Chapters The Arrival Of The Gore (Backstory)
"Dead." I smirk.
"B-Bad Gore! N-No c-cuddles for you t-tonight." A small yellow filly angrily says to me.
"Gore not sorry, gore will cuddly with wingy." I growl.
A small white dove lands on my shoulder and rubs it's head against my cheek.
"Wingy never angry with Gore. Always cuddly with Gore."
I smile as I rub my head against my pet doves. I then kneel down and let the filly climb onto my shoulder.
"We leave GentleShy. No want find Gore." I groan.
"It's y-your own f-fault Gore, I keep telling you to st-stop, killing is wrong G-Gore." GentleShy huffs.
"Gore no can help it, Gore no can control self." I whimper.
"If y-you stop k-killing others th-then w-we can live in a nice h-house, just you, me and W-Wingy." GentleShy explains.
"No do, I protect GentleShy and Wingy from others, I kill all, nobody here to hurt GentleShy and Wingy." I growl "GentleShy, there shop over road, you want fake cuddly?"
GentleShy quitely nods. I start to cross the road and stop in front of the store. In the window is my reflection. I stare at my reflection. I'm six foot tall, I have the build of a normal person the only major difference is that instead of hands I have scythe blades, three foot long, blood stained, grey, curved blades with palm sized magnets stuck to the beginning of the blades replace my hands. The blades stand out horizontally from my wrists, like when a mantis's stretched out arm. I didn't lose my hands in the normal way, I didn't lose them in a battle nor did I lose them helping others. They itched, never stopped itching. So I cut them off and replaced them with the blades that I used to cut them off. I'm wearing a pair of blood stained, blue denim jeans that have rips all across them from when I've wiped the blood of my blades and a black T-Shirt with three white stripes going from my right collarbone down to the left side of my hip.
I charge towards the window and break through it. I close my eyes to avoid getting glass in them. After I land and stop moving I open my eyes and see that I'm not in a shop but I'm in a large purple room.
"What are you and what made you think you could get away with breaking in?" A white pony in gold armour shouts.
"GentleShy want fake cuddly. Give her one NOW!" I scream.
The white ponies horn starts to glow white and then shoots out a thin white beam of light.
"Bright not hurt Gore, blades hurt you though." I growl with a grin.
"What the? I need reinforcements in here!" The white pony shouts.
"Gore d-don't you dare kill h-him." GentleShy commands.
"But fake cuddly?" I ask.
"I'll g-get one b-but you don't h-have to h-hurt anyone." She explains.
"GentleShy say no hurt you, you no die, now get GentleShy fake cuddly." I demand.
"Get Shining Armour!" The white pony shouts.
"That name of fake cuddly?" I ask with a tilt of my head.
"Shut up!" The pony shouts.
I look at GentleShy who looks back at me and shakes her head 'no'. I look back at the white pony and watch him as he panics.
"Give fake cuddly then gore leave." I explain.
"What's a fake cuddly?" The white pony asks.
"A t-teddy p-please." GentleShy answers from my shoulder.
"I-I can get you one, just stay over there." The white pony says as it slowly side steps towards a door.
"Okay, gore wait here, you get GentleShy fake cuddly." I say with a smile.
The white pony then runs to the door and runs out of the room.
"GentleShy get fake cuddly." I say happily.
"I-I don't th-think he's getting me one." GentleShy sighs.
"No fake cuddly? Then what he doing?" I ask.
"T-telling the police." GentleShy answers with a whimper.
I start to grind my blades together and growl.
"No get police." I growl as I run towards the door.
I use my blades to slice the door in half and run through the now empty doorway. I start to run through the hallways until I run into a group of white ponies.
"You're under arrest." A white pony with a horn in gold armour says angrily.
"No arrest Gore, Gore kill then get fake cuddly." I snarl.
Two white ponies in armour charge me. I raise my blades and bring them down into the two ponies heads pinning their heads to the ground.
"My name is Gore and you've angered me, You're going to pay and your life is the fee." I say with a smirk.
"I'll take him, you just get the medics." The white horned pony says angrily.
The white horned pony then steps forward, his horn starts to glow blue. A small bubble appears around me.
"You try hurt Gore?" I ask as I walk through the bubble.
"No way...." The white horned pony mumbles.
I take another step towards the white horned pony.
"Your name?" I ask.
"Shining Armour." The white horned pony answers with a growl.
"Shining Armour? I scratch name into the ground where you die."
I scrape my blades against each other causing sparks to fly from them.
"Stop right there beast!" A voice shouts out.
I look over to where the voice came from and see a blue and black pony glaring at me.
"You! You have fake cuddly?" I shout.
"I won't let you hurt anymore of the ponies who live here." The blue and black pony growls.
"You give fake cuddly then Gore leave and you live." I explain.
"Small pony on his shoulder, I see you, quickly run over here and I'll keep you safe." The Black and Blue pony shouts.
"GentleShy? You want take GentleShy from me? You no live for that." I growl.
I charge the blue pony swinging my blades as fast as I can manage. Every time I swing she teleports just out of reach. After letting me swing for about a minute she teleports behind me and her horn starts to glow. I stare into her eyes and tap the ground with my blades. After a few seconds a giant black beam leaves her horn and blasts out the wall behind me.
"I-It went through him?!" The blue pony shouts.
"No horn light hurt Gore." I laugh.
"Shining Armour I have an idea." The blue pony says as it teleports over to Shining Armour.
The blue pony then whispers into Shining Armours ear. Shining Armour then nods his head then looks at me.
"I know where you can find a fake cuddly." Shining Armour says.
"Tell Gore, GentleShy want it." I growl
"It's over in that forest." The blue pony points out.
"Really? I get fake cuddly there?" I ask.
"Yeah." The blue pony answers.
"I leave now, I get fake cuddly."
I turn around and head back towards the first room I was in.
"I th-think things could've g-gone better at that p-p-place." GentleShy mumbles.
"No matter, Gore get you fake cuddly and that all that matter." I reply.
GentleShy sighs into my shoulder.
"GentleShy tired?" I ask.
"No. I-I'm just.... A bit s-sad." She answers.
"What make you sad? Gore will gore what make GentleShy sad." I growl.
"N-No one has made me s-sad, I j-just feel sad f-for s-some reason." GentleShy whimpers.
"We no go here, we get fake cuddly from other place."
"Y-you don't have to g-get me a teddy." GentleShy mumbles into my shoulder.
"GentleShy want fake cuddly, Gore get GentleShy fake cuddly." I reply.
"G-Gore.... What's th-that looking at us f-from the forest?" GentleShy asks with a shiver.
"GentleShy scared of eyes?" I growl.
She nods her head with a squeak.
"Gore will rip eyes out." I snarl.
I put my two wrists together cauing the two magnets on my blades to stick together, creating a pair of scythe blade scissors. Two large wooden wolves slowly step out from the bushes.
"You're made of wood? I wonder if you have blood. Looks like I'm in luck, I'll get to have a good look." I smirk.
The two wolves start to slowly circle me. I lunge out with my pair of scissors and start chopping into one of the wooden wolves causing large strips of bark and green blood to fly from its body. I stomp down on it's chest causing the wood to splinter and cave in.
"Your blood is green how intersting, I'll get to see more after your ending."
I pull my blades apart again and start to claw at it with as much speed as I can muster.
"You're surviving which is a pleasent surprise, shame you won't live long enough to see the next sunrise.
I bring both blades down into it's skull. The wolf lets out a high pitched screech of agony. I twist my blades in different directions causing the head of the wolf to be ripped in half. I stand back up and point the tips of my blades at the other wolf.
"I hope you'll live longer then your friend, he died to quickly, what a boring end." I groan.
The wolf jumps at me with it's mouth open as wide as possible, ready to bite me. I jam my left blade into the open mouth of the wolf. I then slam the wrist of my right arm into the head of the wolf, the magnetic pull of the magnet inside the wolves head causes my right wrist to cave the wolves head in as both of my wrists collide and stick together, creating the scythe scissors again. I then use the scissors to start to cut through the wolves body causing blood and wood to be sent flying everywhere. The wolf starts to let out a screech of it's own as it's body is cut into pieces from the inside out.
"As much as I want to keep cutting you until your nothing left, You're scaring GentleShy and I don't want her to be upset." I rhyme with a smile.
The wolf looks at me and growls. I look back at the huge hole left in it's skull.
"I will end you quickly so don't you fret, it'll only hurt for a second on that you can bet."
I rip my blades out from it's body and slam them both down into the wolves head, skewering it. I then stand on it's chest and pull as hard as I can, ripping the screeching wolves head off.
"GentleShy no need be scared no more, Gore kill bad doggies."
"Th-Those dogs wh-where some s-s-scary creatures." GentleShy replies as she crawls out of from behind a bush.
"When GentleShy get there?" I ask.
"I r-ran here after you st-started a fight with th-the dogs." She answers.
I kneel down and let her climb back up onto my shoulder.
"No go in forest, we get fake cuddly from far town over there." I say as I point to a town in the distance.
"Gore, you're n-not allowed t-to kill anyone there okay?" GentleShy asks.
"But Gore only protect GentleShy and Wingy." I say as I look up and see Wingy flying just above us. "Wingy come down on shoulder of Gore."
The small white dove flies down and lands on my other shoulder.
"Promise me Gore." GentleShy commands.
"Yes GentleShy." I answer with a sigh.
"Good boy Gore, you can have some cuddles after we're finished for behaving." GentleShy says happily.
"Gore like cuddles, makes Gore feel warm."
"I know it does." She smiles.
I straighten my arms and put my wrists together and use my arms to hide my blades.
"Gore hide blades well?" I ask.
"Yes Gore, you've hidden them well." GentleShy answers.
I start to walk towards the town in the distance.
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We arrive at the outskirts of the town, as I start to walk in a lot other ponies start to appear in the streets, as soon as they see me they run back into their houses.
"Gore try not be scary GentleShy." I say as I look at GentleShy on my shoulder.
"M-Maybe I should go ahead? Th-Then I can say th-that you won't hurt th-them." GentleShy says nervously.
"Gore no let you of shoulder here, pony might hurt GentleShy."
"Please Gore?" GentleShy asks with a sniffle.
"Gore be close by. Gore will watch." I say defeatedly.
"Thank you Gore." GentleShy says with a smile.
I kneel down and let GentleShy climb off of my shoulder. She then starts to walk down the street. I decide to watch from a distance. I see GentleShy walk up to one of the houses that looks like a giant tree and knocks on the door. After a few seconds a purple pony answers. I see them talking then after a few moments GentleShy points towards me and the purple pony looks at me. The two then seem to have a short conversation about something then GentleShy waves me over. I start to walk towards her, after a few steps i can start to hear their conversation.
"I'm looking for a cuddly teddy bear, do you know where we can get one?" GentleShy asks.
"I think I have one in here, let me go check." The purple horned pony says as it steps back inside.
"She seemed nice." GentleShy says to me.
"GentleShy like purple pony?" I ask.
"Yeah, she seems really nice." She answers.
"Gore will get you purple pony." I answer with a smile.
"No Gore, don't you dare." GentleShy says angrily.
"GentleShy no want purple pony anymore?" I ask.
"I d-don't want you to kidnap th-them, just leave them alone o-okay?"GentleShy angrily snaps.
"Okay, Gore leave purple pony." I mumble.
"Good." GentleShy sighs.
The purple pony then opens the door again.
"I do have one, would you like it?" The purple pony asks.
"Yes." I immediately answer.
"O-Okay." The purple pony replies as it heads back into it's house.
"GentleShy get's fake cuddly." I say to GentleShy with a smile.
Author's Note
The Gore's mission to get the "fake cuddly" is nearly over. What do you guys think? Seems like GentleShy is the only thing able to control The Gore.
The Equestrian Guard are after him which means that Luna and Celestia will be watching him.
Anyway what did you think ot his chapter? What do I need to improve on? What did I do well? Answering these questions will help me understand what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong.
The New Mission (The Family)
"There they are." A familiar voice shouts.
I turn towards the voice and see the same blue and black pony from earlier. I raise my blades and get ready to kill.
"G-Gore don't h-hurt them." GentleShy commands.
"They try hurt Gore. Gore will skin them." I growl.
"Gore!" GentleShy shouts.
I freeze in place and look at GentleShy in pure shock.
"GentleShy shout?" I ask with a tilt of my head.
"SILENCE!" An incredibly loud voice shouts.
I look towards the voice and see a large white horned pony.
"You want me to be silent you'll have to make me, My silence isn't something you'll get for free." I rhyme with a growl.
"G-Gore.... Sh-She's scary." GentleShy whimpers.
I scrape my blades together, a high pitched screech of metal against metal comes from my blades.
"I can't have you scaring GentleShy, So I guess you'll have to die." I chuckle.
I charge towards the large white pony with blades posed to strike in it's neck. I lunge forwards, as soon as my blades are about to collide with it's throat, the white pony teleports away from me and behind GentleShy.
"I'll have to warn you to stay away from her, I'll kill everything here if you damage even a hair." I snarl.
The white pony then grabs GentleShy and dissapears with her.
"Give me her back and I'll consider letting you live, If not I'll jam my blades into your throats like a shiv." I growl.
The black and blue, winged and horned pony smirks at me.
"You won't be killing anypony." She says to me before I'm blinded by darkness.
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I feel a strong cold run across my entire body. I open my eyes and see myself surrouned by nothing but mist and snow. I can barely see past the tips of my blades.
"They take GentleShy.... Gore will gut them all." I growl.
I start to walk in a random direction, I walk for what must have been hours. Walking. Walking..... Walking. The only sounds I can hear are the howling of the winds, the snow under my feet and my pained breaths from the cold that's freezing me from the inside. After a few hours a small village comes into sight. I can feel my body becoming weak, I force my body to continue going. I can only walk for so much longer. I can see the town slowly come into walking distance, then my body gives way. I fall face first into the snow. The pain from the cold rushes through my body like a wave. I can feel my breathing becoming weaker, my lungs start to burn. My eyelids start to feel heavy and it becomes harder to keep my eyes open. I try to keep my eyes open only for them slowly close on me.
"GentleShy...." I mumble as my vision becomes black.
..........
"It's waking up Mommy!" A squeaky voice shouts excitedly.
The pain I felt from the cold no longer runs through my body. I can feel energy start to pump back into my body. I open my eyes and see that I'm surrouned by wood. Above me, wood, to my sides, wood, underneath me, wood. I look towards where the voice came from to see a small grey filly with a pink mane and tail.
"Where.... Gore?" I ask, groggily.
"You're in Frostmare Ridge." The small filly answers happily.
"Gore no know where is." I groan.
"Sweetie are you okay in there?" A blue pony with a black mane and tail asks as it steps into the room.
"Yes Mommy." The little filly says with a smile plastered onto her face.
"I'm glad to hear it. Now.... What's your name?" The pony asks me.
"Gore. Gore name is Gore." I answer.
"Gore? What an.... Interesting name." The pony mumbles.
"Where big white pony with horn and wing? Where blue pony with horn and wing too?" I ask.
"Sounds like your talking about Celestia and Luna. They're in canterlot, that's a huge distance from where we are." The pony answers.
"Gore need go Canterlot, save GentleShy." I growl.
"Save? What's happened?" The pony asks.
"I go find GentleShy fake cuddly, they no like Gore, they attack gore. Gore defend self, they like Gore less. They take GentleShy then everything go black. Gore confused." I answer with a groan.
"Sounds like they teleported you, but I don't know why they would kidnap your friend." The pony says to herself.
"They shine bright light at Gore, it no do anything but why shine light?" I ask.
"Shine light? From their horns?" The pony asks back.
I nod my head.
"Sound like they used magic but it didn't work. I wonder why they could teleport you but not use normal magic...." The pony questions.
"It no matter, Gore only care about GentleShy. Gore save GentleShy." I mumble.
"You can't leave yet, the snow is too thick and your too weak. Rest here until the snow goes, then I can lead you to Canterlot. I don't really know what's happened but I can't help but be interested in it." The pony explains.
"You help Gore?" I ask.
"Yes." She answers with a nod.
"Then Gore keep you safe, friend of Gore?" I ask.
"Sure, I'm always happy to have another friend." The pony answers with a smile.
I nod my head and look at the pony.
"Can you grab hair?" I ask as I lean forward.
"Sure...." The pony says as she grabs a small clump of my hair.
I raise my right blade up to the clump of my hair below her hoof. I then slice through the clump of hair. I then stop leaning forward and go back to sitting down.
"Keep this. Gore know you on his side." I say with a smile.
"Okay." The pony says with a gulp.
"You name?" i ask.
"Snow Storm." The pony answers happily.
"Snow Storm? Gore pay you back for help." I say with a nod.
"Hey Gore! Wanna play?" The small filly asks.
"You want play with Gore?" I ask with a tilt of my head.
"Yeah! I see your sharp arm things and I thought we could make an ice sculpture."The small filly says excitedly.
"Gore might not like you talking about his arms like that." Snow Storm says in a cross tone.
"Oh I'm sorry if I upset you Gore." The small filly says nervously.
"Is okay. You remind Gore of GentleShy when I first see her. She say 'Your arms scary looking.' I was a little angry at first but she nice filly." I say happily. "You still want make ice sculpture?"
"Yeah!" The filly shouts excitedly.
"Then Gore make ice sculpture for you." I say as I look around for a chunk of ice.
"I have some ice in the back garden. Want me to get you some?" Snow Storm asks.
"Yes, Gore thankful." I say with a nod.
"Okay, I'll be back in a minute." Snow Storm says as she leaves the room.
"Your Mom very accepting of Gore, why she trust Gore so quick?" I ask.
"It's just how she is, she always tells me that 'No matter anyponies appeareance you should treat them how you want them to treat you.'" The filly answers.
"Gore see, what your name?" I ask.
"Ice Breaker." The filly answers.
"Nice meet Ice Breaker." I say with a smile.
The filly giggles happily.
"What Ice Breaker laugh at?" I ask with a tilt of my head.
"You talk funny Gore." Ice Breaker says with a smile.
"Gore brain weird, Gore talk normal when rhyme but not good when talk normal." I explain. "Gore no can help speak."
"You can rhyme?" Ice Breaker asks.
"Yes little filly, I do talk silly. When I rhyme it comes out normal, and when I try to talk it comes out abnormal." I rhyme with a smile.
"Wow. That's cool!" Ice Breaker says excitedly. "Do it again!"
"Well I can rhyme pretty easily, it helps my mind be free. The words I want to say seem to just flow, And I can talk like an average joe."
"Average Joe?" Ice Breaker asks in confusion.
"It's what call someone who normal, nothing odd about Average Joe." I explain.
"I kind of understand." Ice Breaker says with a nod.
"I'm back with the ice. I have a bucket filled with some ice, have fun you two." Snow Storm says happily.
"We will!" Ice Breaker says excitedly as she grabs the bucket from her Mom.
The weight from the bucket is too much and causes Ice Breaker to tumble over.
"Ice Breaker okay?" I ask.
"Yeah." The filly answers with a giggle. "I just got a little too excited."
"She does it all the time Gore, one day she'll learn to calm down." Snow Storm chimes with a laugh.
I smile at the happy family in front of me.
"Gore make special sculpture for friends of Gore." I say as I shuffle towards the bucket.
I tip the bucket over and start moving the ice around. I then start to use my blades to scratch details into the ice and add shape to it. I do this for about thirty minutes, the family watch me the whole time. When I finish I move for them to see the tiny sculpture I made.
"Ice Breaker made of ice and Snow Storm ice." I say with a smile.
"Wow, that's impressive." Snow Storm mumbles.
"Gore got good with arms, Gore not good at much but Gore good at arm things." I explain.
"I'm sure you're great at lots of things Gore!" Ice Breaker says happily.
"Gore only good at arm things." I repeat.
Author's Note
The Gore, GentleShy and Wingy are separated. Now Gore has the most important mission of his life ahead of him. Get GentleShy back.
What did you think? I know the story has a slow start but I want to develop "Gore's" character as the story progresses. I hope you guys understand.
Anyway what did you think ot his chapter? What do I need to improve on? What did I do well? Answering these questions will help me understand what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong.
*Knock* *Knock*
"Someone's at the door, let me go get it." Snow Storm says leaving me and Ice Breaker.
"How many live here?" I ask.
"Just me and Mommy." Ice Breaker answers.
Ice Breaker starts collecting the remaining ice from the bucket.
"I don't have the money, can you wait a little longer please?" Snow Storm's voice quitely rings through my ears.
"Gore be right back Ice breaker." I say as I stand up.
"I'll make you something while you're gone." Ice Breaker says happily.
"Gore thank." I say with a nod of my head.
I then start to walk towards Snow Storm's voice.
"We're collecting the money now. Move and let us take stuff or we'll break your legs." A gruff voice threatens.
As soon as I hear the threat I start to run. I turn round a corner and see a brown pony with a grey mane and tail aiming their horn at Snow Storm.
"Why would you threaten a friend of something like The Gore? I'll cut and slice you, but with how weak you look it'll be a bore." I growl with a smile.
"Maybe I'll break your pets legs to show that we're serious." The brown pony threatens.
"I'd like to see you try you pathetic disgrace, I'll slice you into deaths cold embrace." I rhyme.
I scrape my blades together causing a screech to come from the metal. Both the brown pony and Snow Storm cringe from the noise.
"Come on then freak, me and you outside. I'll show you just how powerful I am." The brown pony says as it walks into the street.
I follow it into the middle of the street. Before I can move the brown ponies horn shoots out a thin light into my chest.
"Light no hurt gore." I laugh.
"W-What?" The brown pony stutters.
"Your not very strong if you need magic to beat me, You're weak so I'll put you out of your misery." I taunt.
The brown pony grits it's teeth in anger.
"Don't think that because you can survive that, that my magic won't kill you." The brown pony says through gritted teeth.
The brown ponies horn starts glow brown and sweat starts to build on his face. After a few seconds another light shoots out from his horn, this time this one is as thick as a flashlight's beam. The light goes straight through me and into the house next door to Snow Storm. I start to scrape my blades against eachother causing another screech to ring through the street.
"Light nearly hit Snow Storm house." I snarl.
"Why won't you die!" The brown pony shouts.
A crowd starts form around us.
"I don't need magic to kill you." The brown pony growls.
The brown pony the starts to charge me with his horn aimed at me. I take a step forward and ready my blades. Just as we're about to collide I step slightly to the side and bring my scythe down into his horn, slicing right through it. The brown pony falls over and starts to convulse on the ground. Foam starts to form on his horn where it was cut off. I walk towards his convulsing body.
"No mess with Gore friends." I growl.
I raise my blades up into the air and slam them down into the brown ponies stomach. Blood starts to puddle in his open mouth. I keep my blades in his stomach and use them to lift him up off of the ground. I then slam him forehead first into the ground with a crunch. His convulsions stop and his body goes limp.
"You can't kill something like The Gore, But I can kill you that's for sure." I rhyme with a smile.
I look at the crowd of ponies around me. Their faces all show the same expression. Terror. The crowd around me then run away screaming. Snow Storm looks at me with a look of horror.
"Gore protect Snow Storm." I say with a smile.
Snow Storm then slowly walks backwards into her house and then slams the door. I walk up the front door and knock on it with my wrist.
"Why leave Gore outside?" I ask.
Silence.
"Why no let Gore in?" I ask.
Silence.
I knock on the door again.
"You leave Gore out of house." I say as I knock.
I look into the window next to the door and see Snow Storm talking to Ice Breaker.
"You leave Gore out of house!" I shout into the window.
Snow Storm then looks at me and runs away.
"Why run from gore?" I ask.
I see Ice Breaker look towards where her Mom ran to and then back to me. I wave at her and she waves back with a smile. Ice Breaker then walks to the front door and lets me in.
"Snow Storm no like Gore no more?" I ask.
"I don't know, she came in and said something bad happened then ran and hid." Ice Breaker explains.
"Gore protect Snow Storm and Snow Storm get scared of Gore?" I ask.
"I don't know Gore." Ice Breaker repeats with a pout.
"ICE BREAKER GET AWAY FROM IT!" Snow Storm screams.
"It? Gore not it, Gore is Gore." I point out.
"Honey it's dangerous get away from it!" Snow Storm shouts.
"Dangerous? Gore protect Snow Storm, why scared of Gore?" I ask.
"Shut up and get out!" Snow Storm shouts.
"You're scared because Gore killed someone, It's okay, Gore is already gone." I mumble.
I then turn around and leave the house.
"No Gore! Come back!" Ice Breaker shouts.
"Why do you want that dangerous creature in here? He'll kill us!" Snow Storm shouts.
"He said he protected you and he's our friend. That's enough of a reason for me to want him to stay." Ice Breaker answers.
"Honey he KILLED somepony!" Snow Storm shouts.
"Did they threaten Gore?" Ice Breaker asks.
"Well.... Yeah.... They tried to kill him as well.... They also threatened me...." Snow Storm nervously mumbles.
"He protected himself and you, you should be happy that he's okay." Ice Breaker says with a pout.
"The only time you get serious with me is to try and keep our dangerous friend here. I guess he did do it to defend us." Snow Storm sighs. "I'm sorry Gore, you can come back if you can forgive me for how I reacted. It's not often somepony dies."
"Gore understand, Gore forgive friend." I answer.
Snow Storm smiles at me.
"Come inside now Gore, we need to clean you up." Snow Storm says with a small smile.
I smile and nod my head.
The three of us then head back inside of the house.
Author's Note
Gore has killed another Pony, yet another self defense against an attack.
Anyway what did you think to this chapter? What do I need to improve on? What did I do well? Answering these questions will help me understand what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong.
Gore's Vision of The Future (The Family)
"It's getting late Gore, I'm going to put Ice Breaker to bed then go to bed myself." Snow Storm says to me.
"Gore sleep too, Gone need strong so he get GentleShy back." I say with a smile.
"Good night, Gore." Snow Storm says happily.
"Good night, Snow Storm." I reply.
I lay down on the ground and curl up into a ball to keep myself warm. I then close my eyes and slowly fall into the the dream realm.
" Hͨḛ͖ͭ͆lͯ̊ͤͭͯ͊lo G̯̬̟̰̦͈͐͛ͥ̒̿̇ô̐rͣ̊̎e̯͇͈͓̦̰̪̔̀̋̾̔̎ͣ." A feminine voice growls.
"Who welcome Gore?" I ask as I look around.
I'm surrounded by nothing but darkness, a black unending void. Slowly two creatures that I recognise step out. The white and blue creatures that took GentleShy. This time disfigured in the same way I am. The bodies look normal except from a multitude of scars that spread across their bodies. Their legs have been sliced in half and been replaced with scythes. The ends of what remains of their legs have had a small metal cover placed over them, a small five inch piece of horizontal metal attaches itself to the tang of a four foot long scythe blade, the scythes attached to the front legs are facing forwards whilst the ones attached to the back legs are facing backwards. The ponies eyes have also changed, they've turned to a pure black, almost like their pupils had grown to the size of their entire eyes.
"A̦̮̼͈rẹ͙̤̺ͨͯ͊͋n̙̄'t͉͇̝̬͐ͥͩ̆ ́͒͊ͮ̉͌wȇ͙͖͓̭ͬ͒̚ ͦ̇̓̃͑b̗̚e̼͈̯ͦ͒ͩa̔̊̾̌̍̾́u̎̐̽͊ͮ͑̆t̟͚̼͍̟ͅi̦̣̼̥͕͕͈ful̤̺̒̚?" They both ask at the same time.
"Gore think you very beautiful." I say with a slight tilt of my head.
"Y͊̍ó̱u͕̫̺͌̒̈́ ̎c͓a͋nͮ ͓͈̲há͖͕͌ve̜͍̘ͮ̂͆ u̝͙͖s͕̥ ̾͛̃G͍͔͛̽or̤͕̤ͬ̃ͬḛ,̪͔̖̇ͪͩ b̙̠̱ot͎͓̭͐ͦͭh͕̘̐̀͋ͅ ͤ̈͂o͇͂f̣̅ ̥͗u̹ͩs.̲͔̫ ̥̝ͤ͂All͍͒ ̩y͂̑o͉̲ͣͩu̠̤̩ͯ̃̂ ha̲̮̩v̭̯̝̆̏̎e͇ ͚̟̃̚t͂ô ̯̜̘do̫̊ us ̦̟̮ͬͥ̏c̲ͦa͔pt̥ͤu͙͓͛̐re̿ͨ̄ ͚ẉh͓̪̠̔̒ͦa̙ͩt̘͎͆̽ we̺̾ ̟͚͕̈͐ͧu̺̦̳͐ͨ̃s̜e̐̏͛d͚̉ t̥̎o͇̣̔ͨ ̜̭̆̂lo̭̝͙ok ̈́ͨ̈́li͙̰ͯ̏ke ̮͉ͭͭǎ̘nd͎̔ ̗̿ma̪̙̺̍̾͑ḵͫe͑ ͕̥̒̋u̻̍s ͚̼i̩̟͔̓̋ͦnto ͈̖͉͒̽ͪtͪ͆hiͫs.̹̼ ̯̗ͫ̐Sc̯̉ă̫̲̎r ̙̖̩̏͛̇us,͕̯̩̀ͤ̅ ͙ͯs̫͈cyt̤͚̬ͩ̅́h͓̯͍̅ͬ̓e̞̹ us̘,͓͊ ͓̝̾̂M͉̪̘ͤ̋͐Ä͚͇̙̈ͯR̩̮͙̃͂͆K͖̳̲͌̊̈́ ̙̣ͦͯus̿͆.̺͕ͣ̾ " They both snarl. "You could be our prince."
"Gore no want be prince, Gore just wants to defend friends." I growl.
"M̘̙̻͔ͮ̌͋̓a̬r̘͈̯̹̊̇͆̇̉ͅkͥͤ̈͗͌ͬͥ ̖̅̽ͅű̩̜ͬs͕̩̣̬͇̓̍͑̌̒ ̪̦̺͈̙̭́̽̃̉͋ͮ̄ͅḁ͚͚͕̹̯nd wě͍ ̫̱̭w͍̩͉̫̤̳̱̔̐̓̒ͬ͂̚i͍̱l͇̝͋͂l he̫̦͈̪̤̪̰lp y̠̥ͥͫo͎̙̫̠ͣ͂̈́ͮu.͎̼̦͇̰͙ͧ̽ͫ̏͗̔͆ͅ " The two disfigure ponies snarl.
"You will help Gore?" I ask.
"Ỹ̧̨ͧ̀͛ͤ̉̒̎̿͗͆̏̋ͪ҉̻̫͉̪̮̯͓̤̖͇̮̤͚ͅe̹̲̘̲̱̮̯̺̙̜̹͕͟͡e̛̜̩̙͈̻̠̤̖͉ͩ̓̿ͫ̈́͛̓ͯ͌͘͟e̸̩͇̤͜e͍͔͖͎̲̬̲̹͖̳̲͓͔̼ͅs̡̛̺͍͖̣̦͈͖͔̱̊ͥͥͬ͒͑ͧ͊ͫ!̠̤̱͉̦̲͕̪̹͎͍͍̼ͥ͊͑̊̑̏ͫ͋̌ͧͥͫ͛̀ " The two of them moan.
"Gore will mark you. Gore will turn you into Gore helpers." I say with a grin.
"G̞͕̔̌oͫ̒́͊r̲̬͚͔̼͚̞ͧ̍ͦ̄ͨͫͩe̱͙̖̿́ͩḽ͕̱͚̣̏̈́̽̅ͮeͪ͐̆s̬̗͎͚̯t̒ͦ̂̃́ͫĩ͈̱̉a̲̟̞͒̅͛ ̠̥͚̻̾ͧ͗͋̚ͅan̉ͣͦ̏d̹͉͇̺̥̮̞͂ͯ̇̓͊ͩ̐ ̳̦͉͈͍̄ͪͥͥͩL͈̺u̮̟̘̝̙̘̓ͩ͌̓̉͗̓ͅn̘̬̻̺̩̉́̽͆̒go͉͙̜̱̘̤͎ͧͫͫ͑̓̌̽re͇̦̞̜̯ͣ͂̆̌̉ w̜̲̲͇̒͌ͯ̌i͖̦͌ͩl̺̦̗͓̬̮l̹̫̹̬͂ͣ̐͂ h͇̻̦̞̞̲̔ͪͦ́̄ͥḛ̰̰͙l͙̖̿ͮp ͪy̐ͯͤo̔u͆ͭ ͎̯̔ͦma͐̎͋̇ͦ̐ͬs͉̙̘̭͈̺͓̊̌̒͌͆ͤ́t̲̹̻͕̤ë̮̹̫̜̖̖͒̏͛ͮ̅r̫̣̼̰ͦͧ͒̉.̪͈̮̻̪͗͒͌͌ͫ͛ͅ " They both cheer.
I can hear what sounds like stone rubbing against stone,. I look behind me and see a stone throne with a red cushion on it.
" S̈́́̾iṯ̞̦̞̮ͩͮͬͮ́͋ͅ ͇̦̍͂i̫̦ͪͪn͒ͥ̇ ̝̥̿͛ḭ̙͎t̺͕͍̝̪ͮ͒ͭ͆̚ ̳̭̰̹̤͋̄̐̇̈́ͣͅmͪ̐̎̽ͬ́̽a͖̬ͪ̒s͚͊t̫̋er̖̣̗̆̅̽.̓ " Gorelestia and Lungore both moan.
I slowly sit down into the throne. The two deformed ponies then walk up to me and sit next to the throne, Gorelestia sits to my left and Lunore to my right. They both rest a wing across my lap.
"Why Gore sit here?" I ask.
"R̖̠̪̤̥̞̪ͧ̈́̄̅ͬ̾ͥu̥͛le͚̖̼̝̯̣ͤ̌ͤͬͤ̄ us,͈͈̣̠͓̹͂̔̈́̄̔͋ r̘͓͇̣̟͑ͮ̄̀ͪụ̙̫̮͉̈̔͒̏͐l͑͋̊̅̿e̻̰̼͛̏̊ ̬̜͍͂̾̏ͮͅoǘ͎̤̗̙̻̅̄͐̂r͓͎̦̰ ̘̯͒̇l̲̤ă̱̼̩͈̗̿͒̐͋n͍͙͌̋d̫̰̔ͩs̱͕͍̹̺̯̭. ͓̯M̫̮̣̹͈̘a̦̥̗̟̤͉ke̓ͮ ̮̣͔͚̄̾̂̐i̾ͨ͂ț̟͚͙̩̎̊̈́̐ͤ ̞̀b̭̝̮͐ͩ̏eͅa͐̾̽͐̏û̲̺̉t͚̤͈͖̟̼̑̆̉͑̽̓i͕͈̬̣̰͛̄̒͗͋fͦͭͣu͈̲͎̳̬͇̻l̀ͤͫ̆̌̓̚ ̜͓̝͖͎ͧ̉̌ͨ̔ḽ͇̳̪̯͑̽͋̃̊͂ͅi̬͔̥͎̟̖̬ͣͬͯ̿ͬͦ̑k̘͈̖̰͂̓̎͒e ̞̗̰͍̀̃̈͂̉ͅu̬̥͈̗̜̰͙͌ͥͣ̑ͮ̏̚s̼̪̻̥̗̉̾̅ͦ̈́." They both groan.
"Rule? Gore no want to rule! Wait, Gore rule mean Gore protect friends better." I smirk.
Both of the deformed ponies look at eachother and nod their heads. A few seconds later GentleShy, Ice Breaker and Snow Storm all walk into the darkness.
All of them have been deformed in the same way as Gorelestia and Lungore. Scythes for legs, wide black eyes and scarred bodies.
"Gore!" GentleShy happily shouts happily as she runs towards me.
"GentleShy? Snow Storm? Ice Breaker.... What happen to you?" I ask with a snarl.
"I became beautiful! Gore I became beautiful! So did the fillies!" Snow Storm shouts excitedly.
"I-I'm beautiful G-Gore!" GentleShy squeals in excitement.
"Everything look wonderful to Gore." I say with a smile.
I feel my scythes become heavier so I look at them. When I look at them I see that I now have two foot long spikes sticking out from the metal cup that attatches the scythes and magnets to my wrist like the spikes of a morningstar. They stick out horizontally and follow the direction of the tip of my scythe blades.
"Gore become more dangerous?" I ask with a tilt of my head.
"You can protect us more now Gore!" Ice Breaker excitedly swuals.
"Yes, Gore can protect more." I say as a toothy grin spreads across my face.
"W̫̪̯e̱͓̣ͨ͋̒ ͉̼̰a̳͚̣͔̘̦͓̒̌̅ͥ̅͛̒r̯̞ͨ̊e ͉͖̰̪y̳̙͓̬͓̲͔o͍̼̰̻̦ͣ̂ͬ̾̏u̮̭̦̟̳̟̱ͣ̃̆̇̈́͆̽r f͈̟ͥ̑r̭̦̩̬i̓͐ͤͯ͐̈͗ë̟̮̰̮̿̽̿n̤̖̤̤̓̄̅̂d̹̺͖̣̹̰̎͊̓͛͑ͣs̮̼̞͈̬̩̋͐̑ͭ͒̀͛ͅ ̗͙̫̬̪ͅa̮̞͈̥n͍͚̣d͉͍̰͂̒͗ ͇͉͍̻̺͐̾̿͌͛̅ͅlͦͅọ͖̼̉̋ͯv̺̒e͙͚̰̫͂̔͗́d ̳̦͙͊̋͊o̤̗̞̦̯̙͙ͦͧ͑̆͂̂̚n̜̲ͬ̍es̱͚ͧ̓,̍̔͛ͣ̎ ̟̖̄͂p̙̺̭̟̰͍ͥ̐͌̎̒̌r̞̪̲ot̤͇͓͌͑̉e̤̭̼̩̬͔̗c̖̺̯̪͚̙͍ͦ̈͊͌͆̈̋t̔ ̠̃ü̹̜͎̔ͯś̰̠̓.̬̊ " Gorelestia growls.
"But you steal GentleShy from me." I growl back.
"M͉̯̽̚a̻̞ͤ́ͪͅrk̓̍̀̇ͦ͂ ͍͔ͧͮ̚ͅm̩̼̹̂͌̐ȇ͉̰͉̜̂ͫ̐ ͉͑ãͩ̊͂̑ͬn̖̗͈̬̯ͯͪ̃̾̑d̫ ̈͛mā̪͓̯̥̻̹͙ͣ̈́̌̀͂̚k̠̳̪̣̰̭̊ͫͭ̌̋̓ͬͅe ̜͂m̼̲͓̣e y̺͙̣̪̞̖o̖͉̫̲̅̃̀̆̓ͅūͩ̽̄̇̂ͩr̅͂s.ͦ́͂͒ ̩͕̐̚T͓̜̓ͩh͇̦͖̄͂͑e̪͎̬̭͇̖n̾ ̳̟̙̋̋̑Ȋ̹ ̮͐w̪̹̼͐ͦ͒͆ͅill̘͐̈́ͅ b̞̗̝̻̝̲̤e̥͍ wi͔̗͓ͬ̇̚t̥͈̱̆ͧ̾ḥ̣̺ͮ̂͛ ͈͇̙͎̟̎ͮͩͯ̌yo͎̥͕̩͛ͨ̋͗ú̠̪̜̹̫̬̎̋̆̆̌ ̊̂̎̊̀̓͌f̺͇̪o̝̣̠ͣ̊̂ṙ͔̼ͫ͂ͅě̳̪͓̬̪͒̌̍ͫ̚ͅv͚̭̹̮̥̄ͥͪ͌̇e̩̥͉̺͑̈͌ͥr͓̟̲̺̬̭̓͋ͥͫ͌ͣ.͇ͣ M̥̤̭̣̙̱̮y ̱̥̺̲k͈̫ing.̮̪̞̞̼ͭ͆̓̓ͤ " Gorelestia and Lungore both snarl.
"You will become Gore friends?" I ask as I look at my new spikes.
"Ẃ̹̰̗̦̹͊̉͛̓e̋̇̋ͯͭ̚ ̗̞̟̭̥̦̋̋̉̋̆̋ͪͅw͛ͨͧ͐ï̄̇ͭͥͭlͭlͧͯͫ̃ͧ ̥̥̻̞̦̫̍̔ͦ̎ͬͣbͩĕ͓̮͕͈̰͒͋̌̒ ̳̫̙̤s͇̳͓o̲͔̟̭̲̳ ̠̗̯̰mu̬̹̞̬͓͓͎ch͍̅ ̲̠̦m͙̦̖o̰̙͖ͣ̎͊r̔͂ͮ̄ͭ̓ḛ͈̺̠ͅ.̳̲̯̱͎̅̂̂̌̾ " They both laugh.
"Okay, Gore will mark you."
Gorelestia and Lungore both look at eachother then nod again. A few seconds later I jolt awake. I'm back in Snow Storms living room, now with a thin blue blanket over me. I use the tips of my scythes to slide the blanket off of me.
"Gore has new mission, save GentleShy and mark white and blue pony." I mumble to myself.
"Are you awake in there Gore?" I hear Snow Storm ask from the hallway.
"Yeah, Gore wake." I answer.
"You must be recovering quite well, you're already waking up earlier then me and Ice Breaker." Snow Storm jokes.
"Gore nearly good leave?" I ask.
"Not yet Gore, you need to wait another week or so yet." Snow Storm explains.
"Okay, Gore will wait. Gore want to save GentleShy soon." I mumble.
"We will Gore but you're not strong enough yet, just give it a bit more time." Snow Storm says in a gentle tone.
"Gore fail to protect GentleShy, Gore will do better in future." I think out loud.
"If you protect her like you did with me and Ice Breaker yesterday then I think she'll be safe with you." Snow Storm says in a motherly voice.
"Yeah, safe with Gore. Gore will make pace safe for Gore friends." I say with a grin.
"Shall we have some breakfast?" Snow Storm asks.
"Yes." I say with a nod of my head.
"Are pancakes okay?" Snow Storm asks as she puts on an apron.
"Yes." I nod.
Author's Note
This chapter exists now. I expect a load more dislike to be frank, but hey. If you liked the chapter and the story so far why not let me know? It let's me know that I'm not writing this for nobody. :/