Fear Pitch Black: Melancholic
Chapter One: The past (Polishing finish) 3/30/2021
Load Full StoryNext ChapterEmmeranne had a place in her coffin near the other side of the dark and spooky Everfree forest. What’s in the coffin? A magical mare bat that didn’t want to be seen. She asked herself, “My name is Emmeranne. I’m a bat mare pony with a body-color of dark green, with a mane and tail color of olive, my eyes are dark red, and the age of twenty-one.” she then grinned. Emmeranne opened the coffin slowly as spider webs were already there, to begin with. Emmeranne then coughed from the dust when she’d opened it. She then got up and stretch and walked to the front door slowly to the Everfree forest as Emmeranne got the dust flying around her face. She covered her mouth and coughed three times and then headed out to the east. She got soaked while the rain blows on her face from the southeast. The trees were shaking making a noise as if the leaves were making music.
Emmeranne walked to the edge of the east of the forest and waited for her prey to show up when her eyes glowed in the dark. Her head blanked out for several minutes.
Emmeranne at the hospital with her father in the waiting room. It was a cold room back then and the smell was disgusting. She asked, “Is mom going to be alright... father?” as her spine bone shivered and looked at her father with her eyes full of tears.
“No honey. She’s pregnant. You are going to have a foal to play with.” as he smiled and giggled putting his left hoof on her right shoulder.
The doctor came out of the doubled door as it squeaked and he said, “I’m afraid your wife died; however, the foal still lives.” as the father grinned at the doctor.
The father rushed to his wife. Once he opened the double doors he cried out, “No this can’t be. You posted to be with me forever.” as tears dropped from his face. The father coughed out blood. His eyes started to blur in motion.
Emmeranne walked into the room where her father and mother were. The doctor holds the baby to her and asked, “What should you name this foal?” he blinked and stared at Emmeranne. She looked at the room and saw her father and mother both died behind the doctor, “Her name is Coral Grim.”
Emmeranne had shaken her head out of the vision and saw a pony near the road that smelled delicious. She then took action and went in front of the mare. She used her eyes to hypnotize her, “Come to me pretty mare.” she then used her left hoof and stroked the mare’s right cheek. The mare got nervous as her cheeks turned red. Emmeranne walked her back to the forest and straight to her household.
Once they got to the front of the odd dark green hidden house near the pond at the west side of the Everfree Forest. Emmeranne opened the door with her left hoof and told the mare to come to join her as Emmeranne went inside of the house, turned to the right, and flick the switch with her right hoof that turned on the lights.
The mare walked in the door as the light blinked a few times. The light was pretty dim with lots of dust and cobwebs all around the main floor. Emmeranne headed to the kitchen to fetch herself a butcher knife, “Come here pretty mare… Come here…” as the mare heard a voice in her head. The mare walked to the kitchen and saw a bat pony with a butcher knife that she held with her left hoof. The kitchen had some cold fog spread near the refrigerator. The lights began to flicker in the kitchen.
The mare drops tears from both of her eyes. Emmeranne swung the butcher knife real fast to the mare head as it had a quick crack sound. The strange mare head went straight to the floor real fast. Emmeranne smiled and laughed as she pulled the knife out of the mare skull and then struck again to the head multiple times. She then took a deep breath from her muzzle and smelled the fresh pony below her. Emmeranne grabbed the strange mare by the tail with her left hoof and walked to the bathroom as blood leaked on the floor.
Emmeranne walked into the bathroom and put the dead body in the bathtub as the blood started to fill. She used her knife to open the pony up from the chest. Then she slashes it opened to the stomach with her knife as blood poured into the bathtub. The intestines were fallen out of the poor pony. Emmeranne looked at the dead pony, “I hope you saw it... pony. That you saw your organs leaked into the bathtub.” as she was forgotten to close the mare’s eyes. Emmeranne grabbed parts of her intestines and put it in the mare’s mouth, “Does that satisfy you?” The head of the strange mare didn’t make a sound. Emmeranne then started to cut the mare's throat with her knife. The knife went back and forth as the cut opened the mare’s neck slowly and gushes out blood. Emmeranne then took a nibble of her neck for blood and sucked it out within seconds. She took out the body and had six gallons of blood in the bathtub. She then walked out of the room and headed downstairs.
She then went outside and headed to the road again. No one was there but, she then went to a camp not too far from where she stood. She walked south from there and found a camp. She saw two ponies there as they cook and talked about life. Emmeranne sneaked to the camp on the eastern side. She then stepped on a stick as it had made a crack sound.
The two ponies heard a noise coming from the east of camp. They both used their left hoof. At the same time, they both said, “Rock, paper, scissors.” as they both played the game, however, the pony on Emmeranne right side had won. The strange mare got up and walked near the bush, “I don’t think it’s nothing.” as she turned around Emmeranne pulled her tail. The strange mare looked at her friend, “AHHHHHHHHHH.” with teardrops run down her cheeks. She then got pulled from her tail quickly by Emmeranne. The other mare runs fast in the other direction to get help. Her friend screamed as Emmeranne dragged her into the deep forest as the birds flew away from the forest. The mare had her last scream as Emmeranne pinned her down and looked into the strange mare eyes. The strange mare struggled and then she stopped.
Emmeranne had control of her body, “Follow me stranger.” as the mare followed her. As they walked back to the hidden house, “So what is your name stranger.” as she turned her head to the left.
The stranger spoke, “The name is Magic Star.” and felt like she was asleep.
Emmeranne and Magic Star finally got to the house deep within the Everfree forest. It started to rain outside as Emmeranne opened the door for Magic Star and then they walked into the house while Emmeranne closed the door behind her.
Magic Star smelled the air, “something doesn’t seem right I can’t move.” as her thoughts had been getting her ideas and started to overwhelmed her, “Oh no that smell can only be death. What does she want with me? What is there to lose. Where am I? I don’t know? I want out some-pony save me.” as her deep thoughts kept her having anxiety.
Emmeranne headed to the kitchen, “Follow pony.” as she used her left hoof. Magic Star saw blood and wondered that death had been coming for her. She then entered the room and saw Emmeranne with a butcher knife on her left hoof. Emmeranne licked the butcher knife with her tongue. She then wipes the butcher knife with a napkin and reflected on Magic Star behind her. Magic Star couldn’t believe what she saw. Emmeranne took a butcher knife and swung in mid-air on Magic Star's face. Emmeranne walked toward in front of Magic Star, passed her, and grabbed her tail with her right hoof. She then dragged the knife on the floor making an awful scrape sound.
Emmeranne headed to the bathroom and picked up the old body's skin. She then dragged it in the basement with the rest of the dead that she killed many years ago. Magic Star heard a sound in the basement as Emmeranne opened the squeaky door slowly. Magic Star started to move and struggled hard. She finally started to realize that danger was coming dripping of her own blood down her face with so much pain. Emmeranne heard a sound from upstairs. She then quickly runs up the stairs. Magic Star got free from Emmeranne traced powers.
Emmeranne saw Magic Star struggled to open the door and moved slowly outside. Emmeranne threw the butcher knife and hit Magic Star's left flank. Magic Star had fallen down, “Ahhhhhhhhhh.” as teardrops run down her cheeks. Emmeranne walked toward her and picked the butcher knife up as Magic Star screamed. The birds flew out of the trees to the south again. Emmeranne grabbed her back left hoof and dragged her back into the house. Magic Star closed her eyes, “AHHHHH~ Help me.” as she had been using her hoofs and scraped the ground hard.
Emmeranne pulled with all her might and bring Magic Star back to the house and hit her neck. She then shut the door fast. Magic Star felt a hit on her neck as she then opened her mouth and yelled. Her voice reached its peak and broke. Magic Star tried to yell more and more but, her voice broke. She knows now that she was doom. Emmeranne dragged her to the bathroom. She then closed the door and then put Magic Star in the bathtub. Emmeranne started to cut Magic Star slowly through the stomach with a butcher knife. Magic Star had never felt so much pain. Her eyes wide opened as she looked in the bathtub full of blood. Magic Star's eyes color faded away as blood had been dripping down to the bathtub.
Emmeranne stirred the bathtub and then heard footsteps. She then walked out of the bathroom and closed the door tight behind her. Emmeranne noticed that she also heard a noise downstairs. She checked the door to the basement and the noise stopped. She then closed the door and walked outside. Emmeranne heard the wind blew and the trees whispered through the night. She saw her past as it gave her a memory.
In the dining room three years ago at their house. It was night time at nine o'clock. The room had a sweet smell of candles.
Big sister, are you excited?” He asked as he had been sitting in the far-left corner with a piano.
“No... now hurry up and play the piano.” She added right beside him to his left.
Emmeranne little brother started to play the piano, “You know we're going to have a little sister ya know.”
“Keep playing little brother it must be exact performance.” as she then smiled.
Their parents walked in the room on the right, “Nice work son” as they smiled.
Emmeranne then shook her head again, “These past visions are going to make me hate killing ponies.” and then she used her left hoof to her forehead slowly. She started to rub her left eye while closed, “I… I need to get two more ponies to fill the bathtub. Then I can enjoy myself for another generation of fun.” as she thought to herself and then smirked. Emmeranne had put her left hoof down and head outside. She headed back to the edge of Canterlot from the south then saw another pony. She then walked silently towards the pony she knew with guards around her.
Emmeranne heard what they were talking about, “Hey stallion can you explain what happened here?” as one of the royal guards asked.
Tears run down from his cheeks, “I don’t know sir. It... It happened so quickly.” as he then looked down at the ground.
The royal guard hugged him, “It’s ok we’ll get to the bottom of this for sure.” as he looked in the Everfree Forest.
Emmeranne ducked and walked silently to the bushes without a sound. The two royal guards walked back and forth. The victim walked back to his house with tears run down his face. Emmeranne made a hissing sound. The royal guard walked toward the noise. The bush shook as if Emmeranne was waiting for the right moment. Suddenly the other guard turned his head to the left quickly. Emmeranne had snatched the royal guard head and hypnotized him as the other royal guard heard a sound and turned his head slowly to his left. He saw that his partner was gone. Emmeranne took the other royal guard and sneaked back to her house.
Once they got to the house the royal guard opened the door with his left hoof as she walked in along with the royal guard behind her as he walked in and closed the door behind him. The second royal guard followed and got lost in the Everfree Forest. Emmeranne walked to the bathroom. She then took the body and headed downstairs as she walked. Emmeranne placed the dead body with the rest of the corpses. She then walked upstairs as the royal guard stood there. The royal guard looked into her eyes as he then got hypnotized again by her.
Emmeranne walked forward and bit the royal guard on the left side of the neck. He, of course, died with no scream and then fallen forward. Emmeranne dragged the dead royal guard to the bathroom. She then cut him and opened his chest and poured the blood into the tub. She then took a wooden cup and scooped the blood in the bathtub and then she gulped it down hard with a smirk on her face.
Emmeranne then got more blood in the bathtub. She then grabbed the body and walked downstairs with it. Once she got there, she put it with the rest of the corpses. She then walked upstairs and thought to herself a lot back then.
Eleven years back at one time when Emmeranne runs from home.
Emmeranne tears run down her cheeks as she then runs towards a weird forest. Everything went dark when she entered it. The wind blew very cold as her spine began to chill. She then started to shake and kept walking forward. Emmeranne heard weird sounds in the forest like no other. The sound went behind her left ear and whispered death. She heard it and run forward into the deep forest. She then closed her eyes and fallen into a hole. She then knows what happened to her father. The image was still stuck in her head as her father hanged himself in the kitchen.
Emmeranne then hit her neck during the fall as the spine made a crack sound. Then she dropped and broke her back hooves. She then felt pain like no other, “Ahhhhhhh” as she shouted.
A deep voice then screeched in the dark place of the cave. Emmeranne was frightened when she heard it. Then it spoke to her, “What are you doing here?” as Emmeranne then shivered.
“I… I’m hurt and I can’t get up.” as she struggled.
“Would you like to turn over?” as it stared at her with a glare of deep red eyes glowing.
“Will it heal me?” as she can’t see a thing besides the monster eyes.
“Yes, it will.” as it did a burst of evil laughter echoing the cave.
“Alight, I agree… Do it.” When the monster came closer to her.
Emmeranne felt a strange pain in her neck, “Ahhhhhh” as blood started to drip down her neck. She then got up and transformed into a bat pony. Emmeranne flew up out of the hole and went out of the forest. Then the sun has risen as Emmeranne felt burned by it. She then headed back into the shadows where her face was red hot and smoking fog from her face. She then walked back to the deep of the Everfree Forest. Emmeranne started to build a house. Once she finished, she had sheltered in eight days.
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