The life of Steel: former apprentice of Celestia and friend of Sunset Shimmer (spoiler in the comics, maybe in the show to.)

by jokerking

Chapter 1: Hello I'm Blazing Steel (Rewrite)

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Chapter 1: Hello I'm Blazeing Steel

Hello Readers my Name Blazing Steel Or Steel for short.

I'm a Unicorn born in Canterlot , However I never knew my parents, I was raised into an orphanage with no one to call family or friend. until I've met one of first friends Sunset Shimmer when we were colts. We always hanged out and we always had each others back. ( Even when we stole a couple of cookies from mean old caretaker). Honestly those were the happiest moments of my life. Not only because I had Somepony by my side, but that I felt like I wasn't alone anymore.

One day while we were enjoying having fun together, we heard news of a school where we could earn a place as Celestial's pupils. Sunset loved the chance to earn that spot and she wanted me to enter as well, Since I didn't care about it but it would make her happy, I entered the school.

After a couple of years I noticed a couple of pony's trying to bully her, making fun of her gifts so they make her leave the school. I soon rushed to her side getting in front of them before they try to hurt her. They soon try to hurt me with not only kicking with their hooves but also trying to shooting me with several magic attacks. Before it got more dangerous, I told Sunset to go and get help. After a moment of hesitation she ran to just liked I asked her. Soon something funny happened I started to glow, Blinding everyone, giving me a chance to strike back. After they fell, I soon found a cutie on me. one that had two swords crossing and a shield behind it, all while a yellow flame surrounding it. By the time teachers arrive, the problem was dealt with. The students were soon expelled from the school, and a special quest soon heard about it hours latter. Hearing how I manage to hold several students of magic users of high and low level capability. She offered me the position of being her apprentice, I agreed on the condition that Sunset gets that position as well. naturally she accepted her not just because of the agreement terms but also because her skills of magic. Hearing the news Sunset soon hugged me, believing I helped accomplish her dream. Honestly all in my own mind, all I did was look out for a friend.

Years latter we were now well grown mares and stallions and still the best of friends. But over the years I soon see Sunset soon grow an ego, and a superiority complex. Usually backed then she would hang out with anypony backed then, now she basically smart talks anypony who tries to be friendly her besides me. I tried to talk to Celestial about the issue with her, but it all seemed to make Sunset more aggressive with Celestial. Then came the day when we saw the mirror. Celestial brought us to a room where we a crystal mirror In front of us, she then asked us what we saw in it. Sunset answer was something, while expected, still sadden me, for the pony I knew that had compassion for others seem to be a beast with a hunger for power. Celestial soon asked me that question.

In response, I answered with "I see a pony who no matter what, will do what it takes to make sure that his friends are safe and happy no matter the cost."

I soon turned to Sunset with and Celestial with smile on their faces which made me happy to see them with that expression. Soon Sunset thought she saw something in the mirror, but before she could investigate we were dragged away and the door soon locked behind us. Then Soon she was obsessed with that thing, asking nonstop about that object, honestly I was about to say soothing but Celestial beat me to hoof telling her to stop asking. With that I thought it was over until late that night. I was fast asleep until I heard a struggle and Sunsets voice in that mix. Startled, I ran straight to the noise. Only to see Celestial looking at that mirror. I soon asked what happened. She told me how was caught in the forbidden part of the library , how she was about to be banished from the castle and she ran into the mirror. With that one thing became to me that day, I either leave my only friend in unknown world, or abandon Celestial and this opportunity to help many people as her student.

With that I made a decision, as soon as she wasn't looking at or the mirror I made a run straight toward the mirror. With only one thing in my mind. Protect Sunset, no matter what. As soon I reached the end of the vortex I felt different, I soon checked my body only to see my hoofs were replaced with these meat things at the end . before I could respond I saw Something similar to Sunset, the only I could make sure was to call her name and with my luck it was her. She soon asked what I was I doing here. I soon told her what Celestial told me and the choice I made. She then hugged me saying thank you.

I soon responded with " Hey what are thanking me for? you know I would make sure you were happy and safe, even if you were in Tartarus I would follow you just make sure no one messed with you."

Then she did the one I did not expect, she kissed me on the cheek. I could only imagined how much I am blushing right now. Recovering from the blush I soon look over the place and saw the entrance way was the only place we could get some rest with over our heads. After such a long night however I soon passed out resting my eyes and going to slumber.

So that's how I ended up here looking after my friend in this crazy new world. I'm not sure what will happen with Sunset's hunger for power, Or how far I will go to make sure she is safe. But one thing is clear No matter what happens, I will make sure no one hurts her.


Author's Note

Hey guys and gals this my first time writeing one of these I hope I doesn't suck to badly. I'll trying writein more soon enough, and this stroy will hopefuly cover all 2 1/2 years of Sunset Being in Equestria and perhaps more

The Charcter Blazeing Steel Is owned By me -Jokerking So please don't steal it I Don't want to deal any main issues of who stole what, So in short thank and have a good day.

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