
The Broken Element of Loyalty
My ending of Mare Do Well. Rainbow Dash feels betrayed by her friends and lets her emotions take her away to another place. Now that she was no longer friends with the elements, her element crumbled and blew Equestria's defenses.
Rainbow Dash had enough of her friends picking out her mistakes. Now, she saw that her supposed 'friends' humiliated her and ruined her entire reputation at Ponyville. Her friends ... ex friends refused to apologize and Rarity began to compliment her costume. Angered, she decided to move away and start a new life... one without her so called friends. But Princess Celestia saw that the Element of Loyaly faded black and was beginning to crack. She gave a mission to Twilight, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Pinkie Pie to somehow fix the Element of Loyalty. But Rainbow Dash wasn't one to forgive.





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10 Chapters:
- A New Beginning 2017-10-19 21:26:27 UTC1029
- The Impossible Task 2017-10-20 20:27:06 UTC
- The Element of Loyalty 2017-10-26 01:06:00 UTC1185
- The Reappearance of Mare Do Well 2017-10-29 19:28:41 UTC1512
- Wing Power 2017-10-30 22:29:07 UTC1053
- Training 2017-10-30 23:58:07 UTC1589
- The Storm of Horror 2017-11-03 00:44:30 UTC1036
- Choices 2017-11-04 19:04:06 UTC1270
- Pack Your Bags 2017-11-07 17:56:09 UTC1003
- Epilogue 2017-11-07 20:37:13 UTC669