Sexty minutes

by YourCatsBestFriend

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Comedy, Slice of Life
Length: 1686

written in Just over 60 minutes

Rarity x Fluttershy
Sorry about not being very descriptive, I only had 1 hour, so can't really fit much in. I will probably make a remake that's more descriptive and all that. so yeah.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-07-17 04:52:38 UTC

Chapter 1

*Take in mind this is a challenge to write a clopfic in 1 hour.  I will probably make a better, more detailed version, but for now, this is what I got*  http://sextyminuteponies.tumblr.com/

Rarity was trotting down the path to Fluttershy’s house.  It was a warm, sunny day, and was very beautiful out.  Except for of course, the hiddeous bugs, and such, but besides that, it was lovely.  Fluttershy had wanted Rarity to come over to her home because she had a dress that she needed her to fix.  The pinked maned pony insisted that she come to her home, instead of going to Rarity’s boutique.  She said it was very important, and Rarity, being the element of generosity, decided to come as quickly as possible.

She didn’t mind, really, it was always wonderful to see Fluttershy.  She was the only one of her friends who ever acted lady-like.  Not to say she didn’t love her other friends, but Fluttershy was fun, because they had a lot in common.  She always got very stressed out, being in the boutique all the time, and i was great to get some fresh air.

As she approached The shy pony’s house, she could make out a yellow figure, near a large, brown bear.  She got closer, and came to see that she was feeding him.  It was a sight to see.  A large animal, that could kill her in one bite, respecting such a quiet, shy pony.  “What a dear” she giggled to herself.

Fluttershy spotted Rarity once she grew near.  She turned away quickly.  Rarity couldn’t see this, and She was glad.  She would’nt want to hurt her feelings, she said thoughtfully.  She wanted to tell Rarity what she had been feeling, but found herself to be nervous.  She was always nervous, but this time was different.  Her and Rarity are almost never alone, so this will be a new experience for the both of them.

She continued to feed Mr. Barlo, who she had named the male bear, and pretended she didn’t see her.  At last, Rarity had reached talking distance of fluttershy, and simply commented on Mr. Barlo.  “What a darling bear , Fluttershy”!  Rarity had said admiringly.  “Fluttershy blushed.  “Thank you Rarity”, she had said quietly.  “So you have a dress you need me to fix up”?  “I simply MUST get back to the boutique as quickly as I can, I’m head to hoof in work”!

“Oh...Fluttershy had said, obviously dissapointed.  At this, Rarity was confused.  Why was she so sad at this?  She contemplated her last statement, and then found the problem.  “Though”, she began, “I think I might stay a bit longer if that’s alright with you”.  Fluttershy shot up, overjoyed at this new information she had just discovered.  “Oh yes”!  “How wonderful”!

The two young ponies stepped inside of the yellow pony’s house, and began to talk.  Rarity had just talked about her work, and the ponies she was currently making her dresses for.  Many famous ponies, and she was honored to do so.  Though these were just simple, small little things, Fluttershy seemed to thoroughly enjoy them.  As long as Rarity had something to say, she was happy.

“Oh”!  “I’m so sorry” !  She trotted over to the kitchen.  “Would you like anything to drink”?  She politely asked.  Out of force of habit, the white pony declined.  “Oh, no thank you dear, i’m quite alright”.  “Oh...Fluttershy replied, saddened once again.  Rarity felt extra generous today, and for reasons unknown to her.  “Actually on second thought dear, I think I would love something to drink”.

Yes!  She wants something to drink!  O.k.  don’t look awkwardly, just offer her water, and cider.  “Oh”!  “How wonderful”!  She happily replied.  “I have water, and Cider, that I applejack gave me a few years ago”.  Fluttershy had swished the cider around a little, hinting it just a bit, and Rarity took it.  “Some cider would be absolutely lovely, thank you”.  She took out 2 large mugs from a cabinet, and poured them both up to the top.  Take in mind, this bottle of cider, was very large, and barely made a dent in the all around supply.

Rarity was handed a lovely rustic mug of delightfully tasteful cider, which she politely sipped, very slowly.  It had been a few years since Fluttershy had recieved it, but that doesn’t tell how long applejack has had it.  She said to herself.  Just as she had reached about halfway, she asked.  “uh...Fluttershy dear, you wouldn’t happen to know how strong this is, would you”?  “Oh...I’m sorry Rarity, I don’t want to give you something to strong for you”.

Rarity was confronted by a decision.  She could just say that it’s not, and get drunk, or she agree that it is too strong, and hurt Fluttershy’s feelings, for feeling like she messed up.  She made her choice.  “Oh, no dear, just simply wondering”.  She wasn’t sure this was the right thing to do, but, there was no going back now.

Great.  Everything is going great.  I’m always better at talking, when I’m a little bit tipsy, she thought to herself, maybe Rarity is interesting too.  Well, it’s now or never, she said in her thoughts.  She gulped.  “Hey Rarity, umm....Do you mind...umm...If I ask you something...umm kind of personal”?  Rarity was obviously starting to get drunk.  “Totally fluttershy”!  “Whatever you want”!  “O.k.  Well, umm, you know how when you went to the gala, you really wanted to find your special somepony”?  “Well of course I do”!  I met a stupid jerk who cared more about himself than me”!  “Gah”!  I’ve been so fed up with men lately, it’s honestly really annoying”!

Fluttershy was pleased to hear this.  “Oh, I know exactly what you mean Rares”.  Rarity turned to her.  “You do”?  She asked, slurring her speech a small amount.  “Oh my yes”.  She lied.  Rarity stared in shock.  “Umm, Rarity”? Are you o.k.?  She snapped out of it.  “Oh yes”.  I’m fine”.  It’s just that out of all ponies, I figured you would have the least amount of problems with stallions.  “What do you mean by that”?  She asked, suddenly starting to get excited.

“Well, It’s just that you have the perfect rump, and mane”.  She replied bluntly.  Fluttershy blushed.  Was Rarity of all ponies hitting on her?  “Oh no”.  She said.  Actually, I’m not really interested in Stallions”.  “If you know what I mean”.  Rarity blinked multiple times.  “Oh”!  she squeaked.  “I didn’t know you were a lesbian, Fluttershy”!  Here it is.  The fate of their relationship, all lied in how Rarity felt about this.

“That’s lovely , dear”!  she replied.  It was true.  Rarity truly thought so.  She was very accepting of different sexualities, and actually was quite intrigued by such.  She has hear rumors that intercourse with one’s same gender is better than the opposite.  It made sense, but she never had the opportunity to find out.  She was interested, so she decided to try something new.

“You know Fluttershy, I always thought you were very beautiful”.  Fluttershy, looked away.  “I love the way you mane flows , and your cutie marks, and especially that rump of yours”.  Fluttershy looked back again.  “I feel the same way about you”.  Rarity was glad to hear this.  Now she shall see if this lesbian thing is as good as everypony says it is.  Rarity moved closer To the Shy, yellow pony. “I’ve always had an eye out on you, and haven’t gotten to ever tell you”.  “until now”.  Fluttershy let out a huge smile across her face.  “I always wanted  to touch another pony, but I have never gotten to”.  Rarity saw what was happening.  “Well, we should fix that, now shouldn’t we”?

Fluttershy was finally going to get to date Rarity, and, get to finally lose her virginity.  She knew for a fact that Rarity was not, and yet scaring her, also turned her on more about her.  Rarity brought her hoof down onto Fluttershy’s back just stroking it, and teasing her wings, by rubbing in small circles around them.  It felt amazing, and She really was as experienced as she had expected, if not more.

She begun to stroker her cutie marks, and that for some odd reason, began to really turn her on.  She could feel her lower area starting to get warm, and wet.  She simply moaned out of pure pleasure from Rarity.  She was so happy right now.  She was going to have sex with Fluttershy.  With one swift motion, Rarity overturned her, onto her back, and began to lye down herself.  She spread apart both her, and Fluttershy’s legs, and moved in closer.  Both of them inhaled deeply as both of their soft spots began to touch.  It really did feel amazing.

Rarity felt amazing between her legs, she could feel the juices of each other running , and smashing in a frenzy of thrusting.  Both moaning uncontrollably, and making a mess on the couch.  It was Her dream come true.  Fluttershy always had her virginity hanging on her shoulders, and could never get it off.  But now.  Now that Rarity is here.  Now she can finally lose it.

Fluttershy began to feel a strange sensation inside of her, It feels like a ball of pure energy interlocking with Rarity’s and becoming one.  They are now both equal.  “Fluttershy”!  Rarity shouted, over her heavy panting.  “Yes Rarity”?  Fluttershy managed to ask.  “I’m going to cum”!  She shouted, obviously telling the truth, as the bucked harder.  “I don’t know what that is, but I am too”!  Shouted Fluttershy.  They picked up even more speed than they knew possible, it was rising inside of her.  she felt every muscle in her body jolt, as they in sync came together.  It was beautiful, The entire couch soaked, and everything.  It lasted for a few moments, and both of them passed out from the shock of the pure pleasure.

“Fluttershy”.  “wake up”.  She awoke to the smile of a beautiful marshmallow unicorn smiling , in her face.  She brought a smile to her face to.  “Hi rarity” she giggled.  “So That was pretty amazing, I’m really surprised”.  “My only question is...”  “Why didn’t you tell me about this sooner”?  “Lesbian orgasms are amazing”!  She said, giggling.  Rarity looked into fluttershy’s eyes.  “Because I didn’t know either, that was my first time”.  She said.  Rarity looked at her in shock.  “Your kidding”.  “I thought you were experienced, you bucked like a pro”!  “Fluttershy blushed.  “So, is this just a one time thing”?  “Because, if it is, that would be o.k. with  me.  Fluttershy said, feeling dissapointed.

“Rarity looked at the yellow pegasus”.  “Darling, I wouldn’t give you up for anything in the world”.  She smiled , and kissed Fluttershy on the lips.  “I love you”.  They both smiled, and were both startled when somepony burst through the door.  “Hey Fluttershy have you seen Rari-”.  The two lovers turned around to find a Green and purple dragon standing in the doorway , awestruck.  He stood there, unsure of what to do.  “uh....I’m...I’M GOING TO TELL TWILIGHT”!  He screamed, as he took off, running as fast as he could.  They both laughed, and Fell asleep.  The End.