Luna turns into a Foal

by isabella7890

Rating: teen
Tags: Nightmare Moon, Romance, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Random, Princess Celestia, Main 6, Princess Luna, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe
Length: 3629

to be rewritten

To be rewritten

Published 2018-01-30 16:00:10 UTC
Last updated 2018-05-22 12:45:21 UTC

Sadness and mourning

Luna disappears

The animals ran in every direction they could possibly run in and many ponies thought that the animals were invading Ponyville. Few ran towards Sugercube Corner while a few ran to Twilight's Library. Twilight was just reading a book while drinking coffee. Spike, after finishing his chores, came to sit next to her.

"What'cha reading Twilight?" He asked her.

"Oh nothing Spike. Just about a crystal that can change you into a toddler or, well a filly. It takes you at least 7 years to come back." She replied.

"Do you think it's another curse?" He asked.

"I don't think so. Most curses have a cure, but this one has no cure...YET! Twilight replied confidently, as she stood up with a confident and brave smile.

"You're gonna find th-" Spike began but was interrupted by the animals breaking the door. "Whoa! What in Equestria are these animals doing?" Spike Shouted.

"Hmm...Interesting." Twilight said.

"Ugh, Fluttershy." Spike grunted.

"This can't be Fluttershy's doing. She knows better than breaking into my house." Twilight said. The animals pointed to the direction Everfree was in. "Maybe they want us to follow them. Come on spike." She said and put spike on her back. She then, started to follow the animals and gasped when she saw Luna. Four of her friends were already pulling her hooves, while Rainbow Dash was pulling her tail. Twilight surrounded Luna in her aura and started pulling as well. After a minutes, an explosion in green color blasted them all on their backs.

"Luna?" Fluttershy said, being the first one to recover from the explosion. She gasped as she saw Luna nowhere. "Luna? Luna! Please answer me! Luna! y-you're scaring me!" Fluttershy cried as tears went down her face.

Fluttershy? Yer alright?" Applejack woke up and said. "Hey, where's Luna?"

"Luna!" Rainbow shouted.

"Hey! Nopony told me that we were playing hide and seek!" Pinkie said. Soon all of them started to search for Luna. Twilight found the crystal and gasped.

"Oh Celestia." She said.

"What?" They all said together. Twilight explained about the crystal to her friends.

"Seven years!" Applejack exclaimed.

"Celestia will be so worried." Fluttershy cried.

"What do we do now!" Rainbow said.

"Oh my god! Luna's foal is coming in seven years! yaaaay!" Pinkie cheerfully said. Everypony stared at her. "What?" She asked. Fluttershy sighed while the other face hoofed.

Celestia's eyes were opened wide after hearing the shocking news. "I-I need a moment t-to myself." She said as she ran to her room, tears rolling down her cheek.

"Aww poor Celestia." Pinkie said.

"What should we do now?" Rainbow asked.

"Spread the news." A guard who was guarding the throne muttered.

"What?" Fluttershy asked kindly.

"Spread the Celestiadammit news!" The guard shouted.

"Okay okay." Twilight said as she wrote a letter to the newspaper team in Ponyville.

Dearest newsponies,
A dreadful thing has happened to Princess Luna.
She has disappeared because of a crystal that can turn a pony into a filly.
We are sorry to report but Luna wont come back until 7 whole years.
Please put this in your newspaper. Everypony needs to know.

Celestia's Faithful Student,
Twilight Sparkle.

Author's Note

Third Chapter! :raritywink:

The Foal

Sadness and mourning

Everypony was sad after reading Luna's disappearance and each thought it was their fault. The green crystal had been kept in Celestia's room so nopony else disappears. After a few days of many adventures for the mane 6, they got invited to Shining armor's wedding. He was very sad to hear about Luna, but Cadence didn't look like she cared. After the wedding, real Cadence was told the news and was pretty sad about it as well. A year had passed and Celestia was so sad that her mane went gray and she looked a mess. Her eyes turned red because of the crying.
It was like déjà vu. First for thousand years, now for 7 more.

The mane 6 were just going on adventures to save Equestria. Soon Discord reformed. After some days, Twilight became a princess. Another year passed, Twilight got a castle. Another year passed. Starlight got reformed. Finally 6 years had passed. Celestia became better knowing her sister is gonna come soon.

Twilight sighed while looking out of her balcony.

"Hey Twilight." Spike said dragging a stool next to her and climbing on it.

"Hi Spike." She replied, in a sad tone.

"Luna's gonna come soon." He happily said, trying to cheer her up.

"Yeah." She replied again in a sad tone.

"What happened?" He asked.

"Luna is gonna come as a foal, Spike. We don't even know how she looked like when she was a foal and where she will appear."

"Come on Twilight, she's alicorn. All we need to do is match her colors with her when she was in her weak form and see if she's a alicorn."

"You're right Spike." She said, starting to get happier. "It's not gonna be the easiest job but still it's gonna go fine." She flew to the ground and went to see her friends. "Hi Pinkie pie." She said, coming inside Sugercube corner. She knew she needed cheering up so, she knew she would need to go to Pinkie because, who can cheer one up more than Pinkie.

"Oh Hello Twi! Do you want to be the first to try my Super Luna, coming in one year happy birthday and first day as a foal cupcake? " She happily asked. The cupcake looked delicious. It was blue in color and had different shades of blue sprinkles on it. It had Luna's cutiemark. It had a blueberry on top and was beyond compare.

"Sure Pinkie pie." Twilight said as she took a bite out of the cupcake. "Mmm Delicious Pinkie."

"Thanks!" Pinkie replied cheerfully.

"I'm gonna go see the others". Twilight said as she started leaving.

"Okie dokie lokie." Pinkie said as she went to the kitchen to make more of her Super Luna, coming in one year happy birthday and first day as a foal cupcake.

Twilight spread her wings and flew to see Rainbow dash. Rainbow dash was in a ring shop, which was particularly unusual.

"What are you doing Rainbow?" Twilight asked. Rainbow froze. "Rainbow? Rainbow what happened? Rain-" Twilight saw something very unusual. Rainbow was holding a ring box! "Who's the special pony?" Twilight said after realizing the situation. Rainbow blushed and flew away. "Rainbow!" Twilight called out and went after her. Twilight couldn't catch her and she got away. "That was weird." She thought to herself. Next she went Rarity and saw Fluttershy, Apple jack and Rarity having a tea party. She told them about her weird encounter with Rainbow dash.

"Don't ya guys worry. She invited me to hang out with her at the end of Sweet Apple Acres after Luna comes back. Ah will just ask her why she had a ring with her." Applejack said.

"Hmm suspicious."" Twilight said.

"Oh darling" Rarity whispered to Fluttershy and Twilight. "We should probably follow them later."

Where is the foal?

The Foal

The crystal was glowing in Celestia's room. Celestia had gone for a function and nopony dared to enter her room without her permission. The crystal kept glowing. Soon it exploded and the ponies who were passing her room got startled. Soon it got quiet again and they continued to do their duties.

A little foal had appeared on Celestia's bed. The foal didn't open it's eyes and just slept. A few minutes later, it had completely hidden in the blanket. After 2 hours, Celestia opened the door and walked inside. She went to the balcony and raised the moon. She smiled at it and then came back inside. She went outside again to have a bath. She came back after a few minutes and brushed her mane. Finally she got into bed and started to sleep.

The foal got up and yawned. She saw Celestia sleeping next to her.

"Mama!" The foal cried. Celestia's ear twitched. "Mama! Mama!" She said, Poking her Repeatedly. Celestia was getting a little annoyed. "Mama! Mama! Mama!" She cried, getting annoyed as well. Celestia pushed her and slept again.

The foal became furious and shouted in the "royal canterlot voice". "MAMA!!" The shout was so loud that many ponies living near the castle woke up as well. Celestia got up and the foal started smiling.

"Huh?" Celestia said looking left and right for the pony who called her "mama" and woke her up. Something hugged her hoof and she looked down to see a foal. "What in Equestria?" Celestia said, confused to see a foal in her bed.

"Mama, me hungwy." The foal said. Celestia was gonna call her maid to take the foal away, but something in her heart made her lift the foal in her hoofs and run to the royal kitchen. She put her on the counter and opened the fridge. The foal saw a cookie jar and her mouth started watering. "Cookie, mama! Cookie!" She cried. Celestia sighed and used her magic to bring down the cookie jar and opened it. The foal took it and started munching on the cookies. After 5 cookies the foal yawned.

"Somepony looks sleepy." Celestia said as she put the cookie jar back and lifted the foal again. She teleported to her bedroom and got a crib for her. She put her in the crib.

"Lullawy?" The foal asked. Celestia looked at her and sighed. She cleared her throat and began to sing.

Fate has been cruel and order unkind

How can I have sent you away?

The blame was my own; the punishment, yours

The harmony's silent today

But into the stillness I'll bring you a song

And I will your company keep

Till your tired eyes and my lullabies

Have carried you softly to sleep

Once did a pony who shone like the sun

Look out on her kingdom and sigh

She smiled and said, "Surely, there is no pony

So lovely and so well beloved as I"

So great was her reign and so brilliant her glory

That long was the shadow she cast

Which fell dark upon the young sister she loved

And grew only darker as days and nights passed

Soon did that pony take notice that others

Did not give her sister her due

And neither had she loved her as she deserved

She watched as her sister's unhappiness grew

But such is the way of the limelight, it sweetly

Takes hold of the mind of its host

And that foolish pony did nothing to stop

The destruction of one who had needed her most

Lullaby moon princess, goodnight sister mine

And rest now in moonlight's embrace

Bear up my lullaby, winds of the earth

Through cloud, and through sky, and through space

Carry the peace and the coolness of night

And carry my sorrow in kind

Luna, you're loved so much more than you know

Forgive me for being so blind

The years now before us

Fearful and unknown

I never imagined

I'd face them on my own

May these thousand winters

Swiftly pass, I pray

I love you; I miss you

All these miles away

May all your dreams be sweet tonight

Safe upon your bed of moonlight

And know not of sadness, pain, or care

And when I dream, I'll fly away and meet you there

Sleep... sleep... sleep...

She smiled at the sleeping foal and went to bed.

Author's Note

This is getting interesting ain't it. by the way credits to Warpout for the lullaby Lullaby For a Princess

Appledash

Where is the foal?

It was the day for Luna to come back. Everypony, including Celestia waited for her. Rainbow dash was blushing near Applejack, who was eating a apple. Pinkie had put a banner that read "Happy Re-birthday Luna!" and many balloons, streamers and sweets. She had a big cake which was blue and had her cutie mark on top. A lot of her Super Luna, coming in one year happy birthday and first day as a foal cupcake Which she re-named to Super Luna, happy birthday and first day as a foal cupcake. Rarity was ready with beautiful frocks and clothing for the foal, and Fluttershy was ready with her birds to sing her a welcome back song.

"Twilight, when will she come?" Celestia asked, getting a little restless.

"Lemme just see it in my book." She said as she opened the book about the crystal. She found the page and read out loud. "After seven years, the foal won't exactly come on the first day of the year.It would actually come on the last day of the 6th year. The crystal will glow green and explode(the explosion won't harm it's surroundings. It would just be loud and all.) and the foal will automatically be on the most comfiest place in the room. It would be better to put the crystal in a room instead of a street on anywhere open 'cause it could end up in a store that sells beds and quilts. The foal can either come at night or at day. It matters which they loved more before they became a foal. The foal will immediately sleep for at least 2 hours and a half and then wake up. The first pony the foal sees will become it's mother or father so be careful. If the foal says they need something the first time they met their mother/father, the pony will immediately pick the foal up and give it what it needs. After that, it depends on the pony. Care for the foal with love and care because if you treat the foal badly, it will get angry and go on a rampage. Have fun!

Celestia was in a shock. The foal couldn't have been Luna, could it? Celestia thought about it and then realized that...She had became her sister's mother! Her jaw dropped and her eyes were wide.

"What happened princess?" Twilight asked, seeing her with her jaw dropped.

"L-Luna d-did come y-yesterday." Celestia said in a shaky voice.

"Why didn't you tell us? That's amazing news!" Twilight said, happily.

"Um I kinda became her mother...." She said, barely audible

"What darling?" Rarity asked.

"Uh I became her mother." She repeated, again with ponies being confused with what Celestia became.

"Um you can tell us anything princess. You don't have to be shy, uh only if that's okay with you." Fluttershy said politely .

"I-I became her MOTHER!" Celestia shouted, no longer being scared about it. There was a long pause.

"That's perfect!" Twilight said after a few moments.

"W-what?" Celestia asked, not believing her student.

"You're the perfect new mother for Luna! Anyways, you've always been a mother figure for Luna. What's the trouble?" Twilight said.

"Oh darling, who could've been a better mother for Luna than you?" Rarity said.

"Seriously." Rainbow dash said, removing the blush from her face. "Who did you think would be Luna's mother other than you? Twilight?" Twilight glared at Rainbow while Celestia thought about who she wanted to be Luna's mother.

"You're right. I was scared for no reason." Celestia said.

"Well can ya get Luna here so we can welcome her?" Applejack said, finishing her apple.

"I am super-duper happy! Luna is back!" Pinkie said cheerfully, jumping up and down.

Celestia nodded and teleported to her room. She walked to the empty crib.

"EMPTY?" Celestia shouted as she looked around for the foal.

"Your highness, something happened?" The guards outside her room said, peeking inside.

"Did a small, blue foal go out of the door? Celestia asked, hoping the guards would say yes.

"No, you highness." The guards replied. Celestia stomped her forehoof.

"I have to find her." She said...before jumping out of the window. She opened her wings and flapped them. She flew over canterlot, making sure she didn't miss any spot before giving up. "I can't believe myself." She said, as she flew back to her room. "I just lost her AGAIN!" She shouted. The guards were still confused.

"Why? Why does this only happened to me?" Celestia cried.

"Princess, Luna is just lost. She has not disappeared again." Twilight said.

"We promise we'll find her princess." Rainbow assured her.

"And ah am sure she wont be able to go that far." Applejack said.

"And when we find her we will surely tell you." Fluttershy said.

"And throw a party!" Pinkie pie added.

"And make her look absolutely fabulous in her clothes I made for her." Rarity said.

"Lets go find Luna!" They all shouted together.

Author's Note

I wanted to make this even more interesting...

Help from Fluttershy

The day after Nightmare Night

"FOR ONCE OUR NIGHT WENT TERRIBLE! WE SHOULD'VE NOT GONE TO MEET OUR SUBJECTS" Luna shouted in the "royal canterlot voice". Celestia opened her mouth to say something, but she was interrupted. "OUR SUBJECTS CAN'T EVEN SPELLEST OUR NAME WITHOUT PUTTING NIGHTMARE MOON IN IT!" Luna cried. Again Celestia tried to say something, but Luna won't stop whining. "NO! NO! THE HORROR! THE HORROR!! OUR NIGHT! RUINED FOREVER!" Luna cried again. Celestia sighed. She was having a headache listening to Luna whining over how "horrible" her night was. The night was far from ruined, but her peaceful dinner had been ruined.

"Luna please don't shout. Everyone is having a headache listening to you crying." Celestia said in her calm voice.

Luna sighed and teleported to Everfree and started walking in. Luna wasn't scared of the forest as it had once been her lovely home. Everfree was once a beautiful village like Ponyvile. It used to be called Everfree Town and was described to be one of the most royal (as the sisters lived in it) and beautiful places like Canterlot is now. She sighed sadly as tears started to come out of her eyes. One day Everfree's magic was taken by the power-hungry Sombra, who used to be an old friend. After taking all the magic he went to the crystal empire and well ruled there. Luna cried as she looked in the now scary and dark place. she trotted up to a very old tree and hugged it as tears starting coming in her eyes.

"I'm sorry I couldn't fight for you. You were my whole childhood and I lost you to some stupid shadow pony who was the weakest of us. I..its all my fault isn't it." Luna said as hot tears ran down her face. As the tree wanted to hug her, it lowered the branch that was the nearest to Luna and well kind of hugged her. "It's okay? B-but you lost all your glory and-" Luna was cut off as something hugged her from behind. it was a bunny but it had sharp teeth like a vampy, longer ear, and sharper claws. "Your not angry that you don't look normal anymore?" Luna asked. The bunny shook his head and hugged her again. Luna hugged the bunny tighter."Thank you. Thank you for not hating me." Luna said as tons of weird animals approached Luna. "Thanks, guys," Luna said closing her eyes and enjoying her company.

Luna opened her eyes and saw a strange object glowing green deeper in the forest. Luna trotted up to it and picked it up. It was a crystal with a label on it. It said: "Use this crystal to make your wishes true" There was something written in very small words but Luna didn't read it. Luna's horn glowed as she made her wish in her head. the crystal started glowing more and it unleashed a beam that hit Luna. Luna fainted as green energy started to transform her. The animals ran in the same direction too, of course, Fluttershy's cottage.

Author's Note

Well did ya guys like it? My second story is here!! :raritywink: :pinkiehappy:

Luna disappears

Help from Fluttershy

Fluttershy was watering the plants while humming. The animals rushed to her and starting freaking out. "Um, guys is everything okay?" Fluttershy asked as she put the watering can down. The animals started to act what happened. The deer sadly walked to a tree and hugged it. The same bunny that hugged Luna hugged the deer. All the other animals hugged the deer. The deer walked up to a green thing(?) and picked it up. The deer fainted dramatically and the animals started to throws green leaves at it. The animals looked at Fluttershy and the deer opened one eye.

Fluttershy was rather confused at the scene and tried to think of something. "Oh i get it. You guys saw a deer sadly walk to a tree and hugged it. Then the deer went to the green thing(?) and fainted and you threw leaves at it, right?" Fluttershy said. The animals facehoofed. The bunny went and took a paper and started to draw on it. It give Fluttershy the paper and she knew what they were trying to tell. The bunny drew a quite accurate Luna even without having any experience.

Fluttershy gasped and said "Princess Luna went to the Everfree and started to cry while hugging a tree and you wanted to make her feel better so you hugged her. Then she noticed a green crystal and picked it up. The crystal made her faint and started to transform her?!" Fluttershy said. The animals nodded. "We need to find her!" Fluttershy said as she ran towards Everfree.

She found princess Luna, still getting transformed. Her mane was not flowing anymore. Fluttershy tried to take Luna away from the crystal but she won't move an inch. "Guys go get my other friends, they'll know what to do." The animal ran towards Ponyville while Fluttershy continued to pull the crystal away from Luna.