Sweet Apple Revenge

by Boombomb

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Tragedy
Length: 494

A fan made sequel to the famous "Sweet Apple Massacre"

Big Macintosh kills the Cutie Mark Crusaders in the previous, and famous Creepypasta. Two underdog ponies find out, and are willing to get revenge

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-07-20 11:52:05 UTC

Chapter 1

Big Macintosh smiled as he heard Applejack trotting down the cellar, she closed her eyes, waiting for a nice surprise. "Y'all can open 'em now" he said, in a nice, happy voice, Applejack opened her eyes, and stared for a few seconds before screaming, Big Mac shoved his hoof in Applejacks mouth after flinching from the scream. She screamed long and loud enough for someone to hear, or someponies. "Applejack?" Said Twilight, who was just finished tidying her library from last nights studies. Rainbow Dash, however, acted fast, and flew down to the farm with Fluttershy trailing behind. Dashie saw the open cellar door "Fluttershy! Down here!!!" She screamed, Fluttershy flew into the cellar and gasped "Applejack...!" Big Macintosh turned around and tried to grab Fluttershy, before Dash kicked his face before shouting in it "You bastard!" she punched him until at least 3 teeth were smashed. Big Macintosh coughed blood and stumbled up, he threw his hoof round the Weather Pegasus' face, Applejack was crying, pushed to the wall beside her dead sister and her friends. Fluttershy flew out and got everyponies attention, well, she didn't, but Rarity sure acted fast when she was told.

Rarity had told her friends, and they all went down to the cellar, where Dash was pinned to the ground by Big Macintosh. Rarity walked over to Mac, and slapped him, he was shoved back, but he kicked her. Rarity cried when she hit the wall. Pinkie got angry and brung out the party cannon "CAKE YOU BIG MACINTOSH!!!" she screamed. Big Mac had ran out the cellar, covered in the brain matter and blood of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, the stench from the cellar was spreading everywhere. Ponyville was forced to stay indoors, until one pony realised where it came from, Turbo the Pegasus. Not too much of a famous pony though, he was orange, with a blue spiked mane, the tail was roughly the same, and he wore sunglasses to hide his eyes, although, not much ponies know about him anyway, so, he doesn't really have to hide them. He was standing alone, on a single cloud. He watched as Big Mac ran around the farm. He let out a simple grunt, as he watched for longer, he seen the ponies come out, some hurt, he gasped as he seen this and flew down to help them.

"Are you OK?" he said. Dash replied with a smile "We'll be fine, Turbo.", how in Equestria did Dash know his name? He was pretty happy he was recognised by the Rainbow Dash! "How-- How did you know my name?" he asked, "Now isn't the time, Turbo." she stated. The orange pegasus nodded and flew over to Big Mac with his hoof out forward so he could hit him Big Macintosh avoided the attack pretty well, sending Turbo into a tree, Turbo blacked out after this, after seeing a rainbow trailed path glide above his nose.