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A Date With Description

by Corejo
What better way to spend the evening than with your favorite pony Sunset Shimmer on a fancy date? What could possibly go wrong? Well, not telling her it's a date for starters... An exploration into the what's and why's of narrative descriptions.

Today's the day.

It’s a wonderful day, a terrifying day. Today's the day you finally asked Sunset Shimmer out on a date!

If only you had remembered to tell her it was a date...


A light-hearted parody of 2nd-person stories via a “sort-of story” about how I use description in my actual stories and why.  An extended version of this.  You can direct all pitchforks and torches toward this gal.

Everyone
Complete
Romance
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Second Person
 
OS

5668 words: Estimated 28 minutes to read