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My Little Pony the Movie - How it should have ended

by Stainless Steel Fox
Canterlot has been invaded, again. The Royal Guard and Wonderbolts are being useless, again. But this time Twilight has a plan, based on friendship. Will it be enough to save the day?

The My Little Pony Movie was amazing, with wonderful world building and well plotted out adventure and feels. But it ignored a lot of canon. Twilight has check lists for checking her check lists! Do you really think she wouldn't have a plan for an invasion, especially after what happened at Cadence's wedding? Also, Equestria already has friends and allies they could call on. So, here's my version of events.

Edit: Some of the early comments have given me cause to think about revising the second chapter, so I'm pulling it until I have a chance to do so. I may remove it altogether and let the first chapter stand on it's own, as I originally intended. The idea, after all, was to show that Equestria already had allies they could have called on, not to mock the actual film, which I enjoyed thoroughly.

Everyone
Complete
Alternate Universe
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Adventure
 
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4727 words: Estimated 24 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. The Plan 2017-10-21 21:56:38 UTC
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  2. The End Game 2017-10-21 21:58:55 UTC
    3673