To Feel Is To Understand: A My Little Pony Story

by ArthurPaige

The Elements Of Disharmony (Prologue)

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Author's Note

This is my first story. Sorry if it's not what you're used to.

The Elements of Harmony have a different origin, in my story.

The Elements of Disharmony are introduced in this story.

I give Derpy Hooves a more of an independent personality, I give Twilight a more of an impatient personality, and make her shifty.
There are some other changes, but not too much.

Anyways, i'm gonna keep this short, so enjoy.

Peace.

-D


The Elements Of Disharmony (Prologue)

Equestria, the land of great beauty and danger, with many different creatures. Every story has a beginning and an end; our story starts a long time ago in Equestria, before the Two Sisters ruled the land.

"Maximus is the first half-alicorn and also the Spirit of Harmony, he watches over Equestria.

Maximus' brother Commodus, dislikes him, and seeks to rule all of Equestria.

One day Commodus set fire to one of the major forests in Equestria. Maximus learned that the arsonist was his very own brother.

Maximus was forced to put his hoof down; he created six elements that represent Harmony; Loyalty, Laughter, Generosity, Honesty, Kindness, and Magic; these elements, together, can banish and imprison any threat to Equestria.

Commodus learned of his brother's actions. Commodus then created six elements that represent Disharmony; Disloyalty, Despair, Greed, Dishonesty, Cruelty, and Chaos; to defend himself.

Maximus found Commodus in one of the deepest part of the Major Forest of Equestria.

Before Commodus can use the elements of Disharmony on Maximus, Maximus imprisoned Commodus and banished him to the Underground City beneath Equestria.

Maximus found the Elements of Disharmony, he then had a vision of a mysterious hairless creature that stood on two legs, he saw many ponies kneeling to the creature with five other ponies, he also saw the Elements of Disharmony.

Maximus tried to destroy the elements that his brother created, but it was no use, they were indestructible.

So he hid them all over Equestria where nopony would find them.

Maximus created a magical tree that can contain, and charge the Elements of Harmony.

He then put his vision to use, he made a warning saying: "Beware the Creature that stands on two legs, for he will be the one who ponies will kneel to.", he died a couple months later."

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