Hay Belly Syndrome!

by Poppy8

Timidthy: Cutting It Close (Day 3)

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Author's Note

Sorry for the wait! I got caught up with school and exams! I'm glad for your patience! And here's the rest of the story!


Timidthy: Cutting It Close (Day 3)

Timidthy’s POV


Oh thank Celestia we finally got to this part! Anyway, I remember that during the last few hours that’s when my body was screaming out in pain the most. Thank goodness my brother and I snapped to our senses. Albeit, Blood Bones and I did wait until the absolute moment but we came to our senses on the end. But if I could change anything of what I did in those last moments I would’ve chose not to move.

Getting up and moving probably didn’t help my health.


I was sleeping (somewhat) peacefully as I slowly was starting to wake up. My rectum and anus felt like they we’re on fire while my intestines felt as if they had been ripped apart. I groaned as I felt too tired to even open my eyes, but that was soon proven wrong when I heard my brother scream.

“AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!” I jumped, and my limbs acted on instinct trying to get up. But as soon as I got up I felt extreme pain somewhere in my body and I felt something leak from my anus. I gasped hit the bed as I could hear my brothers whimpers from my mother’s bathroom.

SWEET CELESTIA! MAKE IT STOP!” Blood Bones cried out, I groaned and slowly got up ignoring the pain I felt. I tried to safely get off my mother’s bed but between the pain, grogginess, and the urgency to get to my brother. I ended up hitting the floor in a crumpled heap. I groaned as I swore a heard a few of my bones crack,

SOMEPONY PLEASE HELP!” Blood Bones screamed. I bit my lip as I stood up on shaky legs and dragged myself over to the door. I tried to light my horn, but this time no magic came out. I reached for the handle and used it to keep myself up. As my legs we’re shaking so rapidly I couldn’t stand without support.

“Bro-Brother…..?” I said weakly,

“Tim! Please help me out! I made a stupid mistake and now I just want to die!” Blood Bones spoke out. I groaned as I felt my stomach knot up. I looked behind me and I gasped when I saw that blood, feces, and even pieces of my intestine on the floor. I paled in both fear, horror, and blood loss as I felt my eyelids grow heavy.

“I-I think we need a-a hospital.” I said as I felt like a needed a nap,

“No way we’re princes! We don’t need any—AAAAAHHHHHH!!!” Blood Bones said but his protest soon turned to a scream.

“Brother!” I said my adrenaline spiking up, “Brother! Answer me!” I listened closely for a few moments before I heard what could only be soft, broken sobs from Blood Bones.

“Ge-Get mommy! I need serious medical attention!” Blood Bones whimpered, I gulped and tried to run towards the door but I ended up tripping and falling. I felt like I was going to pass out, finally I drew in my last bits of strength and screamed louder then I ever had in my entire life.

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP!” My head hit the floor, as I felt more fluid and intestine fall from my anus. Suddenly the door busted open and Watch Dog and Shimmer Sword came in. The two gasped when they saw me and they ran off for a few moments. When they came back they had Princess Celestia and Luna by their sides.

“Timidthy!” Celestia said, she the gently levitated me up as Luna ran towards the door.

“Watch Dog, Shimmer Sword please set up a carriage you have to drive us to the hospital. Get a maid to inform Timidthy’s and Blood Bones's friends, along with their families, that their in the hospital.” Celestia quickly said, Shimmer Sword and Watch Dog nodded before galloping off. I them heard the door open and Luna used her magic to levitate my brother. My brother’s face and front hooves we’re stained with tears as I saw a piece of intense sticking out from his anus as it bleed. I winced and looked away trying to focus on anything else then out current situation. Celestia and Luna then each pulled out a cork from one of my mother’s many desk drawers.

“We’re sorry for this.” Luna said, she then used her magic to jam the cork into my brothers anus my brother yelped. And I let out a short scream as my mother did the same to me and pain shot through my body. Celestia then pulled out two black cloaks and put they over me and my brother. Finally she put me on her back and Luna did the same before they galloped out the room. Once they we’re out the room they teleported outside the castle they ran down the slope seeing that Shimmer Sword and Watch Dog we’re ready to go.

Once mommy and auntie got to the carriage they hopped in and held my brother and I in our laps.

“Ma-Mama, auntie, I—I so—” Blood Bones tried to say but Luna put a hoof over his mouth,

“Shhh! Save your strength.” Luna said, just as the two guards began to gallop through the street. I looked up at the sky and saw that it was late at night. I looked around at Canterlot and saw that all the lights we’re out.

“So pretty, I wonder if this will be the last thing I see.” I said out loud as my eyelids began to droop, I felt Celestia hugged my tight and my eye’s sprung open in response. I honestly don’t know if she did that to wake me up or of mother was scared I would die. But either way she was doing it out of love. Suddenly Shimmer Sword and Watch Dog stopped in their tracks and both Blood Bones and I clutched our stomachs as we felt the cork move slightly. Celestia and Luna levitated us into the air and ran into the hospital.

Everypony looked at us most of them shocked to see princess and Luna. Mother and auntie then ran to the hospital counter and pulled the cloaks off our bodies.

“Please help!” Luna said, and anypony who wasn’t looking at us now was as they saw me and my brother’s appearance. The and nurses gasped and we’re quick to take my brother and I from our guardians and placed each of us on a stretcher. Two unicorns then lit up their horns and blasted us with a sleeping spell and we both passed out.

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