See it and weep

Five years passed like Minutes to the Doctor as he went to work and went home. He got more used to hoofs, being able to pick things up properly. Almost every pony in Ponyville knew him as Clockworks, minus Pinkie who knew him as the Doctor as well due to him bringing her there. Colgate grew, passing preschool and kindergarten in a breeze. Her best friend was Dinky. Their birthdays where just a day apart. They both attended Twilights private magic school, passing from levitation all the way up to teleportation. They had it every Sunday and Colgate never had to miss them.

Each summer clockworks and Colgate would visit a different kingdom. First they traveled Equestria, then the griffon kingdom, and then they climbed Dragon Mountain. They had to go to Dragon Mountain twice because they only saw the one side at first. Other than that, days where normal. Every night the doctor would tell Colgate tales about the Time lords, the other universe, and his travels. When she was four and she found out that not every pony had two hearts and there were no other time lords, he had to tell her the story of the time war. She wouldn't speak to him for almost a week until she found him crying in the TARDIS. She decided to accept him with all his faults. And she couldn't wait to go traveling with him. He had promised her a first trip on her sixth birthday. Only ten days left until the TARDIS would be charged and they could travel through space and time. The doctor thought they would actually make it without any big dangerous monster problems. He was sooooo wrong.

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