No Hugs for Sugar Crush

If a bat pony offered you a hug, would you accept it? Apparently, Mineral Water would not hesitate to deny Sugar Crush one.

Sugar Crush has been working at the Crystal Empire's bakery ever since she had the chance to arrive at the ancient kingdom. Thanks to the crystal ponies and their accepting nature, the thestral found it very easy on fitting in. To compensate for their kindness, Sugar Crush made an active effort to give every customer she had a hug. And with every hug she gave a customer, a free small item came their way.

But one bright afternoon made everything she did change. One customer named Mineral Water refused her hug and free item, prompting Sugar to make the endeavor on giving the resistant crystal pony a simple sign of affection. Little did Sugar know her pursuit would lead into a much bigger picture than she realized.

11/2/17 Made the popular story list! Thanks for finding the story interesting! :D
11/6/17 Holy crap! My story is being featured?! So soon?! D:

Also, a special thank you to Crystal Wishes. You are a huge part of my inspiration when it comes to writing. Thank you.

Teen

Incomplete

Romance

Comedy

Slice of Life

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

184250 words: Estimated about 15 hours to read

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51 Chapters:

Hug 'n Sweet Deal 2017-11-02 13:21:49 UTC
6172
Pause Nose 2017-11-06 14:25:34 UTC
3271
Blinding Beauty 2017-11-09 15:00:13 UTC
3100
Mr. Crazy 2017-11-13 15:22:23 UTC
2417
Contains Eggs 2017-11-17 15:51:01 UTC
3675
As Sweet as Her Name 2017-11-22 19:10:34 UTC
2963
Carats and Karats 2017-11-30 20:17:59 UTC
2997
Morganite Might 2017-12-06 18:53:42 UTC
2271
Chocolate Palace's Empress 2017-12-11 14:15:38 UTC
3429
Intoxicating Vanilla 2017-12-22 14:34:38 UTC
4014
Losing an Argument 2017-12-30 15:35:04 UTC
2337
Mini 2018-01-06 13:20:41 UTC
5224
Heat Lamp 2018-01-11 16:54:27 UTC
6240
Spring Water 2018-01-17 13:55:40 UTC
2260
Potential Future 2018-01-22 13:05:09 UTC
3869
Fluffing 2018-01-29 15:37:43 UTC
5694
After 59,251 words, Pinkie Pie finally gets a chapter 2018-02-04 15:36:41 UTC
4839
Six-Lettered Word 2018-02-10 14:24:03 UTC
2383
Strawberries 2018-02-20 19:46:29 UTC
3976
Ease 2018-03-05 22:28:20 UTC
1484
A Busy Palace 2018-03-10 14:32:52 UTC
2997
Shock Value 2018-03-16 15:42:22 UTC
2435
Three Boxes 2018-03-27 13:30:34 UTC
3717
Titanium 2018-04-17 20:54:29 UTC
3075
Murder Smile 2018-04-25 14:07:57 UTC
3249
Lady Killer 2018-05-14 21:28:17 UTC
3252
Center Field 2018-06-13 20:26:49 UTC
2541
Persistence 2018-06-20 16:08:18 UTC
1943
Down the Slide 2018-07-12 18:59:02 UTC
6922
The Best Kind of Moment 2018-07-25 17:47:41 UTC
3754
No Hugs for Sugar Crush 2018-08-07 19:12:58 UTC
4398
Sugar Crystal 2018-08-18 11:37:39 UTC
3919
Hugs First, Then Children 2018-08-22 14:44:17 UTC
3298
Paths Cross 2018-09-01 14:38:18 UTC
2073
Our Favorite Pastime 2018-09-07 14:28:05 UTC
4330
Short and Sweet 2018-09-09 11:59:44 UTC
2008
Condition 2018-09-20 22:34:46 UTC
4652
After approximately 2,232 hours, Ferocious finally got his act together and wrote another chapter! 2018-12-08 19:06:08 UTC
4395
The List 2018-12-18 16:35:43 UTC
4697
Maple Tree 2019-01-07 21:47:28 UTC
5286
Ancient Mother 2019-01-30 16:38:00 UTC
1240
White Dwarf 2019-02-21 18:01:53 UTC
2248
Original Character 2019-04-08 16:50:42 UTC
2450
Intersection 2019-05-28 15:15:56 UTC
2911
After 5 Billion Years, the New Chapter Came Forward 2020-08-06 15:58:45 UTC
4357
Fallen Spear 2020-08-14 17:25:36 UTC
3995
Crime of Passion 2020-08-27 13:48:01 UTC
8761
The Moment of Lament 2020-09-08 10:15:45 UTC
3742
No More Shade 2020-09-24 15:41:19 UTC
2465
Sister 2020-10-05 15:50:53 UTC
3705
Arrangement 2021-03-18 20:35:39 UTC
2820