The Dark Side of Quickbolt

Constructive Criticism?

Do me a favor and give me constructive criticism. I really need it, though I've improved.
Anyway, ONTO ZE ANNOUNCEMENT! My 3rd fic WILL be Twilight x Quickbolt, so, yeah. Just thought you
guys should know. Next up, this fic was made in ALL my free time so...I hope you guys were happy with it.
You don't have to be. Well I better get goin'. SCOOTACHICKEN OUT!