essential to all embodiments of Chaos after me(Visions, Discord’s father.) It will allow the beholder to do whatever she/he wants, as long as she/he has passed the Chaos Rites of Passage* or is related to a Chaos embodiment. It does have a recharge of and 4728th* of a day after 3 goes.
It is a stone tablet which was created a thousand years BC (before Celestia or 2 thosand years ago) by Visions the greatest Chaotic embodiment of all time. It is hidden in the Chaos-Tic Grove. Last seen by Vile Shadow and can be summoned by a Sonic Rainboom or throught a Magical Magboom preformed by a Chaotic Embodiment.
*The Rites of Passage can be found on page DCLXVI
*Check the Chaotic Codes on page MDCCCXCIII for a 4728th of a Day
“Yeah, my Dad loved his blood ink when writing. Used it all the time. So Rainbow, do you mind going through the Rites of Passage?”
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Discord was excited, he was about to be free! For the last... Crack! Half hour his stone pris.... Crack! Prison was finally breaking! And then came the final CRACK!
“Whhoo! Hoo! I am free, Free, Free! Finally! Know I need a plan. MAWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH!” Discord luaghed to himself.
He flew to the Castle and looked at the stained glass windows,”Huh new bearers of the elements please give me something what I don’t expect.” But that is when a sudden earge came across him, a emotional feeling, for the yellow pegasus element of kindness.
“Love! I can’t be falling in love! I am the lord of Chaos! For heavens sake!” He decided to put his thoughts aside for now and his original plan, he will hide the elements of harmony from them where the can’t find it, in his new castle he was ‘bout to make
“Ok lets see if it still works!” Click! There was the Elements of harmony! Right in his paw! And.... CLICK! Again he was in the Everfree forest and once more... Snap! There was a huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggggggggggggggggeeeeeeeeeeee Castle right in front of his eyes! It was full of chaotic gardens, stairs what lead to the roof! Multiple copies of Discord gaurding his Castle listening to his every comand!
He then left it like that after hiding them in a chest which only he can open...”Back to Canterlot I presume...” SNAP! He was back at the Castle and he was in one of the stained glass windows. And that’s when he saw the Princesses and the new Element bearers.
“Discord! I was expecting you!” shouted Celestia.
”Ahh Celestia I always knew yo...” I started and there was that pony again, the yellow one, pink mane.... Snap!
I caught her in my chaos magic, then the purple unicorn shouted,”Leave Fluttershy alone!”
Her name was Fluttershy...
Chaos, Fire and a Pinch of Romance
A Rainbow's Dreams and Hopes Die
Author's Note
This chapter contains gore, and is written in 2nd person besides when it is in a special mare's POV.. I found it challenging and fun to write in 2nd when writing this story and every few chapters will be in this.
A Rainbow's Dreams and Hopes Die
SNAP CLICK.....!
Discord was in a dark room. He needed lights. SNAPPP! BUBBLE BUBBLE! POP! He turned on a lava lamp, really the lamp was made of lava. He saw the room much better now. There was two saws ponies would use mainly to cut things. Usually wood I would presume but then again, there was a table what had clips with locks so you could put a pony on it. And that pony is well you guess.
SNAP!
A certain cyan Pegasus with a rainbow mane was now in the room. She shouted ride things to him. Ones I won't list. Then he spoke."Rainbow Dash you should have better manners. Respect your elders!"
The cyan pony shouted,"Hey Discord, where are your manners!" She said it in a mocking like day too.
He shouted,"THAT'S IT!" CLICK!
She was trapped in the tables locks. Then he spoke to her," You know RD, how would you like it if mean things were said to you, or better. Mean things were done to you? Meet my 'Re Winger'!" She saw the two saws on either side of her. Each one right above her pinned down wings.
She growled and begged,"Don't you dare, please don't, how else will I be the best fl-."
SNAP...
The chainsaws where switched on with his magic and...
ZzzzzzzrrrrrrwwwwwaaaoooooW!
Then the mare started to howl, moan, groan,"OWWW! IT HURTS, PLEASE DISC-..."
SNAP CRACK CLICK!
It was to late. Her wings were both gone and pools of blood started to form.
SNAP!
"That will stop the blood, cover up the bone and form new skin. I am not a murderer but enjoy life as a Earth Pony!"
All of my dreams gone, Rainbow Dash thought.
