Spike dump

by Thebaconpiggybank

Rating: teen
Tags: Spike, Random, Princess Celestia, Crossover, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Other, Princess Luna
Length: 1403

This is a place where i dump any random things that I write about Spike.

Welcome to the Spike dump. A place where I practice writing stories that usually involve Spike.

Spike will often be different or have a different past in these. Or he'll have a secret of sorts. Please know that not everything will make sense.

Criticism and ideas are welcome. Just be friendly about it. This is my first attempt at writing after all.

And if you dislike the story then please tell me why. Is it the wording? The pacing? What about the overall idea? Let me know. I would love to get better and I can only do so if people give me advice.

Published 2017-12-03 21:50:11 UTC
Last updated 2018-02-09 16:09:09 UTC

News!!

Im making the Bloodborne bit an actual story now! I had to delete it so I don't violate any guidelines and I won't have an update schedule but still! I have another chapter for it written out and I plan on it being a more relaxed story. The only conflict will be verbal or simple practice. Maybe some arguments that get physical but whatevs. There isn't going to be a big bad either.

Thanks for all the support so far as well guys! As of now though, recommend things for me to write!

A thing that I don't yet have a name for.

Author's Note

I wrote this as an idea and I think I may continue it. I just need some story names and stuff for it.

Spike is aged up and looks different than the cannon show. He'll wear clothes, ect. Also, I may ship Spike and Starlight, dunno.

It's partly inspired by the song "Don't say a word" by Sonata Arctica and stuff. Just know that this will be chill and that it will work like my other story, with no death, big bads, ect. Also no frequent update schedule. I'm lazy and I'm dealing with school, family, and feelings.

A thing that I don't yet have a name for.

Spike wasn't mad. He wasn't. He just simply wasn't. He couldn't be mad at all if he were to be honest. He knew this was coming and he had accepted it months ago. It made it all the more simple for Rarity and all the more easy for him. He was more than calm about this situation but there was no way he could show it to Rarity. Not as he filed the divorce papers with her. Not as he gave her the final kiss of their relationship. It wasn't even shown when they walked to their house in Canterlot or as he packed up the few belongings he wanted to keep.

With all of this done, the only things he had now were a simple guitar that was strapped to his back, a suitcase full of clothes, and the fire ruby that he had given to her all those years ago... the only reason he took that though was because he wanted something to eat. Or sell. He didn't know what to do with it but he knew that he didn't want Rarity to have it. He walked and walked until he arrived at the train station and when he bought a ticket he got on the first train he saw. He then went to his seat, pulled out his photo album, and then burnt it.

His claws held it as a small bit of fire arose from the tips and onto the book. Nobody seemed to notice though and in a flash of emerald flame it was gone. There wasn't even any smoke or ash. It was just gone. The most faint smile possible came to his lips as it disappeared. After a heavy sigh he turned to the window and began to watch everything pass by. In a few moments he had become lost within his own thoughts.

It was several hours until the train stopped and when it did he felt as if it came to a stop too soon. He had enjoyed his fantasy but after he was ripped from it he could only turn around and look at the train as ponies got off. After a bit off waiting he let himself get off last.

As he stepped off he saw the sun begin to set off in the distance and before he even had time to go to the Crystal Castle of Twilights it had set. He walked to it in the dark and once he found it he knocked on the door, yet nothing happened. With a bit more knocking... nothing happened. He let out a sigh and went to a nearby bench then sat down and stared up into the night sky. It twinkled and shined with the light of the stars and all Spike could do was wish on each and every one he saw for the best.

When that was over he opened his suit case, pulled out a few shirts, then made them into a makeshift pillow. Just as he began to lay down a soft voice managed to call out to him.

"Spike... did it happen?"

He stopped himself and looked to the voice. The figure of Twilight was seen at the door and she seemed to have a worried look in her eyes. Spike pushed himself up onto a sitting position then let out an almost relieved response.

"Yeah Twilight... It did."

"Your castle looks like shit"

Author's Note

I wanted to try my hand at a small comedic fic. Please don't judge this too harshly?

"Your castle looks like shit"

Twilight looked on her back and at Spike, confused and bewildered.

"What was that Spi-"

She got cut off by him and felt an unamused glare somehow rip into her soul.

"I said that it looked like shit."

Her eyes widened in surprise at the language and she opened her mouth to speak only to get cut off again.

"Plus it hurts my eyes. Just... ugh! the colors are forced and it looks like a foals toy."

Again, she opened her mouth to speak but it was Rarity that cut her off this time after she walked up beside her.

"I'm afraid he's right darling. In my opinion it looks absolutely horrid. The colors clash and everything is incredibly..."

She took a moment to think about her words. She settled for a questioning word that described it.

"Dull? It's quite hard to know how to describe it if I'm to be honest. It just... looks bad."

"Ah second that and although I don't agree with Spikes language, he's right. It just has a children's feel and to be honest with ya sugarcube, it doesn't look all that nice. It looks like it could collapse any day now."

Applack added as she came up to the purple ponies left. Twilight was just staring forward in thought as she came to terms with these words and a few mumbles of agreement from the others became known. A familiar blue Pegasus spoke up next.

"Yeah. It's just... not cool, ya know? It doesn't look awesome at all."

Although Twilight wasn't directly looking at the others, she saw Fluttershy out of the corner of her eye, nodding along in silent agreement. She felt an ear twitch but let out a relieved sigh when Pinkie began to stand up for her.

"Well it doesn't look tooo bad"

She started with a bright cheery smile.

"It could stand a make over though. A massive one. Like a super duper Uber™ make over!"

She exclaimed. Twilights smile dropped immedietly out of insult. She didn't know how to feel. A small glimmer of hope seemed to shine though and soon enough, she heard Spike speak once more.

"Yeah. Still, it's not that bad... it could be tasty I suppose. It's made of Crystal after all. It's kinda like a gem."

"And I could possibly work with a similar looking pattern. Perhaps in an abstract design?"

"That could work ah suppose. And although ah don't like it, it manages to stand out. Maybe it can attract more ponies. Who knows, it could even help mah business now that I think about it!

Applejack said happily, seemingly brightening up to the idea. Next up came the timid voice of Fluttershy.

"It's kind of... nice I suppose"

"And it could help with parties too! I could have like, a billion parties in there!"

Pinkie said ecstaticly. Some more murmers of agreement came along and soon enough it all died down, everybody waiting for the one pony who didn't compliment the castle to speak. Rainbow Dash. She kinda shrugged.

"Eh, it's alright I guess."

The soaring of Twilights heart couldn't be higher and now, it was the most wonderful feeling in the world. Her smile was beaming and it felt as if the sun was shining directly on her. For the final time, she opened her mouth to speak her praise and thanks to the others. It appeared that the others had something to say though. She stepped forward and turned around to face them, to hear the words of their glorious praise. All in perfect synchronisation, they spoke...

"It still looks like shit."